Gonna start in a bit, just let me grab something to eat.Past threads:http://pastebin.com/uMT2kb5q
IS TIME
And here we go.
>>31164481
>>31164481aw yiss, nigga>>31164685>more DMC musicI'm expecting excessive amounts of crazy
>>31164481It begins.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X4r36mMFTYc
Let's dance.
>>31164481Time to get CRAZY
>>31164857mfw when satsuki suddenly gave us a proposition to be her ally/deva
Following your double graduation day begins the short spring break. You wake up in your apartment. Throughout the two years you've spent here, you've grown quite fond of it, but this is probably one of your last few nights spent in it.Satsuki told you that the two of you already have a spot in a certain middle school, but she neglected to mention anything about it. Just as you're about to call her to ask about it, you hear knocking at the door. You peek through the visor, and see Satsuki. That's some perfect timing. You open the door to greet her."Good morning. I came here, since I figured I should tell you a bit more about what happens next.""Hi. I, uh, was actually about to call you to ask about that.", you chuckle."I see we think alike. Our next school will be Rinne-dou Middle School, a school in Kanagawa Prefecture.", she explains. "The choice is not random, either, nor defined by the school's academic qualities. But, I am getting ahead of myself, let me explain the next step of our plan.""To accomplish my ultimate objective, which I revealed to you yesterday, I will need strong allies. You are one of them. However, for the plan to succeed, I'm going to need more people than that.""So, we're going to that school to recruit somebody?", you ask. Looks like there's even more to her schemes than she's already told you."[1/2]
>>31164922>mfw
>>31164981Oops, seems I accidentally added one more quotation mark at the end there than I intended.
>>31164922She already did.We accepted.
>>31165049oh i know, i was there; just saying that act itself caught me WAY off guard
>>31164981>Kanagawa PrefectureSounds like we're about to go bananashttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_xuVaPR_d0
>>31165143we need to beat the shit out of monkeyassuming satsuki doesn't do it herself
>>31165181M-Maybe monkey isn't a complete Jobber in this timeline?
>>31165259Does the Pope shit in the woods?
>>31165337being Monkey is suffering
>>31165350Monkey is like Sayaka with a tiny penis.
>>31164981"That's partially it, yes. I want to gather a team of reliable companions, and with their help, create and maintain the final piece required to attain my goal: Honnouji Academy.""Honnouji Academy? What's that supposed to be?""It will be a high school, one where students come not just to improve their skills, but also to test them. Their abilities will determine their position in the school, and through this proccess, I will create an army fit to fight against Life Fibers.""Sounds ambitious. Expected no less of you. What about that whole recruitment thing, though?""At present, I have scoped out two candidates, and one of them attends that school. His name is Gamagoori Ira, the local student council president, known for his iron-clad discipline and unfaltering will, which are certainly impressive, as the school is infamous for being a delinquent den.""I see. And the other one?""The second candidate is Inumuta Houka, a genius programmer and hacker from Tokyo. Apparently, he somehow manages to live alone and pay for all expenses, without any support from his parents, supposedly thanks to his stock market manipulation skills.""They both do seem like they could be good to have around.", you reply. Satsuki sure does her research. You wonder if she did the same with you."Indeed. Now, I am certain that we will manage to convince both of them to join our cause. However, which one of them should we approach first? I'll let you decide that."[2/3]
>>31165501She expects you to decide? That's a tough one, but since she entrusts you with the choice, guess you'll have to pick one.[ ] Inumuta[ ] Gamagoori
>>31165529[ ] Gamagoori
>>31165529> [x] Gamagoori
>>31165529[X] InumutaI feel we should get him over with before Gamagoori, mainly because we'll meet gamagoori anyways as he goes to the same school.
>>31165529[x] InumutaWe can use his stock skills and hacking to double our funds early on in our building - Gama is awesome, but doesn't bring as much as Inumuta this early on.
>>31165529>[ ] InumutaI actually want to have more Inumuta then in the actual seriesthat nigga got jack shit for screen time
>>31165501>GamagooriWas there ever really any other choice?We've switched places with Monkey, haven't we?Oooooh boy
>>31165585For the record, Sanageyama is recruited as last in the show, three years prior.
>>31165529[X] Inumuta; we need to think logically here: Inumuta's skills will be invaluable in the early days. Besides, until we form Honnouji, we won't have a pressing need for an enforcer.
>>31165529[x] GamagooriBecause I like him better.
>>31165529>[x] InumutaIts definitely best to get him early on.
>>31165562>>31165568>>31165572>>31165612>>31165666
>>31165529[X]Gamagoori>implying this is even a choice>implying gama isn't best girl
>>31165529>Gamagoori.We may not have the skills necessary to convince Inumuta.
>>31165691Oh no you posted too late. You've failed us all.
>>31165691GAMA A SHITINUMATA 5 EVER
>>31165790Can someone Ego Burst this scrube?
>>31165823Good Luck I'm behind 700 Life fibers
>>31165529"I think I'll have to go with the Inumuta guy. His skills seem like they will be more immediately useful. Besides, if we're going to be in the same school as Gamagoori, we'll have all the occasions we want to recruit him.", you say, after some consideration."A well-reasoned decision. Very well. In fact, I already have an idea how to arrange a meeting with Inumuta Houka. The spring break is a perfect time to do it."She then details to you her plan, which involves subtly luring the candidate to a loophole in the REVOCS security system. A couple days later, everything is set in place, and the "meeting" is ready.
>>31165790We're gonna have words.
>>31165887oh god i just realizedgamagoori was suicidal when he met satsukiWE FUCKED UP
>>31166071oh fuck
>>31166071WHAT DID I SAYWHAT DID I SAY
>>31166071Well shit.........................
>>31166071Wasn't he suicidal because he failed to beat those faggots that were bullying that kid?
>>31165887Inumuta Houka types away at his laptop's keyboard. He's finally found a great opportunity to challenge one of the most renowned network security systems in the world."The REVOCS Corporation. They hold 70% market share in the global apparel industry. That's amazing. Ah, they belong to the Kiryuuin Conglomerate. Now I get it. That's interesting. But one genius is about to single-handedly alter the destiny of that company."You snicker as you look at the security camera footage. How full of himself is that guy? The plan is working perfectly so far. Inumuta was immediately attracted to the "loophole", like a bee to honey. What he doesn't realize, is that he's hacking into a copy of the system, the real one completely untouched.Inumuta finishes typing, and presses a single button."Uh-oh, their stocks are in free fall! How terrible!"Suddenly, an alert displays on his laptop's screen."Crap! I've been found out?!" Inumuta suddenly notices the active camera.Looks like it's time for you to move. You head towards the room Inumuta is sitting in, just a couple steps away. You then slam the door open, only to hear shattering glass. The guy's determined, you'll give him that. He jumped out of the window! You run outside to circle around and catch him."I can't believe I didn't notice the camera! I could've sworn I've disabled it before entering!""That's far enough", you say, as you step forward to him. Looks like you picked the right alley, and found him.
>>31166071We shall be the sword to his shield!
>>31166279Inumuta stops in surprise, and raises his hands, still holding the laptop, into the air. He then notices you, and starts laughing."A little girl? That's all REVOCS has to offer after I've made their stocks plunge?"You reply by rapidly unsheathing Jiyuuzan, and plunging it through his laptop, right above his head. You give him a smile, and Inumuta gulps loudly. He then falls to his knees, and starts pleading for forgiveness."I'm sorry! What I did was wrong! It was just a middle-schooler's harmless prank, you see!"Well, he knows when to give up. However, as part of the plan, you bring your sword's edge close to his throat, and he starts sweating profusely."Come on, no mercy, seriously?"You notice Satsuki approaching behind you. "A middle-schooler you might be, but you have trespassed into territory you shouldn't have. Then again, can a man capable of breaching one of the tightest security systems in the world call himself "just a middle schooler"?", she says.Satsuki raises her hand, and you sheathe your sword and stand aside."So, REVOCS higher-ups are all little girls? Interesting.""Why did you do this?", she asks him.
>>31166584Inumuta smirks. "The fact that the security is so tight is why it's such an attractive challenge."Satsuki, however, does not share his views. "How petty-minded. If you want to challenge the system, shouldn't you aim to change the real world, and not just a virtual one?"She then tosses an envelope in his direction. He opens it and reads the contents.He raises his eyebrows. "Honnouji Academy High School?""That is the place where you will change the world, Inumuta Houka.", Satsuki says, and you both turn to leave, with Inumuta still sitting on the ground, dumbfounded.
>>31166757Inu Get!
>>31166757That went well.
>>31166757What a nerd.
>>31166827>>31166895>>31166907NOW QUICKLY, TO THE KIRYUIN MOBILE: WE NEED TO SAVE GAMA AND THERE'S NO TIME TO LOSE
>>31167068Not fast enough, we need to hit the seventh space velocity.
>>31166757Following this exchange, Satsuki and you start your move to your new school's area."You will need a new apartment yet again, and so will I.", she says."Seems like it. Sorry for putting you through this trouble.""It is hardly an issue. However, this time things will be a little different. I hope you won't mind, but we have only managed to find one adequate housing in the area. Therefore, it seems we will have to live together.""Huh?" Living in one house with another person again, and with Satsuki no less? "Sure, I don't mind.""I'm glad" You notice a tiny hint of blush on Satsuki's face. It seems she's not as good with people as she wants them to believe. Oh well. You could say the same about yourself.After a while of travel, you both arrive at your new temporary home. It is no less "adequate" than the previous one, perhaps a bit more, even. Both of you have a large room of your own. There is also a third room, currently empty. You ask Satsuki about it."Nonon does not know about the school we've chosen. We shall see how she reacts to this.", she explains. Knowing Nonon, and her attachment to Satsuki, you'll soon have a second roommate.(I do realize what I've brought upon myself by writing this.)
>>31167115
>>31167115what have you done
>>31167115You could have stopped this.
>>31167156>>31167162>>31167166>>31167184It's too late now.
>>31167225All you had to do was listen. Why didn't you listen?
>>31167115>(I do realize what I've brought upon myself by writing this.)Y-you mean...pajamas? Showers? Eating breakfast together? Even... even... arguing over doing dishes?That's way too lewd, OP.
>>31167115>"I'm glad" You notice a tiny hint of blush on Satsuki's facekeikaku dorihttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIz_5-XKISc
>>31167270oh god, this is getting so heartwarming; sisters being sisters is just the most adorable thing
>>31167290Not so fast.
>>31167115This will be fun.
>>31167311>Not so fast.
>R-Ryuko?>SATSUKI WHAT THE HELL I'M IN THE BATH>I know. I want to try something.>W-Wha->suddenly satsuki interrupts her, with each word becoming quieter until trailing off into near nothing>Let me real.......>Uhh Satsuki can you say that again?>L-Let me>A little louder so I can he->LET ME REALIGN YOUR CHAKRASyou know you want it deep down
>>31167115Surprised posted this yet....https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkBMAHUkibY
>>31167484Is it really so hard to keep it clean?
>>31167484>R-Ryuko?>SATSUKI WHAT THE HELL I'M IN THE BATH>I know. I want to try something.>W-Wha->suddenly satsuki interrupts her, with each word becoming quieter until trailing off into near nothing>Let me real.......>Uhh Satsuki can you say that again?>L-Let me>A little louder so I can he-LET ME TOUCH YOUR POMPADOUR
>>31167484no thank you
>>31167541NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>31167540But anon, purification is as clean as it ges
>>31167541NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>31167622Okay, fair enough. Still, I'd appreciate if we could try and keep the M-MUH YOOREES to a minimum.
>>31167541>>31167564>>31167636>you will never touch anaru's pomp
>>31167680>not letting out your inner Anaru and growing your own
>>31167666Hahahaha I don't really buy into the yuri shit, just fun to post just like the skellington that's inside of you right now
>>31167680>>31167636>>31167564>>31167541BURN WITH ME
>>31167692Nah man I can't pull off a pomp, best I can do is a big boss style well kept mullet with complementary beard
>>31167709
>>31167709I hate myself for posting that......fuck
>>31167709"Heh...want one, nee-chan?"
>>31167709...why...?
>>31167709>>31167759>>31167813>>31167796>>31167818guys, guys, don't worryanaru's coming back
>>31167744You gotta grow the top longer. The pomp is one with the drill.
>>31167813DAMMNIT.
>>31167860I know what a pomp is m8, I just can't pull it off
>>31167874Yes you can you just aren't trying hard enough.
>>31167874>tfw anaru sacrifice in flames>tfw senketsu sacrifice in flames>tfw only best friend I had died in a car crash thursday when I was downloading the new epsage for off topichttp://youtu.be/x-QRkgh7OWw
>>31167894>>31167874>>31167860>>31167744Remember guys, it's not the pomp on the outside that counts, it's the pomp on the inside.
>>31167929don't know why it responded to my own post
>>31167929What the hell man, that's tough.
>>31167929jesus, mansorry to hear that
>>31167929Shit, sorry to hear that.
>>31167929Fuck man, sorry for your loss
>>31167929>>31167938>Anaru fights through the Battle Trip as a possessed uniform>Satsuki betrayal happens>Anaru helps rest of E5 with Nui>he sees Ragyo wrecking Satsuki>loses his shit>uniform is consumed in a burst of green flames and a naked Anaru comes out with a drill obscuring his crotch and a coat made of green flames>"LIFE FIBER OVERDRIVE: PHOENIX REBIRTH">takes over fighting Nui from Ryuko for his own vendetta>Ryuko fights Ragyo>Anaru has to stop fighting Nui because this time the overdrive consumes the uniform instead of him>Nudist Beach shenanigans begin>mfw
>>31167929Shit man, sorry to hear that.If you need someone to email about it, feel free.
>>31167929Damn son, that's a rough fucking week
>>31168016>>31168056>>31168106>>31168136>>31168222>>31168260The worst fucking part is that he was driving over to my house to watch the goddamn finale with me, I had the snacks and dr. peps all ready. We'd been doing this since KlK started airing, we'd switch it up and go to each other's house every other episode, and this past week has been the first time I've drank hard liqour in a long ass time. This one goes out to you manhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yy_4JmGCt-Qsage for blog post
>>31167115You spend the last few days of spring break getting used to your new apartment, as well as the presence of another person in it. As it turns out, Satsuki is a bit different in private than she is in public.The day after meeting up with Inumuta, you are awoken by sounds coming from the kitchen. You head there, still half-asleep. What you see there is beyond all your expectations.Satsuki is standing by the kitchen counter, preparing breakfast. She doesn't immediately notice you, so you take the opportunity to watch for a bit. She seems a bit slow and clumsy at handling the kitchen knife. A young master swordsman, having trouble slicing a tomato. You let out a chuckle, and Satsuki suddenly jumps and looks at you with fright."Ah, Ryuuko! As you can see, I'm preparing breakfast." You can hear her voice slightly shaking."So I see. You look like you need a hand." You give her a wide smile, and she looks away."Y-you don't need to, I can handle this myself." As she says that, she cuts her finger a little. You notice her eyes getting a little watery, and you quickly bring her a band-aid."Don't worry, I won't let the mighty Kiryuuin Satsuki fall to this tomato." With your powers combined, you finish up the breakfast.
>>31168330Just remember it's not your fault man.Some people I know have blamed themselves for shit like that even if it's out of their control
>>31168383>"Don't worry, I won't let the mighty Kiryuuin Satsuki fall to this tomato."
>>31168411>Just remember it's not your fault man.Yeah I've been dwelling on that hard, but I try not to think that way. My depressions already fucking deep as shit, don't need to brew on those kind of thoughts.
>>31168383>"Don't worry, I won't let the mighty Kiryuuin Satsuki fall to this tomato." With your powers combined, you finish up the breakfast.
Sorry for the decreased speed guys, I'm not too good at moe.>>31168330I don't know what to say. Stay strong, man.
welp I'm out, can barly type and feel pretty sick to my stomach keep doing good voetcountfag, loving it so farhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1m4tYUfYCj4
>>31168714Have yourself a good evening, anon.
>>31168714Stay strong man.
>>31168383The spring break ends, and your first year as a middle schooler begins. Again, you are roused from your sleep by sounds from the kitchen. However, this time they seem a lot more systematic. Did Satsuki learn how to cook so fast?However, it's not Satsuki that you see in the kitchen. A tall, elderly man in a suit and an apron over it is masterfully chopping vegetables. He notices you, and pauses his work."Ah, Lady Ryuuko, good morning." He bows respectfully to you. Lady?"Uh, hello. Who are you?""Please forgive my rudeness. I am Mitsuzou Soroi, Lady Satsuki's personal butler. You can call me Soroi. Lady Satsuki requested that I visit this house occasionally to provide some assistance. I hope that my presence does not bother you."A personal butler. Wow. Still, it seems Satsuki has given up on cooking quickly."Not at all. Could you tell me where Satsuki is, Mr. Soroi?""Lady Satsuki has gone out to retrieve your new uniforms. She has told me to ask you to wait for her to return, if it's not too much trouble."Thus, you wait, and Satsuki arrives. Sure enough, she brings two sailor uniforms, one white and blue, for herself, and one black and red, for you, both long-skirted.You still have some time before you have to head for the opening ceremony, so you decide it's a good time to talk.[ ] Talk about Satsuki[ ] Talk about Gamagoori[ ] Talk about Inumuta
>>31168940Talk about Gamagoori
>>31168940>Gamagoooooori
>>31168940>[X] Talk about GamagooriWe should find out more about this other future member.
>>31168940Gamagoori.
>>31168940>[X] Talk about Gamagoori[X] Talk about Gamagoori[X] Talk about Gamagoori
>>31168974>>31168986>>31168994>>31169001>>31169013That was quick
>>31168940>x[ ] Talk about Gamagoorione votr before i leve>>31168761>>31168825>>31168472thanks gusy i know i gotta stay strong for her
>>31168940>[ ] Talk about Gamag......>>31169026Well shit I didnt even need to vote
>>31168940[x] Talk about Satsuki
>>31168940>both long-skirted.Yes.
>>31169046We're here for you Jazz, you're not alone.
>>31168940You should probably talk a bit about the next candidate with Satsuki."So, now that Inumuta's taken care of, we're gonna try and recruit Gamagoori, right?", you ask. Satsuki sets her cup of tea down."That's right. However, I believe it might be quite a lengthy process.""What do you mean?""If the information on him that I have is correct, Gamagoori Ira is not a man who changes his mind easily. We might need to give him some time. However, first, we need to inspire that gradual change in him.""And how would we go about that?""I had some background checks made on the students of this school. Several of them have formed a gang of sorts around themselves, due to their parents' influence. However, they misuse that power, by using it merely to torment others. I'm sure they will provide us with an appropriate scenario sooner or later."You think about her words for a moment. She uses her mother's influence to great extents, herself. However, knowing what you do about Satsuki's plans for the future, you realize well that this use is fully justified."Alright. So, other than that, do you have any plans regarding this school, or is it just studying and practice as usual?""Not quite. You see, I intend to use this school as testing grounds before Honnouji Academy. It's full of delinquents, so if we manage to subjugate it and keep it that way until graduation, it will be proof of our preparedness."
>>31167541oh fuckin' shit!
>>31167541NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>31169542The two of you finish your breakfast, change into your new uniforms, and set out for your new school.As expected from what Satsuki has been telling you about it, it's not really impressive. The building isn't particularly old, but it doesn't look new, either. The surroundings are way nicer, as the school is located on the edge of a forest.The opening ceremony is brief, and classes begin afterwards. All the first years look a bit scared, with the exception of you and Satsuki. You then realize how much you have changed since that day, when your father left you in a boarding school.Your first middle school classes soon end, and you meet up outside with Satsuki. While you are in the same class, you don't have much time to interact then.[ ] Suggest to scout out Gamagoori[ ] Ask about sword training
>>31170095>[X] Suggest to scout out Gamagoori
>>31170095>[ ] Suggest to scout out Gamagoori
>>31170095[x]Suggest to scout out Gamagoori
>>31170095>[x] Suggest to scout out GamagooriNot sure what or why we'd need to ask about training. Its not like she'll slack off and become Fatsuki if we don't remind her, right?
>>31170095>[x] Suggest to scout out GamagooriFind the toad.
>>31170143>>31170155>>31170158>>31170180>>31170249>>31170249B-but muh swords
>>31170277We already have swords, we need a shield.
>>31170277>B-but muh swordsWe don't need swords, we need someone who's resolve is stronger than any blade on earth!
>>31170331>whose
>>31170277We need our shieldAnd our glorious laugh
>>31170407Best part of the entire fucking series
>>31170472It made no fucking sense and that's why I loved it. I'm sure it was meant to be a reference to TTGL and therefore Gaiking with the face on the chest.
>>31170095"Hey, we should probably go and see what Gamagoori is up to. You seem to know about him a lot, but you've never seen him in person, have you?""That's true, I have never met him, I've only seen a photograph.""So, what does he look like?""Trust me, when you see him, you'll know it's him."And so, the two of you take a walk around the school, looking for signs of Gamagoori's presence. While at it, you knock out several older students, who thought it would be funny if they picked on you."I'd say this school is dangerous, but I'd be lying." You laugh.Suddenly, you hear some commotion on the school roof. You decide to investigate, and head there along with Satsuki.You get up there, and sure enough, you see a rather large group of people gathered on the far end of the roof. Satsuki motions to you to follow, and the two of you hide behind a wall of the roof access, and observe the ensuing scene."Hurry up and jump!"The large group of students is looking at a short boy, who's sitting on the edge of the roof's fence. At the front of the group, you see a girl and a guy, whom you identify as the leaders. They must be the ones Satsuki mentioned in the morning."You got milk on my uniform", the girl says."That was an accident!"The male leader of the gang looks at him with a mocking expression."That's why we're saying we'll let it slide if you take the leap."Suddenly, a voice closer to you and Satsuki calls out."You there! What are you doing?!"
>>31170696>Suddenly, a voice closer to you and Satsuki calls out.>"You there! What are you doing?!"
>>31170696HERE WE GO
>>31170696YYYYEEEEESSSSS!!
>>31170696OH BOY OH BOY OH BOY
>>31170696IT'S TIME
>>31170696[DISCIPLINE INTENSIFIES]
>>31170696hold on, wait a second: in the series gamagoori failed the save the student, right?that means we need to intervene
So apparently preview the 2nd OST are outhttp://www.dailymotion.com/video/x1kp2it
>>31170696You look at the source of the voice, and you don't need to think about it for even a moment. It's Gamagoori."Yeah, I think I know what you meant.", you mutter to Satsuki.She smiles. "Now, let's see how he'll handle this."The group notices Gamagoori, and turns their attention to him."Well, well, if it isn't the Student Council President. But we'd like you to stay out of this.""Gamagoori, it's okay! If I don't do as he says, my dad will be fired!"It seems that the boy's dad is working at the company ran by the father of the male gang leader's, Houjou's, father, In addition, Imagawa, Houjou's female friend's father is the town's chief of police, so the accident can be easily covered up.The situation greatly angers Gamagoori. "Houjou, Imagawa! You dare call yourselves human beings?!"Satsuki analyzes the situation carefully."Ryuuko, take care of this.", she says, as she pulls out her cell phone and selects a number."Gotcha."You step out of your hiding. "Don't you guys think this is a bit much?", you call out.Houjou looks at you, and laughs. "And who you might be, little girl? Did you get lost on the way to kindergarten? Let me help you get back. Get her, guys." He motions to his goons.
>>31171183Yes, our once and future king has arrived.
>>31171183Time to get this started I guess
>>31171183A group of about 20 students charges at you. Terrifying? Maybe. If you didn't train with Satsuki.You yawn theatrically, as you grab Jiyuuzan's hilt without even unsheathing it, and swat the oncoming foes away with a couple swings. Everyone involved is understandably shocked, except for you."W-who the hell are you?", Imagawa asks.You chuckle a bit. "Girl, I'm not even your biggest problem."Gamagoori uses the distraction you've created to grab the boy in his massive hands, ensuring he doesn't jump."Let me go! If I don't do as they say, my dad's job is history!""You needn't worry about that. I've already bought out that despicable company." Satsuki finally steps in. What surprises you is that Soroi is right next to her, seemingly showing up out of thin air.Houjou and Imagawa look in her direction. "And who the hell are you, another new student? What's this crap you're spouting?""Yeah! If you keep talking rubbish, I'll have my daddy arrest you!""Your father has just been relieved of his duties. If you don't believe me, take a look at this." Soroi is holding a tablet, with news headlines displayed. It seems what Satsuki is saying is true. How the hell did she manage that in several minutes?
>>31171583Best girl in action
>>31171583>"Guuuuuuurl, I'm not even your biggest problem."I hate myself for reading this way
>>31171583"Who do you think you are?! Guys! Make her suffer!", Imagawa yells at the remaining goons.Satsuki steps forward. "First year class A, Kiryuuin Satsuki!"She then repeats the same thing you did before, except making it look a lot more serious. Gamagoori stares at both of you in shock."As of this moment, I rule over every student in this school. The likes of you, who can't see past their own self-interest will not be tolerated."Well, that's a bit sudden, but you figure that she did just eliminate the leaders of the school."But you're relying on your parents' influence too, are you not?" Gamagoori chimes in. "How are you any different from these two?""These petty thugs are merely leeching off their parents' power. I am different! I will exploit any power I can, be it my parents', or my own! But I am the one who wields that power! I absorb it all and make it my own!"Satsuki turns to leave."It is a difference of resolve, Gamagoori.""Resolve?""Those who lack resolve are incapable of even wiping away their own tears."Satsuki heads downstairs, and you and Soroi follow. You feel that you don't entirely get what she said, but Gamagoori seemed quite shaken by it.
>>31171880Satsuki is love. Satsuki is life.
I've still got a plan to keep going, but it's 5 AM here, so I guess that'll be it.Opinions, criticism? Gonna wait a bit before I leave, also will put the thread in archive in a moment.I apologize for mostly paraphrasing Inumuta and Gamagoori's original flashbacks with a little spin on them, but I felt that I wouldn't have been able to convey the same thing otherwise.
>>31171985I feel like your doing great, even though there isn't that many choices but I get the idea that we first have to build the setting, even if it means mostly following the original story.So, I guess the biggest improvement you could do is make your writing more engaging. Maybe add a little more description?Overall though, good job!
>>31171985Needs More skeletonsJokes aside, I'm quite enjoying it so far, looking forward to when we get to Honnouji.As for paraphasing the flashbacks, I personally don't mind to be honest, as long as core is intact 'tis all good with me
>>31172065I understand the concern about the small amount of choices, but I promise that once we arrive at Honnouji, there will be a lot of them to make.That said though, I did increase the number of choices from previous thread's 1 to today's 3, so I guess I'm getting there, slowly.The archive's up http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html
>didn't kiss Imagawa into submission
