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>Twitter: https://twitter.com/DiceToTableTop

>OOC: Previously, on Shipgirl Commander >>176390

‘Akashi, they tried to get me to you; don’t drag her into this,’ You say seriously, moving yourself to get to your feet, but finding your shoulder – and your person, effectively – roughly shoved down with a hand and a glare from your attending physician, ‘I wanted to check on my team before I went to you for a check-up.’

‘Oh, and just when did you get this delusion that you were suddenly an expert on the matter of your injuries?’ Akashi’s eyes narrow, and you see the others shaking their head at you, as though you’d made it worse. ‘You wouldn’t be dragging yourself to the MASH in the first place if you thought that you could patch yourself up just as well, now, would you?’

Her tone is accusing now, and you can hardly blame her. Nonetheless, you’d promised yourself to defuse this situation before it got any worse, and defuse it you would – or rather, try to defuse it, anyway. You bring yourself to full height, despite the hand on your shoulder. You’re not being stubborn or dismissive of her actions, but you are insistent of your point.

‘Akashi,’ you say calmly with a small smile, ‘if I just barged into your office and demanded that you fixed me up… you would, I know that,’ she looks at you in confusion, but you nonetheless continue, ‘but if I did that, how’d you think it’d look?’

‘It’d look like it’d be you letting me do my job.’

‘It’d look like I’d be thinking that I’m a league higher than anyone else around here.’ He nods to the Vice-Admiral, who was frantically waving his hands and shooting a look at you that demanded you keep him out of it. ‘Akashi, you’re more than just my attending medic,’ you run a hand through your hair, ‘you’re in everyone’s attending medic.’ You smile at her again, hoping that pulled it off as well as it you believed it would. ‘I think a guy with bruises and cuts can wait at the back of line, right?’

‘I still think you should have come straight to me, you know.’ She grumbles, before smiling, giving your prosthetic a good pat. ‘I’d hate to think that I did all this for a guy who’d drop into trouble the moment he did a morning stretch.’

The whole room rings with coughs.

‘You’re a Commander, you know.’ Akashi says, touching your tender jaw with her delicate fingers. ‘Your health is as important to me as it is to this Base.’

Did the temperature just drop?

‘Come on, lie down.’ Akashi takes a bandage from her coat. ‘How’d this happen, anyway?’

>Lie
>Be truthful
>Joke about it
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>>199886
>joke
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>>199886
waifu war
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>>199886
>Joke about it
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>>199886
>Joke about it
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>>199894
>>199908
>>199918
I think we should tell the truth with the joke though.
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>>199886
>Joke about it
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>>199886
>>Joke about it
Casualty in a waifu war. Don't ask. Wasn't my fault anyhow.
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>>199926
Nah man. This "waifu war" was totally our fault. Don't lie to our doc.
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>>199886
>>Joke about it
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>>199886
>Joke about it
Waifu's are serious business.
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You lie down, your head against the rather hard pillow. Akashi takes a rather large bottle from the inside of her coat, setting it down on the apparatus next to you. Briefly, you wonder if there are any needles involved – Akashi doesn’t take one out, but she does take a sealed piece of cloth with some gibberish over it… and a picture of a fairy wagging its finger.

A real fairy does pop up soon, taking its place on Akashi’s head, looking at you curiously.

‘So what happened?’ Akashi repeats, this time in a more demanding voice as she reaches for a bottle on the lower tray of the apparatus next to you. You look to the Vice-Admiral, who gives you a nod of acknowledgment – the all-clear to disclose.

That didn’t mean you couldn’t be a little more imaginative with it.

I took up boxing.’ You nod seriously; Akashi raises an eyebrow at you, pursing her lips.

‘I see.’ She replies, taking out a small notepad from the tray.

‘Thing is, though,’ you say with a grimace, ‘I think my head’s gone a little fuzzy…’ Akashi looks a little worried now, ‘did we have a conversation yesterday? I think we did… can’t remember what we were talking about, though.’

‘We did. I gave you a bunch of my reports on Tenryuu and Nachi…’ she bites her lip, ‘That jog anything?’

Akashi pours some of the bottle's contents onto the cloth.

‘No,’ you shake your head, and Akashi’s eyes do grow wide this time, ‘but it rings a bell.’

She presses on your jaw with it.

Hard.

‘I thought you were my medic!’

You gingerly hold your cheek, while Akashi nonchalantly glares at you, her hand gleaming with the moist blue aura that came from the Fairy’s Tears. None of the KanMusu, not even the Vice-Admiral, moves into to assist you. You would be rolling around with eyes wet if your pride allowed it, but you take it on the (proverbial) chin, sending a look of betrayal at your attending medic, who gestures with a tilt of her head to remove your hand.

You shake your head petulantly. That had hurt.

Akashi would not be denied, however – and for someone who was barely taller than Houshou, she had a tremendous strength to her person, enough to get pry your hand away for another – albeit gentler – dab of the cloth. It stings, and you grit your teeth to manage the pain, but Akashi is relentless – and thorough – in her care of your head.

‘Commander, I know you and the Vice-Admiral had a scuffle.’ She glares harder. ‘What I’m asking is what in the world could have made you idiots – !’

‘Hey!’

‘Think was so important that it’s worth a pair of bad ankles, a bruised jaw, a cut on the head, bruised knuckles, shoulders, and, as you put it,’ She takes out a wrap of bandages. ‘my precious time?’

You mumble incoherently.

‘Guy stuff.’

Akashi rolls her eyes, applying the ointment, or whatever this was, more thoroughly on your jaw.

>Write-In
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>>200017
>>Write-In
Waifu wars. I named you as one of the contenders.
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>>200017
Over women and my ego.
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>>200017
>deflect
"Anyway, I've been having hallucinations while talking to people. Of a weird cave, and of floating over water. "
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>>200017

This >>200119
We need to find out why that happened.
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>>200119
this
>hey akashi, i've been having hallucinations even though i've been taking my pills, what the fuck man

did we take our pills? i don't remember
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>>200165

Earlier yeah. So the last chapter.
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‘I know you’re probably not in the mood, but I want to – !’

‘Take off your top.’ Akashi says, not looking up from her clipboard at all.

‘What?’ You feel a little conscious – battered and worn after only a day they were, but you did not feel all right stripping yourself in front of your Division; never mind that you and Takao had no secrets from each other where that counted.

‘I’ll get you a new set from surplus – they probably have a bunch lying around that’s your size.’ Akashi says so almost automatically, again gesturing to your shirt with a nod. ‘So, strip.’

‘I’d rather…’ You nervously begin, only for Akashi to indicate with a point of a finger that she didn’t have a care about how conscious you were about your… figure. You begin unbuttoning, albeit reluctantly. ‘I’d be happy to.’

Tenryuu pops out of her tortoise blanket fortress, sending you a look that said all that could be said of your current predicament and just how she was enjoying your embarrassment. You scan a look across the tent and see that those present busy themselves with other things – chatting with each other, mostly.

‘Don’t worry, Commander.’ Tenryuu chirps with a grin. ‘We don’t wanna look at you anyway.’

‘Thanks, Tenryuu.’ You offer sarcastically, to which her grin only grows wider.

Strangely enough, now relieved of your shirt, you feel a mite more free. The sudden stinging touch of Akashi’s tender cloth hits you again and you fight back a recoil – mostly for your pride. You don’t think that the KanMusu under your Division would appreciate seeing you roll around like a baby. Akashi’s cloth stings, but there’s also a soothing feeling from them – now, mostly at your jaw. Whatever it was Akashi was doing with that, you find yourself welcoming it as she continued.

The bandage fits around your head comfortably, and your body, still stinging, is tended to by a few more patches Akashi applied to you. As she seems to put the last of the wraps and patches around your forearm, you find it appropriate to ask her a question that had on your mind.

‘Akashi, am I supposed to be getting any side-effects from the pills you gave me?’

‘No.’ She presses quickly. Your shoulders are in less pain, but more sensitive. ‘Why?’

‘I’ve… been seeing things.’ You admit.

‘Commander?’ Akashi looks at you, once again with worry. ‘Seeing things?’

‘You know, like, last night… I felt… I saw…’ You remember it vividly, the aggression… the control… the focus. ‘I was Shigure, Nachi and Temryuu all at once.’

She drops her bandage roll.

Ex – Excuse me?’

‘The Quickening.’

You turn to see Nagato, her arms crossed and looking at you seriously. Then to the Vice-Admiral… whose grin could split a mountain.

‘Now this is interesting.’

>Ask Nagato
>Ask Vice-Admiral
>Ask Akashi

OOC: I was gonna put that for later. Sheesh!
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>>200281
>>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200281
>>Ask Akashi

We mentioned it to Akashi, so might as well start with her.
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>>200281
>Ask Akashi
She better give us a straight answer.
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>>200281
>Ask Akashi
Give it to me straight doc.
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>>200281
>Ask Akashi
akashi, by the love of all dont tell me i am even more cyborg-y
it is cool and all but, didnt ask for this and bla bla bla
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>>200281
>Ask Akashi
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>>200281
>Ask Nagato
Apparently she knows/suspect something.
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OOC: Just to clarify, the Vice-Admiral is the one who just said the last line. Sorry. 'The Quickening' is said by Nagato.
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>>200281
>Ask Nagato
But he hasn't beheaded anyone lately. Has he?
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>Ask Vice-Admiral
He used to do what we do. He might know something from the human perspective.
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>>200281
>Ask Nagato
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>>200281
>Ask Akashi
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>>200339
It was pretty clear who said what imho. still going for
>Ask Nagato
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Akashi looks a little surprised at you; you yourself have a sense of dread washing over you like a waterfall. She feels

‘Akashi, what – what’s the Quickening?’

‘It’s an uncommon phenomenon.’ Akashi bites her lip, looking worriedly at you, then back to the Vice-Admiral as you follow their looks, you see the Vice-Admiral nod in her direction; she continues, sighing. ‘Commander, do you know what they call the link forged between the KanMusu and their Human in the RAY Interface?’

You frown at her.

‘Of course I do.’ You rub the back of your neck, feeling your intelligence a little insulted. It’s called the Stream.’ She beckons for you to continue, and you don’t feel insulted anymore – you feel that they’re justified. ‘I didn’t… memorize it proper, but from what the proctors said it’s like… if you have a strong spirit, a strong mind… you make the KanMusu… stronger or something?’

‘In layman’s terms, you’re right.’ Akashi takes a stand. ‘What the – what makes the RAY such a marvel of human and fairy engineering and magic is that it dips into the human resonant field – the plane that your soul, your mind and body operate on unconsciously, and enables it to be tapped into and to anchor the KanMusu’s spirit onto this plane and their plane more effectively. This event thus allows the KanMusu’s in question… to fight better.’

You don’t get that gibberish, but it did – somewhat – sound like what the proctors had said before they stamped the big red mark on your examination.

‘Well, so what does that mean for me? The Stream and all that, I get, but… what does this… the Quickening? Do I just take some more meds for it, or something?’

Akashi seemingly ignores you, closing her eyes in concentration. You feel a little more dread coming over you as she mumbles to herself – from your experience, whenever doctors talked under their breath, they were either annoyed with you or were about to give you bad news. You didn’t care much for either one.

‘No,’ she says with a finality, looking at you with a smile, ‘I’m sorry, your… your case, if it really is a Quickening is quite hard to find.’ She actually looks happy for a moment, which you don’t care much for either – she looks at you like you’re a science experiment gone wrong in the right way. ‘In 45 cases of Admirals and other KanMusu Command Personnel since the formation of the Admiralty, only 7 have exhibited the evidence of a Quickening.’

‘Again, still not getting what a Quickening is!’

‘It’s a psychic feedback. An after-effect of pushing into the Stream with the KanMusu that sticks with you even after you cut the link. From old studies, I think yours is just the first phase of such an experience!’

She sounds a little too happy. Maybe Nagato or the Vice-Admiral can explain it better.

>Ask Nagato
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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OOC: RETCONNING that 45 to 34 and that 7 to a 6.
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>>200490
>>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200490
>Ask Nagato
HELP
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>>200490
>Ask Nagato
That's swell and all, but I had hallucinations before I even tried to use the RAY. When the Admiral enrolled me, I saw a cavern. Nagato, you were there ...?
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>>200490
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200525
OOC: Sorry if I sound annoyed, but I am BUILDING UP TO THAT. Sheesh. This whole OPENING SCENE is to address ALL your hallucinations and WHY you have them. God damn it.
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>>200490
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200536
I'm just explaining my vote: Nagato has been present to one occurrence and had some reaction iirc.
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>>200490
>Ask Nagato
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>>200490
>Ask Nagato

Also we should make a joke about Highlander.
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>>200490
>Ask Nagato
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>>200490
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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‘Nagato?’

You look to your Battleship, her lips hidden by a fist, a frown upon her features; she definitely looks like she’s pondering something. You open your mouth, but Nagato suddenly snaps to attention and looks at you with wide eyes, as if a sudden, shocking realization had come upon her being.

‘The fairies… they must have given it to you.’ Nagato says, barely above a whisper. ‘Or at least opened it up for you to tap into.’

‘Excuse me?’ You’re now more lost than ever.

‘Commander, do you remember that time in the Command tent?’ Nagato jogs your memory a little more. ‘When you took the oath to be sworn in to the Admiralty?’

‘Yeah?’ You raise an eyebrow, rubbing your shoulder, before jolting up, your jaw hurting as you address Nagato, a little annoyed and very much surprised. ‘Wait, you knew I saw that cave?! With the fairies?!’

Nagato looks away, biting her lip.

‘I sensed something.’ She says, an unsure tone creeping into her voice. ‘I couldn’t be quite sure what it was.’ She then nods, her face grim. ‘That must have been when they activated it. They must have cast something, but I thought that… because it was so typical, I only thought they’d merely cushioned and fully activated your Stream abilities with the recital of the Oath.’

‘Why didn’t you tell me any of this before?’

‘Because I’ve been to the induction of almost a dozen Commanders and they’re all the same.’ She answers, annoyed with your accusatory tone, before slumping her shoulders. ‘I didn’t think to check with you; that… that’s an oversight on my part.’

At least you weren’t crazy. That was nice to know.

‘Do you know what the Quickening is?’

‘It’s a bond.’ She holds her hands up, moving them – open and close. ‘It’s an after-effect of the Stream; as Akashi said, there haven’t been many cases of it.’ She nods to Akashi, who nods right back. ‘I didn’t think that you’d be one of those with one, sir.’ She slumps her shoulders, crossing her arms. ‘Sorry.’

‘Don’t be. I kinda get I’m the bottom of the – !’

‘It has nothing to do with that.’ She cuts you off with a wave of her hand. ‘Sir, when you went into the Stream in the RAY, when the team were in danger, their heightened emotions must have fed back to you. Your resonance field and theirs matched.’ She finishes.

That made sense, you supposed. You were very much anxious and more panicky than the typical Commander… and Nagato had said – what happened, happened. It felt a little ironic a trait that you wanted to be rid off ended up giving birth to this situation.

And if I would…’

Nagato looks at you, then to the bed, then to Nachi and Tenryuu, to Takao… before turning beet red and trembles, looking at the ceiling.

‘Nagato?’

'This is really happening...'

The Vice-Admiral barks loudly.

>Ask Vice-Admiral
>Write-In
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>>200793
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200793
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200793
>Write-In
>be suspicious
food your commander can't eat, stream activation... Are there more "typical" things you're hiding?
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>>200793
>Ask Vice-Admiral

Or maybe
>Fire your sidearm into the air and yell.
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>>200793
>Ask Vice-Admiral
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>>200793
>Ask Nachi and Tenryuu what they think of this whole Quickening business.
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>>201099
This then. The Vice-Admiral is kind of a jerk, trying to force us into impressing our troops instead of caring about them.
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>>200793
>vice-admiral: well sir, any closing comments?
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>>201099
this
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>>201137
We bonded with him now though.
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>>201137
Vice-Admiral is alright in my book.
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>>201182
Plus i have a sinking feeling he was one who went through the quickening
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>>201099
I'm cool with this.
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>>200793
>>201099
This
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>>200793
>>Ask Vice-Admiral
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So when are we going to get fuck Nagato's armpits?
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>>202499
never
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>>200967
Dude it was funny the first few times but now it's just annoying.
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>>202499
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>>200967
Dude, you must resolutely wait until a moment where we have socially fucked up on an inconceivable level, when we have messed up so badly that doing the stupid thing sounds like a good option.
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‘I’m a little surprised you didn’t know full details about the Stream.’

‘Not more than what they told us during the auditions.’ You shake your head, feeling a little embarrassed.

You bite your lip as the Vice-Admiral sets his crutches down and the creak of the bed reaches your ears. To tell the truth, right now you’re more than a little worried. You hadn’t excelled in the application, and were a little slow on the uptake, but having so much dropped on you… it made you a little more curious than you would have expected when you first threw your name into the ballot.

‘Vice-Admiral, if there’s anything you can tell me…’

‘I do.’ He nods. ‘Still, if Nagato is right about sensing the fairies giving you a Quickening, I’d keep that under wraps.’ He gestures to Nagato, then to Akashi. ‘Akashi, I want this conversation strictly off the records.’

‘What conversation?’ She doesn’t look up from her clipboard.

‘Good girl.’

‘What’s the difference between my Quickening and the other… six cases?’

‘For one, and this is following Nagato’s suspicion, I kid you not, you’re the first one to have a pathway opened up for them.’ He says seriously. ‘Like Akashi said, there were six cases before you – none of them were bestowed; most of them were activated from an involuntary reflex, trauma, battle high, whatever it is you want to call it.’

The Admiral takes out a toothpick from his pocket, chewing on it.

‘You know about the Override, correct?’

‘Yeah… somewhat.’ You admit.

‘Think of the Quickening as the complete opposite of that.’ He nods solemnly. ‘You can’t get more naked than to bare your soul to someone; where you’re at your most vulnerable – the Shamans called it Empathy Resonation; the vast majority of humanity has it, but only a select few can access it without having their brains fried or worse.’

Your attendant’s words reach you again.

‘That’s why the Admiralty an application process – they’re not weeding out the weak. They weed out the people who can’t keep it under control – and, of course, the ones who screw up their tests.’ He gives you a smirk. ‘Those with Empathy Resonation under control can keep the Stream going without burning out in it.’ He looks away from you. ‘Those people are the ones we bring into the Reserve and into the Command units. People like you.’

‘That doesn’t explain to me what it really is, though.’

‘The RAY Interface opened a back door into your mind from your Squadron’s experiences – one that was already unlocked, presumably, by the fairies.’ He says, fumbling over his own words. ‘When you stepped into the RAY Interface, the Synchronization opened it.’

He smirks at you.

‘Must be a nice.’

>Suspect/Perceive (Roll a 1d6 each)
>‘Is there anything else I should know about this?’
>‘How are the KanMusu effected by this?’
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Rolled 1 (1d6)

>>203842
>>Suspect/Perceive (Roll a 1d6 each)
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Rolled 5 (1d6)

>>203842
>Suspect/Perceive (Roll a 1d6 each)
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Rolled 1 (1d6)

>>203842
>Suspect/Perceive
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Rolled 5 (1d6)

>>203842
>>Suspect/Perceive (Roll a 1d6 each)
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>>203842
>‘How are the KanMusu effected by this?’
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>>203842
>‘How are the KanMusu effected by this?’
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Rolled 4 (1d6)

>>203842
>Suspect/Perceive (Roll a 1d6 each)
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>>203848
>>203850
>>203855
>>203856
You guys

>>203906
Are lucky. Write-up in 30 minutes.
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‘Vice-Admiral, you’re…’ Your eyes widen as you realize just what it was that he had brought up. ‘you’ve had it too, haven’t you?’

‘Yeah… I’m one of ‘em.’ The Admiral laughs mirthlessly.

‘Was it like mine?’ You’re a little too enthusiastic, and catch yourself; the Vice-Admiral was an enigma, but that didn’t mean you couldn’t be delicate about the situation.

‘I was the fourth to be diagnosed with a Quickening.’ He says, matter-of-factly. ‘It was on my… third mission, I think… in the summer.’

‘What happened?’ Your curiosity rises to the surface; you rub your bare shoulder with your prosthetic, hanging on his word.

‘Like I said, high-intensity situation, enemies coming from all sides, going way over my head.’ He laughs, once again, mirthlessly – and with a hint of disgust to his person. ‘Thing that made mine special was… I hit the Override.’

The whole room looks at the Vice-Admiral as though he’d just confessed to a crime; even Nagato stiffens slightly as she hears the words leave his mouth. He scans the room, not missing a beat, continuing his tale.

‘Pried it open, forced my way into the fold; we’d already lost our CL, and the CAs were taking way too much punishment for them to keep going. I think… I think we were about to lose the objective – we were being outgunned.’ He snaps his fingers, smiling darkly. ‘I hit it… and forced my Resonance to match theirs.’

He looks at you with a mix of emotions – regret, conviction, justification, among others. You could only understand it too well… you would have hit the button, too.

Wouldn’t you?

‘You don’t think that a life and a mind don’t have the same bearing, but when you hit that switch…’ He shakes his head. ‘I can attest, to you and for your benefit, that it’s one threshold you don’t ever want to meet.’

‘My Quickening happened as soon as the mission ended and I stepped out of the interface.’ He recalls. ‘I was on a beach with black sand, and the fairies on the horizon, dancing. I went into some kind of trance and was bed-ridden for a month – happens to half of the cases.’ He sighs. ‘When I got out I felt like I’d been upgraded or something… and that half my Division – or what was left of it – had transferred.’

‘Why?’

‘Because of the Override.’ Nachi practically snarls. She’d approached the bed. ‘So you’re the one Myoukou-nee talked about.’

‘You knew Myoukou?’ The Vice-Admiral looks up.

‘She was my sister.’

Nachi grits her teeth.

‘You… I don’t even know what to say to you. I don’t know whether to thank you for bringing her home alive… or to tear you a new one for what you did.’

‘Nachi.’

‘Butt out, Tenryuu.’

‘Nachi.’ You raise yourself to your feet.

>Assert Yourself (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
>Placate Nachi
>Support the Vice-Admiral
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>>204019
>Placate Nachi
Asking for rolls before the choice is decided isn't nice.
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Rolled 2 (1d12)

>>204019
>Be Diplomatic
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>>204032
Changing my vote

>Placate Nachi
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Rolled 4 (1d12)

>>204019
>>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
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>>204031
If I specify a 1d12, only one guy needs to get 8+.
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Rolled 2 (1d2)

>>204019
>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
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>>204019
>Placate Nachi
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>>204055
>1d2
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Rolled 7 (1d12)

>>204019
>>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
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Rolled 9 (1d12)

>>204019
>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
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Rolled 2 (1d12)

>>204055
whoops
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>>204019
>Placate Nachi into asserting yourself.
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>>204079
So does this mean we're going the diplomatic route?
If so, I'm in full support of it.
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Rolled 9 (1d12)

>>204019
>Be Diplomatic (Roll a 1d12. 8+ is a success)
May as well try.
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>>204116
/tg/ can't NOT go full diplomancer
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‘Nachi.’ You voice is still calm, surprising even yourself. ‘Please remember that you’re addressing a superior officer.’

‘You – !’

‘Please.’ You nod to her, addressing her not as a Commander… but as a person.

She looks at you with a look that could only be described as betrayal. It hurts a little bit, but you feel that where you stood right now – between a possible conflict – was the right one. She snarls at you, gesturing with her head to intimidate you into backing down from your position. You look up to her from your seat, unflinching. The Vice-Admiral is looking at you, but you don’t look back.

Takao is hesitant to step in… or rather, it seemed more like she was trusting you with the situation.

You certainly hoped you could repay that faith in the next few moments, because you had a woman capable of leveling a whole building looking at you with something that would have sent most men running for the hills.

‘What? You’re butt buddies with him now?’ She practically spits out.

Nachi!’ Nagato warns, but Nachi would have none of it, marching right up to the Vice-Admiral; at this you raise yourself, getting between the both of them before anything could proceed.

You put your hands in your pockets, mumbling a calming mantra under your breath. Nachi had turned her attentions to Nagato – and her record for insubordination was on full show now, if it wasn’t before – and for a moment you admire someone who had the guts to stand up to someone higher than their weight class…

Until you realize, of the two of them, Nachi was deadlier.

‘And you’re gonna just stand there next to a guy who – who violated my sister and you’re gonna side with him?!’ She practically yells at Nagato, pointing an accusing finger at the now-tense Battleship. ‘You know what it’s like, you uppercrust snob?!’ She turns to the Vice-Admiral, her face scrunched in anger. ‘You gonna draw a diagram, Vice-Admiral?’

You feel a touch on your left arm, and realize it’s the Vice-Admiral’s gesture to you to move out of the way. He doesn’t look at Nachi, his eyes focused elsewhere… or his mind is, you can’t tell proper; he’s more still than an empty pond, a serenity… and fire to his expression that you can’t make sense of.

‘I have no excuses, soldier.’ He says softly, a sad smile gracing his lips. ‘The bones can’t handle that kind of weight anymore.’

Nachi bares her fangs.

Nachi.’ This time your voice takes a warning tone.

‘You’re gonna keep protecting your butt buddy there, wannabe?’ She throws you an ugly look - a sneer full of contempt. ‘We’re in here because of you, so don’t think for a moment that you got any weight in here!’

You don’t rise to it. You want to get your point across.

‘I would have hit that switch too.’

TBC
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‘Y – You – !’

You don’t see it, but you expect it. Nachi throws a straight right hook to your cheek, dropping you to a knee. You feel yourself shake from the pain, and you wonder if a bone is clocked as she had hit where the Vice-Admiral had clocked you – repeatedly – not too long ago. Everyone looks in shock, unable to believe the scene unfolding before them. You yourself find it hard to believe that Nachi – even with her given record – had struck so hard.

Even worse, it felt like she wasn’t pulling any punches, either. She’d struck you good.

SIR!’

Nagato rushes to you, her worried gaze blocking your view of your assaulter. You don’t want to, but hold onto her arm to get your bearings a little better. You see Akashi, more furious than you ever thought she had the capacity to be, getting to her feet, clipboard cluttering on the floor as she rounded on her. It didn’t matter to Akashi, it would seem, that she wasn’t a combat-inclined KanMusu.

A part of you wondered if Akashi would win at the end of the day on sheer vitriol.

‘Nachi, you psycho – !’ Tenryuu was on her feet by now, glaring daggers out of her good eye at her fellow Division member; Nachi paid her no heed, however, trembling with rage and looking down at you.

You raise your hand to stop her. All eyes are on you, now.

‘If it meant bringing your sister back alive… would you have done it, Nachi?’ You wince, getting to your feet with Nagato’s help. You smirk at her, gingerly touching your cut lip. ‘Asking as a wannabe here.’

‘Commander – !’ Nagato doesn’t want to let go yet, but you assure her with a hand on the shoulder.

‘I’m all right, Nagato.’ You insist, this time rounding on the furious KanMusu. She tries to say something, but a swipe of your hand shuts her up. ‘The Vice-Admiral made the choice. He made the choice that rather than being a corpse at the bottom of the sea, he would be happier knowing that she hated his guts and still breathing.

‘I don’t need to know this man for fifty years to know that. That he made the call not to complete the objective – but to make sure that she’d reach home alive.’

Nachi raises another fist to strike you, tears at the corners of her eyes. You raise your prosthetic, catching the blow, to her shock.

‘He’d rather you hate him and still breathe than step to the pew and give a eulogy on how brave you are.’

You meet her eyes, daring her to cut you off.

‘So I’d do it in a heartbeat, and I’d sign off on your transfer the next day.’

Nachi doesn’t say anything; you feel her considerable strength pressing against your prosthetic, and you wonder why your knees don’t buckle…

She pulls back her fist, nursing her wrist.

‘I’m not saying sorry.’ She insists… but you do hear a reluctance to her tone as she looks away, holding her arms.

You rub your cheek, wincing.

>Write-In
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>>204226
>"You don't need to. Just get some rest."
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>>204226
>"You don't need to. Just get some rest."
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>>204226
>'You just did.' Then try to get this ship (your company) straight before you anchor (=sleep).
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>>204226
>"You don't need to. Just get some rest."
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>>204226
>'As long as you understand'.
Also where is Murakumo? I haven't heard of her in a while.
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>>204246
Mission paperwork. She's the only one fit and able, after all.
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>>204226
>"You don't need to. Just get some rest."
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‘I’m not expecting one.’ You say seriously. Nagato and Nachi both look at you, surprised; you turn on your heel, wincing as you take a seat on another bed. You feel a chill on your shoulders as you realize that your shirt, ruined, was on the chair and unfit for wear. ‘Is there a spare hospital gown anywhere? Because I’m feeling very conscious.’

You actually feel a need to cover your chest. Being shirtless in front of people was not your idea of having an afternoon. Nachi doesn’t look at you, crossing her arms – Nagato throws her a small glare, making her way to the other side of the bed. Nachi’s clocking of you may have hurt, but at least you’re durable enough that there’s no immediate bruising – or a loss of teeth, for that matter.

You sigh, scratching the back of your head. You really wanted a shirt.

‘Nachi, go get some rest.’ You practically order her to do so, not turning to give a look; Akashi approaches you again, with the cloth – you feel a jolt as she applies it again, wincing. You elect not to protest, but you do feel the need to satisfy your curiosity. ‘What is this, anyway?’

‘The lowest concentrate of fata aqueous. It’s used for more practical wounds… bruises, bumps, and – wait a minute – !’ Akashi grits her teeth, exasperated, but keeping her voice down. ‘Haven’t you ever heard about not fighting battles you can’t get away from in one piece? She could have killed you.’

‘Nachi wouldn’t.’ You wince. You give the Vice-Admiral a look, smiling as best you can. ‘I’m her Commander; besides…’ You begin chuckle, but cease as the roof of your mouth proved a little too sore to indulge in your humor, ‘I owe her one.’

You could count this as keeping the books even, after all. She had promised a knock when she got out.

‘I appreciate it, Commander,’ The Vice-Admiral nods at you, before tiredly continuing, albeit softly, ‘but there are some battles I’d rather you not come between. Keep that head screwed on tight, because you might go over and under.’

You nod in understand, but still… if there’s anything you learned…

It’s that you were her Commander.

‘With respect, sir,’ The Vice-Admiral cracks a small smile at that, ‘the moment she stepped into the matter, it became the issue of my Division, and thus my responsibility – personal or not, sir, I’m assigned to her – and the rest of them. Regardless of how you feel about my interference, Vice-Admiral… I have to insist that this matter is definitely well within my jurisdiction – as both your subordinate and her superior.’

The Vice-Admiral crosses his arms.

‘Why do I have a gut feeling that there’s a snipe at me somewhere in that mess?’

‘I assure you, Vice-Admiral,’ your eyes glint with mischief, ‘there isn’t.’

He laughs softly… holding out a fist.

You give it a good bump.

‘Men.’ Nagato mumbles.

Takao grunts, agreeing.

>Write-In
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>>204265
>"So when do I get out? I have district management, plus a casserole to make."
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>>204265
We should probably rest a little bit before getting back to our district management duties.
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>>204265
>Check if Akashi has any more verdicts regarding your health, then go do Paperwork.
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>>204265
>"So when do I get out? I have district management, plus a casserole to make."
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>>204265
>"So when do I get out? I have district management, plus a casserole to make."
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>>204275
>>204285
>>204295
OOC: It's already established thread before last that you realized you were in over your head with the casserole and needed to get more information before leaping in. He's still making it, but he needs to get more information on how to get the cooking done. It'll be addressed in later choices/progression.
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>>204297
That's why I didn't vote for it. Doing it now means our supposedly good cooking would taste bland as fuck to the girls.

We should look into figuring out if anything besides Tanaka salt provides taste to food for the girls.
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>>204297
I guess the casserole part can be removed, and a bit of >>204283 can be thrown in.
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>>204265
>Check if Akashi has any more verdicts regarding your health, then go do Paperwork.
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Akashi tends to you meticulously, occasionally throwing a glance at her now-calm patient Nachi. Little stings of pain hit you now and then, but you ultimately find that the Fairy’s Tears worked pretty well as a general cure-all for your injuries, minor as they were. Nagato and Takao discuss something you can’t quite make out – and you know not to pry into this one, if any of the girls’ interactions told you. Like the Vice-Admiral had said, there were some things that you just don’t butt into, after all.

‘Akashi?’

‘Hm?’ She acknowledges you, nursing your shoulders – that stinging sensation still there as she worked.

‘I’m all right, right?’

‘Excuse me?’ She looks up from her work, frowning at you.

‘Whatever happened to me… it’s not gonna effect me doing my job, is it?’

‘Oh, no.’ Akashi nods sarcastically. ‘You can definitely get back into the saddle as soon as you get out of those flaps. I suppose you have some gang wars to disrupt, an Abyssal to challenge to a game of chicken, some spelunking into a stronghold, wrestle the Grand Lieutenant into submission on the top of a falling building and maybe take in the surf during a firefight?’ She snaps a disapproving glare with her smile. The sarcasm wasn’t just dripping – it was solid. ‘But, yes, you are as healthy as you can be.’

‘Just… the first one, actually.’

Akashi lets out a muffled cry – a mixture of annoyance, acceptance and the emotion of why-me-why-oh-Heaven-why.

‘You know, when I was joking about you getting into trouble the moment you got out of my sight, I meant on you keeping it. As. A. Joke.’ Akashi grunts, giving you a good slap. A small tear falls out of your eye. ‘What in the world are you planning to do tonight? Vice-Admiral? What’s he doing tonight?’

The Vice-Admiral sighs.

‘He’s been assigned a district – the commercial area.’ The Vice-Admiral nodded. ‘The Deputy Mayor gave the Admiralty full form to act out, so we’re getting started straight away – the Commander volunteered to negotiate with the gangs.’

‘Negotiate what, exactly?’ Akashi practically hyperventilates by now, and you try to calm her down, only to have repeated slaps on your shoulder for your effort.

‘To negotiate their… eviction.’

Akashi smiles. It reminded you a lot of Nagato’s smile, in fact, when she was twisting your leg. You scoot yourself away from the pink-haired woman, who flexed her fingers like she was casting a sort of hex, a light cackle escaping from her otherwise sealed lips. Nagato and Takao scoot away from her, effectively abandoning you.

She turns to you.

‘I want that arm back in one piece when they identify your body tomorrow.’ She says with a finality. ‘Shirt’s in the closet, help yourself. Don’t worry about blood.’

Akashi raises her arms and exits the tent.

>‘Lunch?’
>Stay and chat (Specify)
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>>204310
>‘Lunch?’
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>>204310
>‘Lunch?’
Oh Akashi. You're so cute yet scary
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>>204310
>‘Lunch?’
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>>204310
>‘Lunch?’
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>>204310
>Stay and chat with the Vice-Admiral.
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>>204310
>Lunch sounds good. Heard it's good to eat when your body needs repair. Not to mention, I have my gut to keep nice and smooth.
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As Akashi had said, there were many white T-shirts in the closet. Fortunately, as well, they had one – just one – enough to fit your bulk.

‘So, who’s up for lunch?’

You try to sound cheery, looking around the tent, but it seemed like some sort of dead morning after with Akashi’s departure. Nachi was back in her bed, going through her book and ignoring everyone else; Tenryuu was lying down in her bed, occasionally throwing glances at Nachi. Your two healthy subordinates stopped talking with your question, while the Vice-Admiral, on crutches, looked in thought.

‘There should be some grub at the MASH mess.’ He announces, looking around the tent with one swoop. He jabs a thumb in the direction of Takao and Nagato. ‘That is, if you’re willing to part with your girls for a bit.’

You remember that Takao and Nagato can’t eat human food. You almost smack yourself in the head for your forgetfulness of that one key fact.

‘Damn… Nagato, Takao… what are you guys going to have?’ You try to look apologetic, but Nagato and Takao don’t seem to mind at all – even if you do.

‘Don’t mind us, sir.’ Takao gives a respectful bow. ‘They got some nutrient supplements here for us to have.’

‘Nutrient supplements?’ It rang a bell; for real, this time.

The Vice-Admiral raises gives them a look, before breaking out into loud laughter. After a moment, he shakes his head, before giving Takao a look of amusement. Takao turns a little red; you don’t know if it’s from the stare or from the embarrassment – but you hope it wasn’t a repeat of yesterday’s fiasco. With the public opinion of KanMusu meals, especially with that attack… you couldn’t be sure, at all.

The Vice-Admiral gives you a pat on the back, smiling. It looked like he was fondly recalling something, if his expression said anything about it.

Another Day In The Army.’ You definitely know he’s thinking about his past days in the service. ‘Can’t believe those soppy duds found a way to make their stuff KanMusu-worthy.’

‘It’s not great, but… it’s food.’ Nagato smiles sadly – if only briefly, before shrugging. ‘Everything’s pretty much the same to us.’

‘We’ll just get some extra portion here, Commander.’ Tenryuu gives you a thumbs-up – she’d take care of Nagato and Takao for the time being; or, at least… get them fed.

You tell yourself to try a little harder.

‘We can go to Mamiya’s if – !’

Nagato would have none of it, however, waving you off and pointing an amused finger to the exit of the tent.

‘Sir, really.’ She gives you a reassuring smile. ‘Go, have some Officer time.’

The both of you leave the tent; the mess hall’s signage is visible down the pathway.

‘Sir, you okay with those?’ You indicate his crutches.

‘I’m fine, Commander.’ He nods at you with a friendly smile. ‘I’ve been in worse.’

You nod.

TBC
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It doesn’t take long for the both you to reach the mess hall. Once you do, however, you and the Vice-Admiral find yourselves face-to-face with a line that seemed to go all the way back to another medical tent. The both of you give each other a look, before locking yourselves to the back of the line, with two dozen or so Admiralty personnel, both voluntary and commissioned, standing before you and your meal.

There was a huge temptation to pull rank on the servicemen that stood between you and your goal, but you decide against it. You didn’t want them to think you were denying them their own meals by using your position as leverage. You doubt it’d sit well with the volunteers and the injured, if not with the commissioned.

At the back of your head, you wonder if it’s a possibility to have anything delivered to the barracks for you to cook. As it stood, supplies were spread thin across the coastal towns, but you couldn’t help but be curious of the prospect of actually preparing your own food. It had been a month since you’d whipped something up for yourself proper, and the Admiralty applications had only served the same standard – albeit decent – meal for you and the other applicants and prospectus during the course of the elimination.

As the Vice-Admiral takes a few steps forward, so do you. Behind you and ahead of you, chatter is apparent and very topical.

‘Did you hear about Maizuru? How’re they going to bring the defenses up from that ruin?’

‘If you ask me, we’re screwed anyway. You saw what happened.’

‘Heard there’s some kind of super project being built in Kure. All of them doohickeys, even; just you wait, the Abyssals are gonna get the butt-whooping of their lives when we get up and running again!’

‘Do you have anything on the Western Front? Heard they’re decimated – what’s gonna happen to us now?’

‘It’s all just noise.’ The Vice-Admiral’s voice shakes you from your reverie; he gives you a look of reassurance. You lean in slightly to get a better ear for his words. ‘It’s all just noise, Commander,’ he whispers. ‘We’re just in line to get some grub is all.’

You give a good-natured nod, putting your hands in your pockets as you go back to waiting. You can’t help but overhear the people talk, though. Most of them have a worried tone to their voice – a select few have some faith and a lot more have views on the League of Nations intervening.

You don’t even notice you’re at the front of the queue until a man gives you a light push.

You come face-to-face with an ancient man with a large, hot pot filled with familiar-looking stew. He pours it automatically, giving it to you.

‘Thanks.’

He doesn’t seem to hear you – and you walk over to a table with the Vice-Admiral, setting down your food… and begin to eat.

>Ask about the Vice-Admiral's past
>Talk about current post
>Chat about the Admiralty
>Shoot the breeze
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>>204452
>Talk about current post
we gonna need help to put this post back on feet
and Vice admiral knows his stuff
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>>204452
>Ask about the Vice-Admiral's past
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>>204452
>Talk about current post
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>>204452
>Talk about current post
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>>204452
>Talk about current post
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‘What do you think about your current post?’ The Vice-Admiral looks up from his gruel, motioning for you to give an answer.

Funny, you were about to ask the same thing.

‘I… I can’t say for sure.’ You say honestly. ‘I’ve never been part of paramilitary before, so everything from the last two weeks has been a Hell of an experience. The Division’s been really good to me, all things considered. So’s the Admiral.’

You take a spoonful of your stew. It tasted the same as your last bowl. Maybe a little blander.

‘I’m sure.’ The Vice-Admiral nods, tapping his spoon against his bowl. ‘Yokosuka was surprisingly left more intact than Maizuru and Ominato. I don’t know if it was down to luck or just good defensive maneuvers.’ He grimaces. ‘At least we’re working at about 40-50 percent – more than I can say for the other two stations.’

You get to what you thought would be the crux of your discussion.

‘What can we do around here, really?’ Your shoulders slump, words from days before echoing in your ear. ‘I mean, from what I’ve heard, the Admiralty isn’t exactly well-liked.’

The Vice-Admiral laughs behind a closed fist.

‘Well, later on, I’ll be sorting out the Forces, and maybe we can address some of their fears.’ He nods to you. ‘Right now, we’re operating without an effective border. You don’t have to worry about that unless I tell you to – the Forces are my responsibility. You just sort out your Division.’

He pours a glass of water from a pot jug on the table.

‘If my team arrives by tomorrow or this evening, I can get this done sooner.’

‘What’s so important about having a border so early?’ You frown.

‘First line of defense.’ He says simply, taking a sip. ‘You have a member in your Division that was transferred out from what’s left of the Patrol teams. I thought you’d know about it.’

‘Samidare.’ You nod; you make a note to ask her about it when you had the chance.

‘Well, the whole force just got a re-shuffle. I think we’re down to two active Admirals-Vice-Admiral placements now. We’re also down to five Divisions – including yours, of course.’ He cricks his neck. ‘My team’ll be transferring, Commander, but I’ll probably still need your help – and your Division’s – once in a while.’

‘I understand, sir.’ You nod, taking another spoonful of your stew.

‘We’ll also get an Expedition Force up and running again.’ He adds. ‘For that, I’ll probably ask you to lend me a KanMusu or two as well. At least we’ll get some tactical edge back.’

‘What about the restoration of the town?’ That topic irked you.

‘That’s for all of us to pitch in.’ He says grimly; he wasn’t looking forward to it. ‘If you can get yours sorted out, we can move from there.’

>Ask about Vice-Admiral’s past
>Chat about Admiralty
>Talk about the gangs
>Shoot the breeze
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>>204544
>Shoot the breeze
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>>204544
>Ask about the Vice-Admiral's past
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>>204544
>>Talk about the gangs
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>>204544
>Talk about the gangs
i have no damn idea how to pull that off, and a full assault make really horrible PR
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‘So, I know I said that I was going to sort out the gangs…’ You feel a little sheepish, recalling your tantrum from the morning.

You had done so without thinking, and right now were reaping the first eke of consequences. You just realized that you had elected yourself to settle the matter of district jurisdiction with someone who was effectively a crime lord. In hindsight, that tantrum was not one of your smarter ideas, but in any case, you’d been given the responsibility to sort it out – you’d just declared – boasted – that you’d have it done on the dot and on your terms.

‘How am I supposed to do that, exactly?’

The Vice-Admiral sighs, tapping his fingers on the table. He looks at you tiredly, and you give him an apologetic smile. Your actions must have topped the list of braggarts and idiots because you feel a like a damned fool for making it in the first place. You hang on to the Vice-Admiral’s next few words, wondering if there’s anything that could be of use to you.

‘Any way you can.’ He says grimly, taking another sip of his drink. ‘I’m actually kind of surprised that they took over a whole district so quickly. I didn’t think there’d be so much chaos that they’d be able to take over straight away.’

‘I’m thinking of bringing a few MPs and going in for a talk.’ You reveal – you’d just thought of that a few seconds ago.

‘You better watch your back in there – even if they’re not going to kill you, they’ll sure as Hell brownbeat you.’ He says, scrunching his mouth. He then continues, solemnly and seriously, ‘A word of advice – if you’re thinking of bringing any of the girls in with you, don’t.’ The next words hold a warning tone to them. ‘Bring some protection if you need it, but don’t drag the KanMusu into a scuffle.’

‘Why?’

‘Because if things get ugly… they’ll get ugly.’ He doesn’t drop the deadly serious tone of warning – in fact, it heightens with his every word. ‘And if they train their guns on humans… the fairies get really ugly and so does the Admiralty. It’s down to your discretion, of course, but I’d keep any of your girls out of it unless you really know that they’re not going to pull a mess on whatever you got planned.’

You open your mouth to say something, but the Admiral has you beat.

‘You know they’ll put your life before theirs at the first sign of trouble, Commander.’

You let out a breath, admitting he did have a point…

‘Do you know who the boss is?’

‘I’m sorry, Commander, but you’ll have to ask around in there yourself.’ He scratches hischin. ‘From my experience it’s always the cleanest guy around. Bosses don’t like to get their hands dirty.’

The Vice-Admiral takes a spoonful of stew.

‘But whoever he is, vigilance is going to be your best friend in there.’

>Ask about his past
>Chat about Admiralty
>Shoot the breeze
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>>204637
>Shoot the breeze
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>>204637
>>Shoot the breeze
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>>204637
>Ask about his past
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so any idea how to get a grave plot for Atago? I mean if the military can't can we chip in for a plot of land in a civilian cemetery
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>>205238
>Atago
who is that and why should we care?
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>>205289
Read the previous thread.
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>>205289
Because Takao wants a plot of land/tomestone for her since she died.

Also because despite being promised by the higher ups she was denied and asked us for help in which we accepted
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>>205238
We have to convince them that they deserve a proper rest like everyone else who has served and died protecting their country.

Especially considering that, when you think about it, when a shipgirl dies in this war, it's actually the SECOND time they have given their lives for their homeland and its people. Shouldn't someone who died for their country twice get the proper respect of being buried with honor?

Perhaps somehow getting the public to pressure them?
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>>204637
>Ask about his past
Isn't it uncommon for someone from the military to be in the admiralty?
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>>204637
>Ask about his past
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>>204637
>Shoot the breeze
>>205311
skipped the lewd
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>>205579
It wasn't in the lewd though.
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>>205579
Now why would you do a thing like that?
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>>205373
>Shouldn't someone who died for their country twice get the proper respect of being buried with honor?
Even more so since the second time is, presumably, for the good of all humanity.
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>>205658
i really dont get the hate at shipgirls, mayve its that "its stronger than us" fear
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>>206062
Not to mention the fact that they are commanded by a non-government organization that potentially has no accountability. If an NGO had super-powerful soldiers IRL, I would be incredibly suspicious, regardless of their mission statement.

Imagine if the Red Cross suddenly started equipping all of their people with Iron Man armor. Their goals may be noble, but you can bet the rest of the world is doing to at least be leery about them from that point on.
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‘Sir, I’m curious… just how did you end up in the Admiralty?’ You take a gulp of water. ‘You were Air Force, right?’

‘Not really, but I like to think so.’ He smiles fondly, setting down his spoon. ‘I was part of the Imperial Ranger School. Probably the last batch since the war broke out.’

‘You’re a Ranger?!’

‘I was in training to be one.’ He corrects you. ‘My mother was military before she got herself killed; my father… well, he…’ He trails off for a moment, running a hand through his hair, ‘anyway, I finished school, and as soon as I could, put my name into the Academy scholarship roll.’ He smirks, patting his wrist. ‘This is cheesecake compared to what I went through then. They ran a Hell of a course.’

‘I’m sure.’ You then frown, realizing something didn’t add up. ‘Wait, as soon as you – aren’t you supposed to be at least 19 to even apply?’

‘Lied about my age.’ He says simply.

‘Didn’t they catch on?’

‘They did,’ He chuckles, lifting his cup to you. ‘but they couldn’t actually say no to a 17 year-old that ran rings around the other 86 prospects.’

‘So what happened? How’d you end up here?’

It wasn’t every day you saw a cross-organization transfer – especially not one from a respected military branch to what was effectively a paramilitary resistance.

‘You know as well as I do how conventional warfare does against the Abyssals.’ He says simply. ‘I think we were all a little desperate then – four years into the fight and all we had to show for ourselves were body bags. Navy, Army, Air Force, Legions… every single one of them – sent into the grinder, didn’t matter who or where.’ He nods at you grimly. ‘You’ve seen the films, I think – you’re probably old enough to remember, too.’

You may have been a child, but you remember those first years all too well. It’s not a time you’d like to come back to.

‘Anyway, the Admiralty came knocking in its first year.’ He gulps another swig, ‘Back then, they were just a branch of the Nations… they established first contact with the fairies, and they were looking for their first soldiers… their first Commanders.’ He frowns. ‘They must have gone through thousands, if not millions of us in that first screen. I think I was about your age… maybe a little younger when I was brought out of the Reserve.’

‘So you’ve been Vice-Admiral for quite a while, huh?’

‘Nope. Just about a week, actually.’

‘Seriously?’ You balk.

‘I don’t like standing in the background – I don’t like paperwork and I don’t like explaining myself to a liaison on my unorthodox tactics.’ He takes another spoonful. ‘As far as I’m concerned, I’d rather be out there in the muck.’

You can’t actually help but respect that.

>Chat about the Admiralty
>Shoot the breeze
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>>206322
>Shoot the breeze
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[x] Shoot the breeze
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>>206322
>Shoot the breeze
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>>206322
>>Chat about the Admiralty
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>>206322
>Shoot the breeze
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>>206322
>>Shoot the breeze
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‘You know, this isn’t actually that bad.’

‘It’s better than the standard gruel you get in the Air Force.’ He jabs a spoon in your direction, talking with his mouth full. ‘Although, we had this one cook who made a mean ramen dish back at the Academy.’ He whistles after swallowing, emphasizing his point. ‘And I mean, mean. Had a kick like you wouldn’t believe.’

‘I’d believe it.’ You agree, nodding and taking another spoonful. It really wasn’t that bad; to you, at least. ‘Not that hard to get ramen with a kick.’

‘Not like this guy did.’ The Vice-Admiral leans back, waving his hands. ‘Believe me, Saturday nights, we even had Officers queuing for a chance at the good stuff.’

‘Sounds like I should give it a try one day.’

The Vice-Admiral intertwines his fingers, nodding at you – or rather, your girth. You frown back at him. Even if you’d accepted your state… you didn’t like it being pointed out so readily and easily.

‘First, you got to drop a few pounds.’ He digs in again, pointing at you with the spoon. ‘Or a few belt sizes; that can’t be regulation.’

‘I can’t help it, sir.’ You feel a little defensive.

‘Not when you’re under my Command, soldier.’ He shakes his head, training a lazy gaze upon you. ‘If you’re alive tomorrow, I’m dragging your ass out. I’m sure your ladies’ll appreciate a less round man between the sheets.’

You glare at him, to which he smirks, taking a drink.

‘Can you not?!’ You practically balk. ‘Shouldn’t you be warning me off the KanMusu instead of pushing any sort of fraternization that goes over reg limits?!’

‘Can’t tell me you don’t think about it.’ He points out to you, and you cross your arms. ‘You are a male,’ he adds, ‘and despite what 99 percent of the human populace thinks, they are – !’

‘I am honestly surprised they didn’t kick your horndog ass out by now, sir.’ You interrupt, glaring right at him, ‘Respectfully speaking.’

‘I’m surprised your lardy ass got busy with any of those chicas.’ He smirks.

You open your mouth to retort, but the sound of a banging cooking utensils. You turn to see at least six men – six punks – crowded around the serving table, one of them carrying a pot and the others rounding on the old man who had served you.

‘Put that pot down, you whippersnapper!’

‘Come on, old man, you got three more. I’m sure you can spare one pot? We’ll even wash it up for ya!’

‘I don’t see a tag and I don’t see you in line!’ He pokes the larger man with his ladle. ‘If you’re missing either of those, I’m not serving you squat!’

‘Come on, old man, spare us a bit, huh?’ He puts an arm around the old man, giving the worst business smile you’d ever seen.

‘Get your hands offa me!’

The Vice-Admiral gets to his feet.

Can’t have a meal in peace these days.’

>Ignore the ruckus
>Address the ruckus
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>>206444
>>Address the ruckus
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>>206444
>Address the ruckus
Use our nascent diplomatic skills to surely successfully head this off
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>>206444
>Address the ruckus

I kinda hope it's the same punks from before, if only to make a comment like.
>Are you drunk and grabbing men's asses again?
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>>206444
>Address the ruckus
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>Address the ruckus
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>>206444
>>Address the ruckus
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>>206444
>Address the ruckus, with a flying dropkick
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‘Put that pot down and let him go, kid.’ The Vice-Admiral, calm and collected, hobbles with his crutches to the serving table. The six of them regard him with a sneer, before looking to each other and chuckling. ‘I’m not going to ask twice. Let him go.’

The one holding the old man smirks, before doing so.

Upon observation, you realize that these people weren’t personnel at all. All of them were clad in a weird amalgam of outdated clothing with an assortment of clothes that wouldn’t look out of place in a thrift shop that was undergoing a closing down sale. That being said, it was a mite better than some of the civilians that had got caught in the battle; at least they weren’t sporting rags, even if their taste in clothing left a lot to be desired.

But bad clothing or no, they weren’t the least bit intimidated by the Vice-Admiral.

The Vice-Admiral wasn’t, either.

‘Soldier, go and get the MPs.’ He orders one of the men in line – one of the personnel in line, in particular, who points at himself before looking around. The Vice-Admiral sighs. ‘Yes, you. Get going. Now.’

‘Y – Yes, sir!’

‘Hey, man, chill, we’re just here to grab a bowl.’

‘Then either get a hole in your chest or grab a uniform.’ The Vice-Admiral says strictly, addressing the one leaning on the table. You briefly wonder why the other personnel were steering clear of these punks; none of them looked like they wanted to get involved. ‘This is for personnel and patients only.’

‘Where do you get talkin’ to me like that, friendo?’

‘He’s the Vice-Admiral.’ You step in, hands in your pockets. ‘And if you want to get some grub I suggest you follow his advice.’

‘We’re just here for some soup, man.’ One of them grins at you. ‘No need to get all jumpy about it.’

‘It’s stew.’ You frown, taking a few steps until you were shoulder to shoulder with the Vice-Admiral. ‘And if you want some, you’ll either need to register yourselves as personnel or – !’

‘Blah, blah, blah!’ One more interrupts, making a motion with his hands, to which the others let out a laugh. ‘Look, I’m gonna let this slide on ya, ‘cause you both look like a newbie. Ya see, the boss ain’t havin’ any of that civvie shit no more. He wants somethin’ a little classier; you guys seem like you got a lot to spare, am I right?’

This one seems to be the leader of the group, who’s a little shorter than the rest, but a lot more overdressed.

‘You guys can pull out yer bleedin’ heart nonsense and whatever, and it ain’t our business. Ya a man in uniform, and we get that, yeah.’

He approaches the both of you, sneering for all to see.

‘But what the boss wants, the boss gets.’ He glares at you. ‘And if the boss don’t get what he wants… the ones outside them curtains… get.’

You don’t feel like flinching. So you don’t.

>‘Let’s Talk’
>'Vice-Admiral?'
>[End Negotiations]
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>'Vice-Admiral?'
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>>206690
>[End Negotiations]
We literally have a metal robot arm that breaks peoples' bones. Let's use it.
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>>206690
>>[End Negotiations]

We, Humanity, are at fucking war. Cause the motherfucking Abyss are going to fucking come back. What do you dumb shitheads not understand? They don't fucking care about your boss.What tough shit you think you are, you're beneath them. And they will get you.
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>>206690
>'Vice-Admiral?'
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>>206690
>'Vice-Admiral?'
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>>206690
>'Vice-Admiral?'
Let the boss take the lead. It's why he makes the big money.
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>>206690
>>'Vice-Admiral?'

Much as i want to hurt them, we just got out with Akashi, she might not appreciate us going back to the fold.
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I'm a bit worried about the long term implications of this.

Also, I think people voting to [end negotiations] are forgetting several things. Most importantly: we can't use shipgirls to fight humans and the personel around us seem know who they are but are unwilling to interfere.

>>You briefly wonder why the other personnel were steering clear of these punks; none of them looked like they wanted to get involved.

There is also the bit about us needing clear the gangs from our district (these power may or may be related to that).
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I really don't want get into a gang war without having anybody on our side who is willing fight the gangs.
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>>206690
Distract them while the mp gets there.
>'Lets talk'
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>>206690
>[End Negotiations]
Metal arm
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>>206690
>>'Vice-Admiral?'
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‘Vice-Admiral?’ You await his orders.

‘Leave,’ The Vice-Admiral doesn’t back down from his stance, hobbling a little more. ‘there’s no place for thugs here.’

‘There’s a place for you pricks, though.’ The smaller man grins maniacally, leaning back on his right foot. ‘Same as the dirt!’

His kick, aimed at the left crutch of the Vice-Admiral, misses completely, staggering off-balance from not hitting its target. The Vice-Admiral, calm and collected as can be, uses the free crutch to catch his attacker’s foot, knocking him off balance in a sudden movement, hitting either side of his foot before grabbing him by the collar… and with his full weight, brings the tip right down upon his foot.

The man screams.

‘My toe! My toe!’ He bawls, the Vice-Admiral’s hand reaching for his throat, pinching hard with his index finger and thumb. ‘YOU SON OF A – !’

‘I don’t think I have to repeat yourself.’ He says coolly, looking at the shocked onlookers. ‘If your boss is hungry he can go queue up for rations with the civilians. If he wants a scoop out of this pot, he’ll enlist.’

You – !’

A sense of deja vu washes over you – the punks are too scared to move, the Vice-Admiral has the man in a painful grip… and the MPs are on scene, looking at each other in confusion on who they were supposed to pull off.

‘I presume you’re from the commercial district?’ He questions.

‘You guys are dea – !’ The Vice-Admiral squeezes.

‘I’m not looking for trouble. I presume that none of you are.’ He glares at all of them. ‘That right?’

‘Y – Yeah, we’re the head hon – CRIKE – !’ Weight. Toe.

‘I want only one word from any of you. That word can be either a yes or a no. Anything else...’

He puts more weight on the crutch; the man cries out once more.

‘Got it?’

All of them, even the man in his hand, nods frantically.

‘You’re from the commercial district.’

‘Y – Yeah.’

‘You in contact with your boss?’

‘Yup.’

‘Are you able to arrange a meeting between us tonight?’

‘U – Um…’

Yes or no.’ He repeats.

‘N – No…’

‘Why not?’

One of them steps up, balling his hands into tight fists. He meets your superior’s eyes.

‘The – The boss ain’t bowin’ two some two bit sleazeballs like you. He the man in this town, now.’

They regard one another, and the Vice-Admiral throws the man in his hand to the ground, his comrades rushing to pick him up.

‘Got guts.’ He nods at the punk who had stepped out. ‘I’ll be sending one of my Officers over tonight to skim over a few details. Tell him whether he’s ready or not, this is happening, and if he doesn’t so much as show a nose… Then I’ll come for him.’

He looks to the old man.

‘Pour a pot for 'em.’

‘Sir?’ The old man questions, shocked.

‘They've got injured.’

>Write-In
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>>207053
>Go over the meeting plan with the Vice-Admiral.

We should plan this as well as we can right now, in case things go pear-shaped later.
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>>207053
>Go over the meeting plan with the Vice-Admiral.
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>>207053
>>Go over the meeting plan with the Vice-Admiral.
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There’s no cheer in the crowd, no whoop of glory. The rousers were given their pot of stew and escorted away from the tent by three MPs; the Vice-Admiral hobbles back to his seat, with you in tow. You feel dirty looks thrown at the both of you as you reach the table. Somehow, you feel, this particular part of the good deed shtick didn’t go down right with you. Mumbling goes over most of the personnel as you finally sit. The Vice-Admiral rubs his temples as you do, throwing a grimace.

‘I’m sorry for that.’

‘Don’t worry about it, sir. I think I would’ve done the same thing.’ In fact, you already did the exact same thing, but he didn’t need to know that; no sense being a braggart, after all.

‘I’m afraid I may have been a little headstrong there.’ The Vice-Admiral lets out a breath and a curse, pushing what remained of his stew away. ‘Now he’s going to expect you, and you need to be a b – !’

‘Thanks a lot, you sap!’

A bunch of chopsticks spill over your table, as you look up to see two personnel, their tags indicating their voluntary status, towering over your table. One of them was holding back the other with little success. The Vice-Admiral doesn’t answer, but meets his exasperated gaze, regarding him with no emotion but acknowledgment. You keep yourself steady, too.

‘You couldn’t have just given him a God-damned pot without pulling off that shit, could you?’ He practically yells. The Vice-Admiral says nothing. ‘Now they’re gonna turn that shit on our families – the town up to friggin’ eleven!’

‘I – I’m sorry, sir, we didn’t meant to interrupt, we’ll – !’

‘I’m sick and tired of you guys pretending like you care about – !’

‘You’re right, we don’t.’

To your surprise… you say it.

‘We’re just like you.’ You raise yourself from your seat, not having a specific reason why… but assuring the man of your position – of everyone’s position under this tent. 'It’d be a whole lot easier for us to pack our bags, cut our losses, and rebuild. With or without you, it shouldn’t really matter, now should it?’

You let out a breath.

‘I’m not going to send you away with the delusion that we’re going to be there for you. We’re not. Our purpose is to one end and one end only: the end of the Abyssal threat. Humanity’s continued survival. Just like you, we’re looking out for number one.’ You lean over. ‘But we also have our responsibilities. Namely, to our neighbors, our comrades… and to those we owe.

‘So we don’t care about you.’ You finish. ‘But they just crossed into our house. And that makes them our problem, too.

‘So we’ll settle it.’ You nod. ‘You want a shot?’

He actually looks stunned.

>Ask the personnel
>Let the Vice-Admiral continue
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>>207169
>Ask the personnel
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>>207169
>Ask the personnel
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>>207169
What does 'Ask the personell' mean entail?
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>>207184
OOC:The scene transitions to you picking up that the personnel know who those punks are.
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>Ask the personnel

Guessing this option is asking volunteers to participate in anti-gang operations.
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>>207169
>Ask the personnel
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>>207169
>Ask the personnel
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The man backs away, glaring… but not before the Vice-Admiral grabs his hand.

You and the man, in surprise, look to the Vice-Admiral, whose gaze holds one of curiosity and determination. He raises himself without his crutches – the way he looked right now positively scared you.

‘You know something about those men, don’t you?’ The Vice-Admiral questions, not letting his firm grip wilt; the man looked like he wanted to be anywhere but here.

‘Of – Of course I do. Everyone here knows.’ He tries to gather confidence, but with a man of grit… he might as well be cowering.

You take point, crossing your arms.

‘So, are you gonna tell us?’ You look around the tent for effect. ‘Any of you?’

The Vice-Admiral gives you a slap on the forearm. He mouths, too much.

‘As if,’ He looks defiant, finally getting himself out of the grip of the Vice-Admiral, glaring at the both of you with pure disdain; he smirks, ‘I’m only doing this to keep my family fed. I don’t have a – !’

‘Soldier.’ You move in, trying to sound as intimidating and strict as you could. ‘Who were they?’

It seems to work. The man and his friend look at each other, turning their noses at you, before finally hiving an answer.

‘They’re… They used to be part of a motorcycle gang around these parts. They were usually small-time, maybe some hasslin’, but… they never went up and up, you know? Can I go now?’

‘That’s not all we want to hear.’

He opens his mouth to say something, but the other volunteer steps in.

‘Sir.’ He gives a salute to the both of you. ‘About two weeks ago – immediately after the attack – one of the larger gangs, one of the Yakuza offshoots… their remnant, recruited them.’ He tries to recall something in his statement. ‘They… They wanted to use the chaos to start fresh. I mean… with the local police pretty much gone, there wasn’t a lot we could do to do anything to keep them away.’

Another man, a burly person covered in grease and holding a mop, walks up to the, you realize, now-larger congregation.

‘They took over the commercial plaza first… that’s where the money is, ya know.’ He clicks his tongue. ‘But… well, with the conditions of the town like this, their boss… he’s not happy holding something that’s worth less than dirt now, but he’s definitely holding that gang together.’

‘Anything on him?’ You question again.

‘Just that he’s moved up the chain quite a bit since the attack.’ He replies. ‘And that he’s not happy holding just the commercial plaza anymore.’

‘He’s been causing shit all over town.’ A woman, dressed in the same manner as the burly man, steps out. ‘We’ve been asking the Deputy Mayor to – !’

That’s all you needed to hear.

‘I think I get it.’ The Vice-Admiral looks at you. ‘So, what do you think we’re dealing with here?’

>Write-In (What kind of person do you think their boss is?)
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>>207562
>Someone who used to be the whipping boy to the larger yakuza gangs and feels he may need to prove himself
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>>207562
Isn't that the place the deputy mayor was trying to give to those "private contractors"?
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>>207562
>>207570
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>>207562
The leader is a bloodthirsty control freak.
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>>207562
>Someone ambitious, smart enough to go for the money first, not happy that it means jack, and has the leadership skills to hold his gang together
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The both of you sit back down, piecing together what you know. The makeshift and sudden congregation disperses, and you and your superior push your meals aside, putting together an unorthodox first meeting.

‘So we’re looking at someone who’s pragmatic. He did go for the money first… but he’s ex-Yakuza, too.’ You fight a grimace – you didn’t show it, but the man did sound quite intimidating to you from the descriptions.

‘Probably not much foresight on his part.’ The Vice-Admiral nods. ‘The money’s useless with the town like this… and since he’s an offshoot gone rogue, if he so much as goes back into one of the inner cities, they’ll gut him.’

‘He’s ambitious… probably wants to prove himself if he did this so fast. He must’ve had it in mind for a long time to do it so quick.’ You interlock your fingers, biting your lip. ‘If he is Yakuza, I think he’d be one of the middle-men or something.’ You nod – to your surprise, the Vice-Admiral frowns, confused. ‘I mean, this is effectively a military town, and being so close to the ation… it’s not like a Clan would want to keep a big profile here. He must have been put here just to let people know they’re there.’

‘So he’s either a small fry making it big… or he’s pushed out here for punishment.’

The Vice-Admiral looks at you seriously.

‘We can’t underestimate him.’ He raises a finger. ‘First, I don’t think he’ll like it very much. If what they say is right, he’s got a Hell of an inferiority complex. Secondly, there’s the fact he’s able to hold the gang together says a lot of things about him – or nothing at all. He’s either really charismatic, or that the thugs are really just that dumb.’

‘Could be both, really.’ You shrug.

Worst case scenario.’ He points at you. ‘Keep your body language tight and try to look… submissive. If those guys told their boss about me – and effectively, you…’ the Vice-Admiral smirks. ‘he’s going to think you’re some sort of errand boy. See that it stays that way until talks start.’

‘So, typical me?’

‘I’ve known you for less than four hours, and we both know that’s not typical you.’

You can’t help but smile at that.

‘What if he’s a psycho?’

‘Unlikely. He wants his reach far and wide – he’s impatient or just a really good organizer to get it done so fast.’ ‘And since he’s Yakuza, you can bet he’s going to go full class on you. Probably a Hell of a talker.’

‘So, who do I bring?’ You blink. ‘The MPs?’

‘Yeah. But you also need…’ he groans, as if in disbelief. ‘an accessory.’

‘I don’t have any jewelry.’

‘I’m not talking about that.'

Then, you get it.

‘I thought you said you didn’t want m – !’

‘I know what I said.’ He sighs. ‘But he’s going to expect you to have one.’

You rub your temples.

>Choose which KanMusu to bring with you
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>>207741
>Takao

Gotta get that diplomacy.
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>>207741
>Nagato

She's our most trustworthy companion and she's going to look hella intimidating to the thugs.
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>>207741
>Takao

>>207786
That might backfire. We don't want to make him feel threatened.
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>>207741
>Takao
We've seen how good she is at talking. I bet if anyone can give a run of it, it's her.
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>>207741
>Takao
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>>207741
>Samidare
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‘There’s only one KanMusu to bring into the middle of a negotiation, right?’

You grimace, still rubbing your temples. Takao was the obvious choice. You had thought of the others, but you’d experienced first-hand how she’d handled herself this morning; how she’d carried herself with confidence and balance. You run a hand through your hair, sighing. You needed to look the part, anyway, and loathe as you were to admit it, Takao had all the makings of a sexpot accessory.

‘Takao is a talker,’ he nods, smiling. ‘But make sure she doesn’t take over the conversation. If she’s playing your accessory, she needs to look the part down pat. And she needs to act it better.’ He interlocks his hands, frowning. ‘Remember, he’s going to be addressing you – and you alone. He might throw a few comments her way now and again, but he’s definitely not going to forget about you.’ The Vice-Admiral frowns now. ‘And keep your temper in check. If Takao does her job, I need you to not explode.’

‘I got it.’ You say, a little flushed. ‘How am I supposed to negotiate him out of a whole district?’

The Vice-Admiral grimaces.

‘That’s your job, soldier. I’m sorry to say, but you’re going to have to figure it out yourself.’

‘No pressure.’ You say, with a little more sarcasm than you intended. ‘Maybe I’ll just tell him we’ll train our cannons on him if he doesn’t move. That usually work s… mostly.’

‘Sorry, Commander, but that’s going to be on you.’ He does look sorry, though, this time. ‘I’ll be sending some formal wear your way to the barracks later this evening. A buggy will pick you up at about 1900 with three MPs, so look fresh and sharp.’ He grabs his crutches as he finishes. ‘I’ve got some other business to attend to.’

The Vice-Admiral sighs, getting to his feet. You feel a little more weight on your shoulders now.

‘Good luck, Commander.’ the Vice-Admiral gives you a salute and you raise one in return, getting out of your seat. ‘And don’t forget… tomorrow, we start training.’

You find a smile making its way to your face as the man turns around, walking out of the mess tent. You sit down, focusing on your prosthetic for a while, thinking. You had to think about something that could get the boss to relinquish control… which, to you right now, was pretty much impossible. If the stories were true, he’d be stepping over your corpse long before he’d let you sniff power on that lawn.

You don’t know how long you’re in that chair, racking your brain.

Threaten?

Co-erce?

‘Want seconds, Commander?’ the old man surprises you, walking past you with an almost empty pot. ‘Just to show my appreciation… I was gonna give some if I had any left over to the Vice-Admiral, too, but...’

‘It’s all right. I was just leaving.’

>Go to Nachi and Tenryuu’s unit
>Go back to the Barracks
>Go somewhere else (Write-In)
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>>207860
>>Go somewhere else (Write-In)
> Where the MP headquarters are. There's some things that you need to check on.
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>>207860
>Go to Nachi and Tenryuu’s unit
You're giving us this option, which means there's probably something interesting waiting for us there.
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>>207860
>Go to Nachi and Tenryuu’s unit
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>>207860
>Go back to the Barracks
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>>207866
This, also armory we need some self protection
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Finding some time to kill, you head back towards Nachi and Tenryuu’s unit. You make your way through the crowd – it was the late afternoon now, and the personnel were getting right back to work, so it was a little crowded with a seeming majority of them having gone off-base for who-knows-what.

You arrive at the tent, about to open the flap to enter, when you hear several voices talking – and talking loudly.

‘There’s no point in arguing about it anymore.’ Takao’s firm voice sounds. ‘What happened, happened; and if we’re going to get through this we’re just going to have to manage if it goes badly for any of us.’

‘Are you even listening to yourself?!’ Nachi’s outrage is easy to make out. ‘This isn’t just a Commander we’re talking about – we’re talking about a true blue Quickening! Do you know how dangerous it is for us? For him?’ There’s a disdain in her voice you find too similar. ‘I may not like him that much, but I sure as Hell don’t want to kill him!’

You feel your blood run cold as the words reach your ears. Your find yourself outside the flap, your hand in mid-motion as you continue to listen to their words. Death? Did death truly awaited you?

‘No one is going to kill him, Nachi.’ Nagato’s calm voice breaks through to you. She sounded more authoritative now than you were used to. Nagato’s tone is that of a soldier’s – a Commander’s – calming down her hysteric troops. ‘The fact that he has a Quickening doesn’t change anything of our post to him as our Commander.’

‘I’m kinda with Nachi here.’

‘Whoa, Tenryuu?’

‘I really don’t want to be, but she’s got a point.’ You take a small peek to see Tenryuu stretching out her arm. ‘Whatever he is, good or bad, he’s a little bit more volatile… a little less from what we’re used to. I mean, I’ve always had pretty good Vice-Admirals, and this is my first time in a Division… but if the feedback loops back to us, we’re talking major meltdowns here. Everyone knows how much damage one of us can do.’

You feel something drop in your chest.

‘But I – !’ Takao is cut off, apparently.

‘Takao, you don’t get to say anything until you’ve gone into the Stream with his head.’ Tenryuu says in an uncharacteristically serious tone. ‘I’m not jumping to conclusions, but if the feedback’s saying anything is that he’s not stable.’

You clench your hands into fists.

‘I’m saying this because I like the guy… and he’s okay, but…’ Tenryuu hesitates. ‘A Quickening? I don’t think I want to be there if a surge goes bad.’

‘The fairies gave it to him.’ Nagato’s voice says. ‘If they did do it, I’d trust their judgment.’

‘The fairies’ll also send us back to limbo if we so much as look at a human funny.’ Nachi grumbles. ‘Their judgment sucks.’

‘Not all humans are that bad, Nachi...’

>Go inside
>Walk away
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>>207985
>Walk away
I don't trust ourselves to be composed enough for this.
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>>207985
>Go inside
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>>207985
>Walk away
Let's not ignite that powder keg.
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>>207985
>>Go inside
>Make sure you make some sound before going in. This shit can wait, work on dealing with looters first.
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>>207985
>Go inside

Oh boy.
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>>207985
>Go inside
Tell them they can quit. Just raise their hand, and they will stay at base.
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>>208006
>Commander already showing signs of losing his cool
Guys. We already saw the commander loose his cool only a couple hours ago. He is not in the right state for this shit.
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>>207985
>Walk away
Everything will go wrong.
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>>207985
>Walk away
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>>207985
>Walk away
I think we should discuss this with Nagato in private first.
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>>208013 >>208029
Better not provide a way for your team to voice their concerns?
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>>207985
>Go inside
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>>208036
Walking away now doesn't mean we won't be discussing their concerns. But it's better to do it when everyone (the Commander especially) has thought on it and calmed down.
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>>208043
Agree,
>walk away
Checking MP/records for info on crimelife seems like a good idea.
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>>207985
>Walk away
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>>207985
>Walk away
Yeah no. Let's just...deal with that later.
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>>207985
>Walk away
Find someplace to meditate and think.
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>>207985
>Walk away
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>>207985
walk awat
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>Just walk away
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>>209242
Just walk away
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You sigh, keeping your cool. The girls may have sounded angry, but they also sounded worried. You reach back, giving your soldiers a good crick and turning on your heel, before placing your hands in your pockets. A member of personnel, likely under Akashi, walks up to the flaps looking at a clipboard.

‘Sorry,’ you get his attention – he turns his confused gaze to you, ‘would you please tell my team that I need to get ready for tonight… and to tell the blue one – Takao – to meet me at the barracks before 1800 for an assignment. Tell them I said it was urgent.’

You quickly walk to the exit of the compound, hoping to catch one of the buggies – preferably not the old man’s – to the barracks. The crowd’s still there and there’re a lot of things on your mind, but you find that whatever it is, you can wait for later, you decide. You shuffle your way through a particularly busy bunch of people – carrying apparatus that looked like it could kill you when dropped on your head – before finally getting to the exit, which was surprisingly scarce save for a few MPs.

‘Commander?’

‘Commander!’

You turn your gaze to see Murakumo with a bound stack of what looked like paperwork under an arm, while Samidare had what looked like a heavy-looking sack slung over her back. For someone so small, it looked like a stark – and funny – contrast. You give them a nod of acknowledgment, and the both of them fall into a crisp salute.

You have to admit, Samidare really did look kind of adorable doing that with such a big sack.

‘Samidare! Murakumo! Wait up will ya?!’

You turn your attentions to the new voice, only to see Kiyoshimo and another girl with dark and slightly wavy hair, who looked tired and haggard from hauling a sack each. You realize that there’s a sort of resemblance with Kiyoshimo, from the way of their dress to their features – although you find Kiyoshimo’s face was a little sharper and less rounded compared to the new girl’s, but you didn’t need much of a hint to tell you she was a KanMusu too.

‘Come on, you guys! Our load’s heavier than yours, you know?’ Kiyoshimo says in exasperation.

‘I wish we could’ve caught a buggy or something.’ the dark-haired girl groans, setting down her sack onto the cracked pavement. ‘I was a ship. Not a cargo truck, ya .’

Girls.’ You offer them both a smile, despite your mood.

‘O – Oh!’ the dark-haired girl drops straight into a salute. ‘Good afternoon, sir! My name is Naganami!’

You give your own, albeit lazier, salute.

‘Nice to meet you, Naganami.’

‘I’m surprised to see you here.’ You turn your attentions to Murakumo.

‘I am the only one in working condition… I had to fill out their paperwork.’ She gives you a smirk. ‘Since you left so early yesterday.’

>Talk to Murakumo
>Talk to Samidare
>Talk to Kiyoshimo
>Talk to Naganami
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>>209581
>Talk to Murakumo
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>>209581
>Talk to Murakumo
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>>209581
>Talk to Samidare
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>>209581
>Talk to Murakumo
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>>209581
>>209778
Actually, after going over the ship profiles a few threads ago, I'd like change my vote to

>Talk to Samidare

She is apparently an up and coming diplomat and internal problem solver. Given the current atmosphere in our division, and that we're taking Takao with us it sounds prudent see if she can help keep things together while we're gone.
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>>209581
>Talk to Samidare
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>>209581
>>Talk to Samidare
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>>209581
>Talk to Murakumo
She's the one currently talking with us right? Would be impolite to just start talking with someone else.
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>>209581
>Talk to Murakumo
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>>209915
We're talking to all of them. We've all said hi to each other, but other than that we haven't gotten into any discussion. Moving on is socially fine at this juncture.
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>>209581
>Talk to Samidare
>>209242
>>209275
Glad I'm not the only one who thought of this.
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‘How’re you settling in, Samidare?’

‘Nicely!’ She moves to salute again, the bag’s weight making her teeter off-balance slightly. ‘Whoops!’

Murakumo rolls her eyes.

‘That’s great.’ You give her a smile, hands in your pockets. ‘Thanks for the oak branch this morning; it really did help a bit.’

‘Hee!’ She grins toothily.

‘Samidare, I need you to do something for me if you can.’ You say seriously.

‘I’m all ears, sir.’ She tries to look serious, dropping the bag as she goes into a salute.

The bag heavily drops onto the sidewalk with a loud clank. Murakumo rubs her temples, fighting a groan caught in her throat as Samidare fusses over the bag, tearfully lifting it up and very much embarrassed for her clumsiness. Kiyoshimo and Naganami were seated on their bags, scrunching their mouths at the sight.

‘Wish you were all fingers, too.’ Murakumo mutters.

Everyone heard it, though, and Samidare looks down guiltily. You send Murakumo a look, to which she shrugs, gesturing back to Samidare.

‘If there’s anything going around in the Division, I want you to report to me.’

‘L – Like a snitch?!’ Her eyes grow wide, fearful.

‘No, not like a snitch.’ You raise your hands to calm her down. ‘Samidare, I read your file. You’re definitely leader material; and I’m gonna help you with that – one of the things you got to keep going… is to see if people are unhappy with things.’ You try to explain it as simply as you can. ‘You’ve kept your teammates from each other’s throats before, I know.’

‘Um…’ Samidare bites her lip, looking unsure.

‘We’re not always going to get along, so I want you to keep things cool and report to me whenever things go too sour so we can get it done as fast as we can, okay?’

‘So I’m not a snitch?’ She glances at you for confirmation.

‘No.’ You put a hand on her shoulder, putting yourself on bended knee – literally. ‘You’re a not a snitch. You’re being a good teammate.’ You assure her again, elaborating on yourself once more. ‘I’m not telling you to report to me everything you can get your hands on… but if you can, I want you to make sure everyone’s getting along. Tell them you have my express gratitude and my permission to keep things from boiling over.’

Samidare lets out a small whine as she ponders your words. You don’t know how long you’re on that one knee, but it’s not long. Samidare looks back at you with that chirpy show of teeth, and another salute.

She knocks over the bag again, and you can’t help but chuckle to help get it upright again; and once again she throws you the salute with a grin.

‘Yes, sir!’ She says in an upbeat call.

Murakumo’s snickering catches both your attentions.

‘Why don’t you just adopt her while you’re at it, sir?’ Murakumo smirks at you.

You give Murakumo a flat look.

>Talk to Murakumo
>Talk to Naganami
>Talk to Kiyoshimo
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>>210029
>Talk to Kiyoshimo

‘Why don’t you just adopt her while you’re at it, sir?’
She has no idea how fast I would adopt some of these shipgirls as daughters if I could.
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>>210029
>Talk to Kiyoshimo
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>>210029
>Talk to Murakumo

Alright Murakumo, what is it? If I'm reading her right she's feeling left out and is trying to get our attention through snide comments and putting other people down. The knee jerk reaction is to punish her by delaying speaking to her. But I think that is the wrong course of action in this case.

Her comment about how she is having to do all this paperwork for us because we weren't there yesterday bears consideration. We don't want to let the impression that we are either never there or never willing to pay attention to her take root.

That doesn't mean we have to act like we appreciate her recent comments, though.
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>>210029
>Talk to Murakumo
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>>210093
This is a pretty compelling argument. I'll change my vote.


>Talk to Murakumo
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>>210029
>Talk to Murakumo
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‘I’d like to apologize for leaving you with the dirty work.’ You let out a grimace, feeling apologetic. You couldn’t find a valid excuse – a proper one for saddling her with the unenviable task of filling out the mission report, but if the bunch in her hands was any indication, it was done and gone. ‘I shouldn’t have… I shouldn’t have been so sensitive when they came to my defense.’

‘Yeah, I didn’t get that.’ Murakumo’s lips shape into a pout, shuffling her papers. ‘What was so hardcore that you had to keep from us? We know what happened and we got out of there. I don’t get why you were so… sensitive…’ she smirks at you, echoing your words from before, before, but then she sighs, a small smile forming, ‘but I also understand that you have your own responsibilities as Commander.’

Murakumo snickers slightly, looking away.

‘When you’ve gone through as much as I have… well, you’re willing to let a few things slide.’ She smiles at you kindly; even though you’ve got more than a head on her, it did kind of felt you were talking to… an older sister, you supposed. ‘And in your case, I’m going to let more than just a few things slide.’ She sighs. ‘It’s not fair on you… or the Admiral, but I get that people are just trying to do their jobs.’

You nod, almost dumbly.

‘So I trust that you’re acting on our good faith… and the Admiral’s, Commander.’ She gives you a smirk. ‘Even if you do look like a ticking time bomb to me.’

You laugh; despite how close it hits to home, you can’t help but.

‘Do you need any help with those forms?’ You point to Murakumo’s load of work; she shakes her head in response, still smiling.

‘No, I got them all ready and done last night.’ She yawns slightly, winking at you. ‘Pulled an all-nighter, but I got it done. You won’t believe the kind of loops you have to go through when someone has a hole in their chest.’

She smirks as you wilt; now this is the Murakumo you had recruited. She was back.

‘Murakumo,’ you get her attention, ‘I’m sorry I dropped my responsibilities on you. I should’ve been a lot more attentive. I can’t keep using excuses every time… so I’m just going to apologize, and the next time Akashi or the Admiral drop one on you, just pass it over to me. I have my job, and you have yours.’

‘What, am I your secretary or something?’ She snipes, but you notice a faint stain of red on her cheeks; she must be embarrassed, you can tell, with you going heart-to-heart like this – especially the day after that SNAFU.

That doesn’t explain why the other girls are giggling at her, though.

‘No, but…’ she deflates, but you go on, ‘it’d keep things where they’re supposed to be.’

Murakumo winks and smiles.

‘Aye, aye, sir.’

>Talk to Kiyoshimo
>Talk to Naganami
>Go to the barracks
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>>210029
>Talk to Murakumo
If i pull the robo rabbit ears off, will you die?
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>>210205
>Talk to Kiyoshimo
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>>210205
>Talk to Kiyoshimo
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>>210205
>Talk to Naganami
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>Talk to Kiyoshimo
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‘So how’ve you been since, Kiyoshimo?’

‘I’m good, I guess.’ Kiyoshimo shrugs, pointing a quick finger to your bandages. ‘How about you, sir?’

You roll your prosthetic and your shoulder, wincing as the sting – brought by the application of Akashi’s medicine – comes again, before disappearing into a numb sea. Whatever Akashi had done, it’d at least gotten rid of the stiffness in your joint from all the Vice-Admiral’s knocks.

‘Not bad,’ you smirk, rubbing your jaw line with a thumb, to which Kiyoshimo looks curiously, ‘I mean, aside from the cracked jaw, I think I’m okay.’

Kiyoshimo struggles with something. She looks from you, to the bag and back to Naganami… twiddling her thumbs, before looking straight up at you with a gaze of an exhausted young woman.

‘I want to get back to the front lines.’ She admits tiredly, the ire raising in her voice with every word. ‘I mean, I know that the place needs help, but… but I’m a KanMusu!’ She gives her bag a good smack, her mouth twitching to follow her frown. ‘I don’t like this!’

‘You’ve been doing this for years, Kiyoshimo.’ Naganami, pinches the bridge of her nose.

‘You know what I mean!’ Kiyoshimo shrills at Naganami. ‘I haven’t been out to sea since the attack! And I haven’t been assigned anything other than being Yuubari-san’s gofer for almost two months!’

‘Two months?’ You frown.

‘That’s because the Admiral told you to get your aim right again.’ Naganami says crisply, before noticing your confused expression. ‘She scored the fifth worst overall when it came to the trials three months ago; you don’t unload on one target. Basic.’

‘It was listing funny! I told them it was listing funny, but you know what they told me? They said just do it and I missed every single shot but one – and that clipped it!’ She raises her hands in outrage. ‘And it’s not like I’m appreciated for what I do here, anyway…’

You look at Kiyoshimo neutrally.

‘It’s not about being appreciated.’ That’s the truth from your mouth. ‘You gotta just do the job sometimes, and sometimes that job needs you doing something you’d never done before – or that the job you’re given sometimes isn’t as easy – or expected.’ You bite your lip, continuing, ‘I don’t know if it’s good advice to you, but what I’m saying is… whatever comes your way, you have a responsibility to yourself to see it through. That’s… That’s life, pretty much.’

‘Doesn’t stop people treating you like scum…’ She mumbles, but you catch it.

‘Is this about what happened the other day?’ You remember the incident at Teitan High; you hadn’t thought much of it, then.

‘What happened?’

‘It – !’

Kiyoshimo stops, sighing.

‘It happens every day.’ She gives you a smile, hoisting her bag. ‘We’re used to it, sir. But... we gotta do our jobs, right?’

>Talk to Naganami
>Go to Barracks
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>>210276
>Talk to Naganami
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>>210276
>>Talk to Naganami
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>>210276
>>‘It happens every day.’ She gives you a smile, hoisting her bag. ‘We’re used to it, sir. But... we gotta do our jobs, right?'

Talk about a toxic work environment. I really want do something about that, but I'm not sure what we can do.

>Talk to Naganami
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>>210285
>>210293
>>210299
I've kinda put up some 70s X-Men into the dialogue when it comes with the perception between humanity and KanMusu. How does it come off? Okay?
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>>210299
>talk to Kiyoshimo
Your workers aren't appreciated. It's a bigger hindrance than gangs.
Give her the agile manifesto speech. Order her to check out some agile/scrum book from the library, and get her team going.
Implement any of the methods that aim to make the worker proud and invested in their work. Give them knowledge of the end user functional stories, give them a kanban to show daily progress on, trust them with the responsibility to self-improve.
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>>210317
I like it. And I can definitely see the X-men vibe.
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>>210276
>Talk to Naganami
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>>210318
The problem is right now... is that the volunteers are the majority. That guy hassling Mamiya told the truth - "If we're not around the place doesn't run". The Abyssal assault practically nuked every officer save for the Admiral in Yokosuka. The soldiers/Reserves have no problem with the KanMusu.

The public do, though. A good majority of them don't consider the KanMusu... one of them, so to speak. I borrowed a lot from the 70s X-Men books to get the perception of why the KanMusu aren't liked that much despite being humanity's best defense against an Eldritch Army. Not all humans in this world are like that, but a lot of them are.

For one... the military is rendered ineffective all across the globe in the span of 3-4 years and the fairies just step in and hold the line - they don't win, but they do hold the line. If their net was up and running, the sentiment for the KanMusu would be "glorified pigs".

It's a Who Watches The Gate Watcher sort of paranoia. It's unjustified, but there you go. The Admiralty being the ultimate go-to with the Court doesn't help matters because the League of Nations (This verse's UN, I guess) practically asks "How High" every time the Admiralty mobilizes.

It's unjustified and justified on both sides, to some extent.

Plus, the Admiralty spouts propaganda like the Soviet Bloc. That doesn't help.
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>>210317
You're doing excellent job at getting me to emphasize with the characters. At showing us how, in a highly stressful environment, people will take out their anger and frustration on those who can't fight back because it is 'safe' to do so. Everytime I see that it hits me in the gut, so props to you for that.

At the same time you're not taking the story into grimndark. Despite the challenges good things still happen in this world and not just due to our actions either. Characters take their own initiative to work on these issues (like how the admiral asked Akagi to give your girls special attention followed mission).

It's all very well done and you should be proud.
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‘Naganami, was it?’

‘Y – Yes, sir!’ She drops into a salute; you give her a once over, once again wondering how remarkably similar she looked to Kiyoshimo.

‘You guys look alike.’ You point out, looking from her to Kiyoshimo, who only nods with a smile.

‘We’re sisters.’ Naganami tosses her hair back, puffing her chest out as if she was declaring herself a duel’s victor. She gives Kiyoshimo a smile and a quick nod of her own, before looking at you again. ‘I think that’s to be expected, sir.’

‘You’re sisters?’ You repeat, looking from one to the other.

‘Yes, sir.’ Naganami crosses her arms, grinning at you. ‘Surprised to hear that?’

You’re not that surprised, but you are curious. You knew some KanMusu had some sort of bond or connection in the past life or something that made their spirits essentially kin – or rather, that’s what you understood from some of the trivia tossed around – and you knew Takao and Nachi had lost their family, as well. However, this was the first time, you supposed, that you actually met true-blue KanMusu siblings.

‘No, not really… I knew KanMusu had siblings, but… I’m curious – how do you guys decide who’s the older and the young – !’

Murakumo slaps her hand over your mouth, shaking her head rapidly. She hisses something at you – but you realize that it’s just a sound to quickly indicate that you had, once more, said the wrong thing at the wrong time.

Naganami puffs her chest proudly.

‘Well, it’s obvious that I’m the old – !’

‘I am!’ Kiyoshimo spins into view, happily twirling her silver locks. ‘I was summoned first!’

‘Now you’ve done it.’ Murakumo grumbles quietly, glaring at you. ‘You’ve started it.’

‘I believe you were the last to be launched, dearest.’ Naganami bares her fangs – Kiyoshimo does the same, and the two of them butt heads immediately. ‘You may have been summoned first, but that does not drop you into the role of my senior so quickly, now, does it?’

‘Eh? Is Naganami-chan unknown of her place in this world?’ Kiyoshimo says in a sing-song voice. ‘I’ve been here longer, so that makes me the elder, right?’

‘The younger sister does not seem to know her place as 19 out of 19.’

‘Oh, just who is the one that cried when she destroyed the pillar in the practice yard, ha?’

‘It can’t have been the same one who scored lower than her older sister in the trials, right?’

‘I’m the older one, dingus!’

‘As if, wannabe!’

‘Get going, sir.’ Murakumo sighs, gesturing with her head Samidare. ‘We’ll take care of it.’

‘O – Okay...’

Just as you finish, you notice a buggy – not the old man’s – pull up with several burly-looking men covered in grease. The driver gestures at you to get in, which you do. The men talk about pipes and mortar, and you...

>Keep quiet
>Talk (Specify)
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>>210343
>Keep quiet

I'm guessing Commander knows fuck-all about construction.
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>>210343
>Talk (Specify)
If they're talking about us, introduce ourselves. Ask about recent scuttlebutt.
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>>210343
OOCNitpicky:
Why are builders covered in grease? do you mean dirt or dust instead maybe? Cause Mechanics are the greasy ones around here, while builders are dusty.

>'Sup, where y'all going?' 'How was lunch?'
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>>210350
OOC: Operating machinery. You wouldn't think that it happens, but it does. You can add dirt and soot and mortar if you want instead. As long as the message gets across that they're not guys you'd want to waltz into the Choclit Shop for a drink.
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>>210343
>'Sup, where y'all going?' 'How was lunch?'

>>210328
So the Admiralty is an organization above modern militaries - which have been rendered useless by the new enemy - are ostensibly working under the Not!UN, and specialize in deploying specific weapons to counter giant eldritch abominations.
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>>210361
>Filename
But some of our weapons ARE traumatized teenagers.
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‘How’s lunch for you guys?’ You turn to one of the men, offering your best business expression.

‘Can’t complain!’ One of them says, grinning widely back at you as the wind blasts his long hair back through the ride. ‘Full stomach and it’s back to the shift for us!’

‘What about you?’ Another one of them, chewing on a toothpick with a horrible burn mark over one side of his face asks, wearing the same jovial expression as his compatriot.

‘I know you. You were that guy the Admiral was dragging around yesterday. New blood?’ To that, you nod, before his eyes light up in realization the moment the words leave his mouth; he turns to his friend, uttering something you don’t recognize.

‘How’re your girlfriends, kid?’

The whole crew snickers, and you offer a grimace. One of them pokes you in the chest – giving you a wink to let you know they were just kidding. You rest back into your seat as the men all give you friendly bumps – some of them go back to talking about their work.

‘They’re not my girlfriends.’ You insist and they fall on deaf ears as the men chuckle at your declaration – you don’t bother to emphasize the point; It’d only add to their fire.

‘Right, they’re soldiers, yeah?’ An older male pats your shoulder, smirking. ‘And you’re their… what? Captain?’

‘Commander.’ You correct. They nod, and you continue. ‘Anything interesting happen today?’

‘Not much.’ The first man shrugs as the buggy speeds along. ‘But we heard some cripple clocked one of that there gang’s goons something good!’

The whole buggy erupts into laughter.

‘Wish I was there. Woulda shown those snaps a thing or two about how a real man operates!’

‘Find it hard to believe they’d cross over right into Admiralty territory.’ The older-looking man goes, frowning. ‘Gettin’ way too greedy.’ He winks at you. ‘I heard the Admiralty’s sendin’ their own personal enforcer to put that punk in the commercial district in his place.’

‘Hope nothing bad comes of it – that guy’s got a friggin’ temper from what I heard.’

‘Y’all hearin’ things wrong. I heard they were sendin’ in a whole hit Squad. Ain’t that right, Cap?’

‘I think… they’re just sending in someone for a talk.’ You try to rationalize it the best you can.

‘Oh, talk, eh?’ The second man nods in understanding. ‘I get it. Code. Secret’s safe with me.’

You roll your eyes.

‘Sir, where am I dropping you off?’

You see the compound entrance coming up not a hundred meters away.

‘Here’s fine, actually.’

The buggy comes to a stop – you wave a goodbye to the men and work your way to the compound entrance. The streets are a little clear of rubble, you notice – thanks to the reconstruction crew, you supposed. At the entrance you see Kaga, Houshou and the fat attendant, actively chatting.

They notice you, too.

>Address Kaga
>Address Houshou
>Address Attendant
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>>210379
>Address Houshou
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>>210379
>Address Kaga
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>>210379
>Address Houshou
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>>210379
>Address Kaga
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>>210379
Address Kaga
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>Address Houshou
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You walk up to the trio. Your fat attendant gives you a nod and a salute. Seeing your attentions not on him, though, he goes off to attend to his duties with a respectful bow. Houshou gives her own bow of welcome to you – which you generously give back. Kaga doesn’t say anything, however, but raises an eyebrow of curiosity and gives a cross of her arms in response to your arrival.

‘Good afternoon, Commander – or should I say, evening?’ Houshou says; in her arms, she has what looks like a binder file – you don’t see the contents, but its unofficial state – battered and with stick notes over the back, tell you its decidedly not Admiralty business. ‘How’d your meeting go?’

‘It… went all right.’ You turn your attention to Kaga, who remains neutral, save for a twitch of her lips. ‘Houshou-san, are you and Kaga busy right now? I’d like to borrow her for a while – I need to discuss some things with her… if that’s all right with you.’

Houshou looks surprised, looking to you then back to the stoic KanMusu. Her mouth twists slightly, before she returns your inquiry with a smile and a bow.

‘Well, it’s all right with me, sir, but you’ll have to ask her for that privilege.’ She turns to Kaga, giggling slightly. ‘Kaga-san, I’ll be on the grounds if you need me – same to you, Commander. I’ll be just outside there.’

Houshou indicates to what looked like a ruined porch or patio on one side of the compound with no roof. Before you can say another word, she’s off with another smile. You and Kaga are in each other’s company… you had a few things on your mind that you hoped she could answer, at least before you threw yourself to the mercy of gangsters later tonight.

You turn to Kaga.

‘Don’t worry, sir, you can use any hole you wish.’ She raises her dress slightly, throwing you off-balance as she looks away with a pink tinge and a look of disgust on you. ‘Please mess up this woman and turn her into your personal meat – !’

‘Stop it.’ You give her a flat look.

‘Of course.’ Kaga nods with no emotion whatsoever – or an attempt at remaining that way. ‘That can be a turn-on too, I suppose. You can hit me as much as you like… just don’t finish inside, okay?’

‘Kaga. No.’

‘Or you can finish inside.’ She says robotically, not missing a beat

‘All right, that’s it.’ You begin to lose patience with the jokes, and Kaga’s smirk raises your ire way too much for your liking – pretty as she is and elegant and she could be, you weren’t in the mood for her – !

‘Ah, you’re going to assault me with it now, aren’t you? Your thing.’

She flexes her pinky finger in front of you. You sigh, heavily.

‘Kaga, I really need to talk with you.’

You look at her seriously, and she turns to the barracks, motioning at you to follow.

She nods... and wiggles her rump.

You count backwards from ten.

>Write-In
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>>210493
To specify - Write-In topics that you would like to ask Kaga.
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>>210494
Shit, I donno. Maybe something about her helping the sky force?
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>>210510
Like what exactly are they having her do, since they had her working so late the previous night?

Nothing to strenuous on her body, I assume anyway.
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>>210493
>>210515
Something like this
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>>210493
Ask her if she knows anything about the quickening.
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>>210493
>"Kaga, I keep hearing something called the quickening. Do you know anything about it?"
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>>210493
>>210532
Changing my vote to this
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Maybe it's just me, but I feel it would have been better asking Houshou about the Quickening.
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>>210521
This seems like a good idea. Why are we gettin killt..
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>>210493
>Ask for her input on the upcoming operation and see if she would be willing to play overwatch.
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>>210536
Very much agreed.
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You decide, as you and your Aircraft Carrier companion walk up the stairs, that the first thing you need to do was to establish yourself better as a Division Commander. That meant having a hand and an eye on the activities of your Division as long as they were under you; you’d been lax for quite a bit – and lax to start off, despite your words – but you tell yourself that, right now, of all things, that you want to actually be their leader and their Commander. With Murakumo and Samidare, you feel as though you’d begun your long stretch… but right now, there were things that you want to be in the know.

Things that you felt that you should know – and be informed of.

Kaga opens the door to your room, still without its door knob. You follow her in, walking past her and leaning on the closet. You felt a little bit of stress on your shoulders right now… and the fact that you were dealing with a woman who’d shoved her pelvis into your face this morning only added more to it.

‘Kaga, what is it that you write back to the Sky Force?’ You cross your arms, sighing as you look at her.

Kaga regards you for a moment, mimicking your stance as she leans against the wall. Neither of you say anything for a while. You feel a little more nervous as the seconds tick by. Kaga’s demeanor right now – while stoic and focused as her profile had said her to be – only served to add to her reputation to you as an enigma.

‘I report back on my condition and how my stay is going.’ She begins, licking her lips – a clear teasing maneuver from the get-go. She winks at you as she pushes herself off the wall and to the closet. ‘If you’re wondering where I go, I used the Command tent as a makeshift office to keep track of my reports from the Sky Force… and to keep myself informed of the status of my gear. You know how I operate as a career, I presume?’

‘I don’t.’ You say simple. ‘Shocking, I know.’

‘You’re familiar on the fact that I’m an elemental spirit made physical form by fairy magics, aren’t you?’ Her back is to you, and you realize with a roll of her shoulders that she is beginning to disrobe. You turn around. ‘Carrier weapons, our bow and our arrow are desire and emotion made manifest.’

There’s a teasing tone to her voice that you’re quite sure shouldn’t be there.

‘They’re made from the grudges and determination of humanity in its last ekes of life – their last will, if you’d like to call it. Made bare for us to use against their foes in this life.’ She sounds almost poetic. ‘You might even call us, the Carriers, the anti-Abyssals. Out of all the Daughters brought to this world… humanity’s wishes seem to echo with us the most.’

She giggles.

‘Also, I have to tell them I’m happy here or they’d drag me back.’

>‘What can you tell me about the Quickening?’
>‘What else can you tell me about the Sky Force?’
>‘Just how do you feel about me, Kaga?’
>Write-In
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>>210546
>>‘What else can you tell me about the Sky Force?’
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>>210546
>‘What can you tell me about the Quickening?’
>‘What else can you tell me about the Sky Force?’
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>>210546
>‘What else can you tell me about the Sky Force?’
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>>210546
>skyforce into more about the spiritual bond into quickening.
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>‘What else can you tell me about the Sky Force?’
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‘I’m a bit fuzzy on the details… what is the Sky Force, really?’

You still face the wall. This time it’s not so hard for you to keep from giving in to your curiosity and turning around.

‘The Independent Sky Superiority Force.’ Kaga elaborates – you hear the rustle of clothing; she’d begun to strip. ‘It used to be part of the Admiralty… but they came into a disagreement.’

There’s a little snide humor in her voice, but you don’t comment on it.

‘What kind of a disagreement?’ You frown.

‘The kind that couples get divorced over. Power.’ She laughs darkly – you find it rather disconcerting that she’s able to pull it off so well. ‘The Sky Superiority Force was more focused on taking back the skies as opposed to taking down the Abyssals – if you’re going to go into detail, the ISSF is a lot more shamanistic and conservative in its magic usage.’ She lets out a loud sigh as you hear more rustling. ‘Anyway, from what I know, the Admiralty and the ISSF, which was just a branch to maintain and house us Carriers back then… butted heads over the Summoning Modules.’ She grunts. ‘One didn’t want to waste energy on the other. I’ll let you figure out which is which.’

‘So it was a fight over a coffee pot?’ You cross your arms, turning around with an even more deepened frown… and find Kaga with her top undone and folded down.. ‘I could have sworn you put a bra on this morning.’

‘So you were looking.’ She gives you a teasing wink, not unlike Takao. She gives her breasts a good pinch, presenting them to you. ‘I’m not bad, am I?’

You don’t fall for it. You need one head more operational than the other.

‘So why the disagreement? Why couldn’t they both just agree to, I don’t know, share like good roommates?’

‘You’re expecting too much from people in positions of power.’ She raises her arms over her head. ‘The ISSF has a bigger investment in occultism than anything – I practically fire off Shikigami at my enemies – that’s how they work. The Fairies work closer with us Carriers in the ISSF than they do with the Admiralty, where they’re essentially go-betweens.’

‘So what do you do in the ISSF?’

‘Take back the skies and then the Abyssals – in that order.’ Kaga almost sounds bored with that explanation – she’s a lot more distracted by her chest, weighing them in an almost distracting manner. ‘We’re not as offensive as the Admiralty, though we do do joint campaigns from time-to-time.’

You try to get the message across to her to not turn away from people whom you were addressing, but you realize it’d be hypocritical.

‘Is there a reason why they allowed you to come back to the Admiralty?’

‘I’m not back. I’m on loan.’ Her thumbs hook onto her waist strap, smirking. ‘Want to pay interest?’

>‘What can you tell me about the Quickening?’
>‘Just how do you feel about me, Kaga?’
>Write-In
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>>210640
>‘What can you tell me about the Quickening?’
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>‘What can you tell me about the Quickening?’
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>>210640
>Quickening, how much does the commander affect carrier operations?
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‘Kaga…’ You turn away from her teasing. ‘Do you know anything about a Quickening?’

‘Who told you?’ She frowns, throwing you a curious gaze.

‘I came into some info about it.’ It’s not a lie, but you don’t feel like divulging it all on the spot. ‘What can you tell me?’

‘That the most important thing is that if a human has one, is to stay away from a Carrier.’ She smirks at you… did she know?

W – Why so?’ You feign ignorance; you hope you did a good job.

Kaga drops her skirt, and again, you swear that you had seen her put on a pair this morning.

‘I told you, didn’t I? We’re a lot more… in tune with the spiritual aspect of our nature.’ She cocks her head nonchalantly. ‘As a Carrier I carry more. A Quickening is the emotional trigger that bonds spirit to spirit, bringing us into a sense of one-ness… it’s synchronization between two beings on a plane that manifests our abilities somewhat… to a higher level, if you’d like to put it.’

‘So, why Carriers?’

‘The spirits of those that I carried with me… their grudges, their hopes, their desperation and their determination; it lingers on me. A Quickening with a Carrier isn’t like a Quickening triggered by a battle-high. You actually risk, with any one of us… the feelings of those leaking back through from me, for example, flowing back through you.’

‘How’s that bad for me?’ You feel quite stupid for asking.

‘Why, because you’re human, of course – you’re still alive, breathing.’ She says it as though it was the most obvious thing. ‘You risk your own soul being overwritten by a grudge gone wild if a Quickening ever triggers with one of us.’ She casually continues. ‘So, how did you find out about your Quickening?’

You balk.

‘I never said I had one.’

‘I don’t need to.’ She shrugs. ‘I knew about it since I kicked you through that door.’

‘You knew about it then?!’ You feel incredulous and angry. ‘Why didn’t you say anything to me?!’

‘Just because you had the potential for it didn’t mean you had it. How did that door open?’

‘The – The fairies did it. Apparently.’ Your annoyance is up there now. ‘Wait, so I can’t be around you?’

You don’t know if that’s good news or bad.

Kaga crosses her arms, shaking her head.

‘No. The emotional drive needs to go both ways for it to trigger in the first place. The activation is involuntary, but the bond’s resonance… well, there’re millions of spectrums. There is no assurance of an unconscious trigger to a dangerous level, but it’s… minor.’

She wiggles her pinky.

‘Like your dick.’

Funny

As if sensing your worry, she approaches you, stoic and bare, stopping right before you, arms cross.

‘If you’re still worried… I can help you.’ She smirks. ‘I’m not spoiling, though… so yes or no?’

>‘No, thanks.’
>‘Why not?’
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>>210737
>‘Why not?’
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>>210737
>‘No, thanks.’
At least right now. Still have that negotiations to get to and I don't want to accidentally fuck our guy up if it goes bad.
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>>210737
>>‘No, thanks.
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>>210737
>'anything to spend more quality time with you' 'but i have to be ready by six'
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>>210737
>why not
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All right, folks, we've entered Sage it would seem. As always, feedback is appreciated, character tics you don't like; ones you enjoy and the sort are appreciated. I'm open to criticism and open to to feedback. I'm just focused on making this as enjoyable for people/comfy for the folks.

So rev 'em up and I'll see you when this thing hits one of the later pages in the new thread.
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>‘No, thanks.’
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>>210881
Out of curiosity, what drove you to make Kaga into a snarky insubordinate, considering it flies in the face of both canon and fandom characterization?
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>>210971
OOC: I can't write stoic very well. So I went with making her an old gun who doesn't think much of tryhards with a dash of shameless flirt. Also, she is the best Aircraft Carrier on record and she knows it - while she's not arrogant, she's not about to let some whippersnapper newbie take the reins on her so easily; plus, she's got leverage on him after that fiasco.

OOC: She's more of herself with the Commander. With the Admiral and Vice-Admiral, she's very on the job.
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>>210737
>why not?
Would rather just get the information and take care of this later if possible.
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>>210881
I feel like we haven't gotten to know Houshou very well so far.
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>>210737
>Why not?

I just hope it doesn't make us late for the meeting.
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>>210737
>‘No, thanks.
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>>210737
>Why not?
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>>210737
>>‘Why not?’
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>>210737
>‘Why not?'
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>>210881
>feedback
Your sluts and lewds aren't fappable and make the story progress even slower. Kaga has a punchable face in your last few posts.

wtf is colored text supposed to mean.

>>204040 counting players isn't rolling a dice.

>>204019
>‘Nachi.’ You raise yourself to your feet.
There's no point in this action right before the prompt.

>>206444
>The Vice-Admiral gets to his feet.
>Wat do
Then half the next post is MC doing nothing, since the prompt happens too late.

>>206690
>'Vice-Admiral?'
MC proceeds to get ignored like a second tier NPC and do nothing. That's not agency.

Your "I'm your boss, and did everything better than you already" GMPC is a bitch to players, it doesn't work. He's sticking to MC for no good reason: the fight, the car, the hospital room where MC goes to explicitly visit *his* team. Maybe you could have a GMPC if you managed to not make everything a one-on-one interaction (cf. all the: >ask A >ask B choices you put, when everyone has a strong opinion on the matter). Either dump him, give a reason why he isn't our boss or let us choose his actions too.
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>>210737
>‘No, thanks.’
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>>211454
You are one salty fag, aren't ya?

>>211100
You might want to archive.
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>>211454
Everything except the last part of your post feels very nitpicky. And I feel like the Vice-Admiral thing is going to be a non-issue later on. He strikes me as more of a mission-giving side character. I doubt he's going to accompany us on every little outing. I hope he becomes the Commander's drinking buddy though.
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>>211454
Oh, shit. That 1d12 rule is incomplete. I'll have to specify that better. It means if I ask for a 1d12 roll only one guy needs an 8+, but the vote must also take majority
As in, it needs to have the most votes as well as someone rolling 8+. For the 1d6 rolls of 5 peeps, it's different as I take the first 5 rolls and end it there for success or failure.

You don't like the Vice-Admiral? Damn. I thought I did good with him. His arrival is supposed to signify the Admiralty getting back on things.

>>211923
Archive this thread or the whole Quest so far? This one's still open for the time being; I usually don't crack it until Page 5+.

>>212094
In character purpose, the VA is a more grounded mentor and on-the-money compared to the Admiral's crotchety but tired leader to his troops. His presence in role is to act as the sort of... Shepard to the Commander's Garrus. So you might be on the money that he might be a sort of drinking buddy... but that depends on your choices when it comes to him. In-story, the Admiral won't be able to manage all the chaos without a VA to help; if you asked about the Admiralty you would have gotten A lot more info on how they work and who they assign where.
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>>210737
>‘Why not?’
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>>210881
>So rev 'em up and I'll see you when this thing hits one of the later pages in the new thread.
Wait what? If you're not starting the new thread, then who is?
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>>212857
I will be. I just won't be starting it until 6+ like usual. Until then keep me up on what you're enjoying and don't like so far. I'll try to address them but no promises.

Also, any questions about the world are spoiler-free as long as they don't specifically target characters and such.
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>>212883
This has pretty much nothing to do with the story, but in this world is there a muscle car/motorcycle culture? Besides the Old Man of course.
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>>212094
Also, you're only on Day 3. And you're a newbie. And you're back from a failed mission. You're the only Commander around so far and it's not a stretch for the Admiral to put an extra pair of guiding hands; remember that you are still a reject - circumstances are what brought you here.

Vice-Admiral used to be a Commander, too. He's there get you into shape for your role and... Your health.
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>>212896
The town used to be a motor/car factory town with a side of fishing. The hills used to be frequented by enthusiasts before the attack.
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>>212911
>8 threads
>Several weeks of writing
>Only day 3

How far ahead in days do you see the quest reaching?
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>>213091
When you get district management done as well as establish the forces, the missions will come a lot faster. A LOT faster.

And it's only been a month since I started the quest.
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>>212503
>That 1d12 rule is incomplete.
No, it was pretty clear what you asked for. I mean that letting people roll over and over until someone scores an 8+ will virtually never fail unless you somehow have only a couple players at that time.

The not nice thing about asking for rolls at the same time as picking an option is that the later players see a choice already made (it has a couple votes of lead) that will fail. They either vote for one of the 3 other options (that they might personally prefer), or they try to make the action others already chose a success.

>>212094
>nitpicky
Maybe I didn't make clear: the prompts happen at random times (sometimes too early by half a post, sometimes too late by a couple lines), and they're unclear about how strongly/upset/retarded MC will act, if at all.
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>>213521
I'll disagree with you on the Nachi one. The last line is just a segue into the action the MC takes. The prompt with the VA seems to ask about whether we join him or just let him go alone.

I will agree that clarification as to the choices would be nice, give clarification of what the MC is thinking and gonna do instead of vague one liners. Same problem with Bioware choices sometimes.
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Clarity of the choices is something of a balancing act, I feel. A lot of the fun in a good quest is in predicting the consequences of any given choice based hints throughout the quest, lore, and the personalities of the characters. Something which is even more important when the choice is in regards to a conversation involving lots of subtext.

Overall I feel MECHANIC has done an excellent job getting the balance right. There are a handful of instances where that wasn't the case, but overall they were quite consistent.
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>>213624
I've always been of the opinion that if I say what the exact reaction of the world is going to be to your choices would be apparent instead of you trying to see if it would be good or bad based on character action in the past and your judgement of the said character's personality and the like, it becomes too easy.

You could have actually avoided the fight altogether with the VA if you'd just been a good sport about it, for instance and he'll see you'd be getting along fine and didn't need to be reassured.

You'd have had a scene with the Admiral instead and a status check with your team and a discussion about District Management before being sent to Akashi, where the Quickening prompt would have happened.

Also, the gang scene would have happened and you'd be handling it solo. Which would have given you more information on the boss and how he actually came into power and what his intentions are and how he got the gangs into power. Instead, well... The VA intimidated them and you lost your chance at getting a lot more respect from the volunteers. The VA would have shown up after and say you'd passed his expectations by handling it well enough and the overhearing scene would be a little more positive, as they'd admit that you do have a better sense of control now at least.
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>>213700
What would have happened if we walked in after overhearing our team?
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>>213700

Add more details to choices man. Lack of detail and subtle-ness is very crap for choices. There have been moments where it's fine like talking to someone and whatnot. But detail is very important.

Ex.
>Retreat
>Fall back
>Regroup

All of these words have different meaning just by themselves.

>Retreat to the hill! Go Go Go!
>Fall back to the hill! Squad bounds, cover to cover!
>Regroup to the hill! Spread out!

The choices above, all have the same outcome but the how is really different because of the wording. Also there's no need for additional detail since it's simple. But too simple leaves too many questions, double so when it's social interaction.

Like the part with the VA and the gang members could have...
>"Gentlemen, relax. Let's talk about your boss, tell me about him or her."
>"Sir?" See what the Vice Admiral will do.

Kinda like how Planefag does his choices, detailed with reasoning or the lack of. Just don't over do it like he does, he can get away with it for reasons.
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>>213711
This is a good idea.
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>>213710
You could have either addressed their concerns, which would have actually turned out better because Nachi's temper would not have boiled over and she would not have socked you - she'd actually be defending you and Tenryuu would have been the one who pointed out that your Stream might be unstable and even more so with the Quickening. You didn't lose any points with her, but her file has already stated that she's not of the most "sound" mind herself, especially after that trauma of being a sole survivor.

>>213711
I'll add attitudes to the dialogue prompts, but I won't be adding it to non-dialogue choices. Action is action to me; hope that sits okay with you.
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>>213730

As long as the actions have enough detail and makes sense, yeah sure. Action hasn't really been a problem for the most part.
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>>213737
Yeah, I understand - like in the earlier quest threads with

ACTION (What Commander Does)

Only, right now I'll change it to:

ACTION

"Dialogue" (What Commander Does Along With Words)
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>>213750
sounds good enough?
next thread will show if it works
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New Thread is UP

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