No. This was plainly hidden for a reason, and it would be foolish to get involved.

>>29977874
No, burn it.

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>>29977959

>>29977874
Sure, why not? It'll be fun.

>>29977874

So that's when I have been hearing those screams once a month and feeling compelled to tell the floor it doesn't look fat in that polish.

>>29977874
Yes. Do it.

>>29977874
Read all the forbidden knowledges. All of them.

>>29977874
[x] Get some illiterate street urchin to open it.

yes, don't wait for the movie

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YES.
It might have his list of secret ingredients for Mage Cookies- what wonders!

>>29977874

Well of course

>>29977874
No. I've heard enough rumours about exploding wizard books to avoid this like the plague. Burn it.

>>29977874
DOITDOITDOITDOIT!

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For a moment, you can only stare at the tome. This is beyond you. You should burn it. Hide it away again.

But...

You may be poor, and you may have few prospects, but you do have knowledge. Knowledge enough to know what the title of this book implies. And you know what?

Why not?

You're likely to die a clerk to this trading post of a village. You'll only live on scraping a meager existence on what few coins can be spared from the town coffers. Why not decide, for once in your life, to take the dangerous path?

You open the book, and you feel an unearthly rush of air in the room. Water all around you begins to tremble, and the candle burns brighter.

And it is what you thought to be.

Spells. Incantations. Potions.

All revolving around the magic of women.

Many are beyond your understanding, but the first few pages are simple enough.

There's a brew that you can make. Just a perfume that is supposedly heavenly to a female.

There's a small cantrip as well. You do not know what it means by summoning, but it says that it is one of the spells that a beginner may attempt.

And of course there are other, more complicated works that you may have to concentrate to understand.

It is still early in the night, and you only lit your candle scant minutes ago. Time enough to try something, at least...

>>29978419
Cantrips time.

>>29978419
I smell magical realm shit.

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>>29978419
>All revolving around the magic of women.

>>29978419
Let's whip up that perfume first.

>>29978419
From the ground work our way up. Lets have go at the "cantrip"

>>29978419
Cantrip. Fuck perfumes.

>>29978506
Really now, do you?
>>29977874
>Dare you open it?
That was why i suggested to burn it.

>>29978515
>>29977874
>Secrets of Gynomancy

You made me chuckle m8.

>>29978515
Not OP, nor am I giving approval, but what did you expect it's got the word gynomancy written on it for fuck's sake.

>>29978419
>Brew the love potion
>Get much pussy
>Like some kind of pussy wizard.

>>29978596
>implying i bothered to to read what was written on the image.
>implying i even know what gynomancy is.

>>29978639
You keep makin' me chuckle m8.

Gyno-Cologist
Gyno-Mancy
Look up Gyno..

Also, why wouldn't you look at the image? He obviously put it there as the book we were going to read.
Oi mate, yer funny.

>>29978419
Perfume

>>29978680
it is a generic magic tome image in a quest about a magic tome. why would i bother to enlarge the image and read it.

>>29978419
Try the cantrip

>>29978740
>quest about a magic tome
gee
I wonder

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You get the feeling that this book is actually reading you more than the other way around.

You shake away that disturbing thought and concentrate on the single page in front of you.

It's more or less what you would expect from a magic spell. There are diagrams and descriptions of hand waving. Gibberish words that promise to alter the word around you at a single breath. You try to see if perhaps you are missing some key element, but if this is all you have to do...

You feel silly at first, twiddling your fingers around and mumbling breathily, but the sudden swirl of air and shimmering of the candle tell you otherwise. You feel the thoughts burning in your mind, as if the spell is making itself known above all else. But heartbeats come and go, and nothing seems to be happening.

No succubus coming for your soul, no women made of clay coming from the ground. Nothing. Maybe you did something wrong? Maybe you...

"Hello? You in there, tenant?"

... hear a knocking on your door?! It's the voice of Giselle, the inkeeper's daughter.

Was this from the spell? Should you let her in? Send her away? You think of what to do while she knocks again.

"Hello?"

>>29978612

More like

>Brew the love potion
>Get all the dick
>Dicks in the ass like feathers in a peacock

>>29978837
"What, I mean, yes?"

>>29978837
...Cast it again.
Hope for threesome.

>>29978837
Say "come in" in our most sexy voice

>>29978837
"i am in here, need some privacy."

>>29978837
"I'm in here. What do you need Giselle?"

Try to keep our voice friendly and so on.

>>29978837
>>29978966
This Works. (plus hide the book.)

>>29978837
"Hi?"

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You scramble to your feet, only to sit back down.

There is another rap on the door, and you find it strange to see Giselle be so persistent. You've barely spoken three sentences the entire time you've roomed here, and now she seems like she won't leave you be.

Pushing the book underneath a few sheaves of paper, you brace yourself for whatever will happen next.

You get up and open the door a crack, just enough to see Giselle's... worried?... face.

"Yes? What is it, Giselle?"

A look of relief washes over Giselle's face as she sees you, but it quickly changes to confusion again.

"What... yes... I..."

She pauses, and you can see her gathering her thoughts.

"... I think I just wanted to see how you were doing. How are you settling in here?" she says lamely.

You can see her still struggling with her thoughts, but your own are racing at a breakneck speed.

It worked!

It really, really worked!

But now you're left with what's here. Giselle doesn't seem to be going anywhere, but this is a peculiar situation and you don't know how long it will last.

>>29979257
Tell her we're doing fine, even if work was somewhat depressing. It's good that she's here to cheer us up, really.

Also OP you might want to put a '>what do' or similar as a prompt for actions, just so people know you're done writing, rather than wait for a second post.

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>>29979257
Tell her that you are thankful for her concern, ask her what the special for tonight is (to eat) and bid her a goodnight.

>>29979257
Be a gentalman about it. And promise ourselves to use this power for good

>>29979257
>>29979323

(Solid advice)

What will you do?

>>29979257
"I'm settling in pretty well, work's been tough, but I'll manage. I appreciate your concern.

What's the special tonight anyways?"

>>29979323
This

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"It's as it is usually, thank you for asking. Things at work are occupying my time right now."

Giselle smiles and nods, though she still seems like she's waiting for something. You feel the weight of the silence and clear your throat.

"Ahm... so... what are they serving in the main room tonight?" You ask. It seems to shake Giselle out of her reverie and she smiles back.

"Oh! One of the hunters gave father a good deal on a deer he caught yesterday. We still have that and stew for it." Giselle added helpfully, and you nod.

Again the silence settles and the both of you look to each other uncomfortably, though Giselle with an air of expectation.

Finally, she breaks the silence.

"Sorry. I... it's like I'm forgetting something. Did you ask me to come here? I feel as if you did, but I can't remember..." She trails off, then catches herself with a blush. "... but that just might be my mind playing tricks, you know? Too much time on my feet."

You share a small laugh with her, and she seems to relax a bit again.

"So... I suppose that's it then. Is there anything else?" Giselle says, though she is already starting to turn away.

Is there anything else?

>>29979632
"not really. good night."

>>29979632
"I want you." just whisper that.

>>29979632
"No no, nothing more."
Summon -> dismiss. Seems obvious enough.

>>29979632
Seconding >>29979666
The spellbook worked, let's keep reading to find better spells.

>>29979632
"Not for now. It was nice to see you, feel free to come by any time.

Good night Giselle."

>>29979686
this

>>29979686
Yes....

>>29979779
Dis

>>29979779
>>29979686
Both.

>>29979779
this

>>29979686
not this

>>29979686
>>29979779

Do it.

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Giselle looks at you for the longest time, as if she's searching for something.

"Alright. If you're sure there's nothing..." she says, and the wind seems to blow again, making her hair fan out in the breeze.

You nod, and the wind stops. Giselle shakes her head, and her eyes seem to dart around for a moment.

"Huh..." she whispers, turning and walking back towards the inn, not glancing back at all.

You watch in silence from your doorway as the young woman goes away, though the calm that you show does not reflect the storm of feelings that you barely contain.

As soon as you see her go through the door, you shut your own and let out a breath you didn't know you were holding in.

You did it. You actually did it!

Trembling, you look to your hands. The hands that cast a spell and summoned her!

The rush of power is immense, but also a sense of dread.

A rustling of paper breaks the quiet of your room.

The papers have flown away from the book, and again you see the red letters reflecting their waxy title against the candle light.

The thick candle has burned a third of the way down now.

There is still time in the night.

But what to do with it?

>>29980046
check out one of the more complicated works

>>29980046

Strip down.
Get under our covers,
Cast it again.
Pretend to be sick.

>>29980046
Read more.

>>29980046
masturbate to giselle.

>>29980046
Read more of the spellbook

>>29980046
Try and make the perfume, I'm guessing that if we start getting good at alchemy we can whip up love, or at least lust, potions without any trouble.

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Again you get the feeling that you're doing the book's will more than your own. But the promise of power is so tempting now. Was this the feeling every evil wizard felt as they took their first steps to infamy?

You aren't so far gone that you don't recognize the lines being crossed.

But crossing those lines are as easy as opening the cover of a book...

The words that you can understand are disturbing in what they suggest.

Women as a source of power. Spells to control and manipulate them. To harness them.

What deviant made this book, you wonder? And what kind of deviant are you that it resonates with you so?

The potions are simple. There is no arcane language here, just incredibly rare ingredients. But everything imaginable is there. Love potions, poisons, potions to... make women into living bombs?!

You flip again to the beginning, where the cantrips were. It seems there is a progression for this. A spell afterwards notes what you can cast to the woman you summon. Something along the lines of making her think better of you, to improve the impression that she has of you. You notice that the spell afterwards says something about affecting her decisions with suggestions of your own that she takes in high consideration. But these have to be done one after another on the same woman. Giselle...

And then of course, there is the more arcane sections of the book. There seems to be a progression here... you can recognize how some words from the beginning of the book fit the scrawling of the author later on.

Of course, the candle is burning lower now, and you know you don't have much time left if you are to sleep for tomorrow's day of work.

Decisions... what to do?

>>29980464
Go eat dinner

>>29980464
Search for the spell that turns women into bimboified love slaves.

>>29980464
burn this deviant object of satanist worship!

>>29980464
Hmm, don't cast the spell on Giselle quite yet. We can wait a day, and we should make sure we grok it before trying it.

Go get some dinner, chat with her if she's there, and then hit the sack.

>>29980464
Dinner, bed, work.
Female boss when?

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A rumbling from your stomach reminds you that there are other concerns than the arcane.

The smell of the venison is inviting.

When you enter the tavern, it is fairly lively. Cheap meat and stew has brought in others from the village, and you can see that Giselle is balancing a number of plates and drinks. A pang of guilt strikes you as you wonder if you caused any trouble from summoning her away from all the bustle of the inn.

You take a seat and the innkeeper puts a meal in front of you.

You thank him and begin eating. While it is filling and a fair bit more palatable than the usual fair, you seem to be hyperaware of the females in the tavern now. Whether it's due to the book's influence or your own due to circumstance.

Giselle is there, still looking very pretty even though she seems very frazzled.

The wizard Anthena is there as well, all in black and furs and feathers. The townsfolk call her the raven bitch, and she seems like it. Her elegant demeanor seems to make it feel as if she thinks all of this is beneath her... is she staring at you? You can't tell...

Selera the apothecary is here. You think she's friends with Giselle, but you've never spoken with her before either.

There are other girls in the room as well, and you're left with your thoughts as you finish your meal.

What now?

>>29980464
Go to dinner and go to sleep.
I want his decent into depravity to be slow and steady. Too many quests like this just go straight to sleeping with every girl they see with no build up or anticipation.

>>29980862
Try talking to Giselle, offer to help if she needs any.

>>29980879
Dude. Why would we use this power to sleep with women? We can use it to make ourselves mayor. Make ourselves king even! Then we can worry about fading to black

>>29980884
this.

>>29980862
eat dinner and get back to the book

>>29980862
Dinner then sleep. Slow and steady is where it is at. we don't want to fuck it up and end up making someone explode accidentaly.

And fuck, there is another witch in here? that could be trouble.

Real trouble.

Let's not use our powers on her until we are sure we can kill her/fuck her into submission.

>>29980862
Eat then sleep. Make sure to prop a chair against the door.

>>29980976
Honestly, easiest way to deal with Anthena that I can think of is to make some sort of love potion and have Giselle put it in her food and drink.

Granted we need Giselle deep enough in our pocket to do this without question, but that's mainly a matter of time.

>>29980932
Good point. Grimoire said there was a progression to the spells. Summon is technically before the enchantments but I imagine we can skip it if the girl is already there. We need to spam all the women with the "think better of you" spell. Even if he doesn't turn them all into slaves if the shit goes down later on they'll be more likely to give him the benefit of the doubt.

>>29981031
I think it said that it has to be on the same woman in succession.

>A spell afterwards notes what you can cast to the woman you summon.

>But these have to be done one after another on the same woman. Giselle...

>>29981031
unless they have magic protection, like Anthena probably does

She might be able to sense or detect our spells too

better be careful

>>29981020
Probably. Spells require hand gestures that she will see a mile away. But she might have something on her person that will detect if her drink has been spiked. More research is required.

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The meal is heavy and you can already feel drowsy especially after all the excitement of the day.

You spare a moment of guilt for Giselle, and another moment at wondering whether Anthena was watching you, before exiting and going back to the room.

Again the book is there, and you aren't surprised to see that it is now resting on the stack of books you buried it under previously. Nothing about it surprises you much anymore.

You can feel its call, but your bed calls louder.

As an afterthought, you turn the locks on the door and prop a chair on the handle. You don't know what a chair and a deadbolt will do against someone like Anthena, but it's at least a comfort to your sensibilities.

You fall asleep as soon as your head hits the pillow, and your dreams are troubled and... something else.

Women.

All of them, tempting you, used by you.

You feel strong, powerful. Of course they lay themselves at your feet. Why not? They are nothing but playthings to you, after all.

And of course, those red, waxy words glowing against a book as black as night...

You awaken with a start, sweaty and panting. The book is now right there, next to you on your pillow, and while this worries you, it doesn't surprise you.

Dawn is just breaking, and you know you have a few hours still before work. You usually are still asleep at this time of day, and you do feel tired but...

... there is the book...

What to do?

>>29981233

study it don't cast any thing

>>29981233
Sleep more. We can fool around after the work is done, and we need to sleep to do our work. If we suddenly start taking strange hours and strange things happen in town, people will assume it is us.

>>29981233
put book under your pillow
go back to sleep

>>29981233
study study study
maybe head out and find some random chick to practice on

>>29981233
Go back to sleep, those were some nice dreams.

>>29981233
Memorize one or two of the simpler spells so that we can cast them later on in the day without bring the book with us everywhere.

>>29981449
Go to sleep then memorize the spells. Can't drink about a new age of darkness without a good nights sleep.

>>29981477
>Can't drink about a new age of darkness
^bring

>>29981279
Seconding this as much as one can second. Plus resisting the book a bit might be a good idea, if our mind is too weak it might lead to our downfall

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You grumble. It's too early to think about the repercussions of black magic.

You take the book and stuff it under your pillow. You're sure that it will show up later anyway, but you feel as if it was actually giving a small protest as you roll over and get back to sleep.

No matter.

The dreams are the same.

Giselle, Anthena, Selera, Marr, Tandice...

All the girls of the village, ones that you can name and those that you only barely remember if only for their beauty dance in your dreams.

When you wake, you feel well rested and your thoughts are clearer.

You look around, and you find that the book is no longer on your pillow. Panic touches you for a moment, but then you see the book tucked away in your satchel for work. You shake your head.

Going through your morning routines is easy enough. Washing, dressing, breakfast of cheap fruit from Tandice at the market...

And work.

Hours of soul-crushing work.

Copying and copying numbers without end. And for what? A few pennies? This is what caused you to go against your conscience and learn the secrets of the book. And each hour that ticks by makes you feel more and more justified for it.

Thankfully Marr is there. The only bright point in your day. The head archivist of town records gives you a bright smile and pats your hand. She gives you an apologetic look as she hands you more records to copy, but you know it's not really her fault and just nod.

The day passes and finally it is late in the afternoon when you leave for home. You're walking through town, thoughts heavy in your head again.

What shall you do now?

>>29981619
>Study the book
>All the studying

>>29981645
This, but for fuck's sake go home first.

>>29981669
that was assumed, it's kinda hard to study and walk at once

>>29981619
>Study

Try out the affection thing on Giselle

>>29981619
Get home and study more. See if there's a way to specify the target of the summoning cantrip. And anything related to memory alteration.

>>29981619

study the book

DON"T CAST ANY THING UNTIL WE KNOW ABOUT ANY SIDE EFFECTs

>>29981619
I vote study... Apparently I'm a better student in quests than I am in real life.

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You quicken your pace, the excitement of the book almost pulsing through your satchel.

You give a wave to Tandice as you pass by her stall, and you're surprised to see that you can actually recognize a few of the herbs from the pictures in the book at Selera's store window.

You look to your feet and try not to stare at Anthena's wizard tower, and again you wish that you didn't feel like something was staring right back at you whenever you're near anything connected to the woman.

Finally you're back at your room, tossing the satchel to the bed and fishing out the book.

Already plans are starting in your head, and you follow a thread of them as you flip through the pages of the book.

The progression of the cantrip all the way to the end confirms your suspicion. Complete domination of the subject, from her physical form to her very soul. There is no ambiguity in the wording, and again you blanch at the power you hold. Dominion over even a woman's immortal spirit? It sends chills down your spine.

You push the thought away for a moment, and you find exactly what you are looking for. Control of a woman's memories is a fair number of steps away from the cantrip. Perhaps eight away. You pick out that you need a personal item eventually from the woman you have in mind for many of the spells, and that if you had one to focus on the beginning of the cantrip, you could summon that specific girl. Again it disturbs you to see that if you had no woman in mind, the writer of the book made the spell to call the most attractive woman makes her home closest to your own. You suppose that makes sense, considering the other women in the tavern and why only Giselle was summoned.

You're surprised when you notice that the light is dimming around you. Has two hours already passed? And still you are just learning from one section of the book. The potions and the darker spells still remain untouched.

You consider what to do next as the sun starts to sink below the trees.

>>29981747
Memory alteration is too advanced. He'd probably fuck it up and erase the last eight years of her life. No hiding that. Stick with low level shit like affection/likability spells.

>>29982061

Go to Anthena about the book

>>29982111
She might very well kill us, or at least try and take the book away.

>>29982061
Look up the potions. Specifically ones with ingredients you can actually get you hands on.

>>29982061
Go for an evening stroll, try the summoning/likeability combo on Tandice.
You don't shit in your own bed. Fucking up with Giselle will at the very least get us kicked out of our room.

>>29982111
Start learning more cantrips, once we show promise, and can demonstrate real power, ask to become her apprentice.

>>29982111
You do realize this would end the quest right?

>>29982061
Read up on potions, try to find basic ones that have ingredients we could find without too much trouble.

And I think Tandice would be a good first start, she has access to a good number of herbs and so on.

>>29982061
Read up on potions

>>29982111
Do NOT do this

>>29982111
fuck no son
fuck
no

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While actually learning the next spell after the cantrip does tempt you, you realize that the potions section of the book is already completely open to you. The ingredients may be out of reach, but at least you don't have to brew one potion after the other in specific order or take hours to just figure out the first paragraph of this section.

There is the potion for the perfume. It amazes you that just heating these spices by even the smallest flame can render such an apparently potent mixture.

Only two other potions are simple enough for you to make.

One is a tea that almost guarantees to put a woman to sleep. It actually states that it puts her more to be relaxed and that it isn't an unnatural sleep by any means, but more akin to her feeling bored in a lecture and just... nodding off...

And the last is only fortunate by virtue of last nights meal. Stag flesh and bones. The potion therein is strange... it makes the woman feel that the one that gave it to her is powerful? You can wrap your mind around it, affecting her perception to make her think you're some kind of intimidating and influential presence, but again you question why the author of the book would make such a thing.

Those seem to be the only potions you can make, and it's almost completely dark now.

The first two potions are simple and would take no time at all to prepare, while the stag potion will probably take you well past sundown. Again there is the rest of the book, but you find that you enjoy learning as well.

What shall you do?

>>29982551
Try making the perfume, use it, then go out, call Tandice to us, and flirt with her on a nighttime walk.

We could make the sleep potion as well for if she gets back to our place, we knock her out, and then have an open opportunity to cast the second part of the summoning cantrip. It'll even make us look like a gentleman to let her sleep the night.

>>29982551
Summon Giselle and use the second cantrip.

>>29982551
Jeez, none of those are particularly useful.
Make the relaxation one I guess. We can try it out at work.

>>29982638
This sounds good

>>29982638
not enough time in the day.

We need to raise Anthena's flag.
The book has spells that can raise the target's opinion of the caster, correct? We need to practice that, then try it on Anthena before approaching her.
Or better yet, she comes to us.

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You light a candle, as much for heat as well as the light.

You wish that you had some vials like you see in the apothecary, but you make do. The first potion goes off without a hitch. In fact, you fill an empty wine bottle with the perfume. It's curious to you that it smells more like cheese than anything else, but the book specifically notes that only women will smell the pleasant aroma anyway.

The calming tea gives you a bit more of a hassle. This one, you actually can feel supernatural forces at work. Unfortunately, all the wind and the flashing fires in your room makes you spill more than you would like of the concoction. You can only manage to fill a fourth of another wine bottle with this, and it isn't even a very big bottle either.

The trouble that the calming draught gave you has eaten more time than you expected.

You think it's around seven or eight at night now. You had given some thought to testing out the potions on... perhaps Tandice... and you suppose that you could catch her at a reasonable hour if you ran...

And as always, there is the book...

What next?

>>29982898
>untrained mageling casting spells on an experienced witch
yeah
nah

>>29982957
We should save it for a rainy day.
Let's learn some more cantrips

>>29982957

It's time to experiment, and take Tandice out. Get running!

Or, interestingly, captcha: usewith vicar

>>29982898
we would need to summon her first. The cantrip's require hand gestures and spoken words. She would realize she had been summon and that we where putting a spell on her righ away. We probably wouldn't be able to get one sentence out.

>>29982983
That's what I'm getting at. We should do it, but we need to train.

>>29982957
If we think that we could pull off the second stage of the summoning spell if we had an unconscious girl then summon Tandice and go for a walk to meet her outside so it's less suspicious, just two people on a late night walk.

>>29982957
Do it to Giselle instead. It would be easier to lure her back to our room since she lives close by.

>>29982957
Cast the cantrip to summon Tandice, then go for a stroll, and act surprised when we meet up.

>>29983018
>>29983054

Just a reminder that you'd need a personal item from Tandice to summon her. Otherwise doing the cantrip would just call Giselle again.

>>29983075
Ah, then we'll put that off.

We could summon Giselle, though she might be working at this point.

>>29983049
Yes, but her father is our landlord.
We need to figure out how he feels about us and how likely he is to beat us if he catches us with his daughter.

It's hard to pronounce an spell through broken teeth.

Seems like this one might need a bit more of discussion from the players. I'll start writing again in 5 minutes when I can see a consensus.

We know that Giselle is attractive and about our age. But for all we know Tandice is a 40 year old woman with a husband and kids.

>>29983120
It looks like these spells only affect attractive women, if I catch OP's drift. So she might be 40 with kids, but she'd be a milf.

>>29983075
Go for Giselle. Summon, give her the tea, do the next cantrip, wake her up.

>>29983177
We'll want to put the perfume on first if we do that. And get some chatting in before we knock her out.

>>29982957
I would say Tandice if there was a way for the meeting to seem natural. Giselle would be easier to play off as her working to hard and falling asleep.

>>29983111
It's only an affection spell.

I think it is fast becoming clear why this book was hidden.

Have we seen a single spell so far that is to the benefit of the target? All I am seeing are various forms of magical date rape or control.

This may not be necromancy-tier black magic or anything, but I'm pretty sure that if anyone ever finds out we are practicing this stuff we will be thrown in whatever jail they have for magical crimes.

I think the thing to do is to use it as a bargaining chip. All of these spells are of very specific use and poor morality. But we do seem to have some aptitude for magic. We cast a spell, if only a simple one, after only a couple of hours of light reading!

Perhaps we can go to Anthena and propose a deal? Give her this book on magic without raising a fuss (it is still early enough to walk away from the book with our hands clean) but in return she teaches us real magic. Non date-rapey magic.

>>29983305
>wanting non date rapey magic
lets just make her our mind slave and force her to teach us normal magic

>>29983338

If anyone is going to be able to catch us in the act or counter these spells, it is her. And she is way more experienced than us.

Hell, it seems like she might suspect we are messing in something magical already.

Remember that in order to do anything more complex, we have to work our way up the chain. The first thing we would have to do is summon her to us.
But her showing up doesn't mean she wont turn us into a frog when she gets here.

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>>29983305
That's the point

>>29983417
so we don't go for her until we are way better
gg nerd

>>29983305
>Non date-rapey magic.
Can't you see a smut quest when you see one. I literally looked at the first pic and went. "This is going to be a smut quest"

>>29983305
>not wanting to enter the /d/M's magical realm
You came to the wrong neighborhood anon.

>>29983542
Maybe if it wasnt so boring and fucking formulaic, I would give him a little more slack.

>>29983632
your no fun, go be a wet blanket somewhere else.

>>29983632
>boring
We're the ones that keep choosing to not use the magic to turn everyone into bimbos.

>>29983648
OP is the wet blanket here, seeing as he is doing yet another diamond dozen mind control fetish fuckery.

>>29983670
With good reason. Bimboification is a shit tier fetish.

>>29983676
you say that, but what if it's well written?

>>29983703
yeah, well fuck you too

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Looking at the potions you have in front of you, you feel a desire starting to stir.

Use them.

Again you have a feeling this is the book speaking, but for all the effort you made, you actually agree with the little voice. Tandice comes to mind as you stare at the calming potion. But that won't work. It's already well past nine, and you know that she sleeps early to open the stall the next morning as well. And you have nothing of hers to use to call her anyway.

But Giselle...

Using the spell is even easier the second time, and you worry about the way the words seem to actually float in your vision as you cast.

You spend a few minutes mulling that over in your head when you hear the rapping on your door.

This time, you don't even wait for Giselle to speak. You open the door and motion Giselle inside.

"Oh... thank you..." Giselle says, and again she looks confused. "Did... did we talk about meeting again from yesterday? I feel like I needed to be here, but I can't actually remember speaking with you about it..."

You nod and tell her that it was so, hoping that she won't dwell on it for so long. You pull a chair for her at your little table and pour her a mug of the calming potion. She looks at it for a moment and seems to be a bit conflicted, but drinks it after just a bit of deliberation. It might be strange, but then again, tea isn't THAT strange.

Almost instantly after finishing the cup, Giselle lets out a yawn. You ask her if she's had a long day, and she nods.

"Yes. Sorry, we had to clean and turn over a lot of rooms today. And we had to haul out that deer carcass and wash the dishes from last night's buffet." She explains, but pauses to yawn again. "... Haaaaaaahh... what about you?"

You can already see the potion working on her quickly and steadily. It has only been perhaps five minutes, but she is resting her chin on her palm, and her eyelids keep drooping...

con't...

>>29983725
>what if it's well written?
I dont see what that has to do with this thread.

>>29983738

You begin to recount your day archiving, and it doesn't take long for her to start snoring into her palm...

What now?

>>29983745
I mean, what if OP writes his smut scenes well?

>>29983759
How many spells do we think we can cast?

>>29983759
Use the spell that will cause her to like us more.

>>29983770
I highly doubt that will happen, given that he cant even tell a story well.

>>29983788
>has to use magic to woo ladies
Look at this pleb.

>>29983794
Maybe you're just biased.

>>29983794

Gotta admit, that stings a bit, but I'm open to suggestions on how to improve my writing.

>>29983788
This

>>29983833
Maybe I'm just bored. You know, because his quest is awful thus far.

>>29983788
Not this. Its skeevy as fuck.

>>29983863
I disagree, I'm pretty sure your only problem is the subject matter.

>>29983882
Thanks for proving me right.

>>29983703
I'm not a fan of Bimboification either but mind control is OK with me as long as it doesn't turn them into a slack jawed zombie.

I like the idea of her finding out she's been put under a spell. But by then she's so far in that she's ok with it and actively tries to help us with our world domination.

>>29983851
For one, its drier than stale toast in the desert sun.

>>29983894
I actually love MC and bimboification, OP just fucking sucks at if. I'm not >>29983882, either.

>>29983900
Get the fuck out of here, moralfag, we are gonna turn her brain to paste.

>>29983851
critics on this site never give ways to improve your writing, they only want to crush your spirit. Then they wonder why there aren't many good writing.

>>29983759
Test spells on her

>>29983969
yeeeeeeee


>>29983924
Could you direct me to the works that have raised your standards?

>>29983759
second testing some magic out on her. she seems a good test case.

>>29983759

We should see if she has a token item on her. A necklace, a bracelet, a ring: something that might not be missed, that we could use to further our research into these spells.

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>>29983988
>he says, ignoring the criticism two posts above him
>>29984000
I would go as far as to say the Trombone Tooter could write better than OP

>>29983905
That's fair, though you might have to point out specific examples. Only if you want to, though.

>>29983924
The only mind control so far is just summoning Giselle, so I don't see how I suck in that regard. Is it because of the lack of Mind Control so far? That might have more to do with the player choices so far.

----

For the other quest goers, please keep going with the suggestions. I'll try to improve, but I'm still happy to see others following and tagging along for the ride for the story.

>>29983738
>>29983759
You act like this is a moral dilemma in the slightest despite the fact that she has no personality or character to speak of.

Just fucking bimbofy her already so you can stop railroading us.

>>29984045
>that image text
>writing better than OP

You got me going man. 8/10

>>29983905
>>29983924
>>29984045
>Implying these are ways he can improve.
Blind insults don't help anyone.

OP could work on his descriptive language. When talking about the characters talk a little about what they look like. If she has black hair don't just say it's black say. It remind's you of a ravens feathers.
>This is criticism.

>>29984138
>>This is criticism.
No, its shitty purple prose.

>>29984138
No, that's constructive criticism. You can be critical of someone's work and contribute absolutely nothing while doing so.
In other words, a shit post.

>>29984048
I don't really see anything wrong with your writing thus far. Most people seem to be complaining because nothing super exciting has happened yet, which really cannot be called your fault since you've been doing what people ask. None of the writing actually feels clumsy, and it all meshes well together. So do not feel bad, I don't have any complaints.
>>29984066
If he had been railroading us, you'd already have your porn. He's actually been doing what we've been asking him rather than taking us directions not included in our requests. He's asking us what we're doing, and he's been going with the majority vote so far. If you want your bimbo, get the majority to vote on it.

>>29984190
>If he had been railroading us, you'd already have your porn.
Not really. He is oulling the Nintendo classic of
>No
>But thou must!
>No
>But thou must!
>No
Etc. Sure, it looks like we have a choice, but if we choose anything but the one he wants, it leads us back to Square 1.

>>29984164
Yes, he gave a crappy example.

Still, better than anyone here has done.

>>29984048
OP, you could work on the characters descriptions. This is a smut quest, yet we have no idea what the females look like. Nor the main protagonist, for that matter.

I want to know what I am fucking. Red heir? Black? Long or short? Is she tall? Her boobs, tell me about them. Butt too,let's not forget the butt, since we may want to fuck that later.

Other than that, I thnk you are going fine.

>>29984048
The best advise I can give as far as writing on this site is; Stop responding to ass holes. JRR Martin could run a quest on this site and these people wouldn't be happy. If you spend all your time reading there crap the story will never move forward.

I'm not saying ignore everything. You should always be trying to improve. Just remember your probably a better writer than a lot of the people insulting you. There's a reason that they aren't running their own quests.

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Again, there is the slight tinge of regret at seeing the promises of the book come to fruition.

But you've already gone this far. Come hell or high water, you've cast your lot.

Taking the book again, it is only with mild interest that you see you've opened to the exact page of the cantrips. You've already accepted that the book has a mind of its own, and quite possibly an agenda as well.

You take a deep breath, trying to work quickly. Practicing the hand gestures this time, you notice that the difficulty seems to have doubled. You're only half certain that you have the passes down correctly, but you really have no way of knowing at this point.

The words are more complicated as well, requiring you to roll your r's and speaking as if you're choking on top of keeping a breathy susurrus.

But in your mind, the words are clear, and they burn with as much intensity as the last cantrip.

With a bit of confidence, you combine the two, and the wind blows in your room once more, this time over Giselle as she sleeps.

It calms down after a moment, and you are left there, feeling a bit drained, Giselle still slightly snoring.

What now?

>>29984231
That's nice. Close the tab this thread occupies in your browser or 4chan application on your mobile device, and hide the thread from the front page. That way you don't have to read it, and we can enjoy ourselves without you shitting on it. Thanks.

>>29984290
Try to wake her up.

>>29984290
Recast to make sure it took

>>29984274
>Still, better than anyone here has done.
No advice is better than bad advice.

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>>29984274

>>29984290
Destroy her mind.

>>29984290
MAKE WIHT THE SECKSINGS

>>29984281
True. You have more than 5 followers. That is more than most get at their first quest.

And you have got positive criticism.

And no one is talking shit about you and your thread on QTG, which is nice.

>>29984048
chronic quest lurker hear, enjoying your quest, more descriptions of charters please, your doing good with the book, but my dick likes the girls more.

>>29984290
wake her up. But, be nice about it.

>>29984349
This.
>>29984356
>That is more than most get at their first quest.
This is wrong
>no one is talking shit about you and your thread on QTG
Actually they are.

>>29984374
then stop and get a life

Well, quest threads are a bit different than books, given the time frame and how the content is generated, as well as the 2000 character limit per post.

I'll at least give a description for Giselle since I really can't describe her naturally at this point of the story.

She's the tavern owner's daughter of the same age as the character (whatever age you wish). She has wavy red hair that reaches a bit past her shoulders and one or two beauty marks on her face. You do think she is pretty, and she actually has a very warm and welcoming face. She is one of the biggest draws to the bar of the inn, and she dresses to attract. She may not be wearing streetwalker clothes, but her dirndl is very much low cut. She stands about 5'8" and has an hourglass figure. The perfect girl next door, really.

(Don't worry, I'm still looking at the thread to see where you guys want to go next.)

>>29984390
Are you seriously mad at me for correcting you? I'm enjoying this quest, btw

>>29984412
yus
moar

>>29984412
>as well as the 2000 character limit per post.
Then do multiposts, dumbass. Theres also no need to break after every fucking sentence.

>>29984412
1500.
The character limit is 1500.

>>29984438
no, it's 2000

>>29984444
So it is!

>>29984438
>>29984444
Its around 1600-1800

>>29984290
We need to get her back to her own room safely and secretly, along with getting a small token so that we can summon her up at will.
That way we can later check on if she remembers much, and what if any effect our spells have had. Ideally we can also get her to either forget or not mention her visits, because I doubt her father would look fondly upon them.

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You lean over the table and shake Giselle's shoulder. Again, you question the logic of trusting a book you found hidden underneath a floorboard. Giselle's eyelids flutter open and she gives a great stretch from her seat, and you feel some of those doubts lessen as she at least looks to be unharmed.

"Oh... oh... I'm sorry. Wow, I must be more tired than I thought." She says, rubbing her eyes. At first, it seems as if nothing has changed, but she looks at you for a moment then flashes you a brilliant smile.

"Thanks for inviting me, though! I don't know why we don't spend more time together." she says, and she actually reaches out to hold your hand in hers. "To think, all these months and I hardly know anything about you. I'll come over more often, alright?"

You nod dumbly, as much in shock over Giselle's sudden switch in her regard of you as the accuracy of the book's magic on her.

It passes and you realize the time. It's been more than half an hour at the very least, though no one has called Giselle yet. She sits across from you, still smiling. You have to admit, the quiet this time has none of the awkward air as before. It actually feels more like a companionable silence between two old friends.

Still, there are other matters to attend to. What next?

>>29984423

Hey, I
>>29984356
am not him
>>29984390
bro, but perhaps I didn't express myself well.

There quite a few quests that don't get 5 ACTIVE followers on the first thread.

And about QTG, must have missed it. Well, QTG shits on everyone, so its allright if they shit on you too, OP.

>>29984662
Let Giselle get back to her duties.
Read up on some of the deeper level spells
Keep an eye out for ways of countering magic cast by a woman.

>>29984662
Escort her to her room then go to bed.

>>29984662
Obliterate her free will already.

Indeed. I like the premise of the quest. A highly morally questionable source of power. Can the protagonist use it without becoming consumed by it and losing all his morals?

>>29984686
>There quite a few quests that don't get 5 ACTIVE followers on the first thread.
This is patently false.

Also the main reason OO is seeing such popularity is because someone linked his quest in the QTG and called it a smut quest.

>>29984662
Get her back to her own room, with gentle words about keeping this time between the two of you. Then it's time to burn the midnight oil with the book and look up some countermagic, and long term effects.
Taking it slow with something like this is better than rushing.

>>29984707
>morally questionable
There is nothing questionable about it, its just plain evil.
>Can the protagonist use it without becoming consumed by it and losing all his morals?
He just brain-raped a girl into loving him, he clearly had zero morals to begin with.

>>29984662
Get her to her own room, then hypnotize her.

>>29984662
It's groundrules time, we should at the very least try to skirt the slippery slope by making sure that Giselle, and any other girl we grab, is safe and happy at the absolute least.

>>29984783
There is no slope, one rape is just as bad as another. Don't delude yourself into thinking there is a high ground to take.

>>29984783
>try to skirt the slippery slope
Seeing as we already essentially killed the old Giselle and replaced her with a version utterly devoted to us, this is a nonissue.

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>>29984707
Nah, power corrupts man.
This guy's going to change for the worse. Slowly but surely he's going to see how deep this rabbit hole goes.

>>29984662
Ask her about herself, we can't rely on magic to do all the work for us.

Make conversation, get to know her, the better we know her the better we can manipulate her.

We'll study afterwards.

>>29984803
There is the difference between using people as pawns to be thrown away at whim, and making the people we rely upon our knights and queens, to be protected and shepherded.
Hence why information is key right now, did we just tweak her opinion of us, or outright murder her personality? We need to know, and to take things carefully.

>>29984827
Hey, at least she's happy in her devotion, rather than miserable.

I'd say that's slightly higher ground.

>>29984839
>we can't rely on magic to do all the work for us.
That is literally exactly what we can do.
>Make conversation, get to know her, the better we know her the better we can manipulate her.
Or we can just force her to tell us everything. You know, with magic.

>>29984864
fuck yeah magic

>>29984860
We can mind-rape her into being happy while we cut off her arms and legs and turn her into a living fuckpillow. Her happiness is literally whatever we define it to be, she is no longer a living being anymore.

>>29984827
We made her like us. That is hardly rewriting her personality completely.

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Giselle begins to chat with you about the state of your room and actually starts to show genuine interest in your job. You humor her and continue the conversation, wondering if she is even the slightest bit concerned over the time she has spent in your room. After a few more minutes of idle chat, you clearly see that you yourself will have to be the one to bring up the time. Only when you bring up the subject does Giselle seem to notice the time that's passed.

"It's been that long already?! Papa must be swamped by now!" She frets, but still she doesn't seem to want to bring up leaving. For the sake of her nerves and yours, you tell her that she should probably return to her duties.

"Well... only if you're sure..." she says, finally, still showing reluctance. You walk with her to the tavern and she embraces you at the door. "I'll talk to you tomorrow, alright?" she promises, then slips back inside to the raucous taproom.

You are floored by what has happened. As soon as the door closes you turn and race back to your room. It's time to take a closer look at the book and see what else you can learn. Potions, spells, the cryptic codes, you have to learn it all!

What next?

>>29984846
>There is the difference between using people as pawns to be thrown away at whim, and making the people we rely upon our knights and queens, to be protected and shepherded.
We are already using her like a toy.
>Hence why information is key right now, did we just tweak her opinion of us, or outright murder her personality?
You act like there is a difference. We already stripped her of her ability to choose the man she likes which is one of the most intimate parts of a human being, why is anything else suddenly over the line?

>>29984919
We literally forced her to love us. That is really fucked up, no matter how much you sugarcoat it.

And judging by the latest update, she is unable to make decisions on her own, either.

>>29984931
>starts to show genuine interest in your job.
I highly doubt that, seeing as we rewrote her brain to worship us.

>>29984931
Stuff that protects against magic cast by women.

>>29984931

STUDY

>>29984933
>>29984952
I'm not arguing that she isn't being manipulated, but it looks like she's only platonic atm. Nothing there that outright screams LOVE, and the book did say that it only raises the opinion of the subject, not the kind of emotions attached.

>>29984931

Let's do some light reading in the book. Also, like another anon said, let's keep an eye out for possible counters or spells related to women who use magic.

>>29984931
Spells, we need to know what we're doing, how, the whole of it.
Counter magic is also good, and does the book mention anything about conditioning or the like?

If that old hedge mage had this, how was he run out of business by two females?

Giselle needs to be treated carefully right now, ideally we should get to know her and make sure we haven't changed her to much, the worry about her father shows that she's still got other concerns at least.

>>29984972
well it's genuine now! lolololol

>>29984990
Maybe that hedge mage had morals
unlike us
huehuehue

>>29984978
>but it looks like she's only platonic
She is unable to leave our presence without our express permission. Thats a little more than platonic
>atm
You act like this isnt subject to change.

>>29984990
>the worry about her father shows that she's still got other concerns at least.
It also shows that they are secondary to us. We have already rewritten her personality enough for her to place us above her own kith and kin.
>>29984999
I guess the old Giselle really is dead.

>>29984931
We should see if there's any way to undo the spells.

>>29985062
Then burn that page. Giselle is ours now.

>>29985052
Or she's acting like any hormonal teen would with her first crush.

>>29985105
The crush that we brainfucked her into having.

>>29985105
>implying shes not in her late 40s, like the character

>>29985105
That would be even creepier, since that would make us an old man who is brainfucking teens into fucking him.

>>29985139

>You are just a poor, young clerk for the town's mayor.

>>29985139
>implying we're not early 20s

>>29985188>>29985188
>>29985211
>>29985180

young is a relative term

>She's the tavern owner's daughter of the same age as the character (whatever age you wish).

>>29985247
Either way, we totally rewrote her thoughts for our own selfish ends. No rationalizing around that.

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You lock the door and push the chair up against the knob again, this time even more conscious of the fact that the magic you're dabbling in is very, very real and past the point of innocent dabbling.

The book is there, again, sitting right on your desk, open and waiting for you. Again, an otherworldly breeze fills the room, and you swear that you can see the pages beckoning you to read them.

Your spirits dampened by weight of the situation, you still make your way to the desk and start poring over the tome.

You chuckle ruefully at the page that the book has deemed to let you read first.

"Protective salves against the spells of those you wish to dominate..."

You can already tell at first glance that this is one potion that will take much, much more than you have at hand, you might ever have on hand, to make, but the message the book is sending is clear.

It wants you take the spells and will do everything in its power so that nothing will stop you until you have done so.

For now, brewing that potion may be out of reach. You focus on something else to learn instead. Perhaps another potion? There is always learning the next spell in the chain for Giselle, though you don't quite know how to proceed with that. And of course the untranslated chapters of the books still remain untouched...

What to do?

>>29985247
I wish for them to be 12.

>>29985277
Learn more potions.

>>29985277
get translating, obviously

>>29985277

PUT THE BOOK AWAY

we have a hot girl now we don't need anything else

>>29985277
Now, this is a smut quest, OP, but there is an important fact you still haven't mentioned:

How big is our dick and are there spells to make it bigger?

>>29985277
Learn how to utterly enslave Giselle.

>>29985277
Learn, work on the hand motions, see what we can memorize, but let's hold off on testing anything more until we've spent a bit of time with what we've got.
Both in the magical sense, and the feeling out what Giselle thinks of us now sense. That the book was both found with a man who was ruined by females, and seems to have a will of its own are huge red flags for caution.

>>29985341
>this is a smut quest
This is probably the worst smut quest since Breaker when it comes to delivery.

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>>29985280

>>29985371

Hey, we chose this path. We decided not to go apeshit with the spellbook and study it carefully.

Op is just going with it.

>>29985371
some of us want story in our porn
sorry you're the minority both here and in breaker quest anon
maybe you should just go over to literotica or something.

>>29985404
>>29985431
His inability to make all paths equally valid and interesting shows his failure as a QM.

Would the apothecary still be open?

>>29985439
it's interesting to us
again, you're the minority
your failure to realize this shows your failure as a follower

>>29985473
We haven't even done anything yet and the thread is almost in autosage.

>>29985516
Yeah, because of butthurt virgins.

"Smut? Not on my /tg/!"

>>29985553
Then OP needs to man the fuck up and make a goddamn choice. Like that other anon said, he keeps pussyfooting around like Breaker Quest did and we all saw how that one went to shit.

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Knowing you will probably have to spend a day's wages on candles tomorrow, you turn the pages to look again at the chain of spells that you have started on Giselle. A lump forms in your throat as you see the end result of the spells, of complete subjugation, but you push those thoughts from your mind. You're getting better at that, nowadays.

You try to focus on the next part of the chain. You don't know exactly how your suggestions will be taken more into consideration by Giselle, given how she seemed to already hang on every word you say, but that is what the next step outlines.

The actual casting gives you pause, however. It is ridiculous, the number of motions your hand must make, and now it seems there is a time constraint on top of everything. For anyone observing, there would be no doubt that you are practicing sorcery if they even spend a second watching you perform this particular spell.

Sighing, you lean back, trying to do the waves, but only succeeding at cracking your knuckles. You wince, shaking the sting off and flipping through the book once again.

As you are stretching your fingers and practicing the second spell's motions, you stop at a page of gibberish.

Or, what used to be gibberish.

You can only make out one sentence from the page, but it is definitely one that you can guess with certainty.

"How to read the thoughts of the feeble woman."

You know it's late. You know that it will take you a very long time to decipher the rest of the page. And do you really need to do that right now?

You still have work in the morning, and you notice just how tired and peckish you are.

How do you proceed?

>>29985578
Fuck off
The only reason Breaker went bad is because asshole anons like you kept harassing Humility.
He never even intended to run the quest, the original OP took off halfway through the first thread. Humility picked it up out of the goodness of his heart, only to have people like you fill his threads with shitposts.
I'm still mad about that.

>>29985439
When you create a story, you usually have a path you wish you players to go. The path is not fixed and if the players decide to break out of it, they can.

As a QM/GM/DM you wish that your players follow the road you created. If you force them back into the road, you are railroading, and that is bad. If you let them wander stray from the road and they arrive at nothing, the story is lost, and that is bad.

The ideal is to make that all roads lead to the final goal, letting the players take their time, while favoring the options that further the story.

Not all Quests must be open world. You have free will, but is limited. If the players want to be careful and you force them to do something they don't want, THAT's bad QMing.

Just because a quest has smut, doesn't ean you can't have story. The more you care about the characters, the more you care about the fucking.

But that's just my two cents.

>>29985637
>The only reason Breaker went bad is because asshole anons like you kept harassing Humility.
I just wanted smut from a smut quest. Theres no harassment about that.
>He never even intended to run the quest, the original OP took off halfway through the first thread. Humility picked it up out of the goodness of his heart,
I still think this was a ruse of some sort.

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Why couldn't the book have been about controlling men?

Just think of the possibilities.

>>29985630
Get a quick snack, after securing our room and book.
Then look into the thought reading, it'll be an easy way to see how much we've influenced Giselle.

>>29985630
Don't read it just yet, go to bed.

>>29985439
I don't get what you're saying.

The spell chain is super valid, and we've been doing that already.

The potion route is valid as well, and we've been using that to help with the spell chain.

And the only reason why the translation route hasn't been touched (until now) is because nobody wanted to.

I feel very in control of the story, so I don't know which quest you're reading, anon.

>>29985630
Go to sleep.

>>29985643
Sure, that's all fine and good, but when 275 posts have passed without so much as hint of a tease, OP has done something terribly wrong.

>>29985630
Read it.

>>29985655
uh no, when you keep telling him his quest is shit because no smut that's harassment.

>>29985686
no, nothings wrong
this is what the players wanted
maybe it's not what you wanted
too bad! go somewhere else then

>>29985686
Yeah... nah, you're a cunt.

>>29985709
>when you keep telling him his quest is shit because no smut that's harassment.
Its the objective truth that a smut quest without smut is a shitty smut quest.

>>29985674
Then OP needs to speed things along.

>>29985731
Go to /d/ for a smut quest. There's a couple running right now.

>>29985658
Because OP has no vision.

>>29985771
Or I can stay on /tg/, where the only mind control fetish quest is.

>>29985630
We need a proper experimental subject..
Is there any prison nearby? I would feel much better about this using all of this on a convicted murderer or other dropout of society.

>>29985731
fuck it
I'm done with you
you have no patience, no desire for story
there's no way to fix you
you'll be unhappy with every smut quest here just because you don't agree with everyone else in the thread on where you want the quest to go
at the very least I'm going to stop giving you an excuse to keep up your shitposting with replies

>>29985658
Because if witches wanted men, they would just magic themselves hot and say "Hey, do you wish to fuck?" that men would jump on her.

But we could try our spells on men, just to see if it works.

>>29985341
And OP still hasn't answered this.

>>29985834
Story needs balance if you're looking to create something sexually titillating. OP is taking way too long for the setup and doesn't even have well developed characters or setting to show for it. Its just a bunch of plotless, developmentless faffing about.

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At least you still have enough control over yourself to know that trying to read an evil, self-aware tome on how to dominate half of the world's population on a sleepy mind is probably a terrible idea.

You close the book and put it under your fruit bowl, grabbing an apple to eat as you change for bed. You're curious whether the book will appear on your pillow again or maybe somewhere else and it never hurts to see just what the book is capable of.

Sighing, you close your eyes. Once more, the excitement of the day lets you sleep in peace, with dreams of women firmly obeying your every command.

When you wake up, it's more or less the time that you usually do. You turn and check to see if your pillow has another occupant, and you are pleasantly surprised that your head alone is on the cushion.

That is, until you look to the table.

There the book gleams with its red lettering, propped up by a fresh set of clothes and your work satchel.

Cheeky thing.

Time for another day? Back to work? Something else? You still have about an hour. Or you may want to get a head start into town? What shall you do?

>>29985888
see if we can't fit in some quick reading
it did get our stuff ready for us after all

>>29985888
An hour isn't enough to get anything meaningful safely done. Head start into town and work, chat up giselle a little on the way out if we see her. Breakfast and all that as well of course.

>>29985888
Study more

>>29985888

head into town

we can see if their are any other woman we might want

>>29985876
There are a lot of ways to be titillated, dude. This is the most blatantly mind control centric quest I've seen, and it hits all the right buttons for me as an MC fetishist. I'm here for the control, and it's actually believable with the setup so far, my dick is already getting hard at parts of this story.