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>>5693368
Then after the meeting- ugh. The officiation of ya stati. Which is Rerehua for annoying nonsense. At least ya got to meet Rogal Dorn, which was sad that ya meetin was brief.

1. The status of ya legion knowing the truth of the imperial truth in certain sectors due to ya own knowledge thus meaning ya legion has even more changes to undergo

2. The status of ya being anointed as the aspect of the motive force by ya father and the Mechanicum ( WHICH YOU ARE NOT HAPPY WITH ESPECIALLY KNOWING WHAT THE MANA SERVITORS ARE) meaning ya get another can of worms. Because ya get to occasionally ( which is Rerehua for ANYTIME THEY FEEL LIKE WEASLIN BEHIND THE EMPEROR'S BACK) settle an internal dispute on if technology is valid or not.

3. The official sanctioning of the old mans 'organization' and ya planet as more than just a recruiting world.

4. Sanctioning of the knights on De'lormosa, which also included Sanctioning ya Cousin and her knight as a freeblade attached to ya, along with a few other knights...

Since you have taken ya position, been on this whirl wind tour, and now are in what is "Your" flagship inside ya favorite ship Ya haven't surfed so you have taken 5 minutes in the wave machine on the Something Fierce to do artificial surfing. After which ya will summarily talk to ya family on the comm.

Before you are sent towards the front, you have a lot of paper work. The Old Man Martin ( who has been inducted as ya council despite not being an Astartes- namely that he was judged just fine as he is) has sworn he'd hold the line for ya to get a solid surf in.

Ya got to figure out what to do first.

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Welcome to a New Book. The beginning of the crusade. There is a lot that is changing fast.

Thank you for staying this long if you have, and new readers welcome.

1. If you noticed we glazed over a lot of events.

You have to choose which Kolinaisi thinks on during this chapter. Right now you are picking the first.

>> Meeting of his sons
>> Meeting of brother Horus
>> Marriage to Meerah
>> The Trip to Terra
>> The Trial on Luna
>> Kolinaisi's official status, upon return to terra, including meeting Dorn

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>>5693371
Next: Kolinaisi, no layabout or slouch still has a lot of official handover as due to how experienced and capable (IE y'all taking the speed run route) he was officially Legion Master the second he landed on Terra and handed the reigns by the Emperor.

You have to pick first, which bit of official business he has to get out of the way- all of which by the end of this thread: Each one is then voted on after the issue is voted on. IE your voting on which is voted on.

>> If and what he renames the legion (Currently The Iron Hearts) and if he decides to change the color scheme (Bone and Camo with much variance depending on role)

>> Codifying the Legion (IE how many knights are attached, the status of De'lormosa, Recruitment rights, if or not the witches get to be honor guard or companions)

>> Doctrine (From boots on ground to fleet)

>> Foundation (You setting up a unit, you getting more involved, and other non doctrinal/ code rules)

>>5693371
>> Marriage to Meerah
>>5693372
>> If and what he renames the legion (Currently The Iron Hearts) and if he decides to change the color scheme (Bone and Camo with much variance depending on role)
The chance to make the Storm Riders a real thing.
Also the legion has so many nicknames, we could even give each of the old one to a different company.

>>5693371
>> Meeting of his sons
>>5693372
>> If and what he renames the legion (Currently The Iron Hearts) and if he decides to change the color scheme (Bone and Camo with much variance depending on role)

>>5693371

>> Meeting of his sons
hopefully we get a good 3 or 4 if QM doesnt do them all.

>>5693372
>> If and what he renames the legion (Currently The Iron Hearts) and if he decides to change the color scheme (Bone and Camo with much variance depending on role)

>>5693371
>>5693372
Making sure Dal does some penance, but not too much for what he did back on Terra. Hell, he could be another special advisor.

>> Marriage to Meerah
Big moment for the Great Man of the stars.
>> If and what he renames the legion (Currently The Iron Hearts) and if he decides to change the color scheme (Bone and Camo with much variance depending on role)

>>5693371
> Marriage to Meerah

> Codifying the Legion (IE how many knights are attached, the status of De'lormosa, Recruitment rights, if or not the witches get to be honor guard or companions)

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The Ceremony was a bit small for a great man.

It's what you both wanted. Family, Friends a beach. The Eire custom of an all white dress seemed a bit weird, but not as weird as the Old Man. He acts at first a bit like an angry stoat, which is odd considering da is happy. He gives you a wedding present.

An outfit. Dal, offers to officiate- which is even stranger. Not as strange as the outfit, which strange as it is, fits perfectly and actually feels good- even cool in the weather. Said it was made out of Seers sharker or something.

"Brother, I must admit- I wasn't expecting this sort of thing." Horus says with a large smile.

Horus.

"I would invite all my brothers, but they aint nowhere near here."

"All I have met would accept. I imagine the ones you met would as well. I am sure father wishes he was here."

"Are any- of my brothers like me?" You ask

"Russ, maybe- I know Fulgrim was actually married in a ceremony, though asking him for advice on that subject would be a bit odd. On my homewold, Cthonia, it's traditional to get the groom a gift to give to his bride, however I know so little of Meerah, other than what time we have spent. So your going to have to settle for some jewelry that may fit her from a planet of artisans." Horus says presenting you with a necklace that has a distinct hum of mana.

"It's also a defensive shield isn't it?" You quickly point out and Horus nods

"In addition to it being an exquisite work of craftsmanship, it is. How did you- you could sense the machine hum." He says and he pats you on the shoulder.

"Kolinaisi- many I have met have had wild stories and legends told about them before I met. You are one of the limited few who actually lives up to the tales that I have heard. I hope your marriage is prosperous, long and loving." Horus says and leaves you to get ready.

The clothing while exceptionally ornate- is still a bit odd. Your used to going around in island wear- which surprised Horus 'my brother running around in a grass skirt and 'thongs'. Granted it's not grass, it's a very ornate weave and ya ma

"My son. Gettin married. Great Man of the stars, but still my little boy." She says sneakin up on ya and givin ya a big hug.

"Ma."

"You chose a good girl ya? Meerah is smart. She keep you in check. Make sure you come home alive after all this crusadin round the galaxy. Just be sure to give me a grand baby ya?"

"MA!" You bark and she smiles at you

"I aint gonna live forever son. But ya not only a big man, ya family. While I may be givin ya sibling here any day now, A momma can dream."

"I can't make any promises." Ya say- knowing exactly from ya ghastly double, that you very well can.

"Meerah said the same thing- but I prefer honesty to lies. She also said she loves you." Your Ma says as she walks out

"Tell her I love her too. And Love you!" You say as she steps out.

>>5694771
The Ceremony is heartfelt. Ya have Rawhiri, Frank, Tybro and despite only being a short time - Horus as ya men.

Meerah has Yana, Deliah, Flora and Arona as her ladies.

The old man plays a small instrument as you sing the song for the bride to come out. Normally it's tradition for a big man to do it, but none wanted to volunteer- and Jerah who not only said he wasn't gonna be one of ya men as it isn't proper he wouldn't sing as it wouldn't be right because ya 'a better singer.'

Of all the battles the thing that made ya scared most was singing something nice for Meerah and makin sure ya chops were right. When she walks out she has a little tear, and so do a few others. She smiles though, and ya hope ya singing was good. At least the machine spirits liked it. Ya give the necklace to her.

Dal, of all people, says the rites, and does so well.

Kel'li, who skilled in his art, while ya vows are said give both ya and Meerah wrists the markin of marriage, which doesn't hurt, thanks to the ancient device for this and ya both get bracelets, Flora puts Meerahs on, and Horus yours ( a very high honor, but realistically he was the only one who could save Tybro.

When the words are done, and ya say the vows of love- you share a kiss with Meerah and lift her up like a princess.

An artist of some kind named a remembrancer makes art of the event.

You and Meerah save a precious few hours together before the reception and honestly it's one of the best memories ya have.

"My lord"

10 minutes.

"Damn it." You utter quietly as ya hop off ya board.

"Sir- I know there is much you need for "

"Aya. I will be right up." Ya say.

Ya haven't seen ya wife in a week. The Old Man in three days. Ya chain breakers are supposedly being chosen for who can make the cut as astartes.

Ya bein run ragged, so ya decide to sprint up to the deck which scares a lot of men. Granted they marines! They should know about this sort of thing!

When ya get to the top of the ship ya see the Old Man, whom is more cranky than normal. So much so he aint old. He look young as you. Arnoul De'Saan, whomst has been helping ya with so much of this ya can see why he got his attitude. And to your joyous surprise- Meerah and ya honor guard minus Gella.

"My lord," Arnoul says as ya stride in.

"I imagine this is either really bad or really good cause ya got all my friends here in one place." Ya tell him.

"It's at the deadline. I know you said you would mull over it- but the official handover has to be done. Per the wishes of the Emperor. Granted I know the struggles of naming a legion such as ours with so many nicknames - granted I find it Serendipitous that you have as many as we do and share one." Arnoul says sipping at a mug of coffee- which has become exceptionally popular considering it's better than what is called 'recaf' which taste exactly as appetizing as it sounds.

"So I have to decide on colors and name?"

>>5694773
"Yes. Granted we have an honorific already 'His Iron Hearts' but the name is up to you."

"Last I looked at the org chart there are Iron Warriors, Iron Hands, Steel Dragons, and Iron Hearts" You say not really understanding the fascination with a metal that requires almost constant upkeep against rust and other basic problems livin on De'lormosa. You don't really know about it- but the fact that Epsilon named em- may be important. Though the color scheme is kind of- bland. It's sand which is nice, on a strange green pattern which would be good for optical camouflages except that it aint really the issue when all kinds of markers and signets are strewn about the armor and that not all worlds have green. Ya'd stick out like a sore thumb on Nuceria or a desert world with all the green.


>> Turn to your friends for advice
>> Turn to Arnoul.
>> Keep the Name
>> Write in

Color scheme
>> Keep it
>> Turn to Arnoul
>> Turn to your friends
>> Write in
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I want ya'll to know, that the colors and legion name has to be voted on per write in. My opinion doesn't matter- it's yours. So choose what you want.

>>5694775
>His Majesty's Delivery Service

>Green and light blue

>>5694794
I lold out my drink get a fate point and mystery box

>>5694775
>> Write in
Storm Riders
>> Write in
Bronze, green and blue
The symbol is the same as the one you got when you became a big man. If they are your sons, they should wear your colors, right?
The old names will become names for companies or ships.

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>>5694816
Dropped the image

>>5694800
well don't mind if I do, I would like to choose THE MYSTERY BOX!!

>>5694835
Ok. I give you one for your choice and one for later vote

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>>5694775
for the name
>Wave Born or Storm Sharks
for the colour:
> light blue (like tropical water) as a primary, white sandy colour as a secondary, and a nice dark emerald green for the trim/dividing colour.
like this picture.

>>5694775
Name:
>Storm hearts
homage to us and emps name for the chapter.

Colour scheme:
>Turn to our freinds
not a clue, i cant do colours for shit so if anyone has a nice scheme in mind ill back that.

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>>5694884
it would be like this. any suggestions.

>>5694886
>>5694816
Infact I'll will support storm riders as a name. Its a homage to kols "birth" and the sheer chaos of his legion and himself, while also hinting to the machine part through storm.

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here it is with some black

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>>5694895
>>5694899
Here's the old scheme I made back in thread 2

I'll second storm hearts or storm sharks. Maybe Star Sharks?
>Storm Hearts

>Storm Sharks

>Star Sharks

>>5694912
the green is a little too light for me.

>>5694935
It's because our banner is the combination of Jerrah's and dad's banner, so it's sea-foam green.
I actually darkened the green a little bit to create some more contrast from the sky blue.

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Actually, here's a quick side by side of the colors that it should have been.
Although there is a chance it was a mistake instead of an actual decision, it's been more then an year, so I don't remember very well.

>>5694775
>> Write in
storm riders
Color scheme
>> Write in
deep blue, sand, and steel

>>5694775
>>5694818
Perfection.

I was mulling over technomancy (electronics), ocean themes and the sort of inspirational military theme.
Wave guide?
Circuit breakers? could be good when considering the legion gets shit done that others can't
Storm bringers?
Carrier wave?
Silver surfers?
The rising tide?

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I like some of the color options and name options you have been putting out there.

However one of yall chose the mystery box for this and thus it is an option for everyone now if you want to switch. And one of these options (not saying which) was a possible option only if you did things slightly different and is in my mind one of the most heartfelt moments and one of the best you can pick.

Keep in mind, that it can only be used for name or colour.

So

> box colour
> box name

>>5695344
No box for either.

>>5695344
just to clarify, is the mystery box purely for this set of choices or is it transferable?

If its only on name or colour ill vote for colour. Otherwise ide save it.

>>5695364
You can save it

>>5695344
save it

>>5695371
Save it, I didn't know you can do that

Mystery Box will be saved for later per >>5695576

It looks like we don't have consensus for either option, which is ok, I will do a write up when y'all are ready.

personally I like the palettes that have been posted.

To add the consensus my vote will be
>The Storm Sharks
>>informally known as his majesty's delivery service.
>Green Blue Color scheme

>>5694775
here is the vote excluding those with only 1 and ignoring what shade of colour is specified.
Colour:
>Green 4
>Blue 5
>Sand 2


Name:
>The Storm Sharks 3
>storm riders 3
>Storm Hearts 2

>>5695888
>>5694775
Storm Shark then

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You think hard for a minute and breath out. Then you chuckle.

"Storm Sharks."

"What?"

"Storm Sharks. They are a type of- it's one of the sharks that live near my home, though honestly it may be more than one species of shark." You say thinking about it then shaking your head

"The point is I think it fits. As for the color, well- Camo isn't going to save us. So maybe some different colors, I think I have a few different ones in mind." You say and Arnoul seems a bit hesitant.

"Storm Sharks?"

"Ya."


"It's, well different than anything else that is for sure. I mean, sharks are a known predator, they were on terra until there were no more oceans..."

Ah yes.

Terra.

No oceans.

None.

Despite being the birthplace of surfing- there is no water on terra that isn't shipped in.

You almost want to scream thinking about it.

" Right, I want to see what it looks like on some armor. Then we can maybe come up with some more clarity, but Storm Sharks. I think though, I shall give the companies all names based on nicknames and the current name- if the men are fine with it." You add

"Well we have a unique structure, somewhat similar to the 1st legion but we use classic Terran military terminology as you have noticed. It has made things a bit more interesting- but it's a proud tradition we keep speaking of, that is your official first act as Commandant" Arnoul De'Saan says taking away the parchment

"Commandant?" That is a rank that you saw once in an ancient book- which had an interesting hat and rank for such a position. Supreme commander for some.

"Aye Sir. We are the Legionares Astartes, His Space Marines. Our Supreme Leader by appointment would be Commandant. We hold true to the tradition."

"Well so long as I get the hat." You say with a chuckle that causes everyone but Arnoul (including his assistant) to chuckle

"I don't - what?"

"When I was privateering, I had a fancier hat for being a commodore than a captain. The fancier the hat, the more important the rank." It's the truth, and everyone but Arnoul knows it.

"Uh. Right. I will work on getting you an appropriate head covering immediately, I am surprised I didn't think about that on Terra."

"Ya Terra has changed since I last visit." Old Man martin says brusquely.

"I thought it was- nice if a bit- pretentious and crowded." Meerah says bluntly to which both Arnoul and his Assistant look a bit shocked.

"Terra is the birthplace of humanity, it is more than nice."

"Ya didn't correct her on the pretentious and crowded though." Old Man Martin says and you scoff a bit.

"Sir?"

"It is missing water. I heard it was once blue."

"It was. There is a tragedy to that." Arnoul says and sighs

"Our legion hurt the most, where we were drawn from, was more hurt by that than many others. Honestly when we first visited De'lormosa it was more aligned to our ancient home on Terra then where we came from." Arnoul says and you wait a moment.

>>5698449

"Yeah. I have been thinking a lot on that. The role the legion should play on De'lormosa." You say and it's there. For the briefest flash- you catch it. A bit of hope, and wonder in his eyes.

>> Think back on the visit to terra
OR
>> Think back to first meeting with your sons.

And

>> Work on codifying the Legion

OR

>> Work on Doctrine of the Legion

>>5698451
>> Think back on the visit to terra
>> Work on codifying the Legion

>>5698451
>>> Think back on the visit to terra
>>> Work on codifying the Legion

Did I already post? I don't remember

>>5698469
Ok, I did.

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>>5698451
>Think back to first meeting with your sons.

> Work on codifying the Legion

>the storm shark (animal) look like a hammer head and distributes eclectic shocks by ramming it's pray. they often are found in schools near the surface. following the storms that typically ravage the seas De'lormosa using the charged energy to both sense their prey and charge their ram like head.

>their larger artic cousins are often called Thor Sharks and are considered by the artic tribes myth to all be born from Thor one of De'lormosa's many titans. Thor is not only different in size but also creates his own storms instead of following a natural one.

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while looking for a hammer head shark art i found this by arvalis on DeviantArt

>>5698451
>> Think back to first meeting with your sons.
And
>> Work on codifying the Legion

>Think back to first meeting your sons
>Work on codifying the legion

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Your sons.

They are an interesting group.

"Aya. Arnoul, take a break, we gonna codify this- might as well do this now." You say kicking out the guest chair for him and he looks a bit strange.

"Commandant, this is going to be a long process." He says and you sigh.

"Not really logistically speaking it aint too bad ya. We got some time for it." You say and Arnoul looks surprised.

When they first arrived-not just the three lads who now make up your unofficial retinue- There was a lot of hesitation. They came down like a storm and met at a point that was supposedly pre determined by the lads who pointed it out to them.

They came on boats, decent ones actually, and the first one off the boat was Arnoul De'Saan. The man, looked a bit rough around the edges. He had multiple facial scars, one eye had a slight mutation- kind of like a birth mark, and he looked like how ya remember him. He was tall, and aside from the scars looked smart as he did strong. But when he came up on the beach, ya trotted over to him.

"So we meet again!" You shouted and he smirked.

"This time in person. I see you have two much bigger ships and several smaller ships now." He said looking among the fleet and just the world itself. Ya sons, seemed like a weight had been lifted off them, or like a nice breeze on the surf had hit em.

"So you turned this world into a paradise." Arnoul looked about and he and many of the lads were eager to meet ya family and the islanders- though many of the islanders were interested in ya sons. For the better part of two hours it was like a mini festival on the beach, despite the fact there was barely enough room for all ya lads on the tiny islands-. All ya sons were exploring and generally trying to just take in the area

Except one.

One stayed busy, like he was helping out- but not getting involved. And then as subtle as it was, you felt something. A sudden pulse of electricity and barely a whisper. It's familiar. They are somehow able to hide their physical appearance from you- but not their mana. That heart. It beats like yours. That pulse, is like yours. This isn't a normal marine, it's a brother in disguise. And ya think- ya might know who.

"This is Alpha Actual, I am almost done here, everything looks how I expect-" And he paused when he realized you spotted him.

"Alpha?" you dart over and hug him.

"Alpha! Long time no speak mate!" You say and he just sort of stops any facade he had and takes of his helmet. There is something familiar.

"Well no fooling you. I fooled almost everyone else though." He says with a smile and a small note of pride.

"Who was the other?" You ask.

"Angron. Though I may have slipped up by saying my name just a little loudly in your presence."

"So- you meet all of us?" You ask.

"Everyone so far. Though I must say- you leading the eleventh- seems like the perfect fit."

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>>5699242
"I got a lot to live up to." You confide to him as it seems like everyone is just fine with ignoring the two of you to your talk.

"So do you have a legion?"

"It's a secret. And honestly Malcador is going to be a bit upset with me, two of my brothers know of me. Though- I was sent here mostly to observe what progress you already made- and I am quite impressed. The technology you have will make the Mechanicum eager to talk to you."

"Aya. It's gonna be a troubled discussion." You say still not knowing what to make then you smirk

"Wanna surf?"
"What?"

"I am gonna teach my sons how to surf. You are pretending to be one of my sons, so would you like to learn how to surf?" Ya ask.

"Actually- I think I wouldn't mind that."

So you teach Alpha how to surf. Which is actually fairly quick, he's a quick study. But not as fast as De'Saan.

He surfs like you, as if he already knew how. And most of your sons seem more bent to that way, with how they seem to be talented in the water even in armor. You surf till sunset- then have bonfires as you talk and walk among ya sons, as you introduce them to ya chain breakers. Many of whom are wanted as recruits. It isn't so much a party, but more of a family reunion party, like the clan does during a big mokka. You take them throughout the planet, show them the knigts, the witches, the various people and even the poles.

"Arnoul, mate- when we met, ya were pleased as punch with what we had goin on De'lormosa. I aint gonna take anything from ya. I want ya to participate in codifying this, with me- this maybe my legion, but it's still one crew- and everyone has a voice." You say and Arnoul nods.

On the issue of knights
>> Form a new knight household, that way the current knights still maintain their honor and duty- one attached to you. Have your cousin head it up and pick new members. Also create new knights to go with it- though- you may want to do some cross training. You may also test and see if ya able to pilot that big knight...
OR
>> Sanction the current knight house to assist you during the crusade, then outside of war they can return to their current duty of guarding the system.
OR
>> Only make and take a few knights, no need to get really elaborate with this.
OR
>> Write in


One the issue of the Witches
>> Keep a contingent of witches/psykers as honor guard till your companions are not up for it- then have them pick the replacements
OR
>> Have in perpetuity, if they are willing, the Island provide your honor guard, but doing it on a rotational basis, having an age limit and a term limit for the honor guard.
OR
>> Try maybe to find some psykers in ya ranks, have the witches try to train em up, and see what works, then go from there, the ladies will always be ya companions, but the legion may want to have a say in your honor guard
OR
Write in

Then

>> Start on the recruitment process- the legion is a bit small

OR

>> Discuss the status of De'lormosa and the legion

>>5699243
>> Sanction the current knight house to assist you during the crusade, then outside of war they can return to their current duty of guarding the system.

>> Write in
Have the witches be attached to the legion as high ranked auxiliaries. They can have more then one assignment, like some training psykers, others going on combat, and a few being picked as honor guards (to us or even other leaders). After their tour they can choose to retire or reenlist.

>> Discuss the status of De'lormosa and the legion

>>5699247
Oh, and organizing the witches like that can also help for the pariahs from the island that are now bound to us.
They being related helps.

>>5699243
>> Form a new knight household, that way the current knights still maintain their honor and duty- one attached to you. Have your cousin head it up and pick new members. Also create new knights to go with it- though- you may want to do some cross training. You may also test and see if ya able to pilot that big knight...

>Have the witches be attached to the legion as high ranked auxiliaries. They can have more then one assignment, like some training psykers, others going on combat, and a few being picked as honor guards (to us or even other leaders). After their tour they can choose to retire or reenlist.

> Discuss the status of De'lormosa and the legion

>>5699243
On the issue of knights
>> Form a new knight household, that way the current knights still maintain their honor and duty- one attached to you. Have your cousin head it up and pick new members. Also create new knights to go with it- though- you may want to do some cross training. You may also test and see if ya able to pilot that big knight...
of course talk with the current knight house on koli's world to also assist the eleventh legion though making a contract with them so those that don't join us on the crusade can shore up the defense's of the system
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>>5699247
this for the witches
Then
>> Discuss the status of De'lormosa and the legion
as we would have to recruit from our home but we should help improve the choosing process to see who is capable of handling the gene seed either from the young of old , for this old man will be a big help in improving the process at least starting, koli would also have to see how the tribes react to this whole thing

>>5699247
Supporting.
We can look at encouraging the growth of the knight house as well, so they can start making scion houses which can spread to recruitment worlds under the legions control.

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Knight issue: Tie- Different option unlocked.

"We are a space marine legion; however we have a unique gift from my planet- among many others." You state as you pull up a chair for Arnoul

"We have not only a knight house but a manufactorum, and repair facility- something most places don't. Our friends want to be part of this crusade. My Cousin" You motion to her and she nods which causes Arnoul to smirk

"Has sworn to fight by my side so long as she or I stand. Currently we have an active house: however the planet still needs defense. This could be a problem- or not." You say and Arnoul looks puzzled

"We create a new knight house- thus we have them rotate out, refuel and refit. We have our active house go with us- then we have them go back, train new recruits as the secondary house comes to assist us, maybe if we are lucky we can even run into worlds that can form cadet houses. After this crusade- one house will be sworn as a scion to the other house, and maybe some cadet houses all sworn to the emperor as they keep their oath and hopefully both will still answer our call should they ever be needed"

"That- is very ambitious Commandant." Arnoul says.

"Ya! But we can do it. I have to talk to the house baron to see if it's right and we sanction them. They join us on the crusade, then when the other house is formed and ready after training they swap. We then do rotations based on that time period. To be honest I kinda want to see if I can pilot that big knight." Ya say

"To be fair- I would too. Things practically a titan, but I am sure the baron has a thing to say about it and you don't seem to be one to upend local tradition" Arnoul says with a chuckle

"Ya mate, that's facts. The knights of our world are honorable and intelligent, I think they will help us figure a way to make it work, De'lormosa has the tech to make it work- and the Mechanicus has agreed to keep De'lormosa's natural beauty in harmony with the tech on the planet in order to study it better." Ya say and Arnoul sighs

"You handled that meeting better than anyone could have I venture save The Emperor himself. The opportunity to study some of those devices and that specialized hive, I have seen themselves exert their authority for far less. Still- your status as 'Voice of the Motive Force' complicates our mission. The fact that we have high ranking Mechannicus members with us now- along with an actual permanent ark attachment, has given us a bit of more scrutiny to our actual legions tech practices."

"Do I need to talk to them?" You ask and Arnoul sighs.

"If it were that easy. They need to actually be part of our current discussions." Arnoul says

"Well can't we get a representative besides myself in here?" You ask.

>>5701517

"Officially? It would extend this discussion by a few days. However- there are at least two representatives on the ship besides Martins understudy." Arnoul says mentioning the one Martian who hit it off with the Old Man.

"And if we have three it would make it more official." Ya say having finally gotten to use your knowledge of mechanicum law, which took a whole 48 hours to really figure out and another 48 to master after talking with one of them.

"Precisely. I think we should talk to them about the knights issue, ask their input as an official mechanicum envoy, and then when they almost certainly agree with us- we talk to them about other official manners in codifying De'lormosa." He says and you nod.

"Ask them if they would be so kind as to give us their official opinion as representatives of the mechanicus as it is crucial for this issue." You ask, and Arnoul's assistant dart's out.

"He runs like you mate." The old man says and Meerah snickers.

"I hope so. Him bein Arnoul's Adjutant means he should be able to run like the wind." Ya say and he gives an honest laugh. Good. A few moments pass and the tree are assembled.

"We were told it was of significant importance to be present in the codification processing of integration of certain elements into the eleventh legion- now known as storm sharks. While we are not certain of the name- the storm element is much appreciated by the mechanicum. "

"I am glad ya like the name! We have an issue, and wanted your opinion on codifying the legion- in particular the knight houses on De'lormmosa."

"We were informed there is only one knightly house on De'lormosa."

"Right now Ya. We was thinking of raising a scion house or secondary house to help the primary house as they join us in the crusade. I know for a fact ya the experts in this, and want to make sure we do this right." Ya say not just flattering them or being diplomatic- but there is a lot that would be required in this- and their help would actually be critical to making it go smoothly. That and it will help make this relationship work. There is humming of binary, which you don't understand why others can't really don't get it- the language is simple enough

"We are humbled, we want to participate! The excitement of direct involvement and action"

" Easy mates! It's important to make sure this is done right! There are unique knight patterns there and I want to make sure the local knights don't feel bullied into this- the only way we get this working is through you- we need an official position on this and how to have it incorporated, further more we have to be prepared for intake of future cadet houses"

"Has anyone told you how beautifully enunciated your binary is even without any mechanical modification? Truly you are the voice of the motive force! We agree, and we will begin work immediately to form an opinion and position."

>>5701518
And they begin writing out something on parchment and the others look at ya.

"How do you do that?" Arnoul asks and ya shrug. Ya know how it works, but explainin it, would probably not be worth the time spent on it.

After a few more moments in Binary with the one Martin calls 'Lad' and 'Youngster' being the most quiet a document is drafted and they walk off- no doubt to deal with an astropath. In a few mere minutes- they return.

"Our detachment concurs with our assessment and our draft, with minor edits that include some potential mechanicus cadet houses and need for us to incorporate any new patterns and design element into our own" The Senior of the detachment Magos Winters says.

"Aye- good plan! The Mechanicum incorporating any new patterns is an excellent edit" You say and they look very pleased with their efforts.

"Now for the other matter- my honor guard and the witches of De'lormosa." You say and Arnoul seems to be on edge. We should get the witches be attached to the legion as high ranked auxiliaries. They can have more then one assignment, such as training psykers, others going on combat, and a few being picked as honor guards for myself or attached to you or high ranking officers. After their tour they can choose to retire or reenlist, same with the Pariah islanders who are attached who cannot be space marines. That way our legions psykers are well trained and we are well off." You say, and this pleases the girls, and even the old man. However Arnoul looks like he has some concerns.

"It's exceptionally unorthodox- however it does sort of mirror your own father the Emperor's layout. I will not argue on this, however I ask that the legion chooses who will be teachers." Arnoul asks.

"I will ask our legion, see how they feel." You say and Arnoul is impressed by that, though he hides it well.

"And while our Martian friends are here, we need to talk about De'lormosa. I know how the legion feels about it. I want it to be ya home. However we need to keep in mind that, even with the mechanicus element, we want to maintain the natural beauty and harmony with nature that we have. I'll be talkin with the council of big men about the first chance we get- though from the last discussion, they was fine. However there is a lot to go over with the status of De'lormosa." You say

>> And maybe we should assemble the men and ask where they would be good with settling.

>> Assemble the legion and ask them any questions they have for codifying the legion, including their new home

>> We draw up a list of locations for potential settlements, and have the men draw a vote.

>> Write in

>>5701519
> Assemble the legion and ask them any questions they have for codifying the legion, including their new home
while we
>We draw up a list of locations for potential settlements. perhaps even consider building a artificial island and/or a underwater base.

>>5701519
>Also make plans for to station a small contingent of marines (maybe a squad or two) for each island to help them absorb the culture of their new homes.

>>5701519
>> Assemble the legion and ask them any questions they have for codifying the legion, including their new home
>>Draw up a list of locations for potential settlements and check with the locals within the area if they're fine with the settlement being there

>>5701519

>>5701546
>support
or at least start drawing up location and ask old man for assistance as he spent the longest time on the planet and would help in easing in new construction with the worlds species

anons what are your thoughts on having members of the legion taking symbolism after the great beast's of De'lormosa, not as ranks but simple design that they like as a way for them to understand their new home and it's may protectors along with their story's on koli's interactions with the beast's

>>5701519
>> We draw up a list of locations for potential settlements, and have the men draw a vote.
>> And maybe we should assemble the men and ask where they would be good with settling.
I kind want to turn the volcano into the base.
Giant skull included.

>>5701519
>> We draw up a list of locations for potential settlements, and have the men draw a vote.
>>5702115
So long as we can still get the black big man and the white great man pigments for tattooing from the plants.
Maybe it isn't such a good idea. I'm more partial to the mobile & submersible underwater archeohive where Frank was found. There was a lot going on there that I'm not sure was fully developed like all the genetic experiments that they and the old man were conducting.

"Gather the legion to the rally point. We are gonna settle on settlin." Ya say and there is a small chuckle from the old man.

"How do you intend to do that?" Arnoul asks and you roll out a flat map of De'lormosa and begin going over the best points for settling that would not disrupt life and you begin circling various islands, the underwater city, an island with an inactive volcano, Big Brother (Ironically settling on the giant turtle may be a smart move) Meerah comes over and points to an island which you nod to, and the Old Man points to the black itself (it's technically doable) then the landing point that your men met you at is circled.

"I imagine you would know all the habitable places on your planet." Arnoul says

"I wouldn't be a great man if I didn't know my own home world." You say and the group does a little walk. You have had to relocate to the Old Man's ship, but so has most of the legion and it's servants, though this upsets the old man a little, it's only temporary. Well it is until the ship is completely suited for it.

It upsets the fleet a little bit though.

Not as much as the "Greatest of the Victoriana" being discovered though. They were a bit more understanding. And flummoxed that it only took one person to run the ship. Granted they had to be smart, and technically adept- and a decent captain, but just one person. Which translated to the fleet wantin 10 officers instead of just one captain, which turned into the old man tellin that he would blow up the ship rather than it be mismanaged. Technically it's yours per the old man, and thus there was precedence with Rogal Dorne and 'The Phalanx.'

Granted the wonders that the Old Man provided to the fleet, not to mention the Something Fierce being also a part of the fleet, countered all ill will. Martin was smooth, like his da said.

Addressing the entire legion- is odd. Standing above them just feels wrong, but it's the only way to address a crowd of such a size. So per privateerin tradition, instead of from the main way (like a bloody pirate or some ReRehua) ya push a roughly big enough box so everyone can see ya. The box, just so happened to be machine parts so it was sturdy enough to hold ya.

"Lads!" Ya call out loudly.

"Legionaries of the Eleventh Legion! I have decided upon a name for you! I have chosen the name Storm Sharks. A fierce creature from my home world. And now- one from yours! Upon my meeting you I have quickly learned about and enjoyed your adventures and exploits! Ya tales of wonder and glory! I have tales too. I suppose by now y'all sick to death of em!" You let out and there are some chuckles

>>5705784

"Aya! But ya wanna know what got me sick? I was sick of it when I heard it. My legion. My sons, hail from the region where the settlers of my homeworld came from! It sung to my heart! I almost wrote a hakka for it. Then I learned of the state of Terra from a legionary. The blue waters of the pacific- the birthplace of my favorite past time- turned into a vast desert due to greed, avarice and stupidity. Yet the people were hardy! Producing from what I have heard from my other brothers the bravest of the legions- his emperor's iron hearts! Those brave few- from one of the most desolate regions of Terra, who rallied to the emperor when nobody else in the region would. For they had braved the most perilous wastes, and thus the legions of the eleventh would be drawn from those who would side with the emperor when it would normally mean death- such as your legion master Arnoul De'Saan." You announce and the reaction of the legion seems to be different than normal.

"So I bring you the map of my world. I have highlighted some places that would work. I cannot choose where you men wish to settle, but I have circled the best locations for it." You point out the large screen that is displaying the map, and there are a storm of questions from your storm sharks, namely more about the planet and which point is what. However after a short while, they look ready to vote.

So you call a vote.

-

Which did the men choose?

>> The Underwater city

>> The Volcano Island of the Black

>> The Giant Turtle

>> The Southern islands near the south pole

>> The Island of Storms (unihabited islands near the black)


and

Which memory does this bring up first?

>> Meeting Horus
OR
>> Kolinai's Official Status
OR
>> The Trip to Terra

>>5705785
>The Underwater city

> Meeting Horus
i'm going to vote for the tip to terra next time

>>5705785
>> The Island of Storms (unihabited islands near the black)
This is were we landed, isn't it?
>> Kolinai's Official Status

>>5705785
>> The Underwater city
I wonder about that giant turtle though, maybe we could tame it.

>> Kolinasi's Official Status

>>5705785
Which did the men choose?
>> The Underwater city
Which memory does this bring up first?
>> Meeting Horus

>>5705785
>> The Underwater city

>> Meeting Horus

You know, im surprised there isnt a event for the preists of mars, they'de give their metaphorical left nut to have kol visit once they know what/who he is.

>>5709710
If you get everything done it becomes an option.

The men choose- and quite quickly, the underwater hive, with a slightly distant second actually being the island you landed on as a child.

It's quite nice, actually it means that the underwater city can be operating at full capacity, and if they need to they can transport the whole city to somewhere else.

You are going to have to involve more of the planet, maybe do training on the isle ya landed on.

"So it is settled! After the coming campaign we will begin transfer to there! It aint gonna be easy." Ya say and then there is a little chuckle

"What the move or the campaign?" Ya hear Wakatelaho let out with a few more laughs.

"I imagine they both gonna have they own challenges, but ya marines! Challenge is what we do! Speakin of I have officially assumed title of Commandant! One of the first challenges we gonna have is simple. I noticed a slight influx of men, not many but enough. We gonna have a walk thru- I know I do more of a run thru for ya, but we gonna do it. I may be havin some of y'all help me with some minor work on the fierce and others learnin new foundationals and how knights are. Some of ya may be cross trainin with some psykers that have become friendly faces. But none of that is my first order as Commandant." And you smile and remember one of the things Horus told ya.

Horus. Ya smirk at that.

-

"THATS THEIR FLEET?!" ya shout to ya men. Someone landed on the island, probably via teleportation, and they bringing multiple ships.

"Aye Sir!"

"Why they landin it here!"

"I think they are takin the example from us." Arnoul says and you sigh and the old man shakes his head.

"I knew I should have kept the ship on the moon and just built myself a proper underwater fortress! This many ships gonna mess with the wildlife so much"

"How?"

"Migrations, food supplies." You say off handedly

" Predatory behaviors, waves, it'll disrupt sleep tonight and- wait. They seem to be just letting off a few smaller ships." Martin points out.

"Well some sense prevails." Ya say.

"That must of taken some doing, fleet usually doesn't interact well like this. I imagine Horus and his whole Mournivale must of went to the captain and argued."

"Tell me about him." You ask Arnoul. Horus isn't on the ship, it don't feel right. He is probably on the island now tryin to do some funny joke or prank, something to distract ya. He may have teleported. Something- well feels like a primarch. Ya have gotten more used to being able to sense the difference between beings. Somethin big is nearby.

"The first found son of the Emperor. He's a leader among primarchs, very charismatic. I have to deal with him on occasion as a legion master- though somehow, every time he gets on board, we dispose of some of our more dangerous and otherwise banned experimental weapons." Arnoul says looking over to the Tech Master Gunnery Sergeant, one of two.

>>5709795
"Well it's easier that way." He says off handed causing Arnoul to scoff and ya to just look at both at them.

"The only reason you are not demoted is because you can fix anything."

"And I am the only one who tells you the truth about deadlines besides Captain Codi"

"Jorag the reason I think you are honest sometimes is not lack of capacity for deceit but for the fact that you enjoy the bluntness."

"Ya lads done with ya loverly quarrel." Ya say and they both turn to you and chuckle a little.

"Aye Sir. Horus will no doubted be landing soon."

"Nay. He landed Five minutes ago via teleportation, and sneakily walked over to try to surprise the legendary Privateer King, who stole a ship by himself before discovering more primarchs than any other primarch and fighting off a Titan."

He's tall. Like you- not quite bald but balding and shaved his head. His voice is a bit different, he got a funny accent. Ya probably have a funny one to him too. Yet- he seems sincere, at least now. His smile is like ya da's. He is wearing some sort of light ceremonial plate. And he has joy. He seems excited to meet you. Ya walk over smile and like the rest of ya brothers ya give him a hug. Something he is genuinely surprised about.

"I have heard a lot about ya bruddah." Ya let out. Not telling him that half of it is from a future version of you, that is still in captivity and a tiny portion of it is from The Motive Force itself. Ya that one is gonna go over well. Ya pat him on the back and motion towards the beach. Ya men know what's what and walk off as Horus's small group follows closely behind.

"Mostly good I hope." He says, and generally. Though maybe ya need to try somethin different for him.

"Ya. I just hope ya can surf as good as ya lead ya men." You say smiling looking out at some of the most impressive waves you have seen in a long time.

"I was informed by Magnus this may happen." Horus says with a smirk

"Oh? What he say bout it?"

"He said he would pay to see it if he wasn't so busy on his campaign." Horus says with a bit of a grin.

"Let ya men rest. We got a lot to talk about, but I think surfin is good for that." Ya say motioning towards the actual path near ya boards including the 'spare' board that ya have been teachin marines and ya bruddahs on. It's a good board but ya may have to make another.

"If this is for talking what did you wish to talk about?"


>> Tell me about ya self! I am tired of everyone else's story I wanna hear it from the man his self.
OR
>> How are ya? I have heard about this crusade, and I was wanting to know about how it goes.
OR
>> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around
OR
>> Write in

>>5709796
>> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around

>>5709796
> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around

the first question he have for him is
>So ya got any non-primarch family?

>What was ya childhood like?

>>5709796
>> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around

>>5709796
>> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around
Seems fair

If he asks about the crab, it is our pet. Among our archeotech was the legendary animated archives of "the greatest of them all" that gave inspiration.

>>5709796
>> We play a game of questions. Ya ask me something, I ask ya something, we surf a little, we grab some food I show ya around

"A game of questions." Ya say

"What is that?"

"Ya ask me a question, I give ya an honest answer. I ask ya one in turn." Ya tell him and he makes a little nod with his face as he begins to take off armor to follow you to the water.

"So I am first?" He asks.

"Yuh." You respond.

"I heard from Magnus that you caught a fighter craft on foot that was too slow taking off." He asks and - it's an odd choice.

"Ya?" You say taken a bit back by the odd choice.

"Ya? You seem less than impressed by my choice of question- either you don't realize how fast that is, or you don't care."

"Mate if ya want a foot race right now I hope you can run on water." You say to Horus and he looks even more shocked.

"Wait- we are getting off base here- but I would like to see that." He says. You smirk and grab your board. You fly over to an easier patch and sprint as hard as you can, runnin on water is treacherous, because you aint supposed to and the water knows it. So you make a line to shore with board in tow.

"We gonna count all dat as same question ay Bruddah?" You say with a little bit of wind.

"I think you may be the fastest of us." Horus says.

"Oh Angron quick too." You say noting how he was able to challenge you later on the trip.

"Brother you are faster than Fulgrim- I think you would make father pause. But you are correct let's get on to this game of questions. Your turn." He says as he puts the board into the water.

"What was your homeworld like?" You ask

"Cthonia- is special. I have a special place in one of my hearts for it. Yet it's a polluted urban hellscape that has been mined, tunneled, stripped and turned into a giant hive city. It's nothing like here. You protect this place if you can. This is by far one of the most beautiful worlds I have ever been to."

"Yeah it wasn't always like this. It had mountains of junk that we used to make spaceships, housing, materials and machines. The Dumpa clans probably left the galaxy, but if I catch them we gonna have words. Your question." You say demonstrating proper surf technique to horus in a smooth motion catching a very nice tube wave. Horus- surprisingly takes to it.

"When did you know something was different?" He asks and the question hits home.

"Well, I always looked up at the stars. I helped teach people how to domesticate multiple animals, and cook a very special type of shark- which is now a staple food. But." You sigh as you ready your board.

"When I saw the footage of my pod. I knew. I learned a little from it, but when the Old Man showed me how to work it, the security footage. I saw a man like you, and I knew I was different. I knew I had to do something, I had to help, somebody named 'Primarch XI' gotta do somethin right?" You say and it causes Horus to stop and smile and laugh.

>>5712714
"Me too brother! Truly similar. When I found the wreckage everything changed. I learned a bit and tried to be the best I could be. Granted it was also the day that I had to kill my pseudo father. I didn't really have a proper father like you did. I wish I did. Though the Emperor was more of a father to me. I had been with longer than I was with Khageddon. Did you start to understand things, as well?" He asks as you both begin to paddle out.

"Ya! It was the same! I learned things so quick and I recalled it perfectly, and I just took to machines like it was nothin, I understood navigatin and biology wicked fast too. I didn't even start as a grommet which is weird- but you surfin like ya a pro too, and ya just started like a grommet." You say and Horus laughs

"I assume Grommet means the same as Rookie."

"I believe it does."

"Well I learn because I have a good teacher and it's a fun athletic activity. It isn't even wasting time- it helps train your body and builds strength. Your question."

"We should be doin a bit more than surfin and askin each other questions, but ok."

--

First
Next primarch to visit

>> Roboute
>> Angron
>> Perturabo
-
Then Question

>> Ask about how every primarch seems gifted
OR
>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on
OR
>> Ask Horus what challenges has he faced.
Or
>> Write in

>>5712715
>> Perturabo
Been a while since we saw him
>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

>>5712715
Next primarch to visit
>> Angron
Then Question
>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

>>5712715
>> Angron
Lets go save him from the bolt boys
>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

>>5712715
> Perturabo
we need his help fortifying our world.
> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

>>5712715
>> Angron
Gotta check if he kept his need for speed

>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

>>5712715
>Perturabo
Good ol Perty
>Ask about the crusade you're about to go on

>>5712715
>>> Perturabo
>Been a while since we saw him
>>> Ask about the emperor and the crusade you about to go on

"This Crusade that I am about to join, what is it like."

"Our father's crusade- is one of the most ambitious in humanity's history. We are to unite the galaxy under the rule of humanity, and unite the scattered human worlds. Your own world- De'lormosa is quite far from the birthplace of humanity, and we have gotten very far very quickly- part of that was the discovery of the communicator that you had. Still There are numerous enemies that had to be conquered to get to this point. The Orks seem to be the primary threat- though other xenos such as the Rangda have proven to be worthy of that title. Though the Lion seems to be one who will likely deal with it." Horus tells you and- it's a bit of information to process for sure.

"I have heard of the Rangda, but the Lion?"

"He's one of our brothers. Father felt he was worthy to lead the first the moment they met." Horus says and there is something to his voice, and you aren't sure what it could be- jealousy? Concern?

"The First Legion? Is the number important?" You ask and Horus laughs.

"Not really, but the first sure act like it. Mines the 16th and when luna surrendered the emperor was told to come get his wolves. To be honest in this crusade- a large portion of bringing worlds to compliance is dealing with human worlds and not just xenos. Luna at the time- minus some notable hold outs, was very anti terran. Some of the worlds I have fought against humans. I hate it every time it's human against human. Worse is when it something that was human and changed."

"Like the Ganth?"

"Oh I hate them so much. They retreat off to ganth space so often we think they are actually out of the galaxy proper. I am thankful you have fought against them to understand what a terrible foe they are."

"I am not. They have done such horrors to this world."

"And many others! Your world is not alone in their despoilment. Not just yours and those nearby, but they are a plague on the outer edges." Horus says in a tone indicating the depth of it.

"With the Orks, it's one thing- but with the Ganth it's another. Many enemy races are out there. Some are stronger than we thought, some more organized. Then there are the ghastly rumors of skeletal beings made of metal-"

"Ah. Them. Aye."

--


Nuceria

--

"C'mon lads this is nothing!" Angron shouted enthusiastically. The routine was different. There were three members of the third legion, hand picked by Fulgrim.


Saul- whom of course would be, and has been working hard this whole time, proving that the third should be a mentoring legion which was unsurprising. Saul was a great warrior, and a decent teacher.

Lucius on the otherhand was and always would be an arrogant prick and this rotation would make it worse. Though Kharn showing him up once was a delightful surprise. To the surprise of absolutely no-one he was beginning to think this sort of common exercise was beneath him.

>>5718523
A Ludus is an ancient tradition, and the value of it is easy to understand. Granted on a world like this it could easily be twisted to something horrible, and the decadent high rider cults clearly demonstrated how.

That is why you were chosen.

Fulgrim chose you. It was strange, and maybe it showed growth in Fulgrim as well. ' Rhylanor, you are the best for this. I don't want you there long, but they need a solid foundation. That planet has seen horrors, that may alter their perception. You are the master of rites, per my wishes and the wishes of my father. Help them the best you can' whatever shook up Fulgrim was probably for the best. Angron of the red sands, the red prince, blah blah- was deeply empathic. He sensed everyones emotions. He could feel them and alter them. Being around him was usually invigorating, even for those among your rank. And despite being THE ancient of rites for the legion, somethings still surprised you. The planned diet or government or whatever it was called- actually fit despite all the last minute politicking. Angron made it work. Fulgrim, and Angron- despite being so different got along well.

Though- there was the other issue.

One that had to come to you. So you waited.

You trained his recruits. Nobody answered him properly, and he understood and decided to not push it. He broached it with all but kharn, and that was obvious as to why. Kharn and Angron were most alike. So they both avoided it.

But the time came.

"Recruits- your sparring partners. Today I fight -"

"Oh grandstanding won't save you primarch- I am not like the rest. I am one of the emperors children, but I am ancient of rites for a reason. You will get the fight you have been missing." You announced and Saul smirked. Lucius winced.

"Very well!" And like all primarchs, lightning like their father- he was on you in a heartbeat. But this wasn't a physical fight he wanted.

"You know the question I have."

"I do!" You parry against one of the finest weapons ever seen by man- which normally should destroy yours, but this is sparring, and he is holding back. He smiles as he swings again, he is wanting you to push back.

"Then tell me." He says as you give way and let him through.

"Do you know what answers you seek already, or are you actually looking for my answers?" You sidestep as he swings- trying to get you to respond so he can upend you. This fight would be over in a heartbeat if Lucius was involved. You had to be like your father in this regard. You had to fight him, while debating him.

"Nobody from mine or yours has given me a straight answer Rylanor, but you are known for your honesty and loyalty! So I suspect your response would be interesting!" He swings and you duck. He is demonstrating the pureness of the drill. Showing what a proper fight should look like on matched ground. So you sidestep and riposte changing styles like your father would.

>>5718528
"Do I really know the question, or do you just assume boldly that I am a psyker?"

"No games Rylanor. You have seen everyone I have asked- and now I ask you, is he as I have heard the whispers. Is he a ty-" he swings and you drive home the point by sliding under and putting your blade to near his throat

"A tyrant?" You speak as he pushes you back with the heft of the giant axe as he smirks.

"Well at least you said the word."

" In the most politically defined way- he is an absolute autoarch, the Emperor of Mankind, and I am one of his children. He rules over all humanity. What do you know of politics Angron?" You ask taking a stance and Angron stares you head on, you know why your father chose you for this role.

"I know that every instance I have encountered of a Tyrant it ends badly for their subjects." He says charging at you, deliberately. You sidestep and take out the second blade and drive with it to which he is able to maneuver around. Say what you want about him, Angron probably fought like this all of his life.

"Every instance I have encountered as well." You say

"So we agree on that- then tell me- is my father-"

"No." You say maintaining your presence in the fight. Not letting the debate get to you.

"From how it is spoken"

"Tell me- do you know the depth and intelligence, of the leader of humanities second?"

"What?"

"Malcador. Have you met him?" You ask as he is taken a bit back.

"No not yet." He says coming back to swing.

"He is one of the smartest beings I have ever had the pleasure to encounter. He is without a doubt the most gifted human psyker to exist, and one of it's most intelligent second only to your father himself." You say as he swings in

"Are you saying because my father keeps good men around him he rules enlightened and not cruelly." Angron says knocking you over with a right hook

"I say he rules as best that can be for humanity as it is in the state it is now. The lessons he taught us, what we fight for- is not a future of humanity where we are goverend by a cruel king and ruler" You say as you step up rising with your blade

"The crusade we fight is one of the spirit. One for a future of humanity where we are all kings, where there is no suffering, one where our place and right among the stars with no fear from cruel xenos, or tinpot dictators." You say cutting the undefeated Angron, being the first to actually do so. Granted this fight he has clearly one, as he hits you away to the ground once again, but the look of surprise from Lucius and the kind smile from Saul makes the fact that you are going about twenty meters more bearable. Which makes the next part more surprising. When you look up, Angron is there. With his hand down to reach you. So you grab it.

"You are good warrior. And I see why you were chosen. I believe you. And I hope you are right." Angron says and you dust yourself off.

"So do I." You say.

-
De'lormosa, present day.
-

>>5718531
"You know, Kolinaisi should of introduced ya earlier. I like Roboute but I get ya more." Ravi, father of Kolinaisi tells you with a smile as he looks upon the fourth structure you made for the island. It has to make sense with surroundings, per not only your brothers wishes, but also because it makes sense to with such a thing as a defensive weapon. Your younger brother looks at it in surprise.

"Why doesn't our planet have such plants." He asks.

"The climate and weather make most of the flora and fauna here different. Some of it could grow back home, though I don't think it would be of much benefit other than aesthetic. Though, I do think those would look nice in the courtyard back home, go get some seeds." You tell him

"Really Bo?"

"We shall try to plant them and grow them, it is a good exercise in responsibility. Your sister will help you." You say and she goes to help.

"I am happy to help with the construction of various elements on planet, as other members of your society here set up for when brother returns, as he will no doubt turn this planet into a home for his legion." You tell Ravi

"Yuh, but he will use that underwater city as they base knowin him." Ravi tells you, and - it is an ingenious idea, if there is an acceptable structure. Though now-

"That is good, which brings me to the point. After building the appropriate facilities, the raw materials from the dumper clans" which you force yourself not to over enunciate,

"Aint much is there"

"No. Conversion of the stocks- save what is used by various drift tribes, is now all raw material. Your planet is now completely clean of clan refuse, and despite the beauty of the ring, most of it too is dumper clans refuse, though a good portion of it is rock ice and metal."

"Ah. I know what ya anglin at."

"I imagine so. You and Kolinaisi are very alike."

"So how many do ya need?"

"To properly protect your planet- at least 4 of these major platforms, but it can be defended with 3, with what we have we can make 3, utilizing the junk in the ring we can make all 4 and still have materials for say a bath house or other public works."

"Which would be nice but not exactly essential. Still- my son vouched for ya and I like ya."


>> Call up your brother on the comms. Talk to him ask his opinion.

>> Build just what is essential, 3 should be enough.

>> Build 4 and have spare public works projects, set a good example for your younger family members and give Kolinaisi something nice for when he gets back.

>> Have the big men decide, it's their planet afterall.

>> Write in

>>5718533
>> Have the big men decide, it's their planet afterall.

>>5718533
>> Call up your brother on the comms. Talk to him ask his opinion.
don't like the idea of Perty using up the resources (even 4 really cool guns) that koli and old man went through great lengths gathering and sifting through from all the junk without their permission as it is also their home

and would give koli an reason to thank perty as we all know Koli would love the idea and when they have time add more to compliment pertys gifts together and buff up angrons and roboutes home worlds

like the idea of these 4 getting along well together as they are practically neighbors

>>5718533
>Have the big men decide, it's their planet afterall.
I thought Pert won the vote.

>>5718533
>> Call up your brother on the comms. Talk to him ask his opinion.
it'll come down to a group meeting with the big men and having koli on the comms in it as well.

At some point they will have to elect a planetery governer to run things on behalf of the big men and so koli doesnt need to be involved with everything.

>>5718785
He did, but it was close so you got to see angron and you get to have a vote on the perturabo activity. Thats all.

>>5718533
>>> Call up your brother on the comms. Talk to him ask his opinion.

>>5718533
>Have the big men decide, including your brother sunce you recall him being a big man
>at the very least start organizing your workforce and material while they discuss things.

"Not my decision. It is the decision of your people, your big men, including my brother should decide-" Perturabo spoke calmly as he adjusted the Comm. He looked over his shoulder and motioned to one of his men to start gathering and managing the resources just in case.

-

"First order and standing order: Do your best and Strive." You say and not only is there a lot of commotion among the marines but the crew as well. You then proceed to get back to the next order of business. You sort of prop on the box as Arnoul approaches.

"Well that's one hell of a first order. I take it we still have to do the other orders before we head to your first ACTUAL stop of the crusade." Arnoul says and you nod.

"Preferably with some-"

"Brother. It is Perturabo."

"Well obviously, what's happening brudda."

" You are needed for a vote- I called your big men to decide on 3 or 4 main star defense forts. You have enough for 3 easily, but can make four if you take the junk out of the rings- this means you may have to start getting supplies from thinks other than what the dumper clans left. The Big men are actually pretty divided on it."

"What does my da feel on it."

"He feels that you probably have the best idea, and is saving for your opinion. Jero says '3 so that way there are spare resources and he can 'just go get a spare defense platform' ' which was confusing- Rawhiri said ' 4 would be wiser even if we used up part of the ring it's not that we can't get more' which I partially agree with as your planet isn't sparse on certain resources."

"Your thoughts?"

"I'd personally do four. and start removing materials from the ring so you could make other projects."

"What projects"

"Ships, maybe some better housing, some places could afford public works." He says and while you like the raw primal ability of your people it may be a good idea.

First

>> Go with Perturabos Idea
OR
>> Go with Jera's idea
OR
>> Go with Rawhiri's idea

Second

>> Recall Kolinasi's Status
OR
>> Trip to Terra
OR
>> Trial on Luna

Third

>> Doctrine
or
>> Foundation

>>5721670
>> Go with Perturabos Idea
Our people need to become self-sufficient, putting the matter of materials for later is just kicking the can down the road, and we might not be in such a good situation when it does happen.
So let's use up the ring now, with it we improve our planet and it's capacity, and while crusading we can try to set up some more trade networks.

>> Recall Kolinasi's Status

>> Foundation

>>5721670
>Go with pert's Idea

>Trip to Terra

>Foundation

>>5721670
> Go with Perturabos Idea

> Recall Kolinasi's Status

> Foundation

>>5721670
First
>> Go with Perturabos Idea
after some time they should explore nearby solar systems with the ships and Jera leading them so they can expand the delormosa empire as guilyman will do once he get gets home as he did within the lore and perty is probably doing with his son's after fixing up his home world, though think it'll be some time before angron can do the same as the other three are in a better position to do so curranty
Second
>> Recall Kolinasi's Status
Third
>> Foundation

>>5721670
> Go with Perturabos Idea

> Recall Kolinasi's Status

> Foundation

Not dead but no internet here. Updates soon.

"Bo. I trust ya judgement. I like ya idea best, count it to ya vote. Also if ya could sort of- make my hut or house something a bit more habitable, I'd appreciate it." Ya say, largely because enough people have given business about your humble hut.

"Bout time!" Ya hear what sounds an awful lot like ya da.

"It is perfectly suited for a primarch, however I can understand the need for a more aesthetic and functional work and living space. It will be done in a few weeks. I asses that our creator will make it to Olympia when I arrive." He says

"Perfect. I will try to visit ya soon."

"If not we shall meet soon. Kolinaisi casts his vote for four- making this a quorum. I shall ensure that design and philosophy follows island tradition, and shall help instruct and put aside proper material for certain public works projects that would be in interests of the planet." Perturabo says.

"Aye but I am still gonna get us an extra one!" Jera shouts and you hear it over the comms and you have a giggle.

"Out bruddah." And you turn down the comm and recall someone similar.

--

"Kolinaisi of many names" You are called by an attendant as you look to the emperor of mankind, the one who whispered poetry to you in ya pod as a child, and also a figure that towers over ya. Of many names- at least the custodes said all ya names.

"You are charged by the Emperor of Mankind to immediately and justly take charge of and command the eleventh legion as it's primarch." The ceremony, as it is going is attended by Malcador, who the old man seems to be gettin along with fine, one older brother by the name of Rogal Dorne- another primarch who seems somewhat interested in you, though he hasn't said a word. Mostly appraisn. He seems a lot like Bo from how ya heard, though to what degree ya don't know.

"Do you accept this charge?"

"Aye!" You say in the official tone that ya have been told to use for this along the trip.

"You are charged by the twin empires of Terra and Mars to act in accordance with the Treaty of Olympus, as the prophet and regent of the Motive Force to -"

Ah yes this bit of theater - wew. The Emperors reaction to the initial news was- intense. It was like he was trying to stare through ya. Though he seemed concerned.

"and continue The Sacred Quest For Knowledge and restoration of the lost light of technology?" oh right.

01100001 01111001 01100101 You say in the official format, which is fairly simple, binary isn't that hard for ya and it comes out natural- much to the shock of everyone else apparently. Well except for the emperor who gives a subtle smirk.

"Then by the powers granted to me of the twin empires of terra and mars, by the treaty of olympus, by all known laws of man I name the Primarch." The Emperor himself says, which includes all the things you were given to as ya took over, which was more formality.

>>5727660
Which ya made sure to include giving Jerah an official warrant of trade to help insure De'lormosa stays in shape, as well as cement more ties to the Imperium, and offering a bit more protection to your home. Though that was mostly due to

"You have slain specters that haunted The Sol system by bringing the Genewitch of Selenar to Justice- and by bringing to light ancient vessels once lost now reclaimed in the hands of humanity. Before we have even officially proclaimed, what you have done for terra will be recorded eons." The working HyperCogitator the old man made for you and offered up basically smoothed over the fact that the Motive Force named you it's prophet. The ceremony is a blur. Scores of thousands of people line up just to offer up- what appear to be gifts, and you aren't even sure why. When the ceremony is over, there is a a few more official ceremonies, and then the retreat to part of the official palace on terra. It is there that the Emperor and but three of his companions, Malcador, the old man and yaself are remaining in the room.

"So there is the issue, that I am sure has come to your attention which must be immediately dealt with"

"The issue of servitors?" You say STILL infuriated by such a barbarous act.

"If you can figure out a better option that doesn't cause a schism with Mars then name it and we shall."

{Special Write in Opportunity- you can name it, if you can write an in lore method that would be within that wheel house that Kolinaisi could name}


After that brief discussion

"Another important matter- You came in contact with certain entities of the warp"

"Aye. Monsters all of em." You say almost tempted to spit and the Emperor gives a look of approval, but sighs

"That masquerade as gods. While they have absurd power and might- and even call themselves such- they are not gods."

"Aye that I agree, a mighty god is a living man." Ya say quoting the old way and the emperor smirks

"And as much as I appreciate that sentiment in as it follows imperial truth, we must discuss that as well."

"Imperial Truth?"

"There are no gods. Just mortals and entities that act in a non standard manner."

"Ya mean the daemons that come out of a freaking sign that wield reality warping power."

"Indeed. In order to counter their influence and power, we have denied there existence as gods. Largely it's simpler and easier than explaining the full truth."

"So lies to children." Ya say what ya father called it and the emperor nods.

"And only so many can know about it- lest it empower them."

"So my legion?"

>>5727661
"It's not the initial purpose of the eleventh. That task falls to another, but what you know cannot be denied, and honestly the windfall of certain members of your planets population and their willingness to become astartes cannot be ignored. So, I am authorizing you something special. The Lex Imperialis and the guides of the crusade are mine to alter and modify as I see fit. I am authorizing you certain modifications to your legion, more so than most."

"In what."

"You can shape the very foundations of it. Make of it as you will. I will let you think on it there is much left to do that I must attend to. I shall return shortly." The emperor says.

A few moments later, Rogal Dorn enters the chamber, and in a quiet tone looks over.

"Greetings. I am Rogal Dorn. I have heard much about you Kolinaisi- I am not sure how to properly say the rest of your name, but I am to understand that you too repaired space vessels." Rogal Dorn says

"Yuh, er Aye." you quickly correct

"I also heard you intercepted a fighter as it was about to take off."

"The kid was a rookie pilot, and I had a short gap to cover." Ya state facts, though ya pretty sure ya fast.

"Still an impressive feat. It is good to have a warrior such as yourself among our ranks in the crusade- though your tactics unorthodox your words and tactics ring of honesty. It is good to meet you."

"And you too brother."

--

"Sir. The emperor's own decree. You said we were to discuss it?"

"Aye." You say to Arnoul De'Saan.

>> We are going to make a few reforms, but not many- the legion itself is strong and fits me well. We shall have multiple wings, I shall establish a few new ones and You and I will do this together.

>> You and I- are going to make two new units. One a special unit, I will hand pick, the other will grow more slowly- made of psykers and those among the pariah

>> We are going to reform the legion, based around wings, each of which will be based around which ones they are best suited, similar to how we are now, but we are going incorporate new wings for certain individual elements that will be arriving from De'lormosa. A lot of it may reflect terms from the legion but also De'lormosa itself.

>> Write in

would have to consult Ur regarding a servitor replacement, dudes been a living AI without corruption for so long he should know how any machine code can defend itself against warp stuff. End of the day without that then it doesnt matter whats suggested as a replacement.

>>5727661
I imagine the best bet is a hybridization of how titans are imparted souls.

Call the method: Multi-Machine Animus
essentially you sacrifice an animal for each major subsystem and quasi intelligent routine to impart it a soul, to protect from corruption.
Because we are copying a titans framework their needs to be an overall controller, which can be a techpreist or a legion specific one, or hell even just a dumb console to sent the commands. Induce the growth of an overall machine spirit as a herd entity.

Because its multiples working together instead of any one with the overall control, there should be no way it can be classified as an AI, think like ants working together. The more there are the smarter it is.

>>5727662
>> We are going to make a few reforms, but not many- the legion itself is strong and fits me well. We shall have multiple wings, I shall establish a few new ones and You and I will do this together.
We can probably implement a robust wing system to add and reduce new groups as new tech and techniques occur.

>>5727662
> You and I- are going to make two new units. One a special unit, I will hand pick, the other will grow more slowly- made of psykers and those among the pariah

I'll support
>Multi-Machine Animus
and
>Consult Ur

>>5727661
Servitor creation only as a useful criminal punishment to replace capital punishment of maiming, murder and similar damage to any person. Their service to humanity is to make up for their harm - though I hope we don't get onto arbites level bullshit punishments for wasting good corpse starch.
This means; no cherubs, no malicious mechanicum that gives lobotomisation to those undeserving or unwilling. Though techmagi and mechpriest apprentices may opt-in to receiving mechanical and cybernetic implants to upgrade or replace functionality.

Instead more machines/machine spirits to be deployed and the mechanicum expanded to maintain this.
>>5727746
I like

>>5727662
>> You and I- are going to make two new units. One a special unit, I will hand pick, the other will grow more slowly- made of psykers and those among the pariah

Auxilia here we gooo

I think the Dark Angels' Ravenwing, Deathwing are good but they need overlapping small deployment of each specialisation of the heavy terminators, devastators (I guess this also experimental heavy weapons), tacticals and scouts.
Each branch will develop their specialisation to the utmost, but they will recognise they are brothers and work together to overcome each engagement.
Also do we have a unit that works better with titan legions?

>>5727816
Support

>>5727746
>support

>>5727661
Isn't there a computer that was part man in the hive city? Maybe the methods that the scientists used can be more humane.
Or maybe something that Martin used to keep him alive, or aome tech in that ships of his.
He did create that quantum computer the squats have, which are men of stone. That should be resistent to chaos and the like.
>>5727662
> We are going to reform the legion, based around wings, each of which will be based around which ones they are best suited, similar to how we are now, but we are going incorporate new wings for certain individual elements that will be arriving from De'lormosa. A lot of it may reflect terms from the legion but also De'lormosa itself.

>>5727816
We can jazz up being a servitor by saying something like 'redemption through service to Imperium and mankind' like space marines get honour through their service to the same.

>>5728128
I forgot if we called that a Man of Iron in later threads, but as Kolinaisi enterred the city, we found the following:
>‘you aren’t AI’
>‘no, nor am man. I am something in between.’
>‘you were a man’
>‘for a time I was, I lived a long life and when my body expired my mind was moved, here.’
>‘so you are the mind and soul, with a machine spirit too.’
>‘yes. It seems, you are here because you are worried about what is going on here, let me allow you to see what’s going on’
>The machine spirit, or hybrid spirit turns on all the screens and shows you several cameras, a display map and a status on the ship itself.

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