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Finally you have arrived!
After days of suffering through the horrible train ride filled with motion sickness, the smell and moaning of the trains passengers and the other stowaway hollows constantly trying to pick a fight with you, your horrible journey has finally come to an end.
You can already see the smokes on the horizon, which your gut tells you is your destination.
Which is a good thing because you can't take this train ride anymore, you have to get off NOW!
You start walking back from the first car, as you walk the other hollows stay out of the way and the large crowd parts like the Red Sea.
You make your way to Cerezo the only hollow you came to like in this rag-tag group, despite her presence being more irritating than a bathtub of acid.

"OH, hi! Nice little show you put up back there! I had no idea you had it in you. They even started calling you El Savaje behind your back."

"Hello to you too, Silvestre. I just came to say goodbye. This is where I'll get off, can't take the ride anymore. Take care and I'll see you once I get there."

"That's... disappointing. I know, I'll treat you to a plus when we meet again!"
She seemed almost sad hearing your leave and hearing her enjoy that mortifying performance of yours makes the phantom-hair on your neck just stand up. It will be a relief leaving this damn locomotive behind.
You wave your friend(?) and you jump off the moving train.

Having solid ground under your feet feels great and finally being able to watch the snow without having it blow into your face at high speed is also surprisingly relaxing. You take a moment to take in the beautiful scenery as that horrible mass transport vehicle passes by.
After taking a few deep breaths however you start walking towards your destination filled with a mixture of different emotions: eagerness, excitement, happiness and strangely enough dread as your shadow stretches in front of you from the sun descending, night is coming.
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*Damnit, the sun has almost set and I still got ways to go until you reach the camp.*
You think to yourself as you walk with each step leaving footprints in the snow and giving a very satisfying crunching noise as you walk.
There are still some leftover hollow bits in your teeth that you are trying and failing to pick out, it's hard when the morsels that you haven't swallowed keep regenerating. But funnily enough you don't seem to care, somehow devouring that poor guys limbs was not only a very good way of creating some space for yourself but it was a surprisingly filling meal.
*Would hollows be a good substitution for pluses?* You wonder as you flick another bit to the ground.

Luckily you probably won't get hungry for a couple of days thanks for the plentiful feeding on the train.
Still it would be nice to actually make a camp for the night and just get some well deserved rest, which you couldn't do on the train.
On the other hand you can't help but feel bad about wasting precious time with that.
You haven't done any practicing since you crossed the border and seeing the results of the last one got your hopes up.
Or you could just keep marching forward, at this rate you'll reach the village of Oświęcim soon but for some reason with every step the nerves that keep screaming at you to turn back get louder and louder, no longer are they suppressed by your instincts to go forward.

You have many options to choose from:
>Just head into the woods and find a suitable place to sleep in (perhaps you'll get some more flashbacks if you just let your mind rest)
>You put off training for a while now and feel like picking it up again (if so what would you practice?)
>March forward
>Other? (write-in)

Regardless of choice roll 3d10s best of first three is considered (also make sure to greentext your vote)
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Rolled 9, 8, 9 = 26 (3d10)

>>46032673
>>Just head into the woods and find a suitable place to sleep in (perhaps you'll get some more flashbacks if you just let your mind rest)
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Rolled 8, 10, 8 = 26 (3d10)

>>46032673
>Just head into the woods and find a suitable place to sleep in (perhaps you'll get some more flashbacks if you just let your mind rest)

>>46032763
Fucking nice
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Rolled 9, 6, 8 = 23 (3d10)

>>46032673
>Just head into the woods and find a suitable place to sleep in (perhaps you'll get some more flashbacks if you just let your mind rest)

Space out the writing more senpai. Also, announce the quest thread on twitter.
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A slow start but no matter, looks like todays quest is brought to you by the number 26.

Also fanart is coming up with next post

>Writing
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Those are some nice rolls everyone, keep it up
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A good sleep, that does sound tempting.
Without giving it much of a second thought you take a sharp turn into the woods, hoping you'd find a nice place to get some shut-eye.

The forest seems so pure and peaceful covered in the white coat of winter. It honestly makes you question wheter or not the camp is actually just a few kilometers away.

After doing quite a bit of searching for an acceptable place to rest at, passing by an open clearing and even the wreckage of a tank you find a perfect little hole under the roots of a dead tree.

It's not the best but it has enough space for you to curl up and get some well deserved sleep and you couldn't ask for more.

It takes little time for you to fall asleep as not even the wing makes any noise tonight.
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As you are drifting to your sleep you can feel what can be described only as fragments of memories from your past life.

A row of enemy soldiers digging their own graves in front of you.

The day when you broke your fighting instructors neck during training and got promoted for it.

The moment when you had to amputate the leg of one of the man serving under you in order to save his life.

The moment when you had to snap the neck of the dog which you have raised and trained to be completely obedient to you.

The smell of your mothers cooking as your father read your favourite tale to you. Faust from Johann Wolfgang von Goethe.

And your wife?

Your eyes snap open as the image of the woman in the wedding dress disappears from your eyes. Perhaps it is the proximity to the camp, perhaps it was just bound to happen but now you managed to recover some fragments of who you were.

The one thing that sticks with you is when you were trained to shut off your moral compass and abandon everything that makes you human, yet still be the one in control of your actions.
You feel that is the thing that resonates most with your new body.

You finally uncurl and stand up from under the tree and start marching once more, that was enough rest for a while.
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As you creep ever closer to your destination that nagging feeling you had in the back of your neck is getting ever stronger and you beginning to understand why.

At first you thought they might be birds or your eye playing tricks at you but from this close you clearly see something up in the sky.

A crack? No, not one but several. There is something wrong with the sky where you guess is the concentration camp. You have no idea what it is but you feel threatened by it.

Alternatively you are right next to the village, you could go in and explore a bit there before heading forward.

>Go to the camp
>Explore village
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>>46033344
>>Explore village
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>>46033344
Explore village
Sorry for my late entry
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>>46033344
>>Explore village
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>>46033344
>Explore village
probably best to not go in the pit-o-souls(tm) since german quincy most likely exist and may or may not be using souls as baits
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>>46033095
Did you draw that op? Its fucking sick
<3
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>>46033344
Kill ourselves
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>>46033569
nope a drawfag did

as I said we have our first official fanart, which is neat. He also siad he'd update me on the progress of the drawing, I was fairly satisfied with it.

It's a shame we are still slow.

Whatever I'll get to writing

In the meantime, I promised a character sheet and I deliver: http://pastebin.com/HreBR2Bu
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>>46033344
>Explore village
Jesus we where a cold motherfucker
Wasnt expecting to be a full blown nazi, but i can get behind it
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>>46033631
Also for the next bit I have some actual Bleach music to recommend the song name is Chocked.

You'll know when you'll need it
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>>46033631
>http://pastebin.com/HreBR2Bu
I like our description a lot
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>>46033664
OP from now on try to link previous thread and archive in the opening post, that way new people can catch up

>Quest part 1
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/45984950/
>Quest part 2
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/46009050/
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Judging by the looks of it you'd much rather postpone visiting the campsite, something else is going on there besides mass killing.
Istead you turn around and enter the small village.

You don't know what you expected, but completely ordinary wasn't it. The whole village looks and feels like any ordinary settlement, except you can't read what any of the signs say.
Just as you were about to leave something gets your attention however.
A familiar reiatsu can be felt from the edge of the small town, Silvestre.

You don't know what she is doing out here instead of the camp, but you don't care. After all she promised you a meal and honestly she is the only one you can tolerate, although barely from the hollows you know. So you make your way towards her partly because you could always eat more and partly because screw that camp.

Of all the places she could have chosen she went for a barn. Typical. As you enter this decrepit shack you can see her sitting in the farthest corner of the building.

*What is she doing here?*

As you approach however you can hear her muttering to herself.

"So.. so... cold. So... hungry. So...empty"

*Allright something is definately wrong and not just because of the muttering, she ate just before you lept off the train and she could supposedly go weeks without any food.*

As you are observing her almost out of nowhere Silvestre attacks you. Her tendril smacks into your stomach and sends you flying through the barn walls. As you stand up she leaps in front of you salivating, the typical yellow glow from her eyes...gone.

She shrieks loudly like a feral animal and charges you once more. Her have genuine ferocity behind them. Although you try and dodge, the previous attack slowed you down and take the second hit too, you are in a lot of pain.

What do you do:
>Try and snap her out of it.
>Fight to the bitter end. (How?)
>Run away
>Other? (write-in)

Roll 3d10 dc of 18, crit is 25. First three considered
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Rolled 5, 1, 6 = 12 (3d10)

>>46033949
>>Try and snap her out of it.
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Rolled 2, 3, 10 = 15 (3d10)

>>46033949
>>Try and snap her out of it.
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Rolled 6, 5, 10 = 21 (3d10)

>>46033949
Uh oh looks like a menos gillian orgy pits forming

>Try and snap her out of it.
Maybe use our impact slime to get her off of us first
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>>46034012
Saved by the Omnissiah!
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>>46034012
I can support the mercury shot
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Rolled 2, 8, 1 = 11 (3d10)

>>46033949
>use Lágrima de Mercurio

If we get a good shot in, the fight is basically over; she'll either be physically disabled or slowed down by the goo, and either outcome makes running, fighting or talking significantly easier.
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hollows piloting tanks and aeroplanes when? Hollow machinegunners when?
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>>46034106
They ARE the tanks, planes and machineguns
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Our arrancar form will be a blonde haired blue eyed aryan god
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>>46034149
A swastika marking on us, with our hollow hole at the center
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>>46034149
our release command will probably be Heil or something like that
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>>46034149
You know I almost wonder if we are a dead quincy hollow because of some of the stupid shit we do.
It might actually be a thing.
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A NAZI QUINCY.

Or rather, a Fullbringer maybe? Ichigo's fullbring shuriken whatever thing really looks like Svastika
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You really don't want to kill her if you can help it but you are not sure you can. With these two hits you are already in a pretty rough shape.
Another attack is incoming, this time you are ready. You grab the incoming tentacle just fast enough to slow it down considerably before it hit your right side again.

This time you feel something rupturing inside you and you cough a little blood up. It's a good thing you already prepared the orb of mucus in your left hand and fire at her. Her attacks don't let up even for a moment as she is attacking your left side with her remaining tentacle.
Luckily they actually hit the Lágrima de Mercurio and get basically welded together and slump to the ground.

You take this opportunity and start shouting while this pause lasts.

"SILVESTRE! SNAP OUT OF IT!"
Your mask opens up and follows your mouths motion.

It's no use. She starts twisting the tentacles that you hold and manages to tear out roughly half of them, leaving the other in your hands.
Her regeneration kicks in and the tentacle regrew in but a moment.

This is bad, she hasn't even seriously tried killing you yet! She told you her unique ability, she is basically a venus pitcher that grabs her pray with her tentecle and dissolves them with acid.
You can see her already preparing to unleash her digestive enzimes on you.

What do you do? (DC will depend on the result)
>Killing her would be easier than knocking her out (How?)
>You won't kill her, not until there is another way out (How to stop her?)
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>>46034325
>>Killing her would be easier than knocking her out (How?)

Retreat, hide presence, then blind side her. This really is unfortunate.
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Rolled 3, 2, 8 = 13 (3d10)

>>46034325
Kill her with a quick Sonido. We'll have a meal right there when she dies, in the form of her corpse, so it's fairly viable.
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Rolled 3, 5, 4 = 12 (3d10)

>>46034399
where are the other voters
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>>46034399
works for me
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>>46034325
>Killing her would be easier than knocking her out (How?)
CQC probably wouldn't be too smart. Just hit her with anything we can from far away.

It's too bad it had to be this way, but survival comes first
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just a heads up, rolling now is pointless. I'll give the DC and then call you to roll.

I'll then use the results and write the story
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>>46034499
A question for future reference: Do unlinked rolls count? I only ask because quests of all kinds do it differently. Some are adamant that only linked rolls count, others don't give a shit.
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>>46034514
Since you asked I'll take this opportunity and establish this: From now on only linked rolls count, this way people who actually vote for an action have any impact
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Allright Sonido got two votes.

>Writing

Now start rolling 3d10, first three counts. DC 15, Crit 23
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Rolled 2, 8, 4 = 14 (3d10)

>>46034654
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Rolled 5, 3, 9 = 17 (3d10)

>>46034654
Sorry was Salty as fuck over in wrestle quest.
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Rolled 5, 9, 6 = 20 (3d10)

>>46034654
See you next time, space cowboy.
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>>46034698
You're gonna carry that weight.
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>walk in
>see new thread
>we just killed our first friend
son of a fuck.
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>>46034833
It seemed unavoidable genosse
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You have no choice, it's either you or her. So this means using everything you have. Currently you only have enough energy left for using the Sonido once and nothing else afterwards.

You must concentrate, you only used this technique once and haven't practiced it since.
She is already launching her barrage of acidic fluids. As the raining death draws closer to you and even some drops start to dissolve your flesh you can feel your body finally reacting to your will.

*Boom*

You made it just in the nick of time you pulled off the Sonido once more. Silvestre is standing in front of you with her back turned to you. There is no time to hesitate, you raise up your hand and strike her with the most powerful downward chop you can muster.

Your attack connects, your right hand struck her right shoulder. You can feel it tearing into the various materials each with different density, all perish the same.
Even the ground shakes a bit as your armfinally gets stuck halfway through her torso.

She collapses and proceeds to bleed profusely.
Her mask crumbled into dust just from being grazed by your strike, you can see her human face revealed for the first time. Short ebon black hair and piercing green eyes filled with pain.

You didn't kill her outright, she is suffering but not for too long. That amount of bloodloss would kill anyone in seconds.

Decision time:
>Do you spare her the agony and finish what you started?
>And what do you do with the corpse, once she dies?
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>>46034923
Kill her and eat the corpse.
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>Also write-in the reaction of Kaizar
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>>46034923
>Finish her and eat the body
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>>46034923
Finish her off quickly, and then devour the corpse. We won't last long without something to eat, and in this world, it's eat or be eaten.

Considering his history, he'd probably see it as a regrettable situation, but not be too torn up about it - he's a nazi, after all.
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>>46034938
Well fuck. She looked cute as a human at least.
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>>46034923
>Kill her quickly and efficiently
>Eat the corpse
Calm and calculated
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>>46034923
Kill her, eat her. Then feel mild discontent, this was a regrettable situation.
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Commence cannibalization

>Writing.
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>>46035164
it's fine, it's vegan
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I wonder if we missed important plot hook here.
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>>46035240
I think the hollows at Auschwitz fed on so many humans that they still felt hungry after eating them, so they started turning to cannibalism, which sparked a gillian feeding frenzy that only gets worse and worse as more hollows travel to the 'promised land'. And that the feeding frenzy somehow affects the mentality of nearby hollows.
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>>46035292
Yeah thats my thought aswell

And once in the feeding orgy i doubt theres any way to get someone back into their right mind because only the ones that remain with their personality during the orgy get to become special gillian that can become adjuchas
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You didn't want to do this, you actually kind of liked her despite of her irritating presence.
Her blood is still pouring out and she is grasping desperately for air.
You lean in close to her and whisper to her ears.

"I'm sorry."

And with that you snap her neck, sparing her from any further pain. As you look down on her you remember your first actual kill. The old man to whom you apologized before devouring him.
You start feeling the effects of fatigue, her beating you senseless combined with the fact that you used Sonido took quite a toll on you and for the first time in a long while you are in a lot of pain.

Thinking back you can't remember her being this powerful before, this place clearly did something to her and you are going to get to the bottom of it. But first you have something else to do.

You kneel down beside her and start devouring her remains. You tasted hollow before but this will be the first time when you fully devour one.
The effect is stunning.
As you swallow one bite after the next you can feel your reserves getting full and even expanding from all the excess energy.
This reiryoku rich meal fills you completely and tastes better than anything you've eaten before.
As the last bite goes down you feel strangely full, something you haven't experience yet.

With this newfound vigor you make your way for the camp, you don't feel like waiting anymore.
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>>46035370
There's something that just super creepy about a creature like us leaning in and apologizing before murdering and devouring its prey. Creepier than if we were unapologetic about it.
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>>46035454
A monster who is aware and then continues to consciously be a monster is something much more sinister.
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>>46035500
Hollows are fucked up man.
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As you approach the place you can make out more and more cracks in the sky and can even feel them. They are like wounds, as if the fabric of space itself has been twisted so much it developed these great lacerations.
Looking at them makes even your skin crawl.

You can see the place in the distance, but that is not what got your attention. Your Pesquisa is going crazy. Not only do you feel more hollows then you thought existed, but you can feel their number increasing as others arrive from the surrounding areas and strangely enough from the tears themselves.

But worst of all, you feel something you have never felt before. Presences that are very strong, perhaps stronger than the hollows themselves yet their reiatsu composition is completely different and it differs even from that of the quincy.

*Reapers*

Once the word entered your mind you just couldn't get it out. Could it be these reapers actually exist? If so, this place is anything but the paradise many hollows hoped it would be.

Three things stick out for you.

A nearby hollow, which feels like the strongest hollow you could imagine times infinity. You can't describe it any other way and just being aware of it makes you... hungry.

Inside you can make out tens of thousands, perhaps even a hundred thousand humans.
All cramped up like some sort of cattle, ready for slaughter.

And nearby you can feel a small group of these "reapers". They feel very weak, yet together they are stronger than you.

Do you...
>Investigate the insane hollow.
>Investigate the humans.
>Investigate the reapers.
Alternatively:
>Explore the camp officers accomodations
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>>46035573
>Explore the camp officers accomodations
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>>46035573
>>Investigate the reapers.

Eating shinigami is a great powerup.
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>>46035573
>>Explore the camp officers accomodations
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>>46035573
>Investigate the reapers.
Go into full hiding mode.
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>>46035573
>Investigate the insane hollow.
I want frog
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>>46035573
>Investigate the reapers.
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>>46035573
>>Explore the camp officers accomodations
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Shinigami investigation wins

>Writing
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These creatures certainly piqued your intrest.
They don't feel like hollows at all but the magnitude of their power is stunning. Observing them for a good while and perhaps learning a thing or two about them does sound like a good idea.

You activate El Recubrimiento and fully hide your presence. Just in case they have some of their own keeping watch you get on all four and start crawling your way in their direction. As you crawl closer and closer to the signal you see a small hill covered in bushes.
They are actually intelligent, using such a place as a vantage point. You bet they have a perfect view of the surrounding area up there.

As you start ascending you slow down even more, paying attention not to make any noise.
When you reach what you only assume to be the top you finally have a view of the "reapers".

What a letdown, they look like ordinary people dressed in all black oriental clothing, each of them holding an eastern curved sword somewhere around their person.
There is a total of four of them, two men and two women. They are sitting around a fire, one of them has both of her arms extended and pouring her reiatsu into it.

*Can they feel the cold?*

You start examining them in greater detail. The men are sitting next to each other while women are sitting on the other. The first male has brown hair and a headband while the other has black hair and wears a pair of glasses.
The women are identical to each other and not just because they are asian. They are twins.
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>>46036093
>not just because they are asian
kek
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>>46036168
Nazis, not even once.
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>>46036093
>>46036168

I'd love more casual racism like this in Kaizar's observations and dialogue.

Shows exactly what kind of person he is. That, and the unexpectedness of it made it pretty funny.
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>>46036307
>The first thing you notice about the hollow's mask is that it has a large, protruding nose. The sight of it fills you with disdain.
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The one thing that they all share, not counting their attire, is the expression on their faces. You have seen hollows who have no facial expression show more emotions than these are.
They all look, jaded.

Yes that is the correct word for this look. You have seen it before. During the standing war, when you were dug deep into the trenches.
No hope for escape nor was there any sign that it will be over soon. Just you and the enemy staring each other down until one of you slowly dies. It's not inavitability that kills the spirit of the soliers, it's monotony. The slow process of dying an agonizing death while accomplishing nothing.
That is the exact look that they have.

Those eyes are all blank, no fire behind them. Something or someone has been slowly destroying these beings from the inside.

The black haired one finally breaks the silence that has been going on for twenty minutes.
But even he doesn't avert his eyes from the fire while talking, almost like a bug that has been hypnotized by the flame.

"Do we have any reports on the next extermination?"

"No, but the third seat said it could happen any time now. There are way too many prisoners again." One of the girls answered.

Even their conversation seems dead, their tone doesn't change through the whole thing. Just looking at this makes you feel pity for these creatures.

But they said one thing, extermination.
What do they mean by that?
Who will be exterminated, the jews or the hollows? Both are pretty likely. But what did they say before, "next"?

>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
>Go and check on the other locations now (which?)
>Other? (write-in)
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>>46036333

Yes, exactly!
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>>46036333
THE TRIPS HAVE SPOKEN!!

Though to be honest, I legit kek'd about this one.

Now I will inculde it
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>>46036360
>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
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>>46036360
>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
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>YFW the plant hollow was a jew in life
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>>46036401

YES
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>>46036360
>>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
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>>46036360
>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
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>>46036360
>>This, you have to see. Wait until these "reapers" make their move and follow them.
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>>46036093
>>46036360
question the first, is this in canon bleachverse?
also that seriously sounds like kyoraku and co, i mean shit, thats a god damn captain.
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>>46036708
Yes cannon bleach verse.
And no I'm pretty sure kyoraku was one of the starter captains. or at least a captain from very long time ago.

These are mooks, a third seat is their superior
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Also watching the extermination wins.
Buckle up kids

>Writing
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>>46036751

Kyouraku was one of the first captains, yes.

Also, it's hilarious that our most likely Nazi hollow has dark skin.
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You decide to wait and see what's all the fuss is about. These guys are definately the "reapers" with their black clothes, so if they are waiting for something then it must be big.

You lie there for about two hours watching these four mumble around about pointless things like food. They are trying their damndest to strike up a normal conversation to get whatever they are thinking about out of their head for a minute and failing miserably.
You get so bored at one point you slip up and accidentally step on a branch and make enough noise with it to scare yourself.
Yet these people didn't even turn their heads in the direction of the sound.
They must think it was some animal, after all they can't feel anything from you.
This revealed something potentially useful for the future, they rely way too much on their sixth sense. How sloppy can they get?

After another hour of waiting you honestly are thinking about leaving, but since you made it this far you might as well stick around.

*I should have just killed these idiots...*

But as you finish that thought a butterfly seems to descend towards the reapers. the brown haired man touches it and orders the others to move.

"It has begun."

And they are off, moving so fast you couldn't even see them. That technique was almost like your Sonido.

And then you can feel it.

Dozens of lives snuffed out in an instant. Their agonizing butchery made them all pluses, unable to go to the afterlife.

As you leave your hiding spot you can hear hollows screaming in unison and the air starts to shake. The cracks get larger and larger until they burst open, revealing countless hollows pouring out of them.

"So this is what's going on..."
Your jaw hangs open at the cavalcade of death that soon unravels infront of you.

The hollows enter a feeding frenzy at the large mass of pluses and they start devouring everything that lives or moves. Your head hurts as a part of you is urging you to go in there and join the feast.
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>>46036751
>And no I'm pretty sure kyoraku was one of the starter captains. or at least a captain from very long time ago.
He's second gen I think. He was in training 1000 years ago.
First gen is Yammamoto, Unohana, and almost certainly 3 members of the royal guard Ichibē Hyōsube (1st to Bankai), Tenjirō Kirinji (taught Unohana healing), Ōetsu Nimaiya (made the swords), and probably Senjumaru Shutara. The remaining 7 captains presumably died in the first Quincy-Shinigami war.
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But you shake that thought, this is only beginning.

And on point dozens upon dozens of reapers appear, all seemingly standing on air. Some start charging weird spells like the fire you saw before, some enter into melee range and start killing the hollows.

So this is what it's all about. This whole place is a multiple layered killzone.

The nazis kill the jews.
Hollows eat the pluses that come from the jews.
Reapers mass murder everything in the area where the hollows are, pluses and each other included.
Then the hollows retaliate while continuosly keep devouring each other.

Watching this unravel before you is maddening, made even worse by the fact that you can comprehend what is going on. An orgy of death.

So this is the reason for the condition of the reapers.

"THIS HAS BEEN GOING ON FOR YEARS?"
You shout angrily, you can feel a tear forming under your eyes from just watching this and all the heavy breathing.

"Pretty much."
A deep, booming voice speaks up from behind you.

After that you feel the air around you sizzle with reiatsu. You feel like this insane pressure will crush you any moment now.
As you look up you see a hollow. No, a monster. It's quite larger than you and unlike you who seems to be made of a singular material his body is clearly defined, with various parts of his body covered in the same white substance as his mask.
His appearance is like a fat frog and as he towers over you you feel the hole in your chest hurt more than it ever did before.

It speaks up:
"Since this place exists, this was happening on a regular basis, El Savaje."

That name, only those who travelled on the train called you that.

"Most hollows who come here do so by instinct, they are drawn here. But when they arrive they recieve too much stimuli and lose all consciousness, if they had any."
The large beast speaks, it's deep voice resonating with your very being.

>You know my name?!
>What the hell are you?!
>What the hell is this?!
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>>46037389
>>You know my name?!
>>What the hell are you?!
>>What the hell is this?!
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>>46037389
>What the hell is this?!
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>>46037389
>>You know my name?!
>>What the hell are you?!
>So this is why Silvestre went mad. Why am I not affected?
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>>46037389
>You know my name?!
>What the hell are you?!
>What the hell is this?!

"With all due respect, that is."
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>Writing
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So, Should we go in and Kill all the Nazi's?
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>>46037887
Yeah, fuck the nazi's

We team HollowPride now, kill everything not hollow
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"Allright how do you know my name? What in the seven hells are you? And just what is going on here? Is this why my friend went mad?!"

You burst out to the giant and by the time you do you're out of breath. What is with this guys pressure, you feel like a U-boat in the Mariana trench.

The large amphibian strokes it's chin and humms slowly. If it weren't for the current situation his voice would be incredibly soothing.

"The first one I can answer, when your friends arrived they started talking. Rumors spread like wildfire even amongst hollows. The description they gave fits you perfectly and they weren't lying you actually feel weaker than you are."

*Is that so? Just from that much he could find me? This is bad!*

"As for the other questions. I don't have to explain anything, it's better to show than to tell.
Look."

As he points towards the sky, you can see a large bulge forming near the cracks.

*Just what is going on here? The end of the world?*

As the air finally explodes a shadow can be seen descending from the skies, the sun disappearing behind its all consumin darkness.
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>>46037964
>Reminds me of my days as a choir boy
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Enlarge picture for best effect.

And that's it for today, thank you all for playing.

I'll post one cutaway stuff, then you can start doing whatever you want.

Archive is up.

Twitter:@SpookyngQM
ask.fm:@Spooykng
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Meanwhile, elsewhere:

Herr Ziege puts the last of the ladies bags into the car. He is honestly surprised that she is only bringing two medium sized bags for such a long journey. It will take about three days for them to reach their desired destination in Poland. He was given an offer he honestly couldn't refuse, 5000 Reichsmarks plus any travelling expenses would be covered by the lady for a ride to Poland and back, following her orders for the duration and no questions asked. Herr Ziege was too old to join the great conquest of the Reich and he was in dire need of that money, so he gladly accepted and is now ready to start this no doubt important journey.

"Is this all Frau Adlersflügel?" he asks the young woman as he cleans his forehead with his handkerchief, his white moustache glistening from sweat.

"Yes that will suffice mein Herr. Are we ready then?"
Eryka is glad she found Herr Ziege, a man who is not only capable of getting her to that cursed worm but he is also a great patriot whom despite his old age would still go to the battlefields should they actually accept him.

"Indeed young lady, we can depart anytime you wish. But before we do I must ask. Can you spare me any details as to why do you want to go to such backwards country as Poland? Please don't take this the wrong way, I understand our agreement, I just feel uncomfortable not knowing why would such a graceful young lass such as yourself would want to go there."

She chuckles a bit and gives the old moustachioed man a warm smile.
"It's no secret Herr Ziege, I'm going hunting."

The old man laughs heartily as they get into the car and depart towards their destination, Oświęcim.
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>>46038003
Thanks for running, shame i was away for most of it

Really loving this quest
Looking forward to how it goes

Also set your ask.fm so you can ask shit anonymously please
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>>46038003
Thanks for running boss man, thread this weekend?
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>>46038003
Was Silvestre always unsaveably feral or could we have knocked some sense into her with Mercury?
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>>46038246

Maybe if we rolled a crit hit, sure.
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So as its the beginning our personality isnt really set yet

What kinda hollow do you guys think we are/should be?
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>>46038101
I checked and it is set for anonymous posting, not sure what's the problem

>>46038238
I'm planning on running one. I'll post on twitter whether Saturday or Sunday. When I'll have time for one.

>>46038246
You could have, but it would have been dangerous. Hell it was dangerous enough as is.
If you failed the Sonido roll however I would have you knock her out. Then she would have gotten to her senses.
Afterwards hoever you would have to take care of her, since she can't go back there again or she loses it.
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>>46038586
well from the pastebin it seems we're value fighting with brains more then brawn and don't like taking unnecessary risk.
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>>46038586
Not entirely, no.

But there are a few quirks that are pretty much set in stone.
Arrogance is one of them.
Pride and limitless cruelty are the other two pretty dominant traits.
Also don't forget cold and calculating.
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I'll also update the char sheet a bit.

Fighting and nomming plant girl changed some stuff
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>>46038819
With the fanart anything you would you change? or is that pretty much what we look like?
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>>46038586
In control, analytic, self aware, regretful of what we need to do to live, but not crippled with guilt over it. We seem to be a more or less who we were in life.


>>46038718
So was it because of a weak psyche or physical weakness that she was so susceptible to that effect?


I'm actually worried that since she was plant based she could offshoot herself in clones and now we have an angry person coming after us perpetually.
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>>46038863
I already told the drawfag my opinion.
I gave the Saurians from Dragons Dogma as a base for the body type.

But other than that I allowed him to have as much creative freedom as he desires.

I don't want this really to be set in stone and leave it up to imagination and personal taste.
As there wouldn't be much of a point since hollows are prone for metamorphosis
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>>46038944
At least until we become an Arrancar
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>>46038883
A little bit of both.

Next thread I'll give an explanation for the hollows going berserk.

Also she is dead, let it go
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>>46038976
Let's not get carried away, Menos first.

Also I'd rather avoid having a shitstorm about whether or not go Arrancar.

Many people will want to, many won't. Majority wins. I don't want the same shit that happened in SSQ.
So I'm telling you in advance, I'll leave both routes open and you can keep progressing on both, just in different directions.
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Working on it. Slowly.

Probably won't be done for a while since I'm working on other shit.
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>>46039053
Oh, I just realized I mispelled the name. I'll fix it later.
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>>46039053
HOLY FUCKING SHIT THAT'S GOOD!!

I'm flattered anon!

I don't want you to feel guilty over not doing it. Having the sketch made me giddy as a schoolgirl that someone cared for my little brainfart quest enough to make some drawings of it.
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>>46039053
Artfag you are the man, I really do like how we look with the mouth closed then suddenly fucking satan teeth pop out, reminds me of the scene in jurassic park when the Dilophosaurus open their cone around their heads and spit venom

If i ever run a hollow quest you better tune in

>>46039100
Please say we can keep the side-head-tendril-things going red when we get pissed off as a thing
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>>46039205
I get the feeling they're going to be red for a few sessions. We are kinda pissed.
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>>46039100
The idea of murderous masked axotls in Nazi Germany appealed to me.

Glad you like it.

>>46039205
Wasn't really sure how I wanted the teeth to work. So I settled with a small pack of inward-curving front teeth that are usually visible and a fuckload of inner-teeth that are hidden behind which only show when he really opens his mouth.

I'm not sure how much mobility a hollow has with their mask, but I imagine being an amphibian in nature allows some level of mask autonomy.
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So, when hollows with strong personalities like us go menos, do they still look like a generic menos?
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>>46039378
At this stage a hollows mask is pretty much just a head engulfing mask with a pivot in the middle , with oddly sized human teeth behind it like in the pic

further on down the line (arrancar) the mask pretty much becomes your actual head so then the teeth can work pretty much however you imagine you want them to work
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>>46039526
They do not
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>>46039548
I really don't know shit about Bleach. I'll try to edit the mask to make it capable of opening its mouth without bending.
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>>46039597
Oh then your in for a hell of a ride because bleach is confusing as fuck, took me a few reads on the wikia to fully understand how hollows progress

If you have anything you wanna know feel free to ask in any of these threads
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>We continue to commit monstrous acts, even by hollow standards
>Eventually reach the arrancar stage
>Our form still looks monstrous, not like a human
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>>46039685
We've not done anything that bad for a hollow.
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>>46039685
GIANT
LIZARDS

Personally, the idea of a axoltl man in an SS uniform is fucking glorious though.
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>>46039049
Keep progressing, eh? So there's actual merit to not going arrancar, we won't just be stuck in place until we do the transformation. That's pretty interesting.
The route less traveled seems good to me
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>>46039710
We tortured the shit out of another hollow. Simply killing or eating him would be fine since normal hollows do that all the time, but torturing him with full awareness of our actions is pretty fucking brutal.
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>>46039772
Doing the former would have gotten us jumped later on. And he recovered
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>>46039800
Unlikely. Pack mentality means that simply beating him proved that we were more fit to be the alpha - knocking him out or killing him would have done just fine, and they wouldn't have attacked us.
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>>46039800
We ate him dude, after systematically eating his limbs. Over and over again.
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>>46039742
I'd rather go arrancar, all of the evil in a human shaped package.

Also swords
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>>46039836
>>46039857
Eating him whole would have Kickstarted the whole Menos eating orgy thing. Yes we tortured him, but we didn't kill him and allowed him to recover. We're a mean sun of a bitch, but by intelligent hollow standards we're about average. You remember the sadistic crap other hollows did in Bleach? The bird, the people controlling seeds, the torture mental AND physical for shits and giggles? We at least had s point.
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>>46039927
i haven't watched bleach, please elaborate on the "bird, the people controlling seeds, the torture mental AND physical" points, i'm interested in what you mean
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>>46039927
Read it again we totally at him dude.

>You devour the poor guys limbs one by one, each on regrows as you are about to finish the last, so you can keep going indefinately. The alpha keeps screaming and pleading for you to stop, but you just won't. Knowing that the others could stop you if they all tried but don't makes this a lot better for you. The only time you stop is when you realise the limbs are growing back much slower than before. You finish devouring the guy and go back to the first car.
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>>46039986
Does sound like we totally ate the guy. I wonder if that in itself gave a boost?

Even if it was just misworded and he's alive, eating a part of a hollow is pretty fucked up, because it denies them any chance to evolve.
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>>46039986
*ate him
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>>46039962
Well one Hollow, Soul Jarred a plus kid into a parakeet, told it to play along or else it would never see it's mother a again(it had already eaten her) then it proceeded to watch the parakeet and a human bond, then kill the human violently and bloodily in front of the parakeet.

Another Hollow could shoot seeds into living people and make them act like puppets, to kill, rape and do whatever it wanted.

Many of the hollows like to play with their food breaking the bodies, slowly, ripping them apart piece by piece while still alive, and giving them hope spots, only to crush it utterly.

Whereas we've always been faast and precise, killing quickly and mostly painlessly, with the one exception of the asshole who challenged us TWICE.
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>>46039548
>further on down the line (arrancar) the mask pretty much becomes your actual head

Arrancar are for all intents and purposes human in appearance. They have "standard" human anatomy. Menos after gillians however do have masks which are essentially the entire head.

Arrancar have masks in some way featured on their heads but they appear as if actual masks (resting on the face, rather than being the face or head) until they start doing their various release states.
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>>46040078
Twice? I know we broke one hollow's mask just for trying to take our lunch from us like a bully, but I'm not sure that it's the same hollow.
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>>46040115
Same guy if memory serves. He became the alpha and thought he was hot stuff.
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>>46040078
i see, thanks
it still seems pretty different though, that's playing with your food, something that's pretty much a different species as far as they're concerned
i think that hollow-on-hollow crime is different. like, a human torturing a chicken is pretty fucked up, but a human torturing a human is way fucking worse, you dig?
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We should name our most powerful attack Final Solution
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>>46040170

Yes.
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>>46040098
damn i meant adjuchas
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>>46040170
kek
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>>46040170
endgültige Lösung

solución final

So would you rather it stay true to origins or are we not going to force the issue and let it be in spanish as is the hollow norm?
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>>46040161
problem is, to Hollows everything is food, ESPECIALLY other hollows. Growing to menos relies on eating other hollows.
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>>46040246
True to origins would be preferable, but since we're forced into spanish, spanish it is.
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>>46040290
The spanish is just so boring in this instance, though.
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>>46040360
Well maybe when we're big and strong we can overpower the Spanish urge
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>>46040170
>High-speed series of attacks
Blitzkreig
>Arrancar first transformation
Übermensch
>Arrancar second transformation
Endsieg
>An ability that either lets you copy someone else's abilities, or lets you copy their physical appearance
Doppelgänger
>Hardening the mucous into a tough defensive layer
Panzer
>A move like panzer, but with offensive spikes on it - alternatively, a move that makes use of the layer of armor to hit way, way harder than normal
Panzerkeil
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>>46040378
It would throw everyone for a fucking loop if we started spouting off like we were using Quincy techniques because some of our techniques were named in German.
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>>46040423
That just makes it better
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>>46040394
>Arrancar first transformation
>Übermensch
Ha ha, it's fitting AND thematic
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>>46040423

I'd imagine our not so friendly local Sternritter would have an aneurysm if we did something like that.
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I think we should try to find a way to practice our Sonido, it's our most powerful attack, and we ought to perfect it so it isn't a one-time-use that leaves us weak afterwards.
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>>46040582
Practicing it might be hard sine right now, since repetitive use is impossible.

Maybe if we find a good storage of pluses we can.
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>>46038819
>Reiatsu-blocking mucous ability combines with plant-girl's acidic ability
>Mercury shot altered so that it not only sticks to someone, but it burns up their reiatsu to lower their defenses and energy
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I don't understand how the canon arrancar were such good swordsmen.

No formal or even informal training was ever shown by any of them, was it? They are inexplicably good for no reason, even though they are fighting people who in some cases have been swordfighting for literal centuries.

But I like that MC remember his CQC training, it's neat, and makes me wonder how brutal his melee would be once he gets one of the more humanoid forms.
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>>46040979
They have instinctual knowledge of how to use their swords and powers.

They cheat
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>>46040979
Maybe we can get a pair of caestus/trench knives instead of a sword later on?
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>>46041047
Depends on if we go arrancar or not.
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>>46040979
Hollows are very good at instinctual fighting. The core of their being is about strife, and it translates to being surprisingly effective at just about everything to do with fighting, with little to no training. I'd imagine that, with training, a hollow could progress much farther and faster than most other types of beings. Which is balanced by how rare intelligence in hollows is, and how dangerous their lives are.
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>>46041047
You don't really want a pair, with caestus or knuckles of any regard it's fine because you can still grasp but you always want to be able to grab with at least one hand for various reasons. Grappling especially, because snapping a dudes neck is surprisingly effective, even when you can disembowel people in bleachverse and they still have time to murder you, paralyzing everything below the neck will ensure harmlessness even if it doesn't outright kill them.
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>>46041163
How about lobotomies, justice-lords style?
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What happens if a hollow eats a quincy?

Is the reitsu still poisonous to them? Will they die?
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>>46041434
Quincy goes poof.

Hollows can eat quincy, but quincy cannot into hollow anything.

I'm quite certain.
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>>46041540
This man speaks the truth.
In fact, just being injured by a hollow can poison the shit out of a quincy because of the hollow's reiatsu leaking into their body.
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I like to imagine our mask much like this,
it seems fitting to me
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>>46042467
I could make an alternate design with a different mask.

If anyone else has design ideas, I'm open to them. This is still pretty much a sketch, so I can change anything.
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>>46042467
Yes, I can see it. The six eyeholes at the top being where our eyes (duh) are, and the four bottom holes not actually being holes, have them more in a spiky tooth formation.
It also needs one more sensor frill, but it still looks fine and conveys the feel just fine with two and there's a perfect spot for a third one anyways if included
Anyways, I can see that design easily being an arrancar or vasto form
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>>46042548
I much prefer your design

Although i like the resting mouth looking closed like the black sketch you have next to the actual picture, but that may not look as good outside of the sketch so eh
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>>46042619
I'll make a less toothy version.should be easy

Sketches sometimes translate oddly when refined.

I can't into anime style at all, so cartoony features always end up looking abominable in my final versions
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>>46042863
You do you man, its looking awesome regardless
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>>46042548
I would suggest maybe trying to make him look bigger. Like, buffer. Maybe with a less skinny gut, too.
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>>46042915
I'll see what I can do.

Broad shoulders, stocky legs, etc
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>>46042977
swole lizard is here to ruin your day
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>>46042863
If you want it to look "bleachy" just be kind of minimalist. Your sketch is actually pretty much exactly what Kubo would draw, but you have more depth and actual shading than he puts into his stuff. If your sketch was completely flat and you did your shadows with thatching or cross-thatching or whatever, you've pretty much got Kubo-brand hollows.
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>>46043007
Im ok at cross hatching traditionally, I'll give it a shot
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>>46043206
i like your on-paper work, anon
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>>46043206
This is moderately disturbing.

I like it.
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>Fights the Jew in life
>Uses his afterlife to take out the Jews on a spiritual level
I have a deep respect for Herr Soize, he is a true professional.
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>>46043519
/pol/ would love this guy.

Not nearly as much as Herr Ichorst, however.
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>>46043519
He is proof that the nazi ideology infuses the soul with far greater power than other ideologies. In death, instead of becoming a mindless monster, he is intelligent and strong. The essence of ubermensch saturates his very soul.



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