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Rukongai, the city of wandering souls. Where those common and often unfortunate souls live out their afterlives before eventually passing on to be reborn. Large portions of it are practically lawless and loveless. However, it is said that every once in awhile, maybe every decade maybe every century, some soul from the slums ends up becoming one of those soul reapers, those slayers of hollows and shepards of souls.

And sometimes, destiny has even greater things in mind for that fortunate or simply just determined soul. Sometimes they go on to change the whole of the soul society, and maybe even the worlds beyond that.

However, few could guess that the strange girl with snow white hair, and dark purple eyes would have such a fate. She was considered little more than an oddity, no one knew her name and many thought she simply didn't have one as no one bothered to name her when she arrived.

And why would they, anytime someone tried to start up a conversation or interact with her, she'd just stare blankly at them, her wild pony tail blowing behind her as they struggled to get her to do anything but walk in silence or stare.

Eventually they would give up, and the lost white flower would continue on her way through the streets, only stopping to occasionally scrounge around for scraps or sleep in the alleyways alone

It was as if her body was empty of any sense or thought, like a doll that had stood up and started walking around with no real purpose.

Even the thugs and criminals left her alone, as she had nothing of value and didn't look fun to play with besides pushing her around for a few cheap laughs.

However, none of them could've guessed the destiny that awaited her, the lost white flower of Rukongai.

For little did they know, she did have a name. She was more than a nameless wandering spirit in a sea of souls.
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>>49190183

She was Kimi Kemuri. And on one blisteringly hot summer day, as the sun beat down on her brow and sweat rolled down her face.

She remembered her name, and woke up with a start. Confused and alone in an unfamiliar place, with little more but fragments of her living life floating around in her head.
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Kimi Kemuri, the former lost white flower
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Kimi Kemuri...my name echos through my head as I stare up at the sky dumbly.

I blink, the sun is in my eyes and my face is burning. My feet feel like I've been walking on glass and my eyes sting horribly. It feels like I've just woken up from a long dream. Groaning, I rub my eyes to wake up and...and realize I'm standing up.

Slowly I look down and see I'm wearing a tattered brown Kimono that's been practically torn to rags. I..don't remember wearing this. I grab it and pull on it, trying to remember when I put this on. And nearly cry out in panic and confusion as I realize, I can barely remember anything else but my name.

I look around, and see a balding man with a face ruining scar running from his lips looking at me weirdly. I back away from him, wincing in pain as it feels like someone just hammered a nail into my skull

And suddenly
I..remember who I am, I was..I was a (Each one also gives access to entirely different Abilities, Traits and Talents, so choose wisely)

[] Highschool student, a normal girl, so why am I in some kind of weird feudal village?! *+1 Intellegence, +1 willpower +1 mobility* (Quest will start a few years before bleach started)

[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit* (Quest will start awhile before bleach started, over a 100 years, but under 200. But be aware I may take a few...minor liberties with the timeline, but nothing major or world/lore changing)
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>>49190198
Strength: How strong and mighty you are, Effects your raw power and how much you're able to carry
Spirit: Your Spiritual power, Effects how well you can use kido/other magical abilities and general control of your Reiatsu
Endurance: How tough and resilient you are, Effects your general health, ability to take attacks and get back up after a crippling blow
Mobility: How fast and agile you are, Effects how quick you can move, how flexible your body is, and how acrobatic you are
Willpower:The force of your will, Effects your ability to throw off effects put on you by the Reiatsu of other and ability to resist the same.
Intelligence: How smart and clever you are, Effects your ability to come up with solutions and figure things out.
LUCK: How lucky you are, the only attribute that can be lowered. Points of it can be spent or burnt to reroll, undo effects, or even avoid death and reveal new abilities to the surprise of everyone

An explanation of the various attributes/ Stats
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Hey HM, interesting look we have for the mc this time it seems.
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>>49190198
>[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit*
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>>49190198
>[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit* (Quest will start awhile before bleach started, over a 100 years, but under 200. But be aware I may take a few...minor liberties with the timeline, but nothing major or world/lore changing)
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>>49190198
>[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit* (Quest will start awhile before bleach started, over a 100 years, but under 200. But be aware I may take a few...minor liberties with the timeline, but nothing major or world/lore changing)
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>>49190198
>[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit* (Quest will start awhile before bleach started, over a 100 years, but under 200. But be aware I may take a few...minor liberties with the timeline, but nothing major or world/lore changing)


Great start HM, love Kimi's design. Sorry in advance for not knowing anything about Bleach.
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>>49190198
>[] Wandering Ronin, Even though I was a lady, and I don't remember how I got here *+1 strength +1 endurance +1 spirit* (Quest will start awhile before bleach started, over a 100 years, but under 200. But be aware I may take a few...minor liberties with the timeline, but nothing major or world/lore changing)
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I vote we look like emilia-tan from RE:Zero
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>>49190375
white hair and purple eyes, so yeah she's a great example, though I suspect kimi is going to be a bit more... psychotic if we go for the ronin route, should be fun.
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>>49190425
Ronins come in all shapes and sizes anon
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>>49190375
I like it, just give her a pony tail and the look of complete murder-lust that I think we'll go for and she'll be perfect.
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A wandering ronin, even though I'm a lady..and I don't remember how I got here but I don't like the look on that guys face over there, it makes me feel like a cornered rat.

I grit my teeth as my hand reaches for my side. I gasp and look down to make sure I'm seeing this right. My..my sword isn't there..and what the hell am I wearing? Where am I?

I glare at the man and he takes a step back holding up his hands like I'm some wild animal. Hmm used to being treated like this...I think? It's all a blur, like a foggy morning.

I know I was traveling somewhere, but...I don't know how I ended up here..did I get drunk or something?

I shake my head and scratch my chin, trying to remember as the man laughs nervously, like a criminal about to lose his head.

"Are...are you feeling alright there girly? I thought you just walked around ya know" He says meekly, like a woman "You aren't going to go wild right? rip my throat out or anything"

I turn to tell him off, when suddenly I feel another pain stabbing through my skull.
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>>49190523
All I can remember is *Choose 1*
[]Blood pooling at my feet as another body falls to the ground to join the others on the moonlit road. I smirk, and clean my blade with my Kimono +5 strength +(Killer's instinct: Heightend crit chance and blood lust)
[]A demon laughing over me, as I bleed out from the bite it took out of my side. It's mask splits open and... +5 spirit +(Nearly hollow: Natural resistance to the attacks of hollows, among other things)
[]A night of revelry, I'm laughing happily as I drain another cup of sake as a brawl breaks out around me +5 Endurance +(Drunkard:Being drunk gives you bonuses rather than penalties)
[]The sound of arrows falling around me as I run forward screaming, hearing more of my comrades drop with every step I take +5 Mobility +(Mad charge:Avoid attacks by running through them)
[]The calm smile of the man who taught me how to hold a sword, as my father raises his over his neck, before swinging it down and spraying me with blood +5 Willpower +(Jaded:You have no fear..or much emotion at all really)
[]My boring old hag of a tutor drolling on and on, as I think of a way to run away from my family +5 Intelligence +(Well Mannered: Your mannerisms and general politeness make others feel at ease around you)
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>>49190539
>[]A demon laughing over me, as I bleed out from the bite it took out of my side. It's mask splits open and... +5 spirit +(Nearly hollow: Natural resistance to the attacks of hollows, among other things)
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>>49190183
For fucks sakes, try running a quest with a male character for once.
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Got 3 more options for le MC

Number 1
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>>49190539
>[]A demon laughing over me, as I bleed out from the bite it took out of my side. It's mask splits open and... +5 spirit +(Nearly hollow: Natural resistance to the attacks of hollows, among other things)


Or

>[]The sound of arrows falling around me as I run forward screaming, hearing more of my comrades drop with every step I take +5 Mobility +(Mad charge:Avoid attacks by running through them)


Either one should be interesting
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Number 2
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>>49190539
>[]The sound of arrows falling around me as I run forward screaming, hearing more of my comrades drop with every step I take +5 Mobility +(Mad charge:Avoid attacks by running through them)
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>>49190539
>[]The calm smile of the man who taught me how to hold a sword, as my father raises his over his neck, before swinging it down and spraying me with blood +5 Willpower +(Jaded:You have no fear..or much emotion at all really)
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Number 3
Also
>[]A demon laughing over me, as I bleed out from the bite it took out of my side. It's mask splits open and... +5 spirit +(Nearly hollow: Natural resistance to the attacks of hollows, among other things)
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>>49190539
>[]The calm smile of the man who taught me how to hold a sword, as my father raises his over his neck, before swinging it down and spraying me with blood +5 Willpower +(Jaded:You have no fear..or much emotion at all really)
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>>49190574
I did
it failed after one thread, and in general I am very superstitious. So I see female mcs as good luck charms
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>>49190574
I remember HM stating he had a male mc prepared so there could be a choice but, the general response in the threads discussing the start of this were that there was little point cause we pretty much always pick the girl option anyway.
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>>49190574
He actually has run several of those. They all died early.
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>>49190574
The yuri gods will not give us their blessing with a male MC anon, and it's almost tradition at this point.
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Welp, I have no experience with this Qm or bleach so I have no idea about what's going on
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>>49190702
QM's quests always turn into a shitshow of Yuri and Mary sues.

If you're alright with that stick around.
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Mary sue with hollow powers a la most bleach quests
or
Edgy sociopath

hmmmmmmmmmm
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>>49190539
>[]A demon laughing over me, as I bleed out from the bite it took out of my side. It's mask splits open and... +5 spirit +(Nearly hollow: Natural resistance to the attacks of hollows, among other things)
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>>49190702
I got not clue about Bleach myself, so I can't help you there. As for the QM.
Rolls are Best of 5, crits override. If a second 20 is rolled in one set as the sixth roll it still counts, but not for nat1s. Nat1s and Nat20s always count even if the rolling option didn't win.
Don't panic! Nat1s aren't instant suck, just a failure.
HM quests tend to be a homebase of the /u/boat fleet. Expect accordingly (except One Piece Quest, which is romance free).

If it looks like something bad is going down, keep in mind HM, for his faults, ultimately wants to have fun together with us, he will never ever do things to fuck us over. If bad things happen its for narrative tension and so better things can come later.
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>>49190736
Hey Amelia was not a Mary Sue!
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>>49190794
Well said anon
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I'm standing in an old graveyard, the moon is shining full and bright above my head, like a pool of silver. Dull pain runs through me like a river as I lay on the ground, clutching my side as I try to keep me inside of me.

The demon that took a bite out of me stands above me, laughing loudly as it drags its knuckles over the ground as I bleed out from the hole it left in me.

Its white and horned mask splits open and...I blink and see the man, frowning as he shakes my shoulder. I growl at him and he backs away covering his face.

"Back off" I bark as I instinctively move my hand to my side for my sword "I can do a lot more than walk around you know"

"Forgive me, I was only worried about you" He says, sounding like a maiden in the hands of a bunch of thugs again "there's a lot of bad people round these parts of the rukongai, I was only worried about you"

"Yeah right" I say flatly as I slowly move my hand over to my side and turn my head over to look at how bad the wound...

I run my hand over my intact side. There's no way I could heal that...no way, and there's no way I could survive that.

"Are you blanking out again?" the bald man asks as a chill runs over me, as I realize that if that wasn't a dream I remembered than I must be dead.

"Hey" I say slowly as I swish my tongue around "Where exactly is Rukongai"

"Oh, the soul society, the land of dead souls" the man says slowly "You must've forgotten about your death and...everything else like most of us here"

"Hmm" I say as I try to take it all in...well at least a demon got me instead of some moron swinging a sword around like a streamer "so I really am dead then, hmm what a shame"

"You don't seem to be very concerned about it...hey who knows maybe you were born here and hit your head" He laughs touching my shoulder as I grab my side again and wince from phantom pain "Hey, maybe we can call you Shiro, cause of your hair...Shiro Hone sutorīto, after this district, sound good shiro?"

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>>49190877
I squint and shake my head

"Besides I don't think Bone street is very good last name, and even if I was dumb enough to think that it was" I say standing as proudly as I can, trying to adjust to the thought of being dead.. "I have a name, Kemuri, Kimi Kemuri"

"So smoke is a good last name but bone street isn't?" The man says cocking an eye brow

"Oi shut your trap before" I say grabbing his kimono as another flash of pain takes me

But theres something else...flashes of *Choose 2*
[]A group of thugs, all looking for trouble and laughing, and a pile of tattered and ruined corpses, having found it +3 strength +(Frenzy: Go wild and toss any kind of style out the window as you swing at your foe like a butcher till they die or you tire out)
[]A ghost's face in the darkness, crying out for me to help as it vanished away...like something ate it +3 spirit +(Attract: Use Reiatsu to attract anything with the ability to sense it)
[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)
[] A boar charging me from down a hill, ready to gore me. But somehow, I end up a foot away from where it was heading +3 Mobility +(Flash dodge: A self taught version of shunpo, seems to work only on instinct and cannot hold a flame to true Shunpo at all)
[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)
[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
[] The first swing of a new blade, the rush of killing, my father's enraged face as I left home...I had a good life didn't I? +3 Luck
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>>49190794
He also refuses to edit or use a proper word processor, so expect horrible grammar.
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>>49190915
>[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)
>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
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>>49190915
>[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)
>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
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>>49190915
>[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)

>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
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>>49190915
>[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)
>[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)
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>>49190915
[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)
>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
All out crazed fighting style it is
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>>49190915
>[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)
>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
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>>49190915
>[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)

>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
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>>49190915
>[] Pain, stinging pain and laughter as I watch my skin split open and scar +3 Endurance +(Scarred:Heightened pain resistances, you may also unerve a few people with your scar covered body)
>[] A boar charging me from down a hill, ready to gore me. But somehow, I end up a foot away from where it was heading +3 Mobility +(Flash dodge: A self taught version of shunpo, seems to work only on instinct and cannot hold a flame to true Shunpo at all)
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>>49190915
>[] My body slowly practicing movements of a..my personal style of swordmanship on a blank canvas +3 Intelligence +(Unique Style: Your moves are harder to predict and as such counter, also you fight a little strangely)
>[]The face of the demon that killed me looking down at me as it swallowed my arm, and the look on its masked face as I charged it again +3 Willpower +(Do not go quietly: the closer to death you are, the harder and more ferally you fight)
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Even more pain as laughter fills my ears, both of which are stinging. I can see my flesh and skin parting and tearing open before it scars unnaturally quickly. Every wound I've ever taken works its way into my body slowly like a story unraveling.

And I can't remember how I got most of them, I shake my head, groaning in frustration as I just can't remember more than this. Its like someone shoveled out everything I knew and lived.

The man says something, whining and worrying about me for no good reason. So I ignore him and close my eyes, trying to remember anything else.

All I see is a blank canvas, and my body standing there. It slowly begins to move like an old puppet, slowly practicing movements of a style of swordsmanship, My personal style that I taught myself. Grabbing the blade, using my whole body to swing, moves that are suicidal or just plain stupid.

Maybe that's why I got all scarred up, but if I lived through all of it I must've been doing something righty.

"Hey Smokey, are you alright?" the man asks as I straighten my kimono and stand as proudly as I can, tracing my fingers over the two scars on my face "Maybe you should see a doctor or something"

What do I say?
[] yeah maybe...hey have anything to eat? I'm starving
[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
[] Who are you and why are you acting so friendly with me, huh?
[] Have you see a demon with a big white mask anywhere round here? Need to settler a score
[] No, shut up *punch him as hard as I can* 1d20+ str to see if it makes him stay quite
[] write in
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>>49191236
>[] yeah maybe...hey have anything to eat? I'm starving
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>>49191236
>[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
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>>49191236
[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
and
[] Have you see a demon with a big white mask anywhere round here? Need to settler a score
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>>49191236
>[] yeah maybe...hey have anything to eat? I'm starving
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>>49191236
>[] Have you see a demon with a big white mask anywhere round here? Need to settler a score
>[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
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>>49191236
>[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
>[] Who are you and why are you acting so friendly with me, huh?
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>>49191236
>[] yeah maybe...hey have anything to eat? I'm starving
>[] I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
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>>49191236
>I'm fine...I just need a sword, I feel naked without one
>Have you see a demon with a big white mask anywhere round here? Need to settle a score
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"Yeah, maybe I should" I say nodding slowly as I take my hand off of my face "But does it look like I have any money, moron?"

"Well none of us do" He says smiling like an idiot as he shrugs "Sure you could find someone willing to look you over for some favors or"

"Don't like being in debt to people" I say furrowing my brow as I shake my head, feeling my ponytail touch my neck as do

My stomach grumbles and I grab it and frown.

"Hey, got anything to eat?" I ask, tilting my head to the side as the man looks at me strangely "I'm starving"

"You shouldn't be, none of us have to eat here except for those shinigami" He says slowly, poking my stomach.

He backs off as I raise my fist up to smack him away, lowering his head and looking away as I glare at him angrily.

"So you don't have anything for me to eat...what a pain" I groan, shaking my head as he frowns looking all guilty even though he hasn't done anything besides annoy me"

"I imagine it is" He says smiling and cheering up instantly, like a ball of sunshine right in my face "Hey maybe you could become one? I mean, if you got to eat you have to be a shinigami right?"

"That doesn't sound like it's right at all" I drawl, rubbing my stomach as I look around for any kind of food, but all I can see is dusty streets and worn down shacks "Well can you at least tell me where I can find a sword, I need one...feel naked without a blade at my hip"

"Well, you could buy one but...we don't have any money and...honestly I think the easiest way would be to see if you could become one of them soul reapers, since they're always caring their swords around" He says smiling even wider "But I don't know much about them, besides that they protect souls and kill hollows"

What do I do?
[] Go for a walk to collect my thoughts
[] How do I become one? I better not have to sign up to a local lord or anything
[] Or I could kill one
[] What's a hollow?
[] Man this place has to be hell
[] follow the man back to his place
[] write in
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>>49191597
>[] What's a hollow?
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>>49191597
>[] How do I become one? I better not have to sign up to a local lord or anything
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>>49191597
>[] What's a hollow?
>[] Man this place has to be hell
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>>49191597
>[] What's a hollow?
>[] Man this place has to be hell
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>>49191597
>[] How do I become one? I better not have to sign up to a local lord or anything
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>>49191597
>[] How do I become one? I better not have to sign up to a local lord or anything
>[] Or I could kill one
>[] What's a hollow?
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"Holllow?" I ask as I crouch down next to the rickety old shack the man's been standing next to this whole time "What's a hollow"

"Souls that've gone bad I think" He says slowly as he eases himself down the wall, sitting down in front of me as he scratches his chin in thought "Think I heard something about them losing their hearts or becoming consumed by despair or regret, can't remember too clearly to be honest, but they eat people and look like big old monsters with white masks, kind of remind me of oni actually and"

"And?" I ask tilting my head again "I'm guessing soul reapers kill em or"

I pause as I realize he said white mask, and remember the thing that tried to eat me back when I was alive, and...probably succeed now that I think about it. I mean at the very least it killed me didn't it.

"Yeah, they do, they get paid for it depending on the bounty of the hollow" He says happily, smiling and nodding "That's why they have so much more money than us in these slums, ain't fair I say"

"Dammit" I sigh, rubbing my face scars again "Well how do I become one? I better not have to sign up to a local lord or anything"

"Well..." he says closing his eyes "You could just sign up at that Shin'ō Academy, hear they'll let anyone in if they can show a bit of Reiatsu, and if you are hungry you should be able to do that, unless your crazy which I'm not saying you are but"

"Just get to the point, where is this academy of theirs?" I ask leaning closer to him as I stand on my toes

"It's in the Seireitei, where all the nobles and soul reapers live...real fancy place" He sighs, looking a little envious as he starts to drool on his rough, unshaven beard "Wish I lived there...sounds like a wonderful place'

"Though I was done with learning" I say as I stand up and look around "So where is this...Seireitei?"
cont
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>>49191597
>How do I become one?
>Go for a walk to collect thoughts
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>>49191997

"Just go down the street and to the center, may take awhile but you should find it eventually" he says nodding "You should know you're getting close when people start to wear shoes"

"Oh right" I say looking down at my bare, mudcaked feet "Well at least that's clearer than just "go towards the center"

"Hey, I've never left Bone street, don't expect me to be any help for you, smokey" He sniffles pouting as he shoves his hands between his legs "Hope it goes well, I mean they might not be accepting applicants right now or"

"Don't care, they'll take me if they want to or not" I say dully as I walk down the empty street, holding my hand at my hip again

"You really want that sword of yours don't you" The man giggles as I leave him sitting alone.

What do I do?
[] sign up at the academy
[] see if I can find a soul reaper to tell me more
[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
[] Find some food, I'm dying here
[] Look for some trouble to make sure I can still...well not die I guess
[] offer to let the man come with me, and ask his name
[] write in
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
>[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
>[] offer to let the man come with me, and ask his name
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>>49192086
[] sign up at the academy
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
>[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
>[] offer to let the man come with me, and ask his name
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
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>>49192086
>[] sign up at the academy
>[] see if I can find a soul reaper to tell me more
>[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
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>>49192086
>>[] sign up at the academy
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>>49192086
>[] see if I can find a soul reaper to tell me more
>[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
>[] Find some food, I'm dying here
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>>49192086
>Offer to let dude come with
>See if you can hassle a soul reaper
>FIGH- I mean sign up.
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>>49192086
>[] try and remember more about that...hollow thing that killed me *flash back*
>[] sign up at the academy
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I smirk as I walk out of the lane of houses, if you can even call them that and nod as I see more people dressed in the same ratty looking Kimono as I am. Though a few of them are wearing some a bit more colorful, it all looks like it's rotting.

"Yeah, I really do" I say mournfully as I touch my side and feel a sting, probably have a new scar there knowing my luck "Well Kimi, better get walking no use in standing around grieving over what you lost when you can barely even remember it"

I smile as I walk down the street, looking at all the familiar sites. Now that I think about it, I think I've been to places like this before, or at least seen people living in squalor like this. It's a lively looking place, there's a lot more people living here than I thought there was when I was talking to baldy back there.

It doesn't seem to odd, even though everyone here is dead like me...but there is one thing missing. No one's cooking anything, I can't smell anything nice being roasted up. No meat, no vegetables, not even rice.

"Haaa" I groan as I grab my stomach and wander down the street slowly "I really could go for some dinner right now"

I close my eyes and push the thought of eating out of my mind as I cross my arms and walk down the street.

I mean how far could this academy be? I should be there before sunset, shouldn't I?

roll endurance

1d20+ 4
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Rolled 19 + 4 (1d20 + 4)

>>49192552
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Rolled 12 (1d20)

>>49192552
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Rolled 20 + 4 (1d20 + 4)

>>49192583
Fucking nice
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Rolled 9 + 4 (1d20 + 4)

>>49192552
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First set of dice rolls of the quest and i get a fucking 20

Aw yesssss
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>>49192603
Holy fuck, good job man
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Rolled 6 + 4 (1d20 + 4)

>>49192552
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I keep walking as the street slowly grows darker and all the happy folks going about their day vanish, and the thugs and scum of the...afterlife? start to come out and play. I ignore them and keep walking, and they do the same to me, probably because they managed to find some poor man with a hat or an odd shoe to hassle rather than the ruined girl covered in scars. Maybe they're scared of me? Maybe they think I'm one of them, but I don't really want to ask one of them.

I need to get a sword, and well I have a feeling these soul reapers may know something a bit more of how I died...or at the very least get me something to eat...that'd be real nice wouldn't it?

I keep walking even as I get tired and weary, and my stomach yells at me to eat anything, even dirt. My feet ache, but I keep up my pace, a slow and steady one as I try and dredge up more of who I am from my seemingly empty head.

But nothing comes up besides what I've seen already
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20+4= great success + crit!
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The sun rises, and it falls again as I keep thinking back on my memories, and forget about food. No one talks to me, must think I'm broken like the man did...well at least no ones bothering me about my scars...that was always a pain.
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A few days later
-

I groan, shaking my head as I wipe some sweat off of my brow, my stomach is hurting a lot right now...dunno how long I've been walking, but I haven't slept the whole time. I could eat dirt right now and drink horse piss if it meant getting something in my stomach right now.

I blink as I look up and smile weakly.

Great white walls cut off another part of this seemingly endless city. There's a weird feeling about them, and I think I may be hallucinating, cause they're floating, and there's a black giant standing in front of the gates.

cont
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>>49192802
>Days later

We must have skipped a ton of random encounter rolls holy balls

Kinda glad we get to speed through to the juicy stuff though
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Well now this I got to see. I keep smiling as I walk up to the big thing and tap on his legs as he keeps his arms crossed, snoring loudly.

He jolts and reaches for his side, before he looks down and sees me, his fluffy white eyebrows shifting with his eyes into a leer.

"And who would you be?" He asks angrily "A beggar? It's against the law to pan handle in the court of pure souls and is simply distasteful"

"Oh...so you are real" I say as I rub his leg..they're bigger than tree trunks "And no, do I look like a beggar? I'm here to become a soul reaper, heard there was a place I could sign up for it"

He pause for a second, and laughs, pointing his club sized finger at me as he leans down to get a better look at me.

"Yooooooou?" He asks, pressing his thumb on the top of my head 'You look half starved girl, what makes you think you have what it takes to become a shinigami Huuuh?"

I glare up at him and growl.

What do I say to him
[] Listen dirt caked asshole, I'm hear because I want a sword, and by the looks of it you have one, so let me pass I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands
[] I've killed more men than you have seen, probablly
[] Cause I wanna be one, why are you so mean
[]I walked here from...er..Hone sutorīto, without stopping or eating
[] Bah, don't have time to talk to hallucinations
[]And what says I don't have any qualifications?
[] I want to kill hollows
[] Eh, seems like a way to pass the times
[] why is becoming one hard or something?
[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
[] write in
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Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[] Listen dirt caked asshole, I'm hear because I want a sword, and by the looks of it you have one, so let me pass I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
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>>49192948
[] I've killed more men than you have seen, probablly
[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
We've walked for days without sleep and food, our bitch face has gotta be god tier
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>>49192948
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
>[] Listen dirt caked asshole, I'm hear because I want a sword, and by the looks of it you have one, so let me pass I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands
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Rolled 7 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[]I walked here from...er..Hone sutorīto, without stopping or eating
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 10 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[] Listen dirt caked asshole, I'm hear because I want a sword, and by the looks of it you have one, so let me pass I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 2 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[]And what says I don't have any qualifications?
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>49192948
>[] Listen dirt caked asshole, I'm hear because I want a sword, and by the looks of it you have one, so let me pass I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands
>[] why is becoming one hard or something?
>[] Glare at him 1d20+spirit
>[] Bah, don't have time to talk to hallucinations
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So dont we wait until votes decided to roll?

Otherwise couldnt hypothetically if someone rolls a 1 they could change their vote to something else that doesnt require a roll?
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>>49193096
the 1 overrides in that case.
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>>49193096
I explained it earlier. nat1s and nat20s always count even if the roll option doesn't win.
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Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>49192948
>Glare
I've had a bit of a day or three getting here.
Get the fuck out of my way
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>>49193118
OKAY
So hypothetically if its a fucking bunch of 2's then
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>>49193181
Then you can vote for whatever you want if you voted slow enough. Or change it. by experience, that doesn't really happen though.
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>49192948
>Glare
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Something snaps inside of me as all of my bottled up frustration of starving and not sleeping for who knows how long finally rip through my generally good sense. I'm standing under a giant, and what do I do?

"LISTEN DIRT CAKED ASSHOLE!" I roar as I glare at him, cracking my knuckles like a thug "I'm here because I heard I can get a soul by signing up at the academy, and by the looks of it, you have one so let me pass or I'm prying yours from your cold dead hands"

He blinks, his eyes opening up in surprise before they narrow in rage as he snarls at me and raises his foot like he's going to go squash a beetle. I frown and glare harder, crossing my arms. I've never backed down from anything before I'm pretty sure, It took me days to walk here, and like hell am I going to let this inked fuck stand in my way
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15+6= 21 = success
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"Oooh you won't last a day in the gotei 13 with an attitude like that...say what I'll stop you from staining the Seireitei with your stink and squash you" he says, before he freeze his eyes going wide as smoke billows up from my feet and swirls around me.

It rises up around me like the ghost of a fire and he hesitates

"Now" he says slowly as he stands there balancing on one foot.

"Oh, hesitating? You call yourself a" I say shacking my fist at him angrily as I hear a sharp whistle behind me.

"Heey, Danzomaru- san" A deep, kind of lazy voice says from behind me...I can already smell alchohol on the speakers breath "What are you doing harassing such a pretty girl"

I glance back and see a man wearing a pink, flowering and generally just womanly kimono over a plain black one, he's unshaven and is wearing a rice hat over his kind of messy hair...which is tied into a pony tail

"C...captain Kyōraku!" the giant shouts, falling down to his knees as I see that this man has two swords tucked into a sash around his race "I didn't know you were around in such a filthy place'
cont
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>>49193406
"Oh no need to apologize to me, if anything you'd have to beg the cutie for her forgiveness and the district, it's rather nice when you get to know it" He says grinning, showing all of his white teeth as he sneers like a gambler "well at least the drinks are...:"

He pauses as he sees my face, and keeps smiling.

"Oh, so I see you've had some violence in your life, eh cutie?" He says teasingly, tipping his hat "So why are you threatening her"

"Sh..she did it to me first" the giant says sweating "And she wants to beg in the"

"I want to join the soul reapers, however I do that" I say crossing my arms, cutting off the giant as he purses his fat lips and looks at me like I just cut him down

"ahaha" Captain Kyōraku laughs in a very calm manner "Well why are you stopping her? that seems like a rather mean thing to do doesn't it"

"Y..yes Captain Shunsui" He says bowing deeper "Please forgive me"

"Like I said before, no reason to ask me for forgiveness" Shunsui says calmly, as he grabs my hand "Well come on, a lady like you has no business walking these streets alone and...Damn forgot to ask your name"

"What?" I ask in confusion as he drags me past the big black monster

What do I do?
[] get dragged to the academy in confusion
[] ask who the hell he is
[] tell him my name
[] ask why he's wearing such a flamboyant kimono
[] Try to make small talk with him
[] let go of his hand and angrily state I don't need an escort
[] write in
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>>49193535
>[] let go of his hand and angrily state I don't need an escort
>[] ask who the hell he is
>[] ask why he's wearing such a flamboyant kimono
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http://pastebin.com/fUKdUWLF
also I keep forgetting to link kimi's char sheet

forgive me
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>>49193535
>[] tell him my name
>[] ask who the hell he is
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>>49193535
>[] get dragged to the academy in confusion
>[] ask who the hell he is
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>>49193535
>[] ask who the hell he is
>[] tell him my name
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>>49193535
[] get dragged to the academy in confusion
[] ask who the hell he is
[] tell him my name
[] Try to make small talk with him

Kyoraku is pretty cool
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>>49193535
>[] get dragged to the academy in confusion
>[] tell him my name
>[] ask why he's wearing such a flamboyant kimono
>[] Try to make small talk with him
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Why is he calling me cute? I am anything but cute?! I mean I'm covered in dirt and scars, how could anyone think this is cute. I stare at him as he runs along, pulling me behind him through the pristine white streets like I'm a little girl with how much trouble he's having dragging me.

"It's Kimi Kemuri" I say weakly as I struggle to keep up with his nearly invisible movements "and who the hell are you?"

"Oh, sorry" he says tipping his hat "I must've forgot to introduce myself to you, kimi chan"

He smiles that wily smile of his as he continues pulling me along like a doll.

"Name's Shunsui Kyoraku"He says dully, looking up at the moon as the streets flash by us "Captain of the 8th division, but to be honest I'm more of a lover than a fighter"

"And I'm more of a fighter than a lover' I say calmly as he chuckles and frowns

"Shame, violence doesn't really solve anything does it, all it does is make more of itself' He sighs sadly as lights flash by my eyes "Still, it was lovely meeting you Kimi chan"

"And you to I guess" I say, still feeling a bit confused as I give up trying to keep up and just keep stumbling on my feet as he lifts me up in the air with one hand "I mean you did kind of save me from that giant I guess"

"Ah, he's all bark no bite" he says cooly, tilting his hat up as he stops, and grabs me with his other hand so I don't go flying past him "nothing to worry about really, and you wanna join Shin'o Academy right?"

"If that gets me a sword" I say bluntly as he smiles a bit awkwardly "yeah of course I do"

"Such a blood thirsty little thing, maybe the eleventh will take you in" He says, patting my head and ruffling my hair "Well it's just down the street, might have to wait in a line or two but, it should still be taking aplicants I think"

"And where are you going mr captain" I ask, tiling my head towards him as he walks down the dark street.
cont
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>>49193902

"Heh, Lisa chan would kill me if she saw me with another woman" He says tipping his hat to me as he walks away "And I very much wanna keep living...well good luck Kimi chan, I feel like you could use it"

And with that he walks away, his upper kimono billowing behind him on a warm summer breeze.

What do I do?
[] get in line
[] follow him to see if he has any food
[] Push my way past everyone else
[]Try and be friendly with one of the other hopefuls *can put suggestions here if you want*
[] smile and thank him as I go to start this second life of mine
[] write in
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>>49193944
>[] get in line
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>>49193944
>[] get in line
>[] Push my way past everyone else


>maybe the eleventh will take you in

Yes!
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>>49193944
>Be friendly
We need a bizarrely opposite number sort of pal I think.
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>>49193944
>[] smile and thank him as I go to start this second life of mine
>[] get in line

Pays to be polite to prospective bosses.
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>>49193944
>[] get in line
Well, I got to be off here. Thanks for running HM and have fun guys.
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>>49193980
>>49193985
>>49194184
>being rude
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>>49194232
Sorry, I thought we were going for angry berserker worthy of joining Kenpatchi Zaraki. And these guy's are blocking us from getting a sword.
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>>49194308
The captain did help us get in is what I meant.
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>>49194308
Personally I'd like to go for calm, cool, collected, a bit weird and absolutely refusing to put up with bullshit.

Sometimes "listen here fuccboi" works for that.
Sometimes it doesn't.
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>>49193944
>[] get in line
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>>49194336
He also grabbed us and dragged us along like we weren't there. I don't like how this guy "was" around us, if that makes any sense.
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I turn and glance over my shoulder, and sigh as I see a line full of people stretching all the way to the end of the brick street I'm standing in. Some of them look worse off than me, most of them look better in some way, wearing all kinds of outfits with different looks about them. Well better get started then, no reason to cause any trouble in a place like this, already seen how dangerous this new life can be from my walk here.

Maybe they'll have snacks inside. I sigh and shake my head, crossing my arms over my stomach to try and squash down my hunger as I slowly walk forward in the line, trying to ignore all the noise they're making...but hey at least it drowns out my stomach's growling.

My stare and general raggedness seems to keep away even the most cheery in the line from trying to talk to me. Well I can make friends later
-
An hour or so later
-

I finish writing my name, and hand it to the old wither woman behind the weird...desk thingy. She smiles and files it away in one of the drawers before she nods and smiles in approval.

It's only me and her in the room of polished wood, with the sigil of the academy hanging from the walls in banners next to potted plants and carefully raked sand.

"Well, I'm sure the entrance exam is still going on" She says quietly as I look around the empty room "If it isn't just drop by tomorrow, I'm sure there will be one then"

I blink as I here the words exam

"And exam? this is horse crap" I groan, knocking my fist against my forehead "I just want a sword, I already know how to wield one just give me one of those black kimonos and"

"Shihakushō" the old hag says angrily, a vein popping up under her withered old forehead "they're called Shihakushō"

"Garments of dead souls, whatever, just give me one and" I say as suddenly I feel like I'm being crushed under a boulder as she stands up
cont
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>>49194397
That works too, I suppose. I just hope we can join the 11th squad, however that works.
>>
The 11th won't be under Kenny for a while iirc, it'll be under the fat fuck.

Also 11th is shit tier
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>>49194405
kyoraku's a known flirt, but mostly is interested in his lieutenant, but doesn't do anything cause of fraternization rules.
as far as I recall he's mostly a harmless drunk/flirt unless you seriously fuck with things in soul society. Otherwise he's pretty much the laziest captain, taking naps and drinking booze in picturesque spots all day
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>>49194405
Dude's one of the chilliest and nicest captains there is. Unless you fuck up hard. Like Aizen hard. Just because we know you are a rabid yurifag does not mean you have to hate every male character.
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>>49194496
Huh, well that's unfortunate. If this is before Ken dies, I hope we get to meet him and hang out.

>>49194505
That's alright then, I just don't like being the target of that shit, makes me feel weird.
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>>49194435

"there is more to being a shinigami than simply swinging a sword around willy nilly" She says glaring right into my...well I guess I am my soul right now aren't I? "There is...dignity, You must learn how to control your spiritual power less it consumes you, You need to learn the proper way of Zanjutsu, Hakuda, how to harness Hohō and Kidō. And most importantly"

She says as she pokes my stomach and growls "No end up in the belly of a hollow, remember this commandment, as it will be hammered into that thick skull of yours"

She takes a deep breath and lets it out in my face...smells like tea and sugar.

"Do not seek beauty in battle. Do not seek virtue in death. Do not make the mistake of considering only your own life. If you wish to protect that which you must protect......slice the enemy you must defeat from behind" She says calmly, keeping her eyes closed as she walks past me "Now go take the exam now or come back tomorrow, if you're still up for trying that is"

What do I do?
[] go out into Seireitei and look for a bar to sleep in and hopefully get something to eat
[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
[] take the test and rush through it 1d20+Luck
[] call her an old hag
[] grumble about not having a sword and bitch for awhile
[]Remember the face of that hollow and use it for fuel in this coming trial
[] write in
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Rolled 16 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
>[] grumble about not having a sword and bitch for awhile
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Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>49194566
>"So i'm what happens when you bastards fail then huh?"
>[]Remember the face of that hollow and use it for fuel in this coming trial
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
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Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[] grumble about not having a sword and bitch for awhile
>[]Remember the face of that hollow and use it for fuel in this coming trial
[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
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Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
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Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[]Remember the face of that hollow and use it for fuel in this coming trial
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
Oh man I just realized, We could have been a part of the Satsuma Rebellion and died in the Battle of Shiroyama! That would be pretty damn cool I'd say.
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>>49194566
>[] go out into Seireitei and look for a bar to sleep in and hopefully get something to eat
>[]Remember the face of that hollow and use it for fuel in this coming trial
>[] call her an old hag
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[] grumble about not having a sword and bitch for awhile
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
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>>49194631
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ylyqoxh-cXk

also what do you think kimi's theme is?
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>>49194677
FUCK YES!
Also that song obviously!
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>>49194677
I like it, Sounds like a fun Origin.
Either that or tish, At least I suggest this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7FPL3J0-ng
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>>49194677
I'll second that as the theme, but only because Blood of Bannockburn makes no sense for her.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oi7xBe5-M8k
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>>49194677
When appropriate I'd say Shiroyama but otherwise I have to agree with this>>49194713
Samurai storm is great.
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>>49194713
This theme is excellent
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>49194566
>[] go out into Seireitei and look for a bar to sleep in and hopefully get something to eat
>[] take the test, and go through it carefull 1d20+intellegence
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Rolled 5 + 3 (1d20 + 3)

>>49194566
>go through it carefully
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I watch her slowly totter out of the door into the empty, spotless streets. I sigh and frown as I look at the banner blocking me from the exam room, the circle with a cross staring me down as I stand alone in the lobby I think they called it.

I sigh and shake my head and begin to walk towards it, and as I grab it in my hand, I remember the face of that hollow, the one who I am pretty sure killed me. His eyeless face, his three horns and his wet, shiny teeth.

It takes me awhile to remember more, but after I remember it, I swallow the memory down feeling a fire in my stomach as I step into the room.

Its slanted downwards, filled with three rows of seats going down, made of many more rows with people of all ages scribbling on papers. There's a stage in front of it, and a stern looking man with not a hair on his head

"You're late" He growls as I walk down the rows to the single open seat in the front, next to a large man with a greying mane of hair, and a girl with short golden locks "Sit down and begin, you have until the bell rings"

I say nothing, and nod as I go to work, grabbing the weird...metal tube on the table. I flip it over and smile when I see it has ink on it...okay lets start.

I lean forward and frown as I see the first question.

What is your name

didn't I already put this down somewhere.

I groan and shake my head and begin to write it down again as I move onto the next question. How to correctly draw a sword...what is the duty of soul reapers, how to correctly kill a hollow, how would I know that? Proper sword care? Oh I knoooow that one.

I grin and lick the ink off of the tip as it asks me to draw the correct way of blocking an attack.

Well this might be easier than I thought it'd be, still, better go through it slowly and carefully
-
hours later
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My hands are burning, my eyes feel like they're melting. My mouth is dry and my stomach is angry with me.

cont
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>>49194933
I've spent the last few hours sitting here going through all these questions like I'm searching for a killer inside of them.

But this last question is really fucking with me, must be because I'm so tired. I don't know or care, I'm mad that it's caught me up.

I bite my pen and close my eyes, when it suddenly occurs to me

I've heard that commandment before

I chuckle as I copy the hags words onto the paper and stand up.

I shuffle and stumble my way to the observer and hand him the stacks of paper I've been slaving over. He grabs it from my hands and smirks as he flips through it.

and then the bell rings
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17+3= SUCCESS
-

I smile happily and pump my fist into the air.

"WOOoooo" the girl with the golden hair cheers "You finished"

What do I do?
[] pass out
[] "of course I finished, when do I get the results"
[] why is everyone so happy here?
[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
[] ignore her and sit back down, fantisizing about my sword
[] ask the man how I did
[]ask if she finished as well
[] write in
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>>49195017
>[]ask if she finished as well
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[] pass out
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>>49195017
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
>[] pass out Maybe on her lap
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>>49195017
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
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>>49195017
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
>[] pass out
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>>49195017
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
>[] pass out
Cheery companion get?
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>>49195017
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
>[] ask the man how I did
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>>49195017
>[] "of course I finished, when do I get the results"
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
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>>49195017
>[] why is everyone so happy here?
>[]...hey whats your name, and can you get me something to eat before I die again?
>[] pass out
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>>49195017
>Hey what's your name...wanna get some food?
>Ask her if she finished as well?
>ALSO THE OLD GUY WAS THERE! rope him into shit.
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>>49194405
Oh don't be a twit, Kyoraku is like one of the top three most bro characters in the entire canon.
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"Why is everyone so happy here?" I ask blankly as I try to stop my legs from swaying around as I look down at the shorter girl and her bright blue eyes

"Well I'm just excited!" She says, bouncing up and down like a little kid as I rub my eyes to try and stay consious a bit longer "I mean how cool is it that we're gonna be soul reapers'

"You don't know the results yet, don't start planning for something that isn't set in stone" the instructor says leering at her, with a deep frown "I doubt you'll get it on your first try"

He pauses and looks up at me

"Not sure about you" He says bluntly before he walks away flipping through the pile of papers

"Oh what a kill joy" The girl huffs, stomping her feet into the floor as I look at her, trying to not show either my amusement or confusion "why would they make a test you can't pass on the first try, so which company are you going to try for"

"Dunno" I say blankly as she grabs my hands, and I resist the voice telling me to push her away "don't really know anything about the soul society or this place"

"OOooh so you're newly dead then right?" She asks cheerfully as I frown and shrug "or maybe you've just been living under a rock or something"

"I mean I'm sure I did at least once in my life' I say as I slip my hands out of hers "hey...what's your name, can you get me something to eat before I pass on again"

"Eh?" She says titling her head as I grab my stomach, feeling my days of fasting and walking finally taking their toll "Oh I'm Aya Kurokabe and that's a lil forward but I have a few spare Kan I could share some food with"

I hear her shriek in surprise as I fall to the ground.

"Wait, did you just die!?" She screams in shock as I lay on the ground, to tired to get up and tell her I didn't
--
cont
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>>49194559
I think you're self inserting a little hard there my man
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>>49195343
Anon, you know this because you know more about the character. For him and some others this is the first impression, so pipe down a bit.
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>>49195343
Alright alright, I get that Kyoraku is a cool guy. If and when he show's up again I'll go with what seems appropriate to the situation.
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>>49195419
Nah, caught up faggot is just that, a faggot
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>>49195374
>company
Triggered, It's division HM.
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>>49195434
So are you, yet you don't see me bitching about it up and down.
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>>49195393
That's fair, I do have a problem with that
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>>49195452
>you
>implying

I'm a different anon you cock gobbler
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>>49195472
No you are the anon I just replied to. And I did mean you.
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>>49195374

"Thank you so much" I say as I shovel rice and pieces of fried pork in my mouth, tears rolling down my cheeks as aya looks at me with a grin

"You're crying" she says teasingly "it really doesn't soot you, you know...also I'm surprised you weren't dead already"

"I'm too stubborn starve" I say as I wipe my mouth with my tattered kimono, getting a few dirty looks from the richer looking diners in this restaurant...well I call it that but it's basically a stall on the side of the road that's grown a bit too fat "and don't tell a soul that you saw me crying...thanks again aya, I owe my life to you"

"Well, it looked like you were giving up just now" She says bluntly as she sips her tea, as I suck a bit of fat off of the juicy meat in my mouth, kicking my feet happily "Also Kimi is an adorable name"

I pause and finish chewing before I point at her and say "I don't remember telling you it"

"Well you were repeating it a lot, guess you like the sound of it" She says cheerfully, rocking her head back and forth "Also you're much heavier than you look....Still, its nice to make a friend so soon"

I frown and chew on my chop sticks.

What do I say?
[] Well Aya is cute to I guess.
[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
[]Heh, I like your spirit, guess we are friends
[] do you ever calm down?
[]Can I get another order, I swear I'll pay you back when I can
[] Well I hope you made it in, at least you lighten the mood a bit
[] hey could you fill me in on *ask her about something*
[] God you're so annoying
[] write in

>>49195436
Indeed it is
My mistake
will be sure to fix it in the future
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>>49195527
>[] Well Aya is cute to I guess.
>[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
>[] Well I hope you made it in, at least you lighten the mood a bit
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>>49195527
>[] Well Aya is cute to I guess.
>[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
>[] Well I hope you made it in, at least you lighten the mood a bit
>[]Heh, I like your spirit, guess we are friends
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>>49195527
>soot
Suit
>[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
>[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
>[] Well I hope you made it in, at least you lighten the mood a bit
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>>49195527
>[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
>[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
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>>49195527
>God you're so ann-
...>Well, Aya is cute too I guess.
>Heh, I like your spirit, guess we are friends.

>So, BOUT THOSE COMPANIES
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>>49195527
>[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
>[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
>[]Heh, I like your spirit, guess we are friends
>[] do you ever calm down?
>[] God you're so annoying
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"Well" I say as I swirl my cup of tea around lazily "aya is cute to, I guess"

"Ah do you think so? Most people don't say stuff like that to me...or talk to me much at all" She sighs, resting her head in her hands "Wonder why that is"

"Couldn't imagine why, but yeah my name doesn't really fit me does it?" I ask as I drink my tea down, draining my cup in one gulp "And trust me, people have pointed out its too pretty for me"

"Well I'm sure you were pretty before all those scars" She says grinning with her head on the table as I set my cup down and smile...she's a bit of an idiot isn't she?

"Do you get hit alot?" I ask as I swish my chopsticks around in my food "Also are you sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die"

"Oh of course I do and..yeah I do, how did you know?" She asks happily as she sits up and drinks her tea slowly "and why are you asking about that anyways?"

"Just curious" I say shrugging as I nibble on a pit of pork tasting rice

"Well yeah I do want to be your friend, cause you're interesting, something about you is..different I guess" She chirps nodding happily "don't know what it is thought, but I like it"

"heh" I sigh, shaking my head as I smile "Well I like your spirit guess we are friends then. I just hope you made it in, since at least you lighten to the mood a bit"

"OH YEAH I do" She cheers, slamming her fist on the table, making me curse under my breath as the little girl gets a good ten pair of eyes on us "the light to your gloomy darkness, I'm sure we both got in, nothing to worry about kimi chan, I'm sure we'll stick together"

What do I do?
[] drag her out of the store like her mother before we get kicked
[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
[] Ask her something
[] go see the scenery and get used to being dead
[]eat her food too, since I am starving
[] Until one of us dies at least
[] write in
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>>49195527
>[] Yeah, doesn't fit me though, and trust me people have pointed that out before
>[] sure you want to be my friend? Most of those die
>[] Well I hope you made it in, at least you lighten the mood a bit
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
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>>49195803
>Try and remember how I died
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*

That's the magic sword made out of your soul, right?
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] "You gonna eat that?"
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*

Sword sword sword
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>>49195803
>[X] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[X] Ask her something "So there's captains and...different companies huh? You know anything about 'em?"
>[X] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
Would be interesting if we were a part of the last charge if we were part of the rebellion.
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>>49195803
>[] laugh and ask when I became darkness
>[] Go see the results, they should be up by now right *receive your Zanpakutō*
>[] go see the scenery and get used to being dead
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>>49195864
First it's an Asasuchi, then it becomes a Zanpakuto.

Zanpakuto ARE a reflection of your soul.
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>>49195924
Cool, thanks.
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>>49195803
What's our first name mean btw?
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>>49196005
Kimi
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>>49196005
You
Emperor/lord
or she who is without equal

Kemuri means smoke

anyways writing
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>>49196017
Technically shouldn't it be Kemuri, by japanese naming conventions?
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>>49196050
So "Lord Smoke"? Neat.

>>49196055

I have no idea, but since I'm pretty sure HM's first language is English he dropped that convention for simplicity's sake. I could be wrong though.
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I laugh and put my elbow on the table as she keeps on smiling as I shake my head and sigh "When did I become the darkness"

"I mean you kind of have that feeling around you don't you?" She says sweetly "Kind of like walking into a graveyard a kind of grim sadness you know?"

"I guess" I say nodding slowly as I tap my fingers on the scar over my eyes "So when do we get the results anyways?"

"Oh they should be up right now" Aya says happily, putting her hands on her lap

"Wow that's some efficeny" I say in dull surprise as I chew on the last bit of meat in my bowl

"Oh no" She says calmly "You were asleep for two whole days"

"WAIT WHAT!?" I shout, leaning over the table at her "Where the hell have I been then?"

"Oh I took care of you in my apartment" She says innocently "You kept saying a lot of weird stuff, masks and shiro...thingy? dunno, but it seems like you needed it, so I kept you alive while you slept"

"Thank you but...that's kind of creepy" I say as I get out of my chair "You do realizes that right"

"Well was I supposed to leave you in the street?" She asks sounding a little upset that I'm questioning her

"Oh I'm not complain, just pointing out its weird' I say, shrugging as I rub my shoulder "Would explain why these got so stiff"

"Yep" Aya says, following after me like a duckling "Besides, you did sleep in a pretty weird way"

"Stop talking about that" I say angrily as I walk into the massive mob outside of the academy.
-

There's a big bored in the courtyard of it, in the otherwise empty plain of grass. It reads off hundreds of names.

I swallow nervously as I get pushed around by all the other hopefuls, some who cry out in despair, others cheering in victory as they find their own names.

And then I see mine,
Kemuri Kimi, second class.
cont
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>>49196232
I hope aya got in.
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>>49196232
Report to the school dormitories to receive your uniform and Asauchi.

I smile and then grin, and then I start to look for aya's name as she cries out in sadness.

Kurokabe aye Second class...judging from her score she managed to make it by her point.

"Well good job shorty" I say as I press my fist down on her head as she smacks her fists into the board "You made it"

"I wanted to be first class though" She huffs shaking her head.

"Eh, that just seems like shooting for the stars" I say shrugging as I head off to follow the other line of students heading down a sand path towards a weird...foreign looking building

"But I deserve it, I'm smart" She huffs, crossing her arms "this isn't fair, he just didn't like me...I mean I may have doodled on the exam a little but"

"You're lucky you even got into this place" I say dully as I walk up the stairs into the strangely cool building, behind everyone else.

A woman with a stern look and a missing eye watches me as I pass, her hair tied up into a proper bun

"Hurry up" she says to all the girls in the dorms "the welcoming ceremony starts in thirty minutes, anyone of you caught without your uniform will be given additional training"

What do I do?
[] ask her how long this last
[] just get my sword and get dressed
[] only get my sword, I'll get dressed later
[]find a place to "meditate" in and avoid the ceremony
[] write in

>>49196055
Well yeah, it's just that both people who've talked to you use first names first
rather than the usual way

most people will call you Kemuri until they think they're close enough to use kimi

also don't worry, the school bit of this won't be long. Since I learned exceptionally good shinigami can be recruited into division earlier than normal, or simply graduate faster
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>>49196403
>[] ask her how long this last
>[] just get my sword and get dressed
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>>49196403
>[] only get my sword, I'll get dressed later
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>>49196403
>[] ask her how long this last
>[] just get my sword and get dressed

> the school bit of this won't be long.
Awwww.
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>>49196403
>[] just get my sword and get dressed
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>>49196403
>[] ask her how long this lasts
>[] just get my sword and get dressed
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>>49196403
>[] ask her how long this last
>[] only get my sword, I'll get dressed later
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>>49196403
>Explain additional training miss.
>Just got here three days...5 days ago, I could use it.
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Why are there still quest threads on /tg/ and not on the new /qst/ board? Is there something wrong with the population/community over on /qst/?

Genuinely asking because I want to try my hand at a civ quest but need information.
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>>49196481
Well I mean like...annoyingly long.

I'll go with the flow, I just don't see it lasting long, but we'll see what happens

>>49196553
I don't like the look of /qst/ also /tg/ has no rules about quests
/qst just...has features that make it off putting for me

But now I must write!
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>>49196572
What features do you mean?
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>>49196553
qst also tends to be very slow and the general population is kinda small, qm's running quests that already have an established player base don't suffer too much running there, but new quests tend to die quickly. There are a good number of civ quests over there though, more so than on tg, so the potential audience for that particular kind of quest might actually be pretty good.
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>>49196553
It was a poorly thought out move that MANY people didn't like, Sadly several QM's don't run anymore simply because of it.
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"So how long will I be stuck here?" I ask, tapping her shoulder and getting a murderous glare as she hides her arms in her oversized sleeves

"Six years if you follow the Curriculum as expected of you, you may get out sooner if you're a savant or catch the eye of a captain" She says calmly, staring at the rest of the girls and ladies rushing to find their bunks "If your impatient you can request to be taken on missions before you're graduated, but that's a rarity"

"Alright, that's all I wanted to know" I say nodding as I turn back and see that Aya's gone a run off.

I shake my head and start to look for my name on one of the doors. I'm sure she'll turn up sometime, no reason to get worried about her, I mean she can take care of herself can't she?

Why do I have a feeling I'll have to keep her from ending up as hollow food someday?

And that reminds me, I should learn more about those things anyways. Since I'm going to be killing them as my job now...still can't be any harder than killing a man.

I smile as I find my room and walk into it, pushing the door open. It's plain, very plain. There's a window with a single white flower in it, a small bed under it, a dresser and a small bookshelf filled with books that look to be nothing but theories and studies.

Still I've slept in worst places before, this is actually pretty nice. Cozy really, and I don't need much anyways.

Lying on the bed is a bundle of clothing and a katana with no flairs or anything else to it. I run my hand over it and feel a weird static come off of it. I pull my hand away and grab my uniform, tossing my old rags into the corner as I dress as quickly as I can, trying to ignore my scars so I don't end up curious about how I got them again
cont
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>>49196816

I shake my untied hair around, and run my hand through it to straighten it out before I tie it back up into a pony tail.

Giving it a tug or two to make sure the red ribbon I found tucked in the shirt fits right. It does, my hair still looks too puffy for my tastes, but it'll always look like that.

I glance back down at my sword and

What do I do?
[] take a moment to inspect and imprint it to my soul, like aya was chattering about all the way to the board *choose your blade, though everything but its sealed appearance will be hidden until you train with it and learn its name
[] go the ceremony and meet the boss man *aka Yamamoto*
[] Get cocky and challenge some poor girl to a duel outside for no good reason
[] Look in the mirror, before tracking Aya down so she doesn't get lost
[] write in
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>>49196867
>[] take a moment to inspect and imprint it to my soul, like aya was chattering about all the way to the board *choose your blade, though everything but its sealed appearance will be hidden until you train with it and learn its name
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>>49196867
>[] take a moment to inspect and imprint it to my soul, like aya was chattering about all the way to the board *choose your blade, though everything but its sealed appearance will be hidden until you train with it and learn its name
>[] Look in the mirror, before tracking Aya down so she doesn't get lost
>[] Get cocky and challenge some poor girl to a duel outside for no good reason
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>>49196867
>[] go the ceremony and meet the boss man *aka Yamamoto*
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>>49196867
>[] take a moment to inspect and imprint it to my soul, like aya was chattering about all the way to the board *choose your blade, though everything but its sealed appearance will be hidden until you train with it and learn its name
>[] go the ceremony and meet the boss man *aka Yamamoto*
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>>49196867
[] take a moment to inspect and imprint it to my soul, like aya was chattering about all the way to the board *choose your blade, though everything but its sealed appearance will be hidden until you train with it and learn its name

Meh. Then on to the ceremony.
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>>49196867
I'd rather not choose the sword so early.
>[] go the ceremony and meet the boss man *aka Yamamoto*
>Try and remember how I died.
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>>49196867
>[] go the ceremony and meet the boss man *aka Yamamoto*
>[] Get cocky and challenge some poor girl to a duel outside for no good reason
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>>49196867
>Look in the mirror, inspect the sword
>Check on Aya before skipping out on ceremony speciffically for the additional training
Get out of boredom AND gainz in some fashion? Hell yeah.
>>
I grab the Zanpakutō still laying on my bed and turn it around in my hand as I grab it's saya and pull it away from the blade. It's plain, like a commonly produced sword, it has no flairs or any kind of style to it. It's hilt is braided black, it's guard is a simply square one with no signs of any kind of design on it. Its blade is also bare of any kind of special sort of markings.

I twirl it around, getting used to its weight which is simply perfect, as I hold its sheath to my side, hooking it into my sash as I try out some of my custom moves with it, spinning it around in my palm and striking with its scabbared like a club, as well as grabbing the blade so I have a better angle for stabbing.

I chuckle and go to sheath it, when aya's ramblings echo through my head.

"Didn't she say I could imprint this with my soul or something...make it unique" I say as I hold the blade up to the light and catch the glint of the sun with it "wasn't paying attention but...that does sound interesting...no idea how I'd do it anyways"

I bring the blade down and frown, focusing on it as intently as I could, trying to...I don't know connect to me or something.

But the blade just feels empty, I don't know how I feel that but...it feels like there's nothing in there right now

roll 1d20+ spirit
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>49197150
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Rolled 7 (1d20)

>>49197150
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Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>49197150
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>>49197150
Will we have a reroll system btw HM? I really hope we do.
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>49197150
Let's hope for something cool
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>>49197176
it's tied to the luck stat, which is currently 0, something we'll need to work on till we get like 1 reroll a thread.
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>>49197176
the luck stat is for that
also is the roll for general good fortune

currently it is 0
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>>49197176
He said that luck would be our reroll burn for this quest, so the more we have the better.
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>>49197200
How do we gain luck?
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Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>49197150
If no one else is going to roll for the fifth I guess I will.
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>>49197212
getting lucky
doing something that you shouldn't
being clevel
fan art.

really plenty of ways

just not via leveling
other wise you guys would just dump all points into luck
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Rolled 20 (1d20)

>>49197150
Focus!
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>>49197281
Yes!
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>>49197281
You should have rolled sooner.
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>>49197281
Too late. And it was such a good roll too.
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>>49197313
What? man, I just noticed the update too.
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>>49197313
>>49197323

Not quite my friends>>49190794
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>>49197366
I think you should learn how to read buddy.
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>>49197366
20 on the sixth roll only counts if there WAS a 20 in the first five.
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9+ 6= 15= exactly on the dot.
-

I bite my lip as I focus a bit harder, feeling a burning in my wrist s I look up at the blade shining in the sun light. I twist it around, maybe it needs to be a certain way around? no that doesn't work. I huff and shake my head, shaking it around a bit trying to get a reaction out of it so it'll get imprinted on me, whatever that even means.

I growl and put the blade to my left palm, maybe I need to douse it in my blood or something. I start to dip the edge of the blade into my palm, focusing on where it meets my skin as a drop of blood stains it.

And the drop bubbles away into that same smoke I saw coming up from me when I faced down that giant. I watch it coil around the blade, before it engulfs it like a black crowd.

I feel dizzy, whoozy, like I'm one the verge of death again as I grip my blade. It feels like it's drinking something out of me, but I don't know what it is...it just feels...wrong.

I bite my lip as the cloud grows thicker and darker. It wraps around the blade tightly and holds onto it as I stand back up onto my knees, feeling light headed and whoozy.

And then I scream angrily, fighting off the feeling as my room fills with smoke coming from me.

"YOU ARE MINE!" I growl as I struggle to hold the now shaking blade in my hand as it starts to...change"I am not your food, so stop trying to suck me dry already"

It stops and I sigh "Why am I talking to a sword, it's not like there's anything in you yet...right?"

There's no answer, just the smoke clearing away as my head starts to unfog and I don't feel like I'm about to vomit as I start to feel whoozy again.

*Blade imprinted, you do not have it shikai or its bankai, you only have its standard state, and do no know its name or what spirit has been born into it*
cont
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>>49197366
> If a SECOND 20 is rolled in one set as the sixth roll it still counts
There was no 20 in the first five.
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>>49197461
Choose your Zanpakutō's sealed state.

[]A Katana broken off just above the half way up the blade. Its guard is shaped like a broken white mask, and its handle is wrapped in a plain black braid. Its pommel is an open, toothy mouth. The Scabbard that holds it is coated in a swirl of white and black Laquer.Smells like rot.

[]A katana with a dull blade, slightly longer than usual. Its guard is a thick, and plain plate of metal, its handle is wrapped in a boring grey blade. Its pommel is also standard. Its scarbard is coated in an empty, unshining stone grey laquer

[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.

[]A Tantō with flowers etched into the blade's surface. It's guard is shaped like an unfolding blossom, giving it an odd appearance. It's hilt is wrapped with a pink and very soft braid. Its scarbard is a light blue and has various seals stuck onto it. Smells like a storm
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>>49197490
>[]A katana with a dull blade, slightly longer than usual. Its guard is a thick, and plain plate of metal, its handle is wrapped in a boring grey blade. Its pommel is also standard. Its scarbard is coated in an empty, unshining stone grey laquer
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.

Gonna be Kenpachi and Unohana's favourite.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
Awww sad no Katana and Wakizashi pair.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.


I have a good feeling about this one
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>>49197490
>[]A katana with a dull blade, slightly longer than usual. Its guard is a thick, and plain plate of metal, its handle is wrapped in a boring grey blade. Its pommel is also standard. Its scarbard is coated in an empty, unshining stone grey laquer
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
We are a killer, But we follow the Bushido code!
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>>49197490
[]A Katana broken off just above the half way up the blade. Its guard is shaped like a broken white mask, and its handle is wrapped in a plain black braid. Its pommel is an open, toothy mouth. The Scabbard that holds it is coated in a swirl of white and black Laquer.Smells like rot.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
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>>49197490
>A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
Would be funny if it looked like the sword we used while alive or at least the type we used while alive.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scarbard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
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>>49197490
>[]A Nodachi that already looks blood stained. It has no guard, so one must be careful when wielding it. The Handle is wrapped in red cloth that hangs down like a tassel. Its Scabard is cracked down the middle, and it's only held together by red string, its laquer is scarlet.Smells like blood.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7FPL3J0-ng
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I rub my forehead with my free hand, coughing as the smokes starts to vanish away in the air, like it simply got sucked up into something. I look back up at my Zanpakutō as I hear a some panicked running outside of my door, and the sounds of some girl throwing up.

I glance over my shoulder and see nothing out of the ordinary, so I shrug and turn back to my blade. And nearly drop it in surprise.

It's grown to the size of a nodachi and lost its guard in the instant I looked away. It's braid has been replaced with a bloody red cloth that hands down it like a tassle. The blade is speckled with weird stains like it's already been washed down with blood multiple times.

Reminds me of the sword I used to have, at least how thick it is with the smell of blood...besides I've always kind of like nodachi's since they have more room for cutting and longer reach than plain katanas.

I twist it around in awe, trying to stop myself from touching it as I hold it up.

"Huh, guess I fed you enough, eh boy?" I say happily as lift up the scabbard to sheath it and find that it has been shattered and pieced back together with red string "Guess this is fate eh? Oh I'm going insane, talking to a sword in hell...hope no one saw me doing that especially aya"

I stop as I put it back into its red sheath as I tilt my head trying to remember how long I've been in here with my Zanpakutō...it has to be have been around thirty minutes right?

Fuck. I gasp and cut my hand on the edge as I rush for the door.

"I'M GONNA BE LATE!" I scream in a panic as I run down the empty hall way

roll 1d20+ mobility to make it to the ceremony

or don't and face the consequences, which are a little more than extra training
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Rolled 11 (1d20)

>>49197715
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Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>49197715
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>49197715
I wanna see OMG.
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>49197715
I'd really like to see what happens if we don't, but let's not make a terrible impression on our first day.
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Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>49197715
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>>49197715
HM, just to let you know

It isn't a Zapakuto yet. Not until we learn the name.
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Asuachi
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>>49197814
>>49197849

Yeah I know, but Kimi heard aya rattle on about Zanpakutōs and Asauchi she assumes they're used interchangeably as she just sees it as a sword and nothing special at the moment.

and I'm doing it because they're more often referred to as Zanpakutōs, so its more familiar.

but I do get the difference, don't worry, had the page of Zanpakutōs open for a few days to make sure I knew what they were before I started running.

sorry if I messed it up.

any ways, writing.
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>>49197894
S'all good in the hood nigga
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>>49197894
All good. Didn't mean to upset.
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>>49197715
If you don't know, Just telling you for writing purposes but the nodachi was usually carried by hand since it would take to long to draw it if you carried it via back, Also the Kōden Enshin-ryū style had a special way of drawing it allowing for it to be carried via waist, The technique is to pull out the sheath rather than drawing the blade.
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>>49197997
Holy shit, the first part of that was really helpful. Thanks anon!
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I really want to test this Zanpakutō or Asauchi or whatever its called, but I have a feeling cross road killing is a little more frowned upon here simply because everyone who isn't happy go lucky has a stick up there ass it seems. And I really don't want to set a bad impression with people I'll be fighting with for my afterlife...which does seem like a pretty good reward actually

I sigh and push my thoughts away, focusing on running as I lower myself a bit and put my hand on my new sword to keep it from jiggling and dancing around at my side as I sprint through the plain of well maintained and cut grass, towards the crowds of other students heading towards....somewhere in the academy's grounds.

I smile, maybe a bit madly as I pick up the pace, ignoring the pain in my chest as I keep on running, and running towards the sounds of gossiping and talking.

I stop to take a break as I reach the end of the pack, all of them are wearing the same uniforms I am, though the men and boys are wearing blue instead of red.

I look around and notice there's a balcony along the walls of the academy leading off...somewhere deeper into the Seireitei.

There's an energy in the air, people are excited, waiting, expecting something but...what or who rather are they so riled up over

What do I do?
[] Inspect my Asuachi
[] Find Aya and protect her smile
[] Ask someone what the big deal is
[] try to climb up to the balconey 1d20+moblitity
[] sit down and patiently wait for whatever this ceremony is
[]sit near the back
[] stand up in the front, proudly resting my nodachi on my shoulders
[] write in


>>49197985
Ah thanks muh nigga. and you guys chose the unique style, so I imagine kimi doesn't follow all of the rules.
>>49197908
and now I'm imagining a violently black shinigami

>>49197941
Oh, no worries. I hope you guys call me out on my shit whenever I get it wrong. but don't worry, Kimi will get schooled on this, weather she cares or not is up in the air.
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>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] Find Aya and protect her smile
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>>49198080
>[] Ask someone what the big deal is
Then find Aye and ask her if sword smells like blood.
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>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] Find Aya and protect her smile
>[] stand up in the front, proudly resting my nodachi on my shoulders
The pride of the samurai!
>Ah thanks muh nigga. and you guys chose the unique style, so I imagine kimi doesn't follow all of the rules.
No problem HM, Just trying to help however I can, Can't wait to see how her unique style makes her hold her Nodachi.
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>>49198080
>[] Find Aya and protect her smile
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
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>>49197997
So kimi basically force sped up the process of imprinting via pure stubbornness

AT least that's how I figured it happened anyways when I wrote it up, and it does seem to fit with how you're playing her so far.

Besides dumber things have happened in bleach from what I've read and watched at least
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>>49198080
>[] try to climb up to the balconey 1d20+moblitity
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Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] try to climb up to the balconey 1d20+moblitity
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>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] Find Aya and protect her smile
>[] stand up in the front, proudly resting my nodachi on my shoulders
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>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] Ask someone what the big deal is
>[] stand up in the front, proudly resting my nodachi on my shoulders
gotta display that prodigy status
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>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] Find Aya and protect her smile
>[] stand up in the front, proudly resting my nodachi on my shoulders
>>49198131
I now can't imagine she wasn't one of 40 left at Shiroyama, Even if you say otherwise I won't be able to believe you.
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>>49198080
>Ask someone what the big deal is
>Sit patiently
>Talk to folks or listen in.
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Rolled 13 (1d20)

>>49198080
>[] Inspect my Asuachi
>[] try to climb up to the balconey 1d20+moblitity
>[] sit down and patiently wait for whatever this ceremony is
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Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>49198080
>Sweet
>Sweet
>Balcony Access
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>>49198201
Which would mean she either

I heft my Asuachi onto my shoulders, like I used to carry my blade around in life so I could draw it and swing it down in one smooth motion, while still having the sheath as a back up club or to block any strike that I could catch with it.

I flip the blade around as girl and boy stop and stare at me as I twirl it around my fingers...they look like they died a few years before I did. or maybe they were just born here... pretty sure that weird man said that could happen.

"what you lookin at?"I ask calmly as I grab the hilt and point my nodachi at them upside down "Just testing my sword here"

"Uh" the boy says as he runs his hand through his black hair "How long have you had that four"

"About thirty minutes" I say as he bites his lip and the girl whines, chewing on her nails as I grin happily as I hear aya again

"So when do you think we'll imprint our Asuachi's!" She asks a big, boar looking man excitedly as he clearly struggles to not hit her "do you think they'll let us on mission? what about the training, huh do you know anything about the eh?"

"come on little bird" I say bluntly as I grab her by her shirt right as the man glares back down at her "you're straying to close to the tiger"

"Oh I was just asking him a few questions" She huffs, crossing her arms before her eyes go wide "uh...Kimi chan?"

"Yes Aya?" I ask boredly as I sit down and stab my nodachi between my legs, and lean against us.

"How'd you get that?" She asks, smiling happily as she reaches out to touch its bare blade "I mean we only got these just now"

"Oh I did what you said and imprinted my soul onto it" I say with a sneer as I rub my thumb where it's guard is supposed to be "it's pretty easy actually...also you might not wanna touch it, this boy seems rather bloodthirsty"

Aya makes a weird noise, but she's still smiling so she couldn't have cut herself....unless she's type of idiot who grins when they get smacked in the face.

cont
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>>49198382
"AWESOME!" She cries out as she grabs onto me, and hugs me "You managed to imprint it right after you got it"

"Yeaaaah?" I say tilting my head as she hops and down like a rabbit

"it supposed to take foreeeeveeeer" she says happily "Man, you really are something amazing...didn't eat for about a week and you still manage to do something awesome like this"

"But I'm pretty sure the walk over here was only....you forgot to feed me when I was passed out didn't you" I say narrowing my eyes as Aya blushes and looks away, pinching her fingers together

"Only a little, and I made up for it didn't I?" She says meekly as I frown and rub my stomach
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DRUuQnGmnk4
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a dong sounds and echos throughout the empty plain.

cont
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>>49198434
>A fucking lieutenant or somebody just brings it up mid-ceremony killing the pomp and circumstance.
"Oh, uh, I didn't know I couldn't do that."
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>>49198434
I look up to see where it's coming from and see a row of soul reapers standing next to an old wither man with a long beard and scarred face standing on the balcony. Behind him is standing a man with sharp features, almost silver grey hair and a thin mustach on his tanned face.

The old man is either dead or asleep, and after a minute of silence it turns out to be the latter as he jolts awake and smiles meekly as he slowly shuffles over the edge of the balcony.

His eyes open and I feel like I just had a mountain dropped on me for a moment. I catch my breath, and see aya laying against me. She looks a little more dazed than I am, and it takes her awhile to get back up, without drooling on me

I look back at the old timer as she apologizes furiously, prostrating herself before me as the old man chuckles.

"You are the new generation of shinigami"He says in a commanding voice, his eyes growing stern as he looks down at us "erase any fantasies of glory or fame you hold, your duty from now on is to protect the soul society with your very life, slay hollows and guide souls safely here. By joining this academy, you give yourself bravely to dangers, becoming one of the many hands holding the sword of justice and law aloft in the air, even if you will be cut down"

He pauses and waits for a few mummers in the crowds..I look at aya, expecting to see her crying, but she looks like she just got front seats to a once in a life time play.

"Do not seek beauty in battle. Do not seek virtue in death. Do not make the mistake of considering only your own life. If you wish to protect that which you must protect......slice the enemy you must defeat from behind" He says like he's repeating a mantra "that is our way, as I'm sure your teachers have taught you already, but I shall be honest with you, many of you will die, be it from your own folly, the mistakes of others, or simple misfortune, death does not make an exception for us shinigami,
cont
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>>49198611
so do not act like it does, hold yourself proudly, fearlessly, but wisely and you shall survive if fates be generous, I hope all of you do as you seem to be a fine batch of soul reapers in the making"

And for a moment, I swear he looks right at me before, he and his entourage walks away.

Hmm

I swish my tongue around my mouth slowly as I try to take in all that he said...was that the emperor of this place or something? He sure had an air of authority around him.

"Can I touch it?' Aya asks bringing me out of my thoughts

I shake my head and sheath it before she cuts herself, don't want to get her hurt for no reason.

"So who was that anyways?" I ask as I stand up and suddenly feel a hundred eyes on me "Uh...what all of you looking at?"

"ARE YOU SERIOUS!" A boy with hair covering his eye hisses "that was Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, the captain commander of gotei 13, the founder of this academy and the shinigami, how do you not know who he...wait why is your Asauchi already changed"

"Because she's the numbah 1 shinigami in training" Aya says, leaping onto my back before I shift and send her back to the ground.

I look down as I realize I'm getting some attention I don't want, as more people gather around, gossiping and chattering about my blade

What do I do?
[] just go to whatever lesson I have
[] try and explain how I did it, and teach them
[] Ask why that old geeze is so important
[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
[] Yawn and take a nap to ignore all of them
[] Ask Aya what I have to do now
[] Go get lunch, on aya's expense, as I have no money currently
[] write
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>>49198713
>[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
>[] Yawn and take a nap to ignore all of them
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>>49198713
>[] Yawn and take a nap to ignore all of them
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>>49198713
>[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
>[] Yawn and take a nap to ignore all of them
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>>49198713
>[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
>[] Ask Aya what I have to do now
>[] Go get lunch, on aya's expense, as I have no money currently
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>>49198713
>[] Ask why that old geeze is so important
>[] Ask Aya what I have to do now
>[] try and explain how I did it, and teach them
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>>49198713
>[] Ask why that old geeze is so important
>[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
>[] Go get lunch, on aya's expense, as I have no money currently
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>>49198713
[X] just go to whatever lesson I have
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>>49198713
>[] Blow them off unless one of them wants to fight
>[] Yawn and take a nap to ignore all of them
>[] just go to whatever lesson I have
>[] Ask Aya what I have to do now
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>>49198713
> eat Aya's lunch
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"Listen, unless you want to fight me, please leave me alone" I say calmly as I walk through them, tapping my sheathed blade against my shoulder "I'm too tired to want to talk or do much of anything right now so I'd appreciate it if you let me rest and then start bugging me when I'm in a somewhat better mood"

I look back at them as they stand their, looking either offended or sorry that I probably look like I'm half dead from lack of sleep and food...which comes before lessons I think in order of importance. Can't learn on an empty stomach can I.

"Sorry if I'm being rude, but really I'm only awake enough to listen to or fight things" I yawn "So I'm going to go take a nap and hope I don't miss anything to important"

"Hey, come on its our first day kimi chan, don't you wanna have fun and see what its like here" Aya asks, pocking my side as she follows "You might make another friend or get into a fight, doesn't that sound better than sleeping in and doing nothing at all"

"No, I'm tired as hell" I say weakly "I'll go to classes with you when I wake up"

"it took you two days to wake up last time" Aya groans shaking her head "For all I know I won't see you till I graduate"

"I'm not a bear" I say sternly, grinding my fist into her forehead "I don't hibernate"

"I know, I'm just worried you're not healthy yet" She says sadly, holding her hands behind her back "I mean I did meet you right before you passed out for two days"

"and I've only eaten one meal in an entire week" I say smacking my stomach "if it puts you at ease I'll make up for lost time and eat everything I can when I wake up"

"Oh that would...I don't have to pay for it right kimi?" She asks meekly, before she grins widely "I mean would, just...don't want to spend all my money keeping you fed"

"Eh, I'll see how the food here tastes, but...good luck with your classes" I say waving her away as I slowly step into the dormitory
cont
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>>49199024

"Fine, I'll just go have my adventure without you" She says crossing her arms as I look back "Hope you don't get jealous when I leave you in the dust"

"Oh I'm a very good loser" I chuckle as she smiles happily "Well...really focus on the lectures or whatever they're giving, don't bother anyone, got it"

"I don't bother anyone anyways" She says happily, completely unaware about how she effects most people with her constant cheer and shouting "You're worrying to much about me"

"Just paying back the favor" I say flatly as I walk away into the hall "Just stay safe, I can't sleep if I know a friend is in danger after all"

"Oh Okay Gooot it!" She shouts "I'll be sure to be extra careful for ya kimi"

I shake my head and yawn. First time I've been able to tolerate someone who just instantly uses your first name

But she's a sweet girl, and honestly she is fun being around.

I glance at my Asauchi as I set it down next to my door

"Can't wait to give you some practice" I say, patting it's hilt as I lay my head down and groan.

Well can't say it hasn't been an exciting if strange week

even if I didn't do anything but walk for most of it I apparenlty died sometime before it and spent most of it in the next life, before meeting a few strange characters.

Ah well, nothing I can't handle unless it gets weirder...and I have no doubt that it will

AND WE'LL END HERE

Next thread is on friday
sorry about no second part, but I feel like now is a good close for the first thread

Also I think you'll like the Zanpakutō you chose

I've archived
and will answer questions
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>>49199130
Great thread HM, thanks for running. I really like this so far, even though I know almost nothing about Bleach I didn't feel lost at all, and once again I love Kimi's design. Welp, see you later tonight HM.
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>>49199130
So.
Since it's of no bearing on us now.
What were the other two zanpakuto options?
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>>49199130

Any hints as to what its abilities are?

Thanks for running, too!
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>>49199183
Abilities? or names?
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>>49199196
either
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>>49199196

Not that anon, but I'd like both if you wouldn't mind.
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>>49199195
It thirsts.
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>>49199196
I'd be interested in their ability's. The flower one smelled of anti-magic to me.
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>>49199218
>https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Vn05qpn2e1Y
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>>49199196
For some reason the really plain one really interested me, I'm guessing some sort of defensive or negating type ability?
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>>49199217


Broken one= Horned one, when released would cause whatever it cut to rot/decay away. turns into saber with a blade of reiatsu where it's broken, which is controllable and what causes the rot.
Boring one= Iron wall, defense is the best offense. Turns into a kanabo and some armor, defense in exchange for speed, the armor is very strong and would make you a literal iron fucking wall in combat
Tiny one= Thunder taker, able to asorb sound to redirect with increased noise *think skull popping loud* or turn it into electricity, becomes a scythe

Blood sumabitch is a secret
cause he's yours

>>49199245
Yes,

also here's their japnese names if you're interested

horned one/ Tsunojō no Ichi
Iron Wall/ Tetsu no kabe
Thunder Taker/Sandāteikā


>>49199231
Also good tastes , and it fits pretty well
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>>49199196
I was thinking abilities, or names, but if you are using them for other characters now I understand if you don't want to go on about them.
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>>49199309
So I was half-ish right about the flowery sword, nice.
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>>49199325
>>49199325
I used spoilers, so I can both use them and talk bout them
if I want to

>>49199339
I even planned out their bankais

but that is an even bigger secret I can't tell
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>>49199354
Very nice, even though I don't technically know what a Bankai is. I know that the ginger protagonist get's a cool mask and black/red power blasts, and Kenpachi hulks out, turns red, and murders gods.
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>>49199309
>>49199354
May we, when we activate our Shikai, actually say Gascoigne's lines about blood?
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>>49199408
Bankai's a second form for the sword along with a massive power boost and new abilities in line with or related to the swords theme, the canon protags mask thing is actually separate from his bankai and provides a another multiplicative power boost on top of his other various boosts.
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>>49199445
Which one?
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>>49199449
basically ichigo is a power gamer with a backstory to allow his bullshit
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>>49199465
"What's that smell? ... The sweet blood, oh, it sings to me. It's enough to make a man sick"
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>>49199445
I'd rather not quote video game characters lines for our shikai or Bankai.
>>49199487
Definitely not that thankyouverymuch.
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>>49199465

Any of them.

Or at least: "The sweet blood.... Oh, it sings to me."

>>49199487

Yeah, this one. This anon got it down before I could.
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>>49199478
Yup and the badguy pretty much designed him that way! Ghost eugenics with Aizen Sosuke!
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>>49199499

But it fits.
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>>49199445
that's kind of dumb. the activation phrase could be something related to BB, but it has to incorporate the name and the shinigami's personality. just quoting a vidya does neither
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>>49199512
Oh, I have ideas for aizen, since Kimi is now on the scene

Wonder how the hollowification incident will go will her battle hungry ass on the prowl

>>49199532
I'll take suggestions

Also do you like kimi?
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probably should get modified a bit

"Sing to me, oh sweet blood"
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Also, just realized, by time gin joins the academy, Kimi is going to be a full fledged soul reaper, oh the possibilities
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>>49199593
You really need to check out Shinigami Savant Quest my man

It's the bible on how to run a Bleach quest well.
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>>49199549
Pretty sure the Hollowfication incident happened a LONG time ago didn't it?
Also I hope Kimi will remember Shiroyama soon. Also had a lot of fun and hope to see more of Kimi!
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>>49199549
>Hollowfication scene
>SEAS OF NAT TWENTIES
>MY SWORD IS AN EXTENSION OF MY SOUL! TRAINING MY REIATSU AND HONING MY SWORD TECHNIQUE ARE THE SAAAAAME THINNNNNG

>fuck girl, calm down, I'm supposed to be the...screw it, illusions!
>I ROLL TO DECAPITATE THE CONCEPT OF DECEPTION
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>>49199611
>It's the bible on how to run a Bleach quest well.
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>>49199549
>Wonder how the hollowification incident will go will her battle hungry ass on the prowl
Eh I'd rather us not be a part of it tb.h, Mainly because if we do get hollowed we'd be doing fuck all in the human world like the rest of the vizards.
>>49199611
Definitely one of the best bleach quest if not one of the best quests in my book.
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>>49199611
I kinda found it a tad fanfic-y for my tastes I dropped it after the MC adopted Gin and Rangiku
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>>49199593

Why Gin? Why not Ikkaku?
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>>49199549
personally I think she's alright, I'd like to see her be something more than just a generic murderhobo, but you know, whatever.

Ideally, I'd like her to get stuck anywhere but the 11th division.
12th, 4th, anywhere really.
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>>49199644
>4th

That'd be funny.

She's got a boner (not literally) for fighting, but ends up in the Healing Corps.

Would be even funnier if her sword's abilities are useful both for fighting and healing. Like absorbing blood, or using spilled blood to heal people.
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>>49199549
>Also do you like kimi?
I like her so far, Hope to see more Samurai like stuff from her since apparently she was part of the Satsuma Rebellion, I hardly doubt she'd join something like that just for her jollies.
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>>49199557
usually the shikai release comes in the form of a command to the sword itself such as "Raise your head; Wabisuke"and such commands are usually short, so... something like "Bathe in blood; [sword name]" or perhaps "Exsanguinate; [sword name]!" (exsanguinate means "to drain of blood"). or maybe "cleave and consume; [sword name]"
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>>49199668
Doesn't strictly have to be, assuming she wouldn't mind applying her brain to learning how best to treat/heal people.
Then doing the opposite to the Gotei 13s enemies.

Same thing with the 12th really, but with a bit more "I wonder what would happen if".
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>>49199697

I like the idea of her in 4th, but I also don't mind her in 11th.

I don't really care for the 12th Division for this quest, though. Especially since Shinigami Quest had its QMC in the 12th.
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>>49199629
You know it's true.

>>49199633
Oh well, it's certainly the best written. And every single other Bleach Quest I've read is much lower in quality.
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>>49199612
110 years ago by time bleach started
this is between 200 *quicny purge* and 100 *ten years after hollowification*

Soooo

>>49199630
I think that would be hilarious, just because...

Oh shit, Isshin is stil a captain isn't he?

>>49199668
*nervous sweating*


>>49199640
he is also a possibility
Hell you could meet kenpachi sama before he iced the fat ass kenpach who no one likes

I mean rukia is a baby in the streets right now

>>49199644
Well she hasn't killed anyone yet, in quest
just walked and looked scary enough to be left alone and then met a friend after she passed out from hunger and sleep deprivation. A friend who acts a bit like a puppy

>>49199690
Hmm clever

>>49199697
I imagine mayuri would be one of the few entities to be able to creep out kimi.

Oh what a joy it'll be writing him when he comes into the picture
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>>49199449
God that's awesome, and Ichigo sound's like a pile of OP bullshit, like all the other Shonen protagonists.
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>>49199644
>>49199668
>>49199707
I'd rather her not join 4th since they aren't allowed in the human world and basically aren't allowed to fight.
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>>49199707
God I don't want the 11th, it's so shit.
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>>49199633
But why?
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>>49199716
>You know it's true.

I agree with >>49199633
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>>49199725
he's a eugenics experiment. but he is a poorly written character imo, even compared to other shonen protags.

but why do I love this piece of shit manga/anime so much?
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>>49199549
>I'll take suggestions
>Also do you like kimi?
um, I dunno. I don't have a good sense of her yet, besides being a no-nonsense stubborn and independent girl. if she had any hobbies while living, working them in might help. like, if she sang the line would fit better.

I'll comment on >>49199557 to give you an idea.
"sing to me" suggests an inherently self-centered character with a shikai to match. sound resonates and resounds, but the selfish nature of the target of the demand contradicts that verb and its implications.

'oh sweet blood' I assume is followed by the name. the shikai, then, is 'blood' and dear to the speaker, who we've already established as self-centered, while simultaneously being separate enough to be worth speaking to or commanding. the form of the shikai is probably somewhat sacrificial and inverted, given that the sword, 'blood', is both the subject and also a part of the speaker.

taken as a whole...I think it's confused and a little jumbly.

>>49199611
I don't like SSQ, really. it's very aimless 'lemme put a self-insert in to totally fix canon!' sort of quest. Queen changes some things to give a source of conflict, but nothing consequential. he promised a shakeup in the upper tier of the setting but all we got was 'aizen BUT COOLER i swear.' I haven't read a whole lot since thread 60 or so though, so...I like the dice system, at least. it's polarizing, overall.
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>>49199736
>reading fanfiction quests
>too fan ficy

As opposed to the others that are shining pillars of good story telling?

Fucking please.

Even if you don't personally like it is objectively the best.
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>>49199717
>*nervous sweating*
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>>49199741
Because it has an awesome setting.
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>>49199747
>As opposed to the others that are shining pillars of good story telling?

Yes.

And it's not the best to me.

>>49199753

Indeed.

Alt title for Bleach: Wasted Potential
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>>49199746
>I don't like SSQ, really. it's very aimless 'lemme put a self-insert in to totally fix canon!' sort of quest. Queen changes some things to give a source of conflict, but nothing consequential. he promised a shakeup in the upper tier of the setting but all we got was 'aizen BUT COOLER i swear.' I haven't read a whole lot since thread 60 or so though, so...I like the dice system, at least. it's polarizing, overall.

>aimless
The quest that's had the most consistent characters and plot, since thread one is aimless?

God the reaching is un-real tonight.
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>>49199765
Which one is then?
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>>49199717
>*nervous sweating*
Man I hope that isn't it, I find that really lackluster....
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>>49199777
I'll put it this way
the nodachi is the most...well let me put it this way

Horned one is damage over time/debuffs
Iron wall is the tank
Thunder taker is a wizard
Yours is more like...say burst damage or direct attacking compared to the other three
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>>49199766
>people don't agree with me
>"th-th-they're just reaching!"

>>49199776

Bleach Quests or fanfic quests?

Bleach Quests: They're all kinda alright. I personally like GHQ the best right now.

Fanfic Quests: HMQ, Shinobi Quest, Bloodquest, Mech Engineer Quest, others I might be forgetting.
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>>49199668
isn't Unohana's (captain of the 4th) bankai blood related? it's exact ability isn't known but the transformation see's a good portion of her swords blade turn into a blood like substance that flows off the blade leaving behind a shorter katana...
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I'm digging the violent delinquent vibe Kimi has. I like it when the QMC's have a strong voice right off the bat.
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>>49199819
Not...really, her bankai appears as blood but is closer in terms from what I can tell to being THE HORNED ONE, writ huuuuuge.

Christ, is she still currently going by Kenpachi?
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>>49199801
>g-g-green text is my defense

Subjectivity my old friend

>GHQ
>German Hollow

I can't take you seriously anymore, laughing too hard.

Although yeah, Shinobi is pretty great, based wargle
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>>49199819
Yeah, but kenpachi killed her before it could show what it did
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>>49199863
>g-g-green text is my defense

Same for you, apparently.

>I can't take you seriously anymore, laughing too hard.

Subjectivity, my old friend.
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>>49199865
It probably did exactly what the MC in this' sword does.
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>>49199873
Nah I like German Hollow fine, it's fun.

It's just not as good objectively as SSQ. I'd never claim it was.
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>>49199861
Me here

>>49199865
Is Unohana currently the captain of the 4th or a S+ grade murderhobo?
Not that she couldn't be as captain, just she at least kind of moved away from that after becoming captain.
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>>49199861
No, she was a founding member of the gotei 13
and Zarakai was the 11th kenpachi

So....unless nine of them died within a few decades...I don't think she is

I mean could be, but she seemed to have hidden it well, so I don't know. She's definitely still around, since she didn't just poof away for a hundred years for no reason to...I dunno live a secret life of cattle ranching

>>49199884
fuck shit up?
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>>49199897

Nothing is really objective.

It's my personal favorite Bleach quest.
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>>49199800
ah, im betting it's the dark knight style one with powerful attacks that cost hp...
makes me think of a certain family of katana's from the dark souls series.
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>>49199800
kill enemies
gather blood and build up meter
spend for big damage moves or BERSERKER RAGE
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>>49199917
I mean, from an analysis stand point, the two aren't comparable. In terms of grammar, characterization, actually having a plot.

But GHQ is really fun, and a bit ludicrous. I enjoy reading every thread.
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>>49199910
>fuck shit up?
Exactly!
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>>49199936
>In terms of grammar, characterization, actually having a plot

All personal opinion.
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>>49199904
4th

>>49199921
Oh that thing. the move set of it was neat as fuck

>>49199936
Checked in on a recent one
pretty sure they said they "out kuboed kubo"

>>49199946
Imagine if that's how all soul reaper's described their powers

Yamamoto shows his shikai
"These flames fuck up everyone's shit"
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>>49199951
It's really not dude...

At all.

His grammar in GHQ is so fucked
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>>49199766
the threads/anons are motivated by metagoals, things they think are cool or want to happen, like making the events pan out better for the good guys. riku doesn't have personal goals beyond those metagoals herself that aren't inertia. we're told a lot about 'whooo great shadow war there' but she kind of just sits on her ass and then reacts to things.

'consistent characters and plot' is a sign of competent technical work, but 'consistent characters and plot' isn't what counteracts the impression of aimlessness, movement and is. there's no sense of change over time, just constant leveling up to Captain++, or a feeling of struggle even when we're told Riku is trying really hard.

it's all very effortless, and, I mean, it's Shinigami SAVANT Quest, so it's pretty much all as advertised. effortless, though, means no actual goal or struggle, just a romp. not my cup of tea. compare a different quest, like Hive Queen. I know, it's jumping genres. but Queenie has a very tangible path that the reader can feel, from 'alone abandoned queen' to the galactic rusemistress she is today. she deals with similarly nebulous enemies as Riku, things hard to move openly against, but her story is much tighter and compelling than the meandering morass of SSQ.
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>>49199970
>It's really not dude...

But it is.

>His grammar in GHQ is so fucked

See >>49199972
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>>49199960
>Aizen
"This sword fuck's up your brain's shit"

>Kenpachi
"I fuck up your shit"
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>>49199972
>movement and is
fuck I forgot to type something in and now I can't remember what I wanted to put there
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>>49199960
>Yamamoto shows his shikai
>"These flames fuck up everyone's shit"

Reminds me of Dumbledore in My Immortal.
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>two anons can't stop dickwaving over how they like their fanfic steaks cooked.


stop using things as a part of your identity

>>49199921
or Akujiki for Shinobi for the PS2. nobody remembers that game.
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>>49199960
>out kuboed kubo
Eh we're trying but mostly I think we're just barely keeping ahead, i mean we're basically planning a "sudden but inevitable betrayal" of aizen, he's sure to have taken precautions. should be fun once we get done babysitting the strawberry
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>>49200011
>two anons can't stop dickwaving over how they like their fanfic steaks cooked.

>spoiler

I do. I mainly played the demo from the disc that came with that Playstation magazine, though.
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>>49199972
Hmm

I'm not buying it man, if you can't see her character I feel like that's on you.

And just what you said about SSQ can be said about HQQ.

She has no other goals besides what players want. And what QD wants.

It's opinions man, everyone is different and I really shouldn't begrudge you for feeling that way.

>>49199982
Nigger nothing in that had to do with grammar.

Piss off
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>>49200011
I remember that game.
I still own that game.

Was one of my favorites back when.

But seeing as we don't seem to be under the effects of a "murder people to not die" curse...are we?

Wait are we? Because I'd be fine with our zanpakuto spending most of our training as a somewhat lazy antagonistic force.
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>>49200011
Fair enough

and that Game was fucking awesome.
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>>49199993
Mayuri "I AM INTO FUCKED UP SHIT!"

Toshiro "I'll freeze the fuck out of your shit"

also for fun
Layla "YOU ARE ALL SO FUCKED!"

>>49200000
I have heard of that black text.

>>49200019
God when the invasion inevitably happens...shits gonna get fucked up.

Also, did I read that right? are you raising ichigo mc I am everything suck my nuts kurosaki?
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>>49200030
>Nigger nothing in that had to do with grammar.

But it did though.

Also, 3edgy5me.
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>>49200051
....Anon I

You might be retarded
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>>49200048
>Also, did I read that right? are you raising ichigo mc I am everything suck my nuts kurosaki?

Gin came to us with an assignment from Aizen saying, because we can hide our reiatsu, we go undercover as a high school student to ensure Ichigo doesn't die.
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>>49200048
Nah, the MC is getting sent to his high school

For reasons
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>>49200030
>and I really shouldn't begrudge you for feeling that way.

You totally are, though.

>>49200057

Oh really?
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>>49200059
I remember that plot from a few of the episodes
didn't the one vizard with the weird teeth do that to recruit tangerine hair?
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>>49200071
>didn't the one vizard with the weird teeth do that to recruit tangerine hair?

Maybe?

I know Shinji (I think that's his name) went there for some reason, but I can't remember why.
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>>49200070
>You totally are, though.
That was my attempt at saying live and let live.

I don't begrudge you, thanks for explaining it.
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>>49200071
Yeah but we're likely posing as a student and/or teacher.
TA?
Who knows, we'll figure it out on the way.
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>>49200068
that line just makes me think of all the manga where the heroine is a demon queen or some shit sent to school with the mc for reasons

Romance the mary sue
do it now
create the ultimate bloodline!

>>49200082
I meant Ikkaku went to the fucking highschool once in a gigai, so anything is possible
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>>49200097

Student, 'cause it's a teenage gigai.
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>>49200071
yup vizard dude did that, we're just making sure he doesn't die though as far as we've been told. now we get to play at being an old fashioned german exchange student. Personally I was hoping to masquerade as a teacher though.
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>>49200098
>I meant Ikkaku went to the fucking highschool once in a gigai, so anything is possible

True.

And it's Bleach, so really. Anything is possible.
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>>49200098
MC is a dude, and is "married" to Hallibell

that's totally not self inserty at all I swear guys
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>>49200110
We could still pull off TA with a teenage gigai and be able to lord Academic Backing over the ginger jackass.
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>>49200116
>now we get to play at being an old fashioned german exchange student.

But we have a translator in the gigai.

Unless we're an exchange student with perfect Japanese.

>>49200125

But it's not. It's just a character interacting with another character.

Plus it's not like the players didn't have a choice in the matter.
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>>49200098
>Romance the mary sue
>do it now
>create the ultimate bloodline

eh mc's married and has a grandkid (adopted daughter's kid), said grandkid is Dante from devil may cry btw.
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>>49200151
So what you're saying is everything about the quest is super serious, at all times.
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>>49200149
>Plus it's not like the players didn't have a choice in the matter.

Wasn't there a shitstorm about it? I don't even remember.

I just remember Nel getting thrown under the bus.
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>>49200116
I just see an image of a hollow just wearing a fake wig, hittler stache and leiderhosen trying to fit in a japanese high school

>>49200123
like what Kimi did with her new toy

>>49200151
force the grand kid to do it
EUGENICS

also I saw that in the thread
like...is it literally dante or just a hollow acting like one
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>>49200098
Question for you HM, Do you think Kimi is going to be a captain or a Lt? I imagine a Lt honestly because being a captain would be to much work for her.
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>>49200030
>It's opinions man, everyone is different and I really shouldn't begrudge you for feeling that way.
you can really only say 'you do you and I do me' to a certain extent. we're told Riku is a bit vicious and loyal and...and then we get short fluff scenes that are supposed to reinforce those impressions. she never...does anything though, except fight and stumble across JUST THE FAN FAVORITE CHARACTER SHE NEVER KNEW SHE NEEDED. it's a deliberately written crowd-pleasing way to do a fanfiction quest, but...that doesn't mean it's good. many enjoy that sort of quest, and I think it's clear from my clear investment in long-winded posts that I don't.

in comparison to Riku, Queenie and the Hive, like all quest-run characters, of course, have goals derived from the threads...but Queenie pursues her goals. after riku gets herself agency as a Captain and powerful spiritual being, she says to herself that she's in a shadow war with Aizen and justifies doing nothing so that the quest can get to canon timeframe.

honestly I don't think bleach is a good playground for quests. we only know about things directly relevant to the main character's quest and some mechanics and close to nothing about the world itself.

...so say I, for all that's worth.
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>>49200164
The most serious


The tone is weird oddly enough
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>>49200165

Not really.

Or at least not as far as I remember.
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>>49200166
It's as close as we can get to him being Dante while being hollow related.
So pretty much Dante with Demon swapped for Hollow.
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>>49200166

Kinda both, I guess?

He's like a weird Fullbringer Arrancar hybrid.
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>>49200173
I honestly don't think you're giving it a fair shot. It's also disingenuous to compare fanfiction to something original.

tl;dr: Fair enough, we aren't going to agree
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>>49200164
Totally~
Also we reformed spoon mantis into an actual character and there's been plans to make him get with his male fraccion that obviously feels for him.
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>>49200169
Depends on how well you do and who dies/ "dies"/ gets exiled/ fucks off into the hollow's magical fun park in cannon/ this quest

but being a captain may be too much work, but captains have been known to dump the paper work on their Lts

>>49200173
if they want to be in cannon time
just time skip

>>49200185
>>49200187
I still think he should fuck ichigo for science
because something fucked up has to be made from that union

Another ichigo perhaps?


>>49200195
Spoon mantis?
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>>49200195
>Also we reformed spoon mantis into an actual character

I love it, personally.

Also, Szayel, or whatever the fuck his name is, doesn't do shit. Which I like, since he's my least favorite character.
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>>49200165
Nel got bailed on en mass for at least seeming from the MC's perspective to have gone full loyalty towards Aizen and at least partially twisting our arm into making a deal with him.

She's also Dante's godmother so as to not completely alienate her prior to the sudden, inevitable betrayal.
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>>49200196

I like the idea of Kimi being Captain ready, but doesn't give that much of a fuck to get the promotion.
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>>49200193
I mean, I'm sitting here listening to these freaks describe GHQ and it just sounds like the stupidest thing with all the problems I ascribe to SSQ and more. So, yeah, whatever, I could probably go on and make a comparison to some other fanfiction quest I think actually is good, but it's not like internet arguments get me anything.
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>>49200196
Nnoitora is basically almost people in the quest.
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>>49200210
Eh, one of my complaints is her characterization.

It's a bit flip floppy

Kinda like Kaizar's really, but his is kinda sorta justified.
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>>49200196
one of the arrancars, the guy with a halberd that looks like an 8... uh Nnoitora I think is how you spell his name, his whole thing was just win by all means necessary and not much else in canon.
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>>49200215
>I mean, I'm sitting here listening to these freaks describe GHQ and it just sounds like the stupidest thing with all the problems I ascribe to SSQ and more. So, yeah, whatever, I could probably go on and make a comparison to some other fanfiction quest I think actually is good, but it's not like internet arguments get me anything.

Oh thank god I'm not the only one who saw that.

Which quest? I've probably read it
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D15gSD-tB4M
also here's the song I listened to while I started this thread. Mostly because of the smoke bit, and because I like afro samurai's music

>>49200199
Oh the guy who got the worst hand out of everyone in the cannon

Also, as a note, I have an irrational hatred of yammy myself

>>49200213
She misses her own promotion because she found something more interesting to do in her opinion .

Such shenanigans, such possibilities
>>49200222
Oh
so you're pulling a layla on him and making him slightly less of monster
>>49200228
also wasn't he sexist? I think I remember that somewhere

god I remember his fight with kenpachi, twas hype as shit
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>>49200237
>She misses her own promotion because she found something more interesting to do in her opinion .
I love it!
>"I told you several times already Old Man I'm not interested in becoming a captain!"
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>>49200237
>hatred of Yammy

He's alright. Definitely not my favorite, but I don't dislike him.

>She misses her own promotion because she found something more interesting to do in her opinion .

I like to think that the interesting thing she finds is actually kinda stupid.

Like watching a children's puppet show.
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>>49200230
Oh, well, it was meant more to be a general 'yeah I could probably think of something' than a reference to anything specific. If you made me pick out what I would compare it to...I'm really not actually sure what would be the best comparison. I picked Queenie originally since she does the shadow ops thing a lot, similarly to Riku, but that's not a very common trait in quest protagonists.

why, what were you thinking of?
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>>49200237
He had a major issue with nel iirc which may be where that stemmed from.

I don't really know, I follow the quest for shits and giggles, like I do most quests really...
huh... now that I think about it I don't think i've ever taken a quest as seriously as some anons seem to.
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>>49200254
>Like watching a children's puppet show.
I tried not to laugh

I failed
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>>49200275
I was just saying I've read far, far too many fanfiction quests.

So the odds are I've read it.
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>>49200276
People are passionate about what they enjoy.

S'not uncommon
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So are we gonna go for a samurai-esque character? Because I think that would be really fun, and I really liked the shiroyama idea earlier.
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>>49200305
She WAS a ronin, so probably.

I just don't want the 11th, don't do that to me
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>>49200305
Samuraiish I imagine, Not wholly.
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>>49200312
Honestly if we go for adoting some samurai traits, then the squad that goes to the living world might fit better.
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>>49200254
Ah I can't wait till next thread, want to flesh out Aya a bit more, and of course get more fighting/ training and stuff like that in, since it's beyond the intro thread

also I don't know why I hate Yammy, I just naturally despise some characters,and yammy is one of them

I think because he ate all those souls for no reason besides

"ha ha I'm evil"

Dunno, I just know I hate him for some reason

>>49200250
"is that treason I hear?"

>>49200276
I mean the quests I ran before becoming head master were silly

>>49200281
>>49200254
>Gets violently angry when it looks like the villain is going to win
>Sulks for the rest of the day looking like she's going to go postal *aka her normal angry face*
>Some poor hollow ends up looking like it
> they say you can still hear its screams on moonless nights

>>49200312
Imagine if she joined the kido corps

I mean her highest stat is spirit, so she is a natural with kido when you think about it.

But kido corps are FUCKING LAAAAAAAAAAAME
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>>49200327
>be good at kido
>Be angry at shit
>not be a sword only moron

Ahhhh, that's awesome
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>>49200327
Kido corps is fine.
Really.
You know who's really lame? 5.
5 is literally the "hufflepuff" even including the movie focused solely on Aizen's replacement.

About the only thing that managed to establish is that 5's captain is ALWAYS evil.
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>>49200327
Agreed Kido is corps is laaaame
Also really liking how Kimi's turning out now, Can't wait for next thread either!
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>>49200375
She does feel different than everyone else in HM's quests huh?

It's nice
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>>49200353
Besides shinji, but who knows, maybe he'll decided to pick up baby cricket or something equally vile.
>>49200375
Same here

>>49200385
I know, I'm wondering why that is, can't put my finger on it.

>>49200349
I bet it could throw enemies off due to how she looks in general
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>>49200327
I only know your stuff from ASQ and onward, but even quests that try to be super dark and serious don't get that reaction from me, quests are games to be enjoyed regardless of how much death, pain, and agony are depicted, I mean I spent most of ASQ laughing in unholy glee at layla's combat sequences, dawwing over her and maria or laughing at side character antics. speaking of which I wonder if there's a Request Guy equivalent in soul society.
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>>49200424
Request guy in soul society....so an angry urahara?

Mayuri?

someother member of 12th?

some random bum with magical troves of bullshit?

KEEP TUNED AND FIND OUT
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>>49200451
And now i'm picturing kimi in the 12th wearing a tattered lab coat while forging some edged abomination to test out on some unsuspecting hollows. I mean int is one of her higher stats...
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>>49200451
Thanks for running HM.
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>>49200489
as is endurance, which is a very useful skill in the 12th
>>49200497
thank you for playing
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Not gonna lie, I am hyped as shit for this quest, and will be advocating we keep some samurai traits from when we were alive (because the shiroyama idea is fucking awesome, and if you think about it, hollows would totally flock to a battleground like that.)
Things like fighting opponents head-on instead of the traditional shinigami method of ganking them from behind, being highly respectful to our sword, utter disdain for the 11'th for being a bunch of fuckin idiots who don't know what the word "tactics" means, maybe a personal code such as bushido.
Hell maybe even just bodyguarding the little bird in an attempt to relive our glory days.
>>49200327
GHQ nnoitra killed yammy before he even got to say a line.
We just came back to base one day and nnoitra was chilling outside sitting on a giant hollow corpse.
He asked us if we thought the skull would make a good chair.
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>>49200601
You have good tastes my friend

I can imagine it all already.

Can't wait till the first hollow fight, simply because of how I'd like to see you guys deal with it.

Also, good on spoon mantis for killing that ugly fat bastard
motherfucker didn't even like his lil hollow puppy
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>>49200654
I want to become an unbeatable swordsman not because of brute strength like kenpachi, but because of TECHNIQUE. Our strength score isn't our highest right now, and I'm okay with that. I want to be this world's Battosai the Manslayer
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>>49200701
Unique style will play into that I think
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>>49200720
we gonna run into any filler stuff?

I wouldn't mind killing them
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>>49200751
the bounts?
What about when the sword spirits get out?
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>>49200720
Yeah that winning, combined with the shiroyama idea is pretty much WHY I want that.
>>49200756
Samurai treat their sword like a literal part of them. That bastard is gonna be in for a rude surprise if he tries to take her from us.
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>>49200756
or those pissy mod soul clones whose evil leader's plans could have been easily thwarted by murdering that green haired bitch
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>>49200756
Hey TH I found a thing I think you might like.
https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hope-corgi-all-will-be-well-dc-foz.30972/
A blue lantern winds up in familiar of zero.
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>>49200756
Ehhh I don't really like that arc, Also PLEASE tell me you won't be doing the fullbring arc, Mr book is just sooooo much bullshit.
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>>49200787
Commander Facebook is a bastard yeah.
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>>49200787
I don't know shit about the full bringers, and its well in the normal bleach stuff, so most probably not
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>>49200787
he can be beaten. Byakuya killed facebook friend because he is a pro at killing people he loves and muh duty!



I thought the Fullbringer arc had real potential. been kicking around a Fullbringer Quest idea in my head
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>>49200796
Thank god you aren't planning on doing it facebook is so bullshit.
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>>49200808
Do it anon, I believe in you

>>49200824
Like...raz bullshit, layla bullshit, or emily bullshit
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>>49200808
The fullbringer idea HAD potential, because they're just at that right level of power where unless they have some strong conceptual bullshit, they REALLY need to struggle against simple hollows. It's a much more visceral fight for survival.
>>49200830
His power was a bookmark that became a sword. If he stabbed people with it, he could insert himself into their past whenever he wanted to, essentially becoming their best friend/the most important person in their life. And then he had an alternate mode where it was basically just a cutting plane that could slice through pretty much anything. That arc was fucking weird.
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>>49200830
Let's say this, YOu know how Layla feels about Maria? He can make it so that he replaces Maria.
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>>49200796
Chad is a fullbringer.

You know how he talks about how important his arms are to him? and then he learns Mega Punch? and then they mention its kinda like a hollow's mp/go juice/mana etc?

they're basically stands like from Jojo but instead of some ghost named after a band, its some keepsake that's important to you/something you just really like. and your mom got attacked by a hollow while she was preggers. and you can pass on your power and share and trade it or just ditch it if you don't want it.

>>49200830
like all of the Bleach animu is on Hulu if you wanna give it a watch

>>49200844
Tsukishima was the perfect villain to fuck with "Gotta protect my friends!!!" MC.
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>>49200858
And that picture basically explains where the "Commander Facebook" nickname came from BTW.
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>>49200845
....wow that some next tier bullshit
>>49200844

>>49200858
so it's like hollow aid then

>>49200844
Sounds like bullshit
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>>49200882
people can become aware of it if he meddles with their memories too much
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>>49200882
>so it's like hollow aids then
It is exactly like hollow aids yes. Only it doesn't kill you.
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>>49200919
So basically, his own attention whoring is his weakness
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>>49200927
it only makes you stronger?
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>>49200808
Just remember the fundamental issue with Bleach: nobody was 100% satisfied with it and almost everyone is dissatisfied for different reasons. Because of that nobody can agree on what "Bleach done right" even looks like, so always take criticism with a grain of salt.
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>>49200942
That is very true
and remember, silver rule of qming
Have fun
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>>49200985
>>49200942

it will have to wait. need to think up the plot, and the Fullbrings and etc

a Street Fighter Quest is more likely to happen imo



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